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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
really nice one....
I suppose this is d REAL BANDINI which we all always wish to watch....

but anyways thnx for ur efforts

cont soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏 👏 😃 awwwwwwwwwww sara g8 start now waiting for the new moveeeeeeeeeee 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

sorry for late was sick

here next part and i happy u alll loved
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Fire ……..

Santo in quick take bowel full of water and run to him she without thinking sit holding his feet and washed………….

Dm looks down to where his young wife sits ….ha she is even if he not want to believe that

Dm for second keep look at her …….feel her hand skin touch his skin …… feel her fingers move along the falling water removing the dirt in so softly way…………..

For moment dm forget that she nothing for moment dm love to feel women hand touching him for moment

It is for moment ……as dm just pulls his feet away saying in second

Dm: it is clean now ……..in harsh voice

And he walk away give her his back not even look back or say thanks ………………..santo in teary smiley face look at him walking away she slowly slowly raise her hand to her head moving her hand on her red line on her sindoor ………….she just done her right in touching his feet in taking blessing of his ………………she in moment be his even with his walking away …….

Hours run and silent all what surrounding her …………as she sit near her room door ………..alone

Inside the house everyone busy in his work………….try to forget that she is even existent ……

Here she stand up and walk to the temple……… she pray …….and wish ……what is killing her the most…….want one things only

LOVE

When suddenly she smell bad smell …………….santo slowly turn around to see this

There is fire in house at side from some room and the two kids are screaming …….help help ……….

She not think she just do …………she enter the house and run toward the scream in so fast way and open the door

They are there in the middle of the room fire surrounding them as like no one know what had happened here

In loud voice

S: helpppppppppppppp helppppppppppppp fire eeeeeeeeeeee fireeeeeeeeeee

Her voice go throw the silent house ………………..in seconds all doors of the house opened and a lot of steps sound reach her ears

Santo take bowl which had water along the flowers and throw it on the fire ….as she took her veil throw some water on it and run inside room covering her self with her wet veil she reach kids the moment dm and others reach door

Dm shocked as he see her with fume….as her veil fall from her head her hair open all around her face covering her back her arms along helping his kids by covering them with blanket………he shock for moment then all who screaming around help him to make this fire extension ………………………

As santo hold the covering kids running throw fire to out

she do it………they out from the room…… kids run to mori ben and santo who stand in front of dm faint ………………to fall between dm arms ,

TBC
Edited by love2211 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
thanks Sara👏 keep up the great work😊
very exciting part...i hope santu will be fine
continue soon...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome part dear🤗, soo exciting😳 please update soon dear😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwww alll of u such so sweet friends
i writing so wait for next ;P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww sara loved the way u took sanraj together now enrarly waiting for next part...... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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excellent sara waiting for continuation 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dream……..and…..feeling

santo who stand in front of dm faint ………………to fall between dm arms, he catch her as a reaction when he saw her eyes closed when he see her balance disappear he hold her in strong he just……..protect her make her safe from what had happened ……………maybe that is true maybe he want to believe that that is the reason nothing else but ……………

Always truth something else …..Always

santo who was sinking in the darkness of nothing just sink more and more just love her lost in this darkness as no one is here to paining her no one here to give her that harsh look no one here told her to safe owner or force her to took a decision and said it is yours no one else ………………..

But something call her to wake up something or someone call her but she just not know who

All what she know she need to back to the real world …………

And slowly santo start to open her eyes

The first what her eyes catch was the roof …………blank white roof with something fogy …..She closed her eyes and opened again and she sees …………

His eyes …she shocked ….and again eyes closed …….to opened again and nothing there except the roof of the bed with it is transparencies curtains around

She move her head there and there to see the surrounding…………her eyes catch throw transparencies curtains a chair there alone with small table in front of it and Wardrobe at the corner of the room also she notice big painting in front the bed of dhramraj mahiavanchi alone as his pass away wife in other painting next to his

Santo try to move but she again lie down…….she week to move …….for some time silent around her as her eyes opening looking around…….when finally santo oversleep again

Here in her sleep santo hear sounds ….or voice calling her

The voice: santooo santooo ……

She tand alone look around

S: who who is there ?

Voice: me me santo me subdrah santo not leave him not leave them they need u

He need u …he need u ………he love u

S: whoo whoooo

And she wake up in sudden to see doctor and dm

There

Doctor: she will be ok just she needs rest

And doctor leave as dm was about to look at her face she closed her eyes think of what she had dreamed

And seem things will take other turn soon……….

TBC

Edited by love2211 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Sara awsome part...👏👏👏
you are great continue with the stories of our lovely SanRaj ❤️
waiting for next part soon 😉

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