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Posted: 14 years ago
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyy

WOW, me waiting😍

update soon...................... 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
good morning ... jaldi kero muski I've to go to work 😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello my darling sis...wassup?????????

m very sleepy...yet waiting for update...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 155

She felt the urge to cry probably she was crying but there was no tears ..it had dried long back. Her heart was crying, there was no tears in her eyes. there was only pain, aching deep inside. Yes !!!! her heart was crying, since she wanted to cry, and cried she did, so vivid she cried for the memories, but no tears are coming from her eyes.

He bit his lip in pain, helpless.. he wanted to hold her back tight in his embrace & kiss her more lovingly than ever. He wanted to forget every thing at that moment & be hers & make her his. Only his. He cried cried holding back his tears, holding back his breaking down. His body was shaking holding back so much of his pain. She waited for him to kiss back, she opened her eyes back reading his shaking body. She looked away in anger. She turned her face away, she couldn't take his refusal. She didn't know wat it was, why he did that, how could he, why did he, she felt cheap & low the way he reacted, she felt like a despo laying at his mercy. She put on her glasses & walked away.

He fell on his knees.. knowing wat he made her feel. He could never in his wildest dream refuse her, but how could he kiss her ..she was not his..not any more.. then why did she.. why is she doing this to him. ..why is she making him feel so helpless .wat does she want!!! when there was nothing left..but he was ready to give her wat ever she wants.. every single last drop of his blood, every thing was hers only hers, but couldn't let her do something that proves her wrong!! his Geet wrong!!! for that he knows she can't be wrong..she can never be wrong!! he can't let that happen!!! probably she is just not being herself because of him.. because its him..

he heard mk honking the car . He put himself back & sat in the driver seat, Geet sat beside him while mk stood between them, taking turns in kissing their cheeks. Mk kept playing with puzzle square & talking to Maan & Geet. She had so much to ask. Geet ignored Maan thoroughly. She didn't even once look at him. Agar yeh sab karna tha tho why did he do all that?? probably I don't look that attractive now.. she pulled the rear view mirror & checked herself, teehk tho lag rahi hoon..maan put the mirror back. She pulled the mirror back again to check herself, her eyes, nose, lips, chin, further down, Maan noticed her from corner of his eyes & looked back in front, wondering isse kya hogayen hain? Yah bar bar aisen kyun kar rahi hain, she very well knows, how much her mere presence distracts me.

Geet looks away & then may be ears.. she turned to look he had already turned the mirror, she looked at him furiously & turned it back again, itna bhi kya problem hain mera mirror main dehkne se. she twisted her lips.
Maan - kitni bar kaha hain yeh wali mirror dehka karo
he pulled the mirror from the back of the sun shield.. they both were taken back to the time when Geet changed in the car & kept turning the rear view mirror..
mk giggled seeing some one bossing around her mom, other wise it was always Geet in-charge. Geet shot a stern look to mk. Mk closed her giggle & settled back.

They reached the farmhouse around 3pm. Geet was still having a big frown on her face & still angry evidently. Maan knew she was angry, he didn't know wat he could do now to make it upto her. Every time he does something it lands up other way around. Even last night he was just trying to sooth her, he couldn't refuse her, at that time only what seemed to ease her pain was his touch!! then she still shouted at him in the morning.

The servants came to take the luggage away. Geet walked straight to the field & looked for the horses. Maan lifted mk & showed her the place. Next they heard was sunshine neighing. Geet hoped on back of sunshine & began to ride. Maan dropped mk down instantly down to nanny & ran towards Geet.
Maan - Geet stop it
she ignored
Maan - u will hurt ur self
am I not hurt enough
she smirked
he closed his eyes..at least don't hurt ur self more
how does it it matter to u now??
he pulled the belt & stopped her ..whom else will it matter?
Least not u ...
she roared & kicked sunshine to move leaving him behind guilty for every thing in past yet again..helpless..how does she manage to act like everything's the same
until tomorrow comes then it's the same thing over again she leave him with the crumbs..yet again he was left alone longing to care for her, but she is out there far away from him, leaving him completly helpless & guilty from his wounded heart reaching out to break free from his awful destiny.

sunshine neighed again as she pulled the belt harder to gain speed. Soon she was far away from his sight. She went around the estate to check the security. She wanted to be doubly sure .. so she went around to check each & every possible exit. Prithvi just joined her around on oscar
prithvi - sab secured hain
Geet nodded

meanwhile Maan was getting really angry with Geet for not taking adequate rest, uppar se she was angry with him, means she won't even listen to him, rather she will do every thing opposite.
Mk pulled Maan - mama gussa?
Maan nodded sadly
mk said lovingly - kissy dedo teehk hojayega
Maan knew that would definitely work, if only he could..!!! probably it was the reason too!!
Maan lifted her - u spoke that without ..he didn't want to tell her she stutters.
He was excited she spoke a whole sentence without stuttering, he kissed her madly.


Geet came back after 30mins with prithvi, to see Maan kissing mk.
Mk ko kiss kar sakten hain mujhe nahi.. main kah rahi hoon Geet u don't look that attractive now days thats why, u have lost ur beauty. She got off the horse & ignored him & went inside. Maan wanted to tell her mk spoke without stuttering, but she was no where to listen. She just brushed pass him not wanting to even see him. He sighed sadly.

He then turned to see mk who was eagerly waiting to meet sunshine
Maan pulled sunshine closer - this is sunshine
mk was little scared initially & then felt nice touching it. She wanted to sit on the horse, Maan sat on it & then made her sit infront. The only one other person whom he has held so close cocooning & teaching to ride was Geet & now little geet. Even the thought to have a part of her childhood was overwhelming. Maan took mk for a round, teaching her exactly how to pull the belt, stop the horse, he didn't miss he taught her how to jump a hurdle, he smiled at himself how Geet fought with him over that. Latter mk continued to ride while prithvi walked beside her.


Maan went in to check on Geet, it was more than 2hrs & she had not come down. Geet had removed her t-shirt & looked at in the mirror, she didn't even notice her stitch was bleeding now. Itni buri lagti hoon kya, ki woh mujhe kiss bhi nahi kar rahen. Maan just walked in to see her standing only wearing a black sports bra & jeans. He stood there frozen ..mesmerized, not sure where to look, his gaze dipped low, when it fell on her waist that was bleeding, he immediately rushed to her mana kiya tha na horse ride karne se, tum bhi kanha ka gussa kanha nikalti ho? He took the first aid kit. He dipped the cotton in detol .. it may hurt.
She smirked nothing hurts anymore!!!
he silently wiped around the bandage & blowing it softly sitting on his knees.
She closed her eyes & held her tummy in, his touch, his blow, she was already feeling so wet, her heart paced faster, she could hear it loud enough in her ears. She flinched her fist on either side. Geet u r supposed to be angry at him, she reminded herself.

They didn't speak to each other at all, the sexual tension was unbelievable and she could feel a real tingle between her legs, the first time for years just feeling him around her. He could feel his palms getting sweaty as he grew more anxious to have her. She slowly stepped over to him if there was any space left, yet all he could do was watch & rise as she gently pressed her hands on his chest lost in him yet again and ran her palms down his body till she reached his waist line. His erection now evident to her through the bulge in the jeans, as she looked up at him and shied, slowly biting her bottom lip in a way that he could tell she liked what she saw. He knew he could just come, with her watching at him. He tried not to look at her in that way, but wat else was he used to ever since he as seen her met her, felt her, how can he suddenly shut himself completely like she meant nothing.. he couldn't!! neither was her looks helping.
Precap
picnic..continued!!!
-PREV PART 154 NEXT PART 156-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful part............love it!!!
Maan don't worry,at the end of this is picnic u will know that she is only ur's!!!
nd Geet don't be upset once he came to know that u is only his,them he won't hold back,take revenge that time!!!
MK is so cute nd she speak more sense than her duffer dad!!!
Geet abhi bhi jalli hai............can see the glimpse of old Geet!!!
love the way how she was checking herself in mirror,
but once his MU nd confusion cleared,take revenge for holding himself back.
wonderful update!!!
Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
On the edge girl!! This was too short
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan's helplessness is giving me jitters ... poor thing ....

mk is soooo adorable ....

muski itna wait ke baad itna short update ..... bohat nainsafi hai re 😒

continue super soon

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...
poor geet thinking that he doesnt find her beautiful anymore doesnt know how he's feeling 😳
Edited by MsMovielover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u Muskan for the lovely update, love the way geet was making sure of her looks were changed ,silly geet thinks her maan is going away because he does not feel her beauty now, here maan feels she is not his anymore both of them are really crazy, love mk bit she is an adorable cute little girl , The whole part was superb waiting for more picnic scenes hope to see the whole family together by the end of this picnic.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arre meri maa.....................how much more time you need to make him realizwe his geet is his only that too without hurting Geet. Please yaar, if by chance Geet comes to know that he imagined her as moved on in her life, she will kill him and then die herself. please no more misunderstandings dear, bring them together, here in this farm house without any further delay.
Please muski, all we are asking is for muskuran on Geets lips. Is it too much to oblige?
Love you dera for the lovely narration though there love was missing.
jaya

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