TAKUR SIBLINGS: CAUGHT IN THE ACT

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Takurs kids taken to task this Thursday. The episode centers around Takur siblings Krishna and Komal: They're busted! Komal is interrogated for hiding a LOOT, while Krishna is nailed for his string of JOOT about working. A bitter-sweet day for Prats. she earns her first paycheck for a published newspaper article, a monetary reward for her little effort. Then she swallows a bitter pill of broken trust at the Adda after she catches Krishna red handed playing carom with T and C.

NOT BUYING IT

RED doesn't buy Krishna's claim that he is on his way to work. They know him too well to believe he'd lift a finger let alone turn up at work day after day. SS taunts and warns him "when you trip and fall deep then we'll know". Seems like bauji's intitution is on to something here.

STRAIGHTENING UP

Naina walks into Adarsh's room. She fusses about the few clothes strewn around the room. She picks up the clothes and heads to the cupboard where a bigger mess awaits her. Like mother like daughter. Prats reacted the same way when she opened Krishna's closet the day after her wedding. Who was hanging on the ceiling filming Nainja's walk to Komal's cupboard?😆 She picks up a few clothes and a wad of cash scatters to the floor.😲 Looks like Komal tried counting her notes and when she hit a wall and went as far as she could go with the counting, she got frustrated and tossed them carelessly in the cupboard. She didn't expect a snooping sasuma to invade her closet without warning.🤔

STRAIGHT AS AN ARROW

Komal demands to know why Naina is snooping in her cupboard while she was away. Naina brushes her question aside and wants an answer to "where did you get this much cash in this house?"😔 Komal retorts "why should I tell you, what's it to you anyways?"😲

SOW THE SEEDS OF SUSPICION

The first and third generation Sax women come running into the room after overhearing the saas-bahu bickering. Dadi stops dead in her tracks "So much money? I've never seen this anywhere before". Really! Guess Dadi has never been to a bank. What was Shamu bringing home for a paycheck? Chump change? That's got to be a mighty exaggeration. Shamu has been a Prof. for over a quarter of a century and she hasn't seen a few thousand rupees? The cash Naina stashed away before Prats's marriage was more than the measley sum in Komal's custody. The Sax women are worried seeing this wad of cash all at once under their roof. They are used to complaining about lack of money no wonder it scares them to even look at this much cash, just poverty thinking.😕

ILL-GOTTEN GAINS

Dadi hurls insults at Komal "she probably got this cash from SS. She's been in this house long enough yet she doesn't think about the humiliation she brings to this family with a new tamasha every day. She must have told them that meals are hard to come by in this house." Komal has had her fill of the insults. She retaliates with her own pointed dart and tells her to go sit outside and collect charity. Go Begging?😲 Ouch! They have yet to learn not to stick their heads in this lioness's mouth. The youngest daughter not one to be left out chimes in with her own questions "talk with respect to Dadi." Look who's talking, the one who needed to hear that just a couple of months ago. "Why don't you end the matter by answering the question posed. If this money didn't come from your bauji (is he still her bauji too?) then tell them where it came from"? Why is she sticking her nose where it doesn't belong, tsk tsk tsk.

ON THE LEVEL

Komal, impatient and vexed hurls an insult at her sis-in-law "you have a runaway mouth these days."Now, now! Out with the truth Komal. She's been this way since day one. Are Adarsh and Komal taking a daily dose of truth serum these days that is sending the rest of the family's head reeling😛. "Let me tell you this money came to me from my husband. What will you do?" Lallantop!👏 👍🏼 Good question! Three generations of Sax women in stunned silence trying to pick their jaws off the floor while she gets back to picking up her wad of cash off the floor after delivering the truth to their faces. Well, well, well! Mr. Moneybags Saxsena is in for a surprise when he returns home today. He's going to have to tell the truth or dare to stand up to his family. After leaving on a high note before breakfast he's got a lot of esplaining to do and it's only going to be easy if it's a wad of lies spilling from his mouth this time.

THANK YOU FOR CALLING!
At at Takur's Chateau, Prats answers the telephone. Her disjointed "Ji, yes, what, Thank you, I'll be right there?" followed by "Dadi, Amma, I'll be right back" and a sprint out of the Niwas without a backward glance has the senior Takurains, one concerned, the other curious at her sudden disappearance. Takurain II mumbles "where has the Masterni rushed off to? Looks like she's got a mountain of gold and if she doesn't go she'll be robbed off it." Prats bolted before they had a chance to put the kabaash on her outing. That will be the day when Takurain II gets to know that Prats is earning money whereas her two slob sons are a sack of lazy bones.😲

PRAISE HER TO THE SKIES

A newspaper editor invites Pratigyaji into his office. It's been a while since anyone called her Pratigyaji. He informs Prats that her article "Educated women at home with shackles on their feet" has made it to the front page and hands her a copy of the paper. She is pleased and proud to see her name Pratigya Krishna Singh printed on the front page of the newspaper. The editor praises her impressive writing and her presentation of the issue to the public. "It's a great idea and your writing has great impact because it brings the entire truth to light before everyone. We are thinking of doing a regular column in the future after the response we've had for this article. You will have complete creative freedom and we trust your vision completely. We've received several congratulatory calls this morning. Few articles get such a response. We request you continue to write more such articles for our newspaper, "Please continue to write as your writing has a lot of power". Hear that Tanths?😉😃👏😲

THANK GOODNESS!

He pays Prats for her published article👍🏼. She gets a tad emotional "Thank you so much. you have no idea how much this money means to me. I will give my first earnings to my husband today".😃 Aww! Sweet!😳 But he is busy playing carom like he is on summer vacation with his cousins? 😛 Mr. Lazybones!😔

REJOICE OVER THE GOOD FORTUNE

Prats calls Krishna to share her thrilling news. But Krishna ignores the call and continues to play carom. He'd rather let her think he is busy at work. She decides to go to devars Tunna and Chandu for help to find Krishna's office. She takes a rickshaw towards the Adda excited about sharing her good news with Krishna. She twirls happily, lends a helping hand to a senior citizen mounting a rickshaw, plays hopscotch with young girls, aids an elderly gentleman across the street and receives their blessings before she arrives at the Adda. Film-vilm ishstyle scene!🤔

CAUGHT RED-HANDED IN MONKEY BUSINESS

Prats's joyous moments makes a crash landing when she arrives at the Adda to see Krishna and the devars engaged in a game of carom. Assuming that devars T and C are crying wolf once too often Krishna ignores their warnings of their bhabhima presence. Krishna finally faces Prats when she stands before him. Her trust in Krishna comes crashing down like an imploding building packed with dynamite. Her silence is enough to stir a well of guilt in Krishna and he turns away unable to look her in the eye. He stutters and stumbles as he tries to salvage the situation with another round of lies. For a man who once hated joot-moots he sure is piling it on like a landfill of garbage. He drags his buddies T and C in to backup his story.

SCALES FALLS FROM HER EYES

Prats is on to his shenanighans and won't have any of it. Krishna is shocked into silence when she explodes "Enough, Krishna! I can't tolerate any more lies. Even after all this you think you are right? You ought to be ashamed. To cover this one lie how many lies are you going to pile on? I never expected that you would play with all of our emotions this way. I never dreamed you would do such a thing." Thank you POPS, we've have been waiting to listen to the mantra in the background like old times. 👏 Prats reminds him "Bauji is sick. KN is refusing to work and you gave hope to everyone that you would go to work and earn a living for the family. Today, you did a shameless and terrible thing, Krishna, How much more do you want to fall in my eyes? I trusted you more than I trusted myself. Today you broke that belief and trust I had in you." A visual response:

AT A LOSS FOR WORDS

Krishna has nothing left to say in his defense. He looks more lost and confused😕 listening to Prats than angry at the moment. Prats has just unleashed her anger 😡on him and if the past is anything to go by it's Prats's anger that brings out the best in him. Krishna like some men is a little boy at heart who needs to be challenged and prodded on to bring out the best in him. It was Prats's anger that made him dig deeper and her challeneges and rejections that allowed him to climb mountains to finally reach the summit successfully when it came to winning her love❤️. By his own admission it's the "katin kaam" that inspires and dares him to live life to the fullest. Let's see which road he takes from the intersection he is at, at the moment. He has to put the broken pieces of the trust in their marriage together again💔😕.

MERA'S MINDFUL MATTERS

Will his fear of venturing into the working world still have a hold over him or will the guilt and shame over the pain and hurt he sees in Prats's eyes now haunt him and finally pierce his soul springing him into action? It's quite possible that he may unleash his anger to cover up his fears and pin the blame on Prats for her lofty expectations of him. He could accuse her of forgetting his limitations due to his lack of education and tide over on that wave for a while. Will it take a few more dips and a crash landing before he wakes up and acts on tearing through his barriers of fear? Or will it be his bruised and shattered ego that takes a beating to see his woman earn a living while he idles away his days listening to his family's taunts that he is no "mard" for he lives off his wife's earnings? Will it really be a surprise if and when he picks up a fight and beats up some poor soul on the streets of Allahabad fueled by comments he may hear arising from discussions of Prats's articles. After all deeprooted behaviors especially negative ones do rear their ugly heads when put to the test no matter how much a person claims to have grown and changed over the years. It's going to take constant awareness to keep himself in check. What happens if Prats is invited to a gala event or a bash thrown on her behalf by her readers, where will Krishna fit in with a popular and successful life? We've seen his insecurities get the better of him on occasion. This is an interesting track with potential for great story telling. If POPS are back on track to their early days of this show we are in for a lallantop ride.

He was offended when Prats offered to earn a living if he won't do it. He was enraged by her words but later dared her to earn without leaving the Niwas. Shee won, he lost on both fronts.

Will he accuse her of hiding things from him? He never bothered to ask her what she was using the stationeries for. Amma saw her writing and crumpled it up. So neither one can say anything to refute her claims of an honest living when the facts come to life. But given they are all unpuds they may claim she's making things up. How will Takurs respond when they get wind of Prats's articles? Will they throw a hissy fit about her selling the Takur family respect on the streets for money? Even if they get an outsider to read it, maybe even Adarsh, the contents could shock them if it hints at the happenings in the Takur household. Prats is going to be in a fix. Unless and until Krishna earns his keep she may have to keep this news under wraps for several reasons.

Preview: SINGING HIS PRAISES: Krishna is confused and looks away as Takurain II does the aarati praising him for making his parents proud while SS nods in agreement with pride. 🤔The rest of the family watches on, Prats face shows no emotions. Will the Takurs wonder about her cool demeanor even after her husband's successful first earnings?😲 If Prats gave her earnings to the Takurs claiming it to be Krishna's isn't she propagating a lie too? For the sake of their marriage Krishna has to have something to hang his hat on, what will it be Prat's lie or something that's yet to spring into the mix? 😲🤔😕

Please add your thoughts and speculate away about where this track is likely to go. 😃👏😉

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me 1st 😛.......... hmmmm that hasn't happened in a long time 😳😆

you keep sneaking in more words with each post eh ?
Anyway, great analysis....... i like the new angle of how Takurs would react if they come to know the contents of the article is based on their dirty laundry ........ or how the residents of chai house will react as they are more likely to find out 1st when they get their morning paper 🤔
awwww moment for me ........... she submited the article under Pratigya Krishna Singh not Pratigya Saxena Singh ( *** wink wink to IF cast list on main page ***) .......... takes me back to the scene when he first called her that 😍☺️
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oh........ one more thing .........usuallly i avoid commenting on Komal coz she makes me dizzy .........
well today I think they did a good job of showcasing a side of her personality that has been touch & go the past few weeks ............we saw her ability to think quickly on her feet when she turned the tables on her MIL about the moolah ...... also that ruthless trait the Takurs share reared its head in the way she stood up for her pile of cash ........ here is a girl who brings the correct weapons to a fight ....... no tears, no sign of helpless guilt ......... she doesnt mince words or sugar coat the truth to spare anyone's sensibilities
my question is why then do they persist in making her come across as a clown in some instances ?
Is it possible for someone to be naive without looking stupid ?😕......
how do they reconcile her innate spitefulness with the innocence she sometimes displays ? the other day you asked a question regarding the sudden switcheroo regarding Adarsh's newly minted explanation of her personality ......... which leads me to also question where / how did this newfound undertsanding came from .........
Can you see why I say she makes me dizzy ?😆
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Originally posted by: yemi3006

me 1st 😛.......... hmmmm that hasn't happened in a long time 😳😆

you keep sneaking in more words with each post eh ?
Anyway, great analysis....... i like the new angle of how Takurs would react if they come to know the contents of the article is based on their dirty laundry ........ or how the residents of chai house will react as they are more likely to find out 1st when they get their morning paper 🤔
awwww moment for me ........... she submited the article under Pratigya Krishna Singh not Pratigya Saxena Singh ( *** wink wink to IF cast list on main page ***) .......... takes me back to the scene when he first called her that 😍☺️



UCA Yemi🤗

Nice to get your take on the post. You are answering questions posed in a previous quiz too eh? 😆When the editor was heaping loads of praises on Prats I was concerned🤔. He said they way she expressed her views were powerful and she shed light on the truth. Now truth telling within the walls of the Niwas with public present is acceptable to the Takurs. It's only when it leaves the perimeter of the Niwas they throw a tantrum. Imagine a politician who reads newspapers that too the front page articles praising SS to his face about Krishnabo's bold and candid articles about the plight of women or even voicing concern that she may stir the women of Allahabad to rise and fight for their rights. With the cold war between Kriya how is that likely to play out if SS come thundering into the house gunning for Krishnabo to explain her penchant to wash his izzat away in public. Krishna may try to score some brownie points by jumping to her defense only to get slapped down by SS with insults and taunts.

I am very curious to see how Krishna conducts himself when he returns home and faces Prats again. Will he avoid her while he regroups or will he go on the offensive like Komal did today to take the heat off him. Prats's rejection of him will be a body blow to him. Will he still trust that she loves him or will he start acting out for lack of an alternate way to address his issues? The once street-smart dude capable of thinking on his feet has been in a lull for a while now.

KN is going to be thrilled that all is not great in Krishna's marriage if he so much as gets wind of it. He takes a stand and suddenly his actions has far reaching effects on other marriages, he gets his revenge on Prats this way for sending him to jail. But will Prats let on that all is not well in Kriyaland? Krishna will surely want to protect himself from his family's ridicule and deal with it in private. With Krishna' s character not following a consistent path, it is not easy to predict which way he'd go on this fallout.😕
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oh........ one more thing .........usuallly i avoid commenting on Komal coz she makes me dizzy .........

well today I think they did a good job of showcasing a side of her personality that has been touch & go the past few weeks ............we saw her ability to think quickly on her feet when she turned the tables on her MIL about the moolah ...... also that ruthless trait the Takurs share reared its head in the way she stood up for her pile of cash ........ here is a girl who brings the correct weapons to a fight ....... no tears, no sign of helpless guilt ......... she doesnt mince words or sugar coat the truth to spare anyone's sensibilities
my question is why then do they persist in making her come across as a clown in some instances ?
Is it possible for someone to be naive without looking stupid ?😕......
how do they reconcile her innate spitefulness with the innocence she sometimes displays ? the other day you asked a question regarding the sudden switcheroo regarding Adarsh's newly minted explanation of her personality ......... which leads me to also question where / how did this newfound undertsanding came from .........
Can you see why I say she makes me dizzy ?😆



I agree with you, Komal is one unpredictable lassie. As I mentioned in my post yday, she swings like a pendulum with her inconsistent behavior. At times she is more mature than her inlaws, practical and down to earth and a straight shooter. But unexpectedly she goes into baby talk mode the way she did to Kesar. I loved Kesar's response to her ydat. She is mercenary by nature, having focused all her life on running around the haveli yelling at the servants, doing as she pleases and being indulged by her family her every whim and fancy.

I was impressed at how she told off her sis in law. "My husband gave me the money, what's it to you"? The young woman is back to sticking her nose playing advocate to the other equally annoying Sax women. The trio are a pest and it's really sad that Naina has also teamed with them and treated Komal with so much contempt. Their only basis for treating a girl their grandson/son/bro brought home from the get go is she is unpud and doesn't speak softly like them. Saxes are masterful at their brand of emotional and verbal abuse. I am surprised Komal hasn't told them off until now. Their biggest fear is that Adarsh is going to abandon them and gang up with Komal. Why wouldn't he? She is his wife and it took him long enough to come to his senses about the way he treated her for a long time.

With the youngest daughter still at home, who knows if she will remain the resident virign for life. Komal would want nothing to do with her given the way she treats her. I'm looking forward to how Adarsh and Krishna face the fallout of the secrets that have been revealed.

I like the new and improved Kesar who doesn't give a hoot to RED. She is ready to tell them to take a flying leap of the nearest bridge. SS's hands are tied bec' he is desperate to get his hands on his potha. Kesar has at least 7 months to sort out how she is going to protect her new born and herself from the Takurs. Maybe with Prats writing articles they will be more nervous bec' they can't read what she writes. She could easily expose what they do. Pen is indeed mightier than the sword.
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Great Read............di 😛 so P's plan to present her first earnings as his cements the fact that she considers herself as the bahu of Thakurs, no matter what, and is concerned about them no matter how many death threats and taunts she had to endure all bec she still loves krishna singh.........but with a broken heart and broken trust......................ow .........really feel sorry for her , she is living a life of hell.....and she is not even sure he will resurrect the lost trust or not 😕 ..........and glad that no thought of even informing her parents about her article crossed her mind..........she was so into her love.........😭 and if krishna is not going to realize his responsibilities soon kriya and krishna and pratigya r in for more deep trouble............. i think there will a huge row over the source of the money either between kriya or between P and thakurs............they won't understand.............that's sure........😕 and krishna even if he starts working and learning there is no denying the fact that P is more intellectual, acceptable by the rules of society, cultured in the eyes of society and her road to success is like 100 mile per hour when compared to his 10 miles per hour.............he has it in him to win the race of life but the society won't make it easier for him as he will be insulted and shunned at every step he takes with her(if she becomes a famous news person or writer) and for k its not going to be easy.............😭 😲
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Great Read............di 😛 so P's plan to present her first earnings as his cements the fact that she considers herself as the bahu of Thakurs, no matter what, and is concerned about them no matter how many death threats and taunts she had to endure all bec she still loves krishna singh.........but with a broken heart and broken trust......................ow .........really feel sorry for her , she is living a life of hell.....and she is not even sure he will resurrect the lost trust or not 😕 ..........and glad that no thought of even informing her parents about her article crossed her mind..........she was so into her love.........😭 and if krishna is not going to realize his responsibilities soon kriya and krishna and pratigya r in for more deep trouble............. i think there will a huge row over the source of the money either between kriya or between P and thakurs............they won't understand.............that's sure........😕 and krishna even if he starts working and learning there is no denying the fact that P is more intellectual, acceptable by the rules of society, cultured in the eyes of society and her road to success is like 100 mile per hour when compared to his 10 miles per hour.............he has it in him to win the race of life but the society won't make it easier for him as he will be insulted and shunned at every step he takes with her(if she becomes a famous news person or writer) and for k its not going to be easy.............😭 😲
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Hi Dhak!😃

Life is all about living the journey. Krishna thrives on "katin kaam" the thrill of the chase be it Prats or getting a job is what drives him. She is definitely not cut out to do a 9-5 desk job. While Prats may have a formal education Krishna has the wits and street smarts to think quick on his feet much like Komal did yd'ay. They are creative and can come up with unexpected solutions to situations. There is a place for everyone in the world to contribute and make a living. The limitations are always in the thinking that without a formal education one cannot amount to anything. Truth is many very successful people in the world today have learned well in the Life's School not at a preppy or ivy league university. The drive to make something of him is lacking in Krishna so far. He still believes he was born to be king, even an idle king. His mind set has to change and that won't easily change unless he wakes up from a badiya jatka that threatens what he values most in life. Look how hard he tries to hold on to living on easy street. There is also fear or not amounting to much out in the real world doing a kanooni kaam bec' of his lack of education.

His life revolves around Prats and if that means his marriage is on the line he will rise to the occasion. After all he can't tolerate the tears in her eyes. He has to swallow his pride and ask Prats to help him take the first steps towards redeeming himself in her eyes. The first step is always the most scary, once he gets to do something worthwhile his self-confidence will take him the rest of the way. But along the way he is going to have to defend himself and his wife to his family for there is likely to be more taunts, insults and ridicules piling along the way.

Komal, truly has it on easy street. Slowly but surely in spite of feeling like a misfit among the educated Saxes she has managed to turn the tables on her sasural and literally leading Adarsh by the nose. The man who treated her with contempt has turned her staunchest supporter since his SR. Let's see how long he gets away with doing illlegal things and living under the roof of his sanskaric family. Will Adarsh turn the tables on Shamu and say he is harboring another criminal at home (younger sister)? The bigamy marriage has shot the rules of the family and to now acc' to Mr. Moneybags Saxsena anything and everything goes. He 's got his sasurji's back up in case he lands in jail like his older saale saahib KN.


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Hi Dhak!😃

Life is all about living the journey. Krishna thrives on "katin kaam" the thrill of the chase be it Prats or getting a job is what drives him. She is definitely not cut out to do a 9-5 desk job. While Prats may have a formal education Krishna has the wits and street smarts to think quick on his feet much like Komal did yd'ay. They are creative and can come up with unexpected solutions to situations. There is a place for everyone in the world to contribute and make a living. The limitations are always in the thinking that without a formal education one cannot amount to anything. Truth is many very successful people in the world today have learned well in the Life's School not at a preppy or ivy league university. sooooooooo true, in our district we have a 86 year old illiterate man who can't even sign his name and every year 100s of students come to him for civil service exam training as he is an avid listener and still remembers all the important dates and events of the world through the years of listening to radio and television........but the society won't accept a self made man who hasn't got a degree to his name .......as we see the medis is always after rank holders and IIT'ans and IIM 's like how they show even a trivial rock party in their campuses when a more culturally rich youth festival would be going on in a school or gov college.......😕 The drive to make something of him is lacking in Krishna so far. He still believes he was born to be king, even an idle king. His mind set has to change and that won't easily change unless he wakes up from a badiya jatka that threatens what he values most in life. Look how hard he tries to hold on to living on easy street. There is also fear or not amounting to much out in the real world doing a kanooni kaam bec' of his lack of education. i think he will soon decide to work too only if he gets to destroy his insecurities.....

His life revolves around Prats and if that means his marriage is on the line he will rise to the occasion. After all he can't tolerate the tears in her eyes. He has to swallow his pride and ask Prats to help him take the first steps towards redeeming himself in her eyes. The first step is always the most scary, once he gets to do something worthwhile his self-confidence will take him the rest of the way. But along the way he is going to have to defend himself and his wife to his family for there is likely to be more taunts, insults and ridicules piling along the way. yes, anything for babu..............but here he has to realize the importance of working and education and not do it for his babu's sake..........i think we will get a nice sequence coming holi where he will make his babu happy by fulfilling his promise of an unforgettable holi with his hard earned money 😊 😳

Komal, truly has it on easy street. Slowly but surely in spite of feeling like a misfit among the educated Saxes she has managed to turn the tables on her sasural and literally leading Adarsh by the nose. The man who treated her with contempt has turned her staunchest supporter since his SR. Let's see how long he gets away with doing illlegal things and living under the roof of his sanskaric family. Will Adarsh turn the tables on Shamu and say he is harboring another criminal at home (younger sister)? The bigamy marriage has shot the rules of the family and to now acc' to Mr. Moneybags Saxsena anything and everything goes. He 's got his sasurji's back up in case he lands in jail like his older saale saahib KN. i have no hopes in CVs as they r deliberately avoiding Arushi's dark deeds and trying to show her as all sacrificing , down to earth girl but they must know that her character is far from evoking any sympathy from the audiences as her face on screen reminds viewers of the torture she subjected to kriya and to us..........😡


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Takurs kids taken to task this Thursday. The episode centers around Takur siblings Krishna and Komal: They're busted! Komal is interrogated for hiding a LOOT, while Krishna is nailed for his string of JOOT about working. A bitter-sweet day for Prats. she earns her first paycheck for a published newspaper article, a monetary reward for her little effort. Then she swallows a bitter pill of broken trust at the Adda after she catches Krishna red handed playing carom with T and C.

NOT BUYING IT

RED doesn't buy Krishna's claim that he is on his way to work. They know him too well to believe he'd lift a finger let alone turn up at work day after day. SS taunts and warns him "when you trip and fall deep then we'll know". Seems like bauji's intitution is on to something here.

STRAIGHTENING UP

Naina walks into Adarsh's room. She fusses about the few clothes strewn around the room. She picks up the clothes and heads to the cupboard where a bigger mess awaits her. Like mother like daughter. Prats reacted the same way when she opened Krishna's closet the day after her wedding. Who was hanging on the ceiling filming Nainja's walk to Komal's cupboard?😆 She picks up a few clothes and a wad of cash scatters to the floor.😲 Looks like Komal tried counting her notes and when she hit a wall and went as far as she could go with the counting, she got frustrated and tossed them carelessly in the cupboard. She didn't expect a snooping sasuma to invade her closet without warning.🤔

normally komals room is tidy - just on this occasion it was a mess for that nosey c%w to come and catch her
must be the invisable chapta tv keeping her busy... they had no intentions the cv's for keeping that chapta tv in sight - hence they never put it in the front room
STRAIGHT AS AN ARROW

Komal demands to know why Naina is snooping in her cupboard while she was away. Naina brushes her question aside and wants an answer to "where did you get this much cash in this house?"😔 Komal retorts "why should I tell you, what's it to you anyways?"😲

SOW THE SEEDS OF SUSPICION

The first and third generation Sax women come running into the room after overhearing the saas-bahu bickering. Dadi stops dead in her tracks "So much money? I've never seen this anywhere before". Really! Guess Dadi has never been to a bank. What was Shamu bringing home for a paycheck? Chump change? That's got to be a mighty exaggeration. Shamu has been a Prof. for over a quarter of a century and she hasn't seen a few thousand rupees? The cash Naina stashed away before Prats's marriage was more than the measley sum in Komal's custody. The Sax women are worried seeing this wad of cash all at once under their roof. They are used to complaining about lack of money no wonder it scares them to even look at this much cash, just poverty thinking.😕 👏👏👏👏👏

ILL-GOTTEN GAINS

Dadi hurls insults at Komal "she probably got this cash from SS. She's been in this house long enough yet she doesn't think about the humiliation she brings to this family with a new tamasha every day. She must have told them that meals are hard to come by in this house." Komal has had her fill of the insults. She retaliates with her own pointed dart and tells her to go sit outside and collect charity. Go Begging?😲 Ouch! They have yet to learn not to stick their heads in this lioness's mouth. The youngest daughter not one to be left out chimes in with her own questions "talk with respect to Dadi." Look who's talking, the one who needed to hear that just a couple of months ago. "Why don't you end the matter by answering the question posed. If this money didn't come from your bauji (is he still her bauji too?) then tell them where it came from"? Why is she sticking her nose where it doesn't belong, tsk tsk tsk. why is she still in the show... no need for her...

ON THE LEVEL

Komal, impatient and vexed hurls an insult at her sis-in-law "you have a runaway mouth these days."Now, now! Out with the truth Komal. She's been this way since day one. Are Adarsh and Komal taking a daily dose of truth serum these days that is sending the rest of the family's head reeling😛. "Let me tell you this money came to me from my husband. What will you do?" Lallantop!Clap 👍🏼 Good question! Three generations of Sax women in stunned silence trying to pick their jaws off the floor while she gets back to picking up her wad of cash off the floor after delivering the truth to their faces. Well, well, well! Mr. Moneybags Saxsena is in for a surprise when he returns home today. He's going to have to tell the truth or dare to stand up to his family. After leaving on a high note before breakfast he's got a lot of esplaining to do and it's only going to be easy if it's a wad of lies spilling from his mouth this time.

THANK YOU FOR CALLING!
At at Takur's Chateau, Prats answers the telephone. Her disjointed "Ji, yes, what, Thank you, I'll be right there?" followed by "Dadi, Amma, I'll be right back" and a sprint out of the Niwas without a backward glance has the senior Takurains, one concerned, the other curious at her sudden disappearance. Takurain II mumbles "where has the Masterni rushed off to? Looks like she's got a mountain of gold and if she doesn't go she'll be robbed off it." Prats bolted before they had a chance to put the kabaash on her outing. That will be the day when Takurain II gets to know that Prats is earning money whereas her two slob sons are a sack of lazy bones.😲

PRAISE HER TO THE SKIES

A newspaper editor invites Pratigyaji into his office. It's been a while since anyone called her Pratigyaji. 😆😆😆 He informs Prats that her article "Educated women at home with shackles on their feet" has made it to the front page and hands her a copy of the paper. She is pleased and proud to see her name Pratigya Krishna Singh printed on the front page of the newspaper. The editor praises her impressive writing and her presentation of the issue to the public. "It's a great idea and your writing has great impact because it brings the entire truth to light before everyone. We are thinking of doing a regular column in the future after the response we've had for this article. You will have complete creative freedom and we trust your vision completely. We've received several congratulatory calls this morning. Few articles get such a response. We request you continue to write more such articles for our newspaper, "Please continue to write as your writing has a lot of power". Hear that Tanths?😉😃Clap😲

As far as i thought it as kalaam mein taqaat.... but mkap Confused
THANK GOODNESS!

He pays Prats for her published article👍🏼. She gets a tad emotional "Thank you so much. you have no idea how much this money means to me. I will give my first earnings to my husband today".😃 Aww! Sweet!😳 But he is busy playing carom like he is on summer vacation with his cousins? 😛 Mr. Lazybones!😔

REJOICE OVER THE GOOD FORTUNE

Prats calls Krishna to share her thrilling news. But Krishna ignores the call and continues to play carom. He'd rather let her think he is busy at work. She decides to go to devars Tunna and Chandu for help to find Krishna's office. She takes a rickshaw towards the Adda excited about sharing her good news with Krishna. She twirls happily, lends a helping hand to a senior citizen mounting a rickshaw, plays hopscotch with young girls, aids an elderly gentleman across the street and receives their blessings before she arrives at the Adda. Film-vilm ishstyle scene!🤔 What was her name THAKURAIN Pratigya KRISHNA Singh THAKUR... Oops did I miss out the Mrs part aswell Confused

CAUGHT RED-HANDED IN MONKEY BUSINESS

Prats's joyous moments makes a crash landing when she arrives at the Adda to see Krishna and the devars engaged in a game of carom. Assuming that devars T and C are crying wolf once too often Krishna ignores their warnings of their bhabhima presence. Krishna finally faces Prats when she stands before him. Her trust in Krishna comes crashing down like an imploding building packed with dynamite. Her silence is enough to stir a well of guilt in Krishna and he turns away unable to look her in the eye. He stutters and stumbles as he tries to salvage the situation with another round of lies. For a man who once hated joot-moots he sure is piling it on like a landfill of garbage. He drags his buddies T and C in to backup his story.

SCALES FALLS FROM HER EYES

Prats is on to his shenanighans and won't have any of it. Krishna is shocked into silence when she explodes "Enough, Krishna! I can't tolerate any more lies. Even after all this you think you are right? You ought to be ashamed. To cover this one lie how many lies are you going to pile on? I never expected that you would play with all of our emotions this way. I never dreamed you would do such a thing." Thank you POPS, we've have been waiting to listen to the mantra in the background like old times. Clap Prats reminds him "Bauji is sick. KN is refusing to work and you gave hope to everyone that you would go to work and earn a living for the family. Today, you did a shameless and terrible thing, Krishna, How much more do you want to fall in my eyes? I trusted you more than I trusted myself. Today you broke that belief and trust I had in you." A visual response:

AT A LOSS FOR WORDS

Krishna has nothing left to say in his defense. He looks more lost and confused😕 listening to Prats than angry at the moment. Prats has just unleashed her

anger 😡on him and if the past is anything to go by it's Prats's anger that brings out the best in him. Krishna like some men is a little boy at heart who needs to be challenged and prodded on to bring out the best in him. It was Prats's anger that made him dig deeper and her challeneges and rejections that allowed him to climb mountains to finally reach the summit successfully when it came to winning her love❤️. By his own admission it's the "katin kaam" that inspires and dares him to live life to the fullest. Let's see which road he takes from the intersection he is at, at the moment. He has to put the broken pieces of the trust in their marriage together again💔😕.

MERA'S MINDFUL MATTERS

Will his fear of venturing into the working world still have a hold over him or will the guilt and shame over the pain and hurt he sees in Prats's eyes now haunt him and finally pierce his soul springing him into action? It's quite possible that he may unleash his anger to cover up his fears and pin the blame on Prats for her lofty expectations of him. I think he's done that part already - so it's time for a change. He could accuse her of forgetting his limitations due to his lack of education and tide over on that wave for a while. Will it take a few more dips and a crash landing before he wakes up and acts on tearing through his barriers of fear? I THINK HE IS AT HIS LOWEST NOW. Or will it be his bruised and shattered ego that takes a beating to see his woman earn a living while he idles away his days listening to his family's taunts that he is no "mard" for he lives off his wife's earnings? Will it really be a surprise if and when he picks up a fight and beats up some poor soul on the streets of Allahabad fueled by comments he may hear arising from discussions of Prats's articles. After all deeprooted behaviors especially negative ones do rear their ugly heads when put to the test no matter how much a person claims to have grown and changed over the years. It's going to take constant awareness to keep himself in check. What happens if Prats is invited to a gala event or a bash thrown on her behalf by her readers, where will Krishna fit in with a popular and successful life? We've seen his insecurities get the better of him on occasion. This is an interesting track with potential for great story telling. If POPS are back on track to their early days of this show we are in for a lallantop ride. TOTALLY AGREE.. A BIT LIKE AB'S OLD MOVIE ABHIMAAN, Is that why he acts like ab quite a lot?

He was offended when Prats offered to earn a living if he won't do it. He was enraged by her words but later dared her to earn without leaving the Niwas. Shee won, he lost on both fronts.

Will he accuse her of hiding things from him? He never bothered to ask her what she was using the stationeries for. Amma saw her writing and crumpled it up. So neither one can say anything to refute her claims of an honest living when the facts come to life. But given they are all unpuds they may claim she's making things up. How will Takurs respond when they get wind of Prats's articles? Will they throw a hissy fit about her selling the Takur family respect on the streets for money? Even if they get an outsider to read it, maybe even Adarsh, the contents could shock them if it hints at the happenings in the Takur household. Prats is going to be in a fix. Unless and until Krishna earns his keep she may have to keep this news under wraps for several reasons.

Preview: SINGING HIS PRAISES: Krishna is confused and looks away as Takurain II does the aarati praising him for making his parents proud while SS nods in agreement with pride. 🤔The rest of the family watches on, Prats face shows no emotions. Will the Takurs wonder about her cool demeanor even after her husband's successful first earnings?😲 If Prats gave her earnings to the Takurs claiming it to be Krishna's isn't she propagating a lie too?No yaar... for Praitigya and her family.. diff rules remember . For the sake of their marriage Krishna has to have something to hang his hat on, what will it be Prat's lie or something that's yet to spring into the mix? 😲🤔😕

Please add your thoughts and speculate away about where this track is likely to go. 😃Clap😉

hi mera lovely post - have annotated my thoughts in your post.....
fuure track - there are many options.......
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great post...

you are right....Pratigyas title can itself cause waves in the family..... with her own name....and what will be her next topic, assuming they read, or someone they know tells them.... friends neighbours will notice and i think that will the next bombshell..

She is lying too, so.... where are her principles gone to.... all these things surface, like komals kash sooner or later..
next titles...
bigamy and burying people alive.

emotional and physical blackmail... we all know preaching pratigya and maybe that is why she has smartly passed the earnings on to krishna or she will be questioned as to how she came about the money...and her ss saxena papa does not have the money that shakti singh does,

Not sharing the source.... givesherfree rein and not cause more rumpled feathers and crumpled sheets.

and since atm adarsh is filling his wifes laacker.....he is going to have his own reckoning .... good luck...

did aarushi not once do a makeover for kamal.... and she also tutors, so good time to study and upgrade herself to act like an officers wife....without losing her chutzpah!

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