My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) #1 - Page 79

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey wonderful story line....
absolutely loved it.....

pls PM me too when u update the next part.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...wow...wow.. Love the update.. Woohoo what a history of KHURANAS... HMMm both part were amazing... Poor maan he helped dev an NT. but he was also kicked out.. Hahahaha.. DM is just amazing... She just kicked them all out of the KM.. Loved. Poor vicky he also got faltu punishment... Haayii what to say for maaneet they r just magical.. Do u know i just that blACK JEEP OF MAAN.. He looks more and more hot when he drives that jeep.hehehe.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...!!
Felt really bad for maan...!!
His father was such a jerk....!!!
Can't wait for the next part...!!!!
Please continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 18

 

Rest of the ride was peaceful none spoke much, as they were way ahead the car they reached Delhi avoiding the peak hour rush (it takes 7 hrs and 48 mins to reach Delhi from HSPur) it was 5 pm by the time they entered the house
 

He called DM who informed that they were struck in the traffic and it seems that it will take another hour to reach the Mansion and that she has informed Pari who has made arrangements for Geet, Nakul also has instructions.

 

DM was an organized lady she did every thing in style Pari was her secretary, she was a 21 yr old charming girl studying interiors from a renowned college.
 

Nakul called Pari and she escorted Geet to her room.

 
While Maan was leaving Nakul asked him if he minded having high tea being served in half an hour, Maan said ok he will join Geet at the dining hall.
 

After he left Geet looked at Pari with a question in her eyes, Pari was a smart girl she patted her hands and informed that Maan does not live here but in the outhouse which is adjoining the main Mansion.

 

As they were heading to the room they introduced themselves
 

P: hi I am Pari, Savitri Devi's secretary, and you are for sure Geet her protg, I know she just called me in the morning and told about you, she also said that I must not ask you questions. Well I will definitely not ask you. You just go and freshen up, MK sir is very strict about punctuality if he says 30 mins it should be 30 mins not a min more not a min less.

 

G (OMG she speaks even more then me)
 
P: so this is your room and now you will say that you don't have your luggage so what will you wear after freshening up so let me tell you, I shopped the whole afternoon for you and have arranged all the necessary things for you.
SD told me that you would prefer wearing Indian dresses, so I brought them fro you plus I also brought some long skirts, tops of course the most decent ones,
I also brought you some make up, I even stuffed your bathroom though I did not know what brands you prefer but I brought what SD uses, and I even brought some foot wares for you, and now you will ask how did I know what size you wear simple SD told me.
You know these two SD and MK sir are complete perfectionist they can not tolerate imperfection, so they are always ready with a back up plan, their minds work faster that any super computer.
 

And she went on and on and on not even stopping to take breath.

 
Finally she left when Geet freshened up and changed, even when Geet was in the bath room she could hear her constant blabbering, she helped Geet to make her hair and then left when it was finally time for Maan to join her.
 

M; hello

 
G: hi
 
M: did you like the room?
 
G (looked at him with confusion)
 
M: oh! So she talked non stop and you did not even got a chance
to glance around (smiled)
 
Pari who was standing at a distance was taken aback seeing Maan smile, in her 3 yrs tenure here she has never seen this man smile.
 
She dragged herself a little closer so that she can hear what they were talking but still could not be seen
 

G: you are right. And you said that I am a chatter box

 
M; I take my words back, but does she talk even more than you (teasingly)
 
Pari rolled her eyes hearing that teasing tone
 
G: Maan, you better not
 
Pari almost fainted this girl who is even younger then her is calling him by his first name, she has never heard anyone other then SD addressing him by his name.
 
she was having one shock after another, she almost lost her balance and stumbled making a sound.
 
Maan jerked back and gave her a stern look
 
M: what are you doing here?
 
P: woh, I '
 
M: get lost (angry tone) your work here is finished go to your refuge and only show your face when DM comes
 
P; yes (almost in tears)
 
M: GO!
 
G(sternly) : Maan! (then she addressed her) Pari you take a break Nakul will inform you when DM comes
 
P: yes (she must be some one she even had a nerve to contradict him)
 
After she left
 

M: Geet you should have not interfered

 
G; oh! And then you would have seen her crying and then your anger would have shot up and you even would have given her a lecture on crying Females
 
M: whatever, shall we have our tea, its getting cold
 
G: of course, so how much sugar

 

They had their tea along with home made snacks. And retired in their respective rooms, i.e., he went back to the outhouse

 
G: will you join in for dinner?
 
M: I suppose yes
 
G: ok see you then
 
She went to her room she was taken aback by the size and the dcor;
 
it was quite a spacious room the walls were of baby pink color the curtains sofa covers bed sheets all reflected a girls taste no doubt Pari has done a good work at such a short notice,
 
the king size bed stood on the southern wall exactly in the center
a sofa set on the western center
study table on the southeast corner
on the northern wall was huge French window opening to a beautiful garden a divan laid in front on it to facilitate sitting and watching,
on the north east corner was a French door opening to the balcony
 

She went to explore it, it was a big balcony or say it was more of a terrace.

A balcony of similar size could be seen on the northern side it was very close if required one can jump and get to that balcony easily.
 

She looked around the same garden which was seen through the window continued here also and

 
exactly opposite to her was a smaller balcony not a part of the palace she was standing in, but part of an independent two storied bungalow, which looked like someone's home.
 
The light of the room was on and a man just sliding under the spreads, once he was well covered he switched off the lights by a remote.
 

She tried hard but she was not able to place who he was, his stature looked familiar,

 
was he Dev? Maan has said that Dev was here, and she had not seen him join them for tea, may be he was not living in the main mansion but in this bungalow, and why was he sleeping at this hour it was just 6:30 in the evening.
 

She has to find out who he was, ok she thought and decided to call Pari.

 

She went inside the room, but where will she find her, there seemed to be many rooms here, suddenly she saw a list tugged near the telephone she picked it up, o and there were numbers in it
 

"to dial any number press"0" and then the number

To use intercom press"#" and then the code

Codes are as below

SD: 01

MK Sir rm1: 02

MK Sir rm2: 03

Dev Sir: 04

Vicky: 05

MK study: 06

SD Study: 07

Living room: 08

Kitchen: 09

Dinning room: 10

Drawing room: 11

Guest rm1: 12

Guest rm2: 13

Guest rm3: 14

Gym: 15

Essentials: 16

Nakul: 17

Pari's refuge: 18

Guard's room: 19

Entrance: 20

in case of any questions and if intercom does not buzz go to the kitchen and seek Nakul's help

 

OMG 20 odd rooms and there must be many more, and she dialed #18 and called Pari to give her company

 

 
 
exam time😆
so do you know who that man is?
will Pari spill more beans for Geet?
 
as I am reading the comments pls no Sameera is on line I will mention her in bits and peices, you all will know only the facts that are required of the story at present, only rememberthat Maan was married to her 4 yrs back, rest will come one by one.
in coming updates you will first find things about the KM
things about Dev
how he is being punished
if you have any suggestions as per his punishment you are welcome to write
many things more important then Sameera needs attention
later her education issues will be tackled
you will get Maaneet moments like the one in this update
if you are liking it pls say so
waiting for your responses write soon
 
 
 
 
 
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part 19 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1606573?pn=121Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Liking the mystery :-)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part!!!
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
shruti
i wanted even seconds count
n wowwwww maan is sooo comfortable with geet
n even geet is getting comfortable with her new surrounding
n hope dev is out n nt in km
n god 20 rooms also hv phone
nw waiting wt geet wants 2 talk with pari 
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice dear... all the best for ur exam
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update.................
so do you know who that man is?
i think it has to be maan bcoz he is the one living in outhouse right........i am guessing its maan...........i dont think dm will allow dev to enter the km after wat he did..............
will Pari spill more beans for Geet?
i expect her to as she is more talkative than geet...............
loved the moment with maaneet i think this will b better rather than more of them...........light moments like this bw them will b best for the start.........

i loved the way u explained  abt dm thro pari and also abt km well little peak abt the no of rooms and the ppl living there...............
actually i am more interested in this ff now as its getting its momentum......
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was great, waiting to see who is this mystery man.