NivRen: Kitne Bhi Karle Sitam (#40)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kitne bhi tu kar le sitam, has haske sahenge hum
Yeh pyaar na hoga kam sanam teri kasam
Jitna tadpaayegi mujhko, utna hi tadpegi tu bhi
Jo aaj hai aarzoo meri voh kal teri aarzoo hogi
Yeh jhooth nahin sach hai sanam, sanam teri kasam
Nafrat se dekhna pehle andaaz pyaar ka hai yeh
Kuch hai aankhon ka rishta, gussa ikraar ka hai yeh
Bada pyaara hai tera zulam, sanam teri kasam



"Haa karsakta hoon main, mujhe karna hi hoga, apne pyaar se uska dil jitna hoga"


Here is an ever-growing list of the NivRen Psychotics (aka NivReniacs):

Navz, Mahi, Zarmeen, Rach, Suchi, Milee, Anju, Shova, Suchi, Sauji, Ketty, Aashvee, Simran, Ashred, Ashley, Shana, Mew, Monica, Mittu, Payal, Asya, Reena, Sneha, Sanjana, Rahm, Radha, Sssiham, Sofna, Faiza, Nishi, Lamya, Prajee, Anisha, Fahida, Prasheetha, Reshma, Sonia, Zay, Abidah, Vidya, Sonia, Diya, Shanthi, Anjali, Rue, Namita, Sana, Nirju, Asma, Minu, Yati, Swetha, Jafrina. Raj, Mim, Sakeena, Sonal, Preethi, Shamz, Varsha, lojain, Nadini, Hina, Pooja, Yati, Taara, Kulsum, Faiza, Uzaima, Suman, Hosna, Abhiram, Yamuna



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LifeOfTheParty thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry i will send here bec i want it in my list that i can saw it easy when we all be here?by the way raj what is the mean of the letter?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tears she just did it to open the thread she will artie an intro later
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woww Raj lovelyyy intro . n so lovelyy pic . lovedd d intro . Thanxxx .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ah- ya beautiful pic and great thread thanx raj😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part1-

Viren opens bag n setting up tent. All looks on, nivi worried. Cc too?? Ks goes in n dadi follows after giving a supporting hand to nivi. Yd asks to call him back but bs says he wont come, he's doing rite fight. Cc goes in. Nivi looking at viren arranging sleeping setup on floor. (Looks like all others went inside.) viren sees his curtain is abt to fly off. nivi looks bit worried. By d time he adjust it, his bed is wet. Bs comes n gives blanket. He says thanx but I don't need it. Bs leaves with kaka n nivi runs to him, asks to stop viren. Bs says wen u asked I didn't stop u, den how can I stop him. He leaves. Nivi stands in rain watching viren cutting wood, making fire. Viren goes to dry towel n sees nivi who is in tears. He calls her name as she is in rain, but she goes in. he has a sweet smile.

Morning…

Viren gets up, rain gone, he washes face with hose. Nivi comes to open door n sees it. Goes in makes tea, tries to take it out. Ks comes n read ppr, dadi comes to talk to him, both don't see nivi with tray. After talk, dadi sees her n asks 4 whom.

Coming up-nivi at door. Dadi asks y u here, waiting 4 viren? She says no but dadi says don't lie. Relations break but bandhan don't.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part2-

Nivi says 4 papa. Dadi goes to take more cups. Nivi keeps tray n reach door. Nivren see each other. Viren smiling while nivi upset. She goes in. cc brings food. Viren says he's going 4 some work. cc don't understand wat he says after dat n he says give waqt for time, u'll understand. Viren refuse food saying not till his work is done n goes. Cc angry dat nivi is after his life.

Viren goes to diff places for job but in vain. nivi at door, worried dat viren didn't 've food. Dadi asks y u here, didn't've food too, waiting 4 viren? She says no but dadi says not to hide fm her. Relations break but bandhan don't.

Coming up-jw back. Yd scolds cc saying let viren decide wer his happiness is. If its nivi, then let it be n it'll be better d faster u accept it.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Ashley


Did not see u so I posted the update on previous thread.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the new thread Raj. Nice intro.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ashly hi how r u? thanks raj and ashly for the update

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