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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiii friends.....🤗🤗
Thank u soooooooo much for liking my poem...ur beautiful comments and encouragement means a lot to me...i m really very happy... Thankssss a lot🤗🤗
today i want to share with you another my poem...i wrote it sometime ago...and today i opened my diary and saw it...so i thought to share with u all...😳🤗
Mere Khawab Wapis ker do
Adhore Lafz
Adhori Zindagi
Adhori Mohabbat
Adhori Dosti
in ke siva tu hi bata ae Dil tu ne kya kiya?
kabhi is taraf ,kabhi us taraf
kabhi is ke Dar,kabhi us ke dar
kabhi be Meher,kabhi be woqat
Kabhi gard pardhi kitabon main likhi
hue ik Gazal
Kabhi ronde hue phoolon ki ik Fasal
Kabhi Asman,kabhi be zameen
Kabhi pur umeed,kabhi be yaqeen
Kabhi shame-e-gham,kabhi sham-e-nam
kabhi aansoon ki ik lari
ae Dil tu hi bata kya hai tere pas?
Wohi aduhre se chand Alfaz
Wohi khamoshi se ki hue ik mohhabat
Wohi be woqat si zindagi
tujhe aanson ki hai kya kami
Muje mere aansoon ka hisab do
Mujhe zindagi ki woh kitab do
jahan mere nam ki khushi chupi
mujhe
Mere Khawab Wapis ker do
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here is poem...i hope u all liked it...plz do comments and press like tab if u liked it...ur comments encourages me to write more better😊

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--jiya-- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey maria!!!

dat was a very nice poem...
the pain of the heart is shown so beautifully...
keep writing more dear...

thnx for de pm

~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful poem
well expressed :D
ye toh hum sab mjhtian ka bhi hale dil bata ti hai
humara mjht wapas kardo :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww... maria!
*teary eyes*😭
just beautifully expressed!👏
luvd it!
luv ya!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maria Yarr so so so Nice....
What can i say...u r super talented
Very Beautiful..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey maria it was too gud..........👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow maria ...awesome poem...
too good👏

kabhi aansoon ki ik lari
ae Dil tu hi bata kya hai tere pas?
Wohi aduhre se chand Alfaz
Wohi khamoshi se ki hue ik mohhabat....

these lines r fantastic...keep writing ...superb👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A verry good Poem sis

really sis i loved these words
Wohi be woqat si zindagi
tujhe aanson ki hai kya kami
Muje mere aansoon ka hisab do
Mujhe zindagi ki woh kitab do
jahan mere nam ki khushi chupi
mujhe
Mere Khawab Wapis ker do
thanks Maria
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful poem Maria

Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome one .....beautifully expressed
thanks for the pm

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