os very short - Page 2

fanbidaai behna your imagination is mind blowing. please dont stop to write more.

Originally posted by: rubinahansa

fanbidaai behna your imagination is mind blowing. please dont stop to write more.

i would love to when n if i do i will pm or just post ok

ur short story was very nice....really loved it a lot

@Suk - meant to write earlier. I loved your OS! It had all the elements of a great story.

I love that you added Jake the accountant from Madrid : )

You have a wonderful imagination!

PS: Love your new profile pic! It's beautiful. Can't wait to see the holi scene in the show.

Originally posted by: lovtv

@Suk - meant to write earlier. I loved your OS! It had all the elements of a great story.

I love that you added Jake the accountant from Madrid : )

You have a wonderful imagination!

thanks shelly plse update yours soon

OMG😲.. *jake was shot in head by his fiancee*
jake being saved by Gopi? Jake praising Gopi? Jake making thepla n dhokla? And jake marrying sonia frm timbukthu? 😛.. Its Diya n Umang, who are in timbukthu! And who is dis Sonia? Any smarty pants?
I loved us concept, very funny and entertaining.. Dont ever stop writing

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

OMG😲.. *jake was shot in head by his fiancee*
jake being saved by Gopi? Jake praising Gopi? Jake making thepla n dhokla? And jake marrying sonia frm timbukthu? 😛.. Its Diya n Umang, who are in timbukthu! And who is dis Sonia? Any smarty pants?
I loved us concept, very funny and entertaining.. Dont ever stop writing

jake it is a good story jake as i said who cares about sonia the story is about gopi. i am glad you enjoyed the continuing saga will jake taking over modi industries rashi tricking jake into this 😆😃only joking