My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) #1 - Page 67

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

next update in an hour
it was just a warming up session😆


🤗 u r such a sweet heart

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Posted: 14 years ago
love it.....
this is moving so differently....earlier whole geet's truth was revealed and now maan's past.....
so atleast when they decide to move ahead they will not have any past baggages.....
a very different approach...
really looking forward to it......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet and her ways to irritate MSK that was too sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 16
nice part..............Geet is still cute when she talks to her Babaji.................even in this situation................cant wait for Maan's narration...................cont soon...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
like the precap with no sammera 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 17

It was an arranged marriage, as DM says it was a mismatch, my mother was very beautiful and intelligent, and she was one of the first women to qualify for business management course, she was my father's class mate;

they were never friends, she did not even notice him in the crowd of males, though modern she was hard core conservative in her acts,
she believed in women liberation but also respected the traditions, she was the one man woman, she believed that marriages are made in heaven and your parents choose the best for you.
After the MBA the families who were business partners announced the marriage. My mother agreed to it she was fine with the alliance, but my father who had always been an average student did not like that he has to share his life with a female who overshadows him in intelligence.
They were married my father concealed his dislike for Maa quite nicely, my mother helped Grandpa in business, my DM was always a source of inspiration as DM always was active in business.
As time passed my father indulged him in many misdeeds, he did not pay any attention to the business. After 2 yrs of the marriage I was born. I was named after my Grandpa's name;

When I was about 2 yrs of age my mother had a severe fall she was 6 months pregnant and fell from the steps;

she was immediately rushed to the hospital, she not only lost the child but also her left leg was paralyzed;
she also lost her voice; a nurse was appointed to look after her and a nanny to look after me.

My mother broke down her injuries did not hurt her as my father's behavior tortured her, he used to shamelessly flirt with the nurse in her presence, and she had to go through the pain,

once my DM witnessed the whole scene where he was incoherently kissing the nurse in Maa's presence and forcing Maa to keep her eyes open,
DM was shocked to see that his own son had stooped so low;
she immediately threw the nurse out and warned him that if she ever catches him doing such things again she will tell his father who in turn will throw him out.

My mother was not able to continue and after 7 months of illness she passed in her sleep.

Maan stopped the jeep and rubbed his temples, she looked at him pain in his eyes was clearly visible, she thought about changing the course of the past

G: what happened to your aunt Vinita?

M: umm, oh yes, my aunt Vinita she was married to Vikrant my mother's brother when I was may be 3 yrs, they later had a son Vicky about 6 yrs my junior, he must be of your age

G: you are 24

M: no, will be 26 in 3 months

G: where are they?

M: my aunt and uncle passed away in an accident leaving behind a 6 months old Vicky. Who initially lived with his grandparents but last year when his DM passed he came to our place.

G: oh! I am sorry, and he is also in Delhi

M: no, he left

G; where is he?

M: I don't know

G: pardon

M: Geet, he left us and went away, I came to HSPur looking for him, I got the news that my sibling was seen here, I took it that the news referred to Vicky but it was Dev who was seen, not Vicky, so where is he is yet to be found.

G: so your father remarried?

M: no.

G: then Dev???

M: let me continue my original track

G: ok

M (starts the jeep): it had not been even 3 months since my mother died grandpa caught my father with my nanny in objectionable condition,

he called DM who in turn quoted the past incidence, my Grand pa was very angry he immediately threw my father and Nanny (who was pregnant then) out of the house,
and the very next day he announced in the news paper that he has disowned him. My father was very angry he came that very night and tried to kill me,
Vinita aunty who was there came to my aide, my grand pa was shocked he gave my father charge of the Canada project and send him there and warned him never to come back.

Some time later my grandpa's friend who lived in Canada told him that my ex-nanny Pammi lived with my father and had a son named Dev. My grand parents were least concerned.

When I was 10 and Vicky 4 yrs old we got the news of my father's demise. After a month Pammi came with 8yrs old Kamya, a daughter from her previous marriage and 6 yr old Dev, begging for help.

My grandpa took pity on her and gave her a apartment to live in plus 20,000 rupees a month which was more then she needed.

When I was 16 yrs old and Vicky 10 Grand pa passed. My DM single handedly managed every thing, at the age of 18 I asked if I can join her, she readily agreed.

On my 18th birthday, Grandpa's will was read. All his affairs were passed on to me jointly with DM; the KC and the KM and every other business he had.

Pammi was given the apartment and her allowance was to continue as always.

Dev was allotted 10% of the KC share with a condition that he can never sell them to anyone other then the Khurana family; Vicky was given 25% of the shares and I were given 52% and DM 14% all the shares were jointly held with DM.

All the assets were transferred in my name. Vicky never had any problem he already inherits too much from his father's side and there too he shares many things me as my mother was his father's sister.

Dev had always been a jerk. The amount Pammi received was huge as compared to her humble ways, this spoiled Dev he soon got addicted to gambling, neither Grandpa realized it nor did ever DM thought about it,

He was just a unwanted responsibility.
When Dev turned 18 he mysteriously came in our lives, he sweet talked DM and made an entry to the Mansion, he portrayed himself as an obedient and responsible man, he even sugar coated me in giving him money,
he used the Khurana surname also to its fullest advantage, this is what trapped NT who was seeking a rich husband.

She eloped with Dev and appeared one fine day with Dev and made an entry as the Khurana Bahu,

though DM never liked Dev but NT's diplomatic ways made a place in her heart, and she accepted her, of course Dev too got a chance to stay,
soon NT convinced DM to let Dev join the business, which he did, but his gambling made it hard for him to stay, he not once but many times lost the hard earned cash in his stupid habits;

I don't know how but Vicky was very sympathetic towards Dev, he supported him blindly may be he was not aware of all the facts.

with in 2 yrs of the marriage, the couple lost as much as 10 crores,

every time I kept the facts away from DM, but 3 months back DM found it out when I was giving him the 1 crores he lost,
DM immediately kicked him out along with NT and at the same time Kicked me also out for helping him.
When DM kicked Dev out Vicky was much hurt and he too packed his bags and went.

I too was packing my bags to leave when Nakul our house help came running informing me that DM has had a heart attack.

So I had to postpone my departure, and 15 days back DM called me and instructed me to find where Vicky has gone, and also told me that Dev was in Canada, with Pammi, Kamya and NT.

He stopped the Jeep and took the water bottle and drank his fill, and stood resting his back on the bonnet, she came out took the bottle from his hand and emptied its contents relishing the last drops. Then she looked at him expecting him to continue. He looked at her and said "I am sorry Geet"

G (surprised): for what?

M: only if I would have given him the money he would have never come in your life hunting for it.

She placed the bottle in the jeep and came near him, placing her palms on his fisted hand, he looked at her

G: its not your fault Maan, the only mistake is that I am a female, if it was not for me it would have been some other girl, and if it would not have been Dev it would have been some random guy, the way my family was adamant to marry me it would have happened anyways.

M: but Geet

G: no, Maan today also the people who are really responsible for my fate are fine with it, and you who have appeared as a savior is feeling guilty out of not mistake of yours.

He jerked his hand and angrily sat on the driver's seat she followed and took her seat.

G: Maan

M: damn it, it is all my mistake

And he angrily hits his hand

{The scene in the jeep where GC bleeds and DD ties a hanky; imagine it}

She takes his hand, he jerks it back

G: Maan, stop behaving like a child, you are hurt

M: I am alright

G: I can see and she ties a hanky on his hand

as I am reading the comments pls no Sameera is on line I will mention her in bits and peices, you all will know only the facts that are required of the story at present, only rememberthat Maan was married to her 4 yrs back, rest will come one by one.
in coming updates you will first find things about the KM
things about Dev
how he is being punished
if you have any suggestions as per his punishment you are welcome to write
many things more important then Sameera needs attention
later her education issues will be tackled
you will get Maaneet moments like the one in this update
if you are liking it pls say so
waiting for your responses write soon
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part 18 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40323255
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful, emotional part. loved it.
feel really sad to heard about maan's past.
maan's father is such shameless person. dev is his son, it's proved .
feel sad for maan's mother.
Dm have to suffer too much just cause of her own son.

update soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Now that's what I call a disturbing past....I'm glad Maan didn't get affected by his father's ways....but yes he's sympathetic towards suffering women due to his mother's pain....I'm also glad to notice the growing bond between Maan n Geet which Daadi too noticed...but whats the scene with Sameera?Why did Maan insist that he's married?Is Sameera still in his life?I hope not but lets see what u have planned for them...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was awsome one yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
updated my comments on page 108

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