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Chapter 3
A dream ......or was it?

Past

Kabir wakes up next morning and looks at his locket then he thinks about last nights events
Kabi:kya woh sab sach tha?........nahi kal ye locket lenay ke baad main ghaar pe so gayatoh woh khuaawb mujhe tab aaya hoga...

He tried to convince himself with logic and succeeded .Kabir took a shower and came out drying his hair with a towel and whisteling.He saw Jayant awake who was lookinng weirdly at him

Jayant:subah subha bohot khush lag rahe ho?
Kabir:nahi toh tumhe aisa kyun lag raha hai
Jayant:jhoot mat bolo
Kabir:main jhoot nahi bol rraha
Jayant:main jaanta hoon
Kabir:kya jaante ho?

Kabir was now getting irratated and waited for Jayant's brilliant reply

Jayant:ye koi Gaall phand ka chakar hai mujhe pata hai
Kabir:the chakar of what??

firstly he was confused he realized Jayant was speaking english since Jayant was uneducated and didn't know english so he replied in urdu

Kabir:please yaar subha subha apni English mat shru karna urdu mai bol
Jayant:ladki ka chakar
Kabir:tumhara matlab tha girl friend?? ugh !!! sometimes i wish ....

he stopped at this moment he wanted to kill Jayant but he calmed down and replied irritatingly

Kabir:nahi aisa kuch nahi hai.....
Jayant:maine tumhe kal khuwaab mai woh ladki boltay hue suna..Kabir Kumaar

Kabir's heart drowned he remembered what his sister said yesterday

Kabir:pata nahi main Kabir Kumaar hoon ya kaun?
Jayant:kya matlab?
Kabir:kal Saraswati ne kaha tha ke main le ke paala gaya tha meri maa mar gayi thi uska naam Rukhsana tha

Jayant:..........

Jayant was sad but he didn'tt know what to reply so Jayant stayed quiet

Kabir:mujhe chalna hoga main late ho raha hoon

Kabir said after looking at the clock .He grabbed his shirt which was lying on the bed and put the shirt on and buttonned up and left without saying anything else

Present

Neha woke up and saw Rosh staring up at the roof

Neha:did you even sleep ?
Rosh:i don't know but i slept a while when i was sitting near fountain thats when i had the dream
Neha:kaunsa khuwaab?
Rosh:i don't know .pehle mujhko ek locket mila then i dozed off and then....

She started telling Neha her dream Neha's eyes widened

Neha:woah
Rosh:......yeah woah......

It was English period all of them attended this class except Angel and Raashi

Teacher:first we will study Jane Austen to understand better you'll do each scene of one of nolvels of Austen i'll tell you the pairing

1)Neha Sargam & Kinshuk Mahajan you will play Elinor and Edward
*Neha shoots daggers at Kinshuk while he smirks*
2)Giaa Manek and Ahem Modi will play Marrianne & Colonel Christopher Brandon
*Giaa makes a face whilee Aham sighs sadly*

3)Ali Zafar and Ainy Jaffri play Marianne Dashwood & John Willoughby
*both Hi 5 each other*

4)Shehroz Sabzwari and Roshni Noori play Elinor and Edward
*Shehroz smiled while Rosh looked very awkward and was red in embarrasment*

5)Azfar Rehman and Neelam Muneer play Marrianne & Colonel Christopher Brandon
*Azfar smiles while Neelam looksas if she doesn't care*


So you guys get it all you guys will play Sense and Sensibility

The bell rung as classes were over

...........
It was Gym Shehroz saw Ainy playing basketball

Shehr:may i play
Ainy:sure

both started playing Ainy got the ball she went for the basket but then she felt Sher near her he as very close suddenly her arms felt weak .She gulped she never felt like this even when
she played Basket ball with many guys and she often hugged Ali but then why she felt so nervous near him? He was getting closer her breath got heavier ....before she knew it the ball was
gone from her hands and into the basket

Ainy:huh?...
Sher:what it's called scoring a basket

He said matter of factly while Ainy was completely shocked .Sher smirked while she got angry

........
Gia and Ahem started rehearsing
Ahem:okay to hum logon ko scene practice karna hai okay main start karta hoon
Giaa:i'm bored....
Ahem:we gotta rehearse
Gia:but i don't want to
Ahem:ugh you annoy me
Giaa:i'm going to see a movie we can do this......thing tomorrow...tata

Ahem threw the book in anger

..........
Kinny saw Neha near canteen again

Kinny:boy how much do you eat?
Neha:ugh you again?
Kinny:yes my Elinor your Edward is here

Neha took a plate of spagetti and said while gritting her teeth

Neha:if you donn't leave in 2 seconds this plate will go down your shirt

Kinny afraid ran faster than the wind while Neha laughed

Past

Kabir was walking home again taking the same road every day he grew sad at this time after he met his sister.Why was his sister stuck in hell like a prisoner
Kabir came across the path where he found the locket first he was about to take of his locket when...

Present

Rosh and Sher were rehearsing near the school fountain at night as Sher was doing wrong

Rosh:Sher your doing wrong again phir se karo yaar
Sher:yaar i'm not in the mood
Rosh:ugh your stupid

Rosh said angrily annd sat on the bench

Sher:Rosh tumko kya hua poore din se tumhara mood itna kharab kyun hai.Whats wrong? i've seen you here for about 3 days but i never saw you like this

Rosh:Sher mujhe nahi pata bas itna pata hai ke kal raat i had a nightmare that

Rosh told him all about her dream like Neha his eyes widened too

Sher:you know what kya pata tum such much main kisi parallel universe main gayi wahan pe tumhe woh vampire ya phir....werewolf ya koi ghost mila aur phir...tum donon ki out of this world
love story ki shuruaat hogi....

he was talking dramaticaly but stopped when he saw Rosh looking at him weirdly

Sher:kya??....
Rosh:you know what you should really stop watching those sci fi & horror movies tust me they are doing you no good and you should better take councilling

she said while patting his shoulder in sympathy

Sher:i'm serrious

Rosh:sure you are

She said sarcatically while Sher frowned.Sher looked at her locket and lifted it up a bit to see it more clearly

Rosh:hey....
Sher:its soo cool
Rosh:thnx...i guess

Suddenly the locket started glowing

Rosh:Nahi its just like hat happened in my dream

She grabbed his hand quickly

The light grew brighter as both squinted their eyes in fear.........

Past & Present United ....

Kabir felt weird the light was glowwing again like his dream he gulped the light grew brighter untill he could see nothing he closed his eyes in fear and when he opened them....

Sher and Rosh both stood up as they were unable to see anything untill the light completely vanished

Rosh opened her eyes and literally saw the man of her dream in front of her

Kabir was shocked she was here the girl was for real

Both saw each other they were here in front of each other so this was not a dream right?


.................

so you liked it i hope you did 😳 another cliff hanger i know but its fun to read when you are unaware whats gonna happen next 😉







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Originally posted by: MewPrincess


tthnx dear and Rosh and Kabir time travelled while Ali is in Rosh's time so no need and yes a love triangle is coming but first Ali and Rosh rivalry ,Kabir comes back from past and becomes Rosh's BFF ,Rosh and Ali's friendship,Kabir and Ali starts t have feelings for Rosh ,both realize its love,Rosh still unaware ,Jealousy b/w Kabir and Ali,Hatred forming between them and finally Rosh falls in love but its a mystery that with whom

Ahan...Kabir and Rosh track is really interesting.....and im sure Ali n Rosh track will be too....n i really enjoyed reading the 3rd chapter...waiting for next chap....
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow....
loved the scene b/w kabir and jayant...he called girl friend Gaall phand 😆....loved it
poor rosh all the time shes thinking about her dream
so theres a college play coming up....would love to see nook jhonk b/w the couples:-)
btw whenever gia is showing attitude to ahem ..
it just makes me🤣
thanks for the pm yaar
waiting for the next part to be updated soon:-)
Edited by Warda. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh meww lovelyy exciting dear . Continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it dear.... Plz continue soon
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@Rabz thnx dear yes i'm sure Ali n Rosh track might be intressting but you will laugh at how Rosh & Sher hide Kabir around from everyone

@Warda thnx dear and yeah i know poor Jayant's very poor english 🤣
and yes Giaa and her attitude just imagine she is like that in rehearsing think what she will do when the actually perform in class and dear its not a play its just a small acting session by teacher wait until the actual play starts

@Moni thnx a lot di for reading i and liking it 😳

@Nirjuu thnx dear thnx a lot for liking it 😳
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helo dear loved it waiting for the next chapter and waiting for kabir to come to the present
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@Varsha thnx thnx a lot dear 🤗

@Gunjan thnx a lot hun 🤗
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Chapter 4
A Rat?


Rosh:SHERO!!!........its him!!!

she sceamed Sheroz looked weridly at Kabir while Kabir looked weirdly at both of them

Shero who was completely freaked out tried to talk with him

Shero:Who the heck are you and what are you doing here?
Kabir:I'm Kabir aur mujhe bhi nahi pata main yahan kya kar raha hoon

Kabir said in a confused tone with his deep voice (okay i'm officially drooling) Shero replied sarcastically

Shero:sachi?? .....I'm Sheroz aur ye Roshni hai ...aur humein pata hai hum khaan hai we are in British College
of...... (he went on telling the name of the college)

Kabir:Wait!!! British??? kya matlab tumhara??

Shero:well agar Bitain main British college nahin hoga toh kya Indonesia main hoga

Shero snapped angrilly while Rosh's eyes fel on his locket it was like hers except it was of a cresent she started staring at it
while Kabir was really confused

Kabir:B..B....Britain??

Shero slapped his head angrlly

Kabir:par main to India main tha

Shero:INDIA!!!!

Kabir:haan hyderabad India

Shero:kya matlab? looks like he is drunk

Kabir:i'm not drunk i just said i as in India at 11:00 pm look

He showed his watch

Shero:lagta hai you watch isn't working its 8:00 pm

Shero showed his watch

Kabir:parh meri watch work kar rahi thi

Shero angrilly pulled out his cell phone leaving Kabir shocked

Shero:dekho is waqt aat kay 8 bajay hain

Kabir:yeh kya hai?

Said Kabir in complete curiosity but Sher's complaints started

Shero:main ne papa se kahaa tha kay papa mujhe naye model ka cell dilaain par nahi un hon ne mujhe books kay paisay diye par mobile kay liye nahin

said Sheo as he wiggled Rosh from he trance leaving her annoyed

Rosh:haan Shero tumharey papa kitne buray hain he thinks education better than a stupid cell phone i'm shocked

said Roshni sarcastically while Shero frowned and turned to Kabir and snapped

Shero:aaur tum meray cell ko khehnay waaley kaun ho khudh tum 60's kay kapray pehenay ho aur tumhara hairstyle bhi!!!

Kabr got angry and replied
60's man 60 kay kapray nahin pehenunga toh kya 40 kay pehenunga?

Rosh and Shero looked straight at him

Shero:tum kya keh rahe ho? Rosh i think he is completely drunk

but Rosh replied diffrently who was staring right at his locket as if in a trance

Rosh:ye sach bol raha hai i believe him
Shero:kya
Kabir looked at her weirdly his eyes fell on her locket he gazed at it then her eyes then back again

Shero:tum kya keh rahi ho?

Rosh:mujhe is ka shaq tha .....he time travelled

Kabir's deep eyes shifted up quickly on her face as she lifted her face to meet his gaze (aww tooo romantic na?)

Shero:k-k-kya?
Rosh:haan socho zara us raat main ne usko mili mujhe tab shaq hua tha iska but i tried to convince myself wih logic but now zara socho how can he
be here? in 2011?

at the word 2011 his eyes jumped and gazed at her in a questioning look

Rosh:haan ye 2011 hai .....
Shero:acha ? aur jab main apni baat kar raha that then u said i needed councilling what now?
Rosh:Shero tum meray dost ho na?
Shero:koi shaq?
Rosh:nahi .....toh believe me i know kuch alag hai ye waqt ka ik mazaq hai
Kbir:mujhe tum pe yaqeen haii...mujhe lagta hai ke haan main ne sach much time travell kiya hai

he said while he stared at Shero's cell phone

Shero just nodded

Shero:ab hum is ko khaan chupaayien?
Rosh:kya matlab
Shero:haan hum jaake Principal ko dikhaatey hain ke Madam we found a locket and accidently a boy from 60's has come from the past

Rosh frowned while Kabir looked at them as if his destiny was in their hands

Shero:Rosh tum isko apnay kamray main chhupao
Rosh:main kyun? tum chupao
Shero:mera room mate Aham hai!!! oh to mujhe itna daanta hai jab main siirf laptop pe kaam karta hoon after 10 pm toh socho woh kya karega jab main
isko apnay saath chupaoonga aur waise bhi tumhaari room mate Neha hai aur woh tumhaari BFF bhi hai

Rosh:fine.....but how will we sneak him in
Shero:i got an idea

he said with an evil smirk and started whispering his scheme in Rosh's ears while Kabir in curiosity tried to hear what they were saying .Shero looked
at Kabir and dragged him and the three formed a circle and shared the scheme

..........

Rosh and Shero went to he guard of the Girls hostel bulding and began their act

Rosh:i can't believe you cheated on me

cried Rosh as she ran towards the guard while faking she was crying .Shero ran with faking he was trying to stop her

Shero: please stop i was not cheating

The guard stood up in confusion

Rosh:yeah then why were you with here in movies
Shero:we were just watching a movie promise

he said holding her arm The guard came to them to stop them

Rosh:you tell me George (the guards name) how can he do this to me

She turned the guard to face her and with her hand she quietly signaled Kabir to sneak in and after Kabir went in and hid behind the stairs like they
planned

Shero:i'm sorry Rosh
Rosh:its okay lets be friends no we can be brother sister now
Shero:okay sister
Rosh:bye bhaiya i'm very sleepy

Rosh exclaimed and ran inside while Shero smiled at the confused guard and ran to his room

Rosh giggled and went inside all was dark as the lights were off she went under stairs to see Kabir hiding there

Rosh:chalo Kabir

she whispered and asked Kabir to follow Kabir nodded and went behind her untill

Warden:Who is there ??

Rosh:kya museebat hai!!!

Rosh exclaimed as she pushed Kabir in janitor closet

Warden:miss Noori what are you doing here?

Rosh:nothing madam i was rehersing with Shero outside...

a thud came from the janitor closet as Rosh gritted her teeth at Kabir

Warden:hats that in closet

Rosh:madam let me check it for you

Rosh peeked in and saw Kabir on floor with a mop on his head he looked pretty funny and Rosh tried hard not to laugh & closed door immedietly before
Warden could even peek in

Rosh:its a rat!!!

the Warden gasped

Rosh:madam call the exterminator quick!!!

the warden hurried off to call the exterminator .Rosh dragged Kabir out of there as both ran up the stairs quick both ran faster through the stairs holding
hands with Rosh guiding the way .They entered her room Rosh locked the door both took their breath back as they slid to the floor then looked at each other and
started laughing

Rosh:that was fun
Kabir:i know bohot maza aaya

both now realized they were holding each others hand both let go immedietly as both blushed

Rosh:welcome to my room oh yeah and Neha's

she stood up and pointed at Neha who was sleeping peacefully she gave him her hand to help him up.He tok her hand and got up

Rosh:you must be tired tum meray bistar par so jao
Kabir:aur tum?
Rosh:mujhe abhi nahi sona i gotta read my e mails

Kabir looked at her weirdly

Rosh:they are just like normal mails except through computers using internet........

she stopped he was even more confused

Rosh:ummm.....you don't know what a computer,internet or e mail is right?

Kabir nodded his head in a manner as if saying no.Rosh almost gigggled at his cute way of saying no

Rosh:is se pehle ke main tumhara dimaag aur khraab karoon tum so jao

Kabir looked at Neha uncomfortably

Rosh:koi baat nahi daro mat i'll tell Neha in morning waise bhi Neha toh ghaddey ghorey bech kay sotti hai is liye woh nahi jagey gi

Kabir smiled and layed down on her bed his eyes laid on her pics on th side table he smiled at her as she turned off the lamp on her side tabble

Rosh:goood night

Kabir:good night

Kabir fell asleep immedietly

Rosh after finishing reading her e mails from her family came near him smiled and gently rubbed his head blushed then she ent to her sofa and laid on it and slept

..........

Neha:AAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!

Rosh's eyes opened immedietly

Rosh:Ya Allah nahin!!!

She stood up immedietly and saw Neha comming out of the wasroom

Neha:R-Rosh bathrooom main K-Koi hai

Rosh peeked in wasroom to see Kabir trying to cover his top half with another towel and was wearing a towel to cover his bottom half & was looking as red as a tomato

she blushed then looked back at Nea who was looking angrillly at her

Neha:Rosh woh kaun hai?

Rosh replied nervvously

Rosh:a Rat?

Neha glared at her


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So you liked it guys i hope you did?

Edited by MewPrincess - 14 years ago
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Mew.... was ill so cudnt comnt, jst caught up, story turning out interesting, loved the pairing..nd a rat???🤣

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