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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Congrats Muskan for new thread..🤗
waiting for update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
read page 6 also

:: I'm sleepy, so sleepy ::

I'm sleepy, so sleepy
Don't got no more energy
My eyes are falling
My soul is crying
My mouth is yawning
I'm tired, so tired
Wish I could rest my body and spirit
Everything is so tiring
Wanna get out
Wanna get away
Take me away
Let's get away
I wanna fly
I wanna try
Go to the sky
Why don't we try
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

LET ME SLEEP


Let me sleep, for when I sleep I dream that you are here, you're mind
Then all my fears are left behind, I float on air
The nightingale sings gentle lullabyes
So let me close my eyes and sleep, a chance to dream
So I can see the upd I long to read.. to cherish..
But only dreams can bring me this
So let the moon shine softly on the page I long to see
So maybe when I dream, she'll update for me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
CONGO for new thread......👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

-truly magical-
part 153

Maan saw her ..looked around & one shot with his sharp edge of the palm on her neck at common carotid artery to make her unconscious.. she looked at him in fury..he whispered sorry..& held her in his arms as she fell weightlessly like a petal.. khan looked at her in shock
Maan - I told u she needs medical attention.
They immediately rushed her to the hospital.

They rushed to the hospital, while Maan followed in his car with all the guards. dr. checked her pulse & her wounds.
Dr to khan - isse aapne zindagi se pyar nahi kya?
Maan clinched his fist, he hated himself for this.
Khan smiled - nahi..inhe maut se khelne ka shaock hain
dr - mujhe yah nahi samjh aata main aur kanha kanha stich lagvaoon isske uppar
Maan - just tell me she is alright he yelled restlessly
khan & dr looked at him in amuse.
Dr to khan - who is he?
Maan dipped his head & walked out, he didn't want to create any embarrassment in her life.
Khan gave lopsided a smile - another VVIIPP she saved.

The operation went on for an hour, every minute that passed by was like hell for minute. She risked her life for him yet again, she has become so hard, concealed.. may be somewhere she might be running away from their past. Sad she still loves him, he knew that..deep in her heart.. then why why is she running away from him, may be her present is stopping her. Why didn't she give another chance to our relation..mana ki main galat tha..uss ne kyun humre ristey ko ek aur muka nahi diya. He hit his head hard on the wall.
Khan walked in with coffee in his hand - umm.. ok I will come back latter
Maan straighten himself - it is ok
khan gave him the coffee - do u know her
Maan kept quiet
khan - I mean personally types!!! nahi actually I have never seen he taking any case so personally, that shot that day was clean.. but she didn't gk would never give in so easily
Maan smiled sadly ..right she could never surrender unless it was him.
Khan - in my entire service I have never seen a VIP so concerned about just an officer. They think it is just our duty to save their lives.
Maan covered his face in his palm & sat.
Daadi, dev, anni & Arjun walked through the glassed door
Daadi - oh thank god aap teehk ho beta
anni - bhai..& she hugs him
Daadi - challo ghar challo
Maan - lekin Daadi woh
khan - gk will be fine
Maan - I can't leave like this
Daadi - they were doing their duty
khan whispered to Maan..i told u..duty & left them alone
Maan - I am not going any where.
He looked at dev - sab ko ghar le javoo
Daadi - lekin beta
Maan dragged Daadi & showed Geet from the glass window of the ICU, Daadi couldn't believe wat she was seeing. Daadi had tears in her eyes seeing her condition fully soaked in blood lifeless.
she is like this because of me, I can't leave her alone.
Daadi - gk..geet hain??? but she is married now.. where is her family? Why r they not here?
questions to which he himself didn't have answers to he closes his eyes - please Daadi just leave.

All of them leave. Maan sits there confused & worried
khan comes back after a while, he was little confused to see Maan still there.
Maan - inke ghar se koi nahi aayan
khan - Gautam sir ne mana kiya kisis ko inform karne se
Maan looked up with that name
khan - Gautam sir!!! he is our chief. Waise bhi mk ko batane se kya fayda, she will only make it difficult for nanny.
Mk's name had that magical effect on him, his life, his little angel.
Khan - she might be alone
Maan - where is gautam?
Khan - sir is out of station will be back only after a month.. some high profile stuff
mk might be alone..echoed in maans head.
Dr came out - Geet ko hosh aagaya hain, she is continously chanting mk's name!
Maan - can we see her?
dr - not actually drug ka effect uttra nahi hain, it will take 12hrs.
Maan - bullet injury
dr - kuch nahi, bus choo ke nikali hain.
Khan - trust me she has had worse than this
something Maan didn't even want to think.
Dr looked at khan - mk teehk hain na? why she worried abt her
Just then maan's phone rang
nanny - shahab mk kal raat se kuch nahi khaaya aur aabhi bhi school jaane ki zid kar rahi hain
Maan didn't think just said - I will be there.

Maan walked into the ICU & caressed very softly her hand, she snapped instantly. He wanted to smile thinking even at unconscious state she could feel his touch & get angry but his heart filled was with tears seeing her condition.

Maan gave a flying kiss to her & left to her place.
He knew mk is going to be really angry at him. As walked in he could hear her scream school jaana hain ..he shook his head & went straight to her room. The moment she saw him, she turned her face. He held his ears & kissed her cheeks, she rubbed away her cheeks..wipping off the kiss
Maan asked nanny - why can't she go to school?
Nanny - mam ne mana kiya hain
mk looked at him from corner of her eyes.
Maan - I am sorry kal humne aap ko teehk se wish nahi kiya
he lifted her & kissed her on both the cheeks & said happy birthday sweet heart
she was still very angry. But she comfortably sat on him with a big face.
Maan took the sandwich & fed her. She turned away her face. Maan tried to feed again she pushed his hand away. Had it been any one else by now Maan would have lost it completely.. but well it was his life here .. he couldn't effort to hurt her again.. he may rather kill himself. He carried her & went to the kitchen & binned the sandwich & yelled at nanny..yeh kaisa sandwich banaya hain humari princesses ko nahi pasand. Mk was enjoying nanny getting blasted.
Nanny - main kuch aur bana dethi hoon shahab
Maan - don't bother, hum banayenge aapne princesses ke liyen
he made her sit on chair & made pasta for her. He served it in a plate. He took it to her fed her blowing it slowly. She still turned her face & refused to eat.
Maan - sweety dehko na main ne kitne pyar se banaya hain aap ke liyen
she crossed her hand & went to the living room. Maan lifted his brows & wondered wat next.

Precap
farmhouse trip!!

-PREV PART 152 NEXT PART 154-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
SUPER....MAAN is so cute...and the perfect dad...when will he know that MK is his daughter...and Geet only loves him....ohh can't wait...
and a very huge request pls update deewangi also...i mean it is my absolut fav ff... i still read it again and again...
thx a lot and tc
Edited by sonnal_17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
OK bye Muskanp
can not wait more
feeling very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very
SLEEPY
will read 2moro
Good NYt
Ok but you updated
thanks
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
CONGRATSSSSSSS FOR D NEW THREAD N
UPDATE????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
congo shongo on getting thread 18 wowww i guess its an achivement naaaa nobody got dat much threads for FF i guess anyways now waiting for update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
RES
AWESOME MUSKI PLZZZ DO CONTINUE SOON

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