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PMS WILL BE SENT LATER
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PS: I've only went to India once in my life and I've only stayed in my parents' state (Punjab), so I really don't know where in India it snows, but I'm guessing it does in a place called Manali, which I am going to use. Please do correct me if I'm wrong, and I'll edit it.
the kidnap
Recap:
Maan's hands went to the sides of the tree. His lips were 2 mm away from hers. He passionately brushed his lips against hers, as she closed her eyes. A few seconds later, the warmth was gone. Geet opened her eyes. Maan was standing a meter away from her. Maan winked at Geet.
"Ghar chale?" Maan asked.
Geet smiled widely, "Mere ghar?"
Maan chuckled. She really thought that after all this he would just drop her at her own house! "Nahi! Humare Ghar."
Geet felt happy that he called that farmhouse theirs. It did deserve to be called theirs, because they were the one that made it worth living in.
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Chapter 9:
Geet sneezed. Maan shook his head. He took off his jacket, covering Geet with it. Maan had on a sweater under it.
"What are you doing? You'll catch a cold!" Geet said, and then sneezed.
Maan looked at her disbelievingly, "You already have a cold."
Geet sneezed, "Oh...Ya."
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The night was dark and spooky, especially in the forest. It was about 9:00 PM by now. Geet and Maan had been walking and looking for a way for an hour. Geet who was extremely tired, sick and sleepy kept falling onto Maan while walking, then steadying herself and moving a safe distance away from him. Maan was getting really worried for Geet. Even in the dark, he could see her face. It was pale, she was shivering, and sneezing. She looked completely ill. Maan didn't show it, but every time Geet got all drowsy and fell on to him, something strange occured inside of him. A strange worry.
Geet tripped over a rock, which she could see due to the dark. Maan held her waist quickly, before she could fall. An extremely tired Geet put her one arm around his neck and let the other hang, while she closed her eyes ready to sleep. Maan was exasperated. How were they ever going to get back, with Geet looking for every oppurtunity possible to just sleep.
"Geet? Wake up! We're almost there," lied Maan.
Geet ignored him. Maan pulled her up. She was standing close to Maan with her eyes still closed.
Geet whispered weakly without opening her eyes, "Please Maan. I can't walk anymore."
Maan felt sorry for her. Geet rested her head on Maan's shoulder, putting her hands around him. Maan felt her cold cheek, on his shoulder. Obviously, Geet was not in the right sense, at the moment, or else she'd never cling to her kidnapper like that. She was on her tippy toes. Maan smiled with an idea. He decided to dance his way to the pathway, which he'd been looking for. Geet was already in the dancing position. Maan touched her waist, slowly sliding his hand. With a jerk, he pulled her close. Geet, at once opened her eyes and stared at Maan wide-eyed as he moved his hand around her waist. Geet's heart started beating faster. She was about to speak, when Maan put his finger to her lips.
"Shhh..." Maan said.
Maan slowly started to dance, moving up front, while Geet moved back. He turned so that he was taking the steps back. Maan was sure they were going the right way. He remebered that the small path that lead to the farmhouse was that way. Geet started to get sleepy again. Maan quickly twirled her and pulled her back. Geet banged into Maan's chest, and once again put her arms around Maan's neck. Geet tried to sleep on Maan's shoulder again, but Maan dipped her low, bringing her back up. Geet jerked. Geet glared at him.
They continued. The gorgeous couple, was dancing under the moon and stars, in the beautiful snowy forest. There was hardly anymore wind. There was just the soft snow falling straight to the ground, silently. Maan continously twirled her until, they both were out of breath. Maan stopped, taking pity on the sick girl. She closed her eyes, falling right back onto his shoulder. Her new favourite place. She closed her eyes and slept, hugging Maan closely, like a blanket. Maan looked at Geet's head on his shoulder. He stood like that for a few minutes. Maan's hand made it's way through her wet hair. His other hand stopped holding her waist from over his leather jacket.
Maan tried not to look at her. Geet always made him lose control over his actions. He got happy seeing that same bunch of fallen trees, that Geet had tripped over. He was happy that they were at least going the right way. He thought that Geet seriously needed a break now. He slowly sat down, leaning against the trees, with Geet still clinging to him. Not letting go.
She randomly spoke, when he was trying to make her let go of him. "Hold me," Geet whispered. Maan hesitatingly put his arm around her from under the jacket, providing much warmth to her.
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Maan awoke instantly. It was dark. He checked his watch. It was 12:00 AM. Maan had fallen asleep for two hours. Maan decided, that he'd have to wake Geet up. If they slept outside the whole night, Geet would just get more sick. Geet was on his lap hugging him tightly. She was still shivering. Maan slowly stood up, with Geet still hugging him.
"Mhmmhm..." Geet said something in her sleep that Maan couldn't hear.
"Mmm...Chocolate..." murmured Geet. Maan chuckled. She was thinking about chocolate at a time like this. She then randomly mumbled, "Hot."
She thinking about me. Maan smirked.
"Hot chocolate..." Geet said. Maan's smirk came off. So, she wasn't thinking about me.
Maan started walking with Geet's head still buried in her shoulder. Maan found it funny how she was walking, talking and sleeping at the same time.
Geet mumbled something next to Maan ear, "Gulab Jamun... Samosa... Pizza... Jalebi..."
Maan couldn't control, and started laughing. Geet was still sleeping. Maan was finding it difficult to make Geet walk with him like this, so he lifted her up in his arms, and continued.
"Y'know... When I grow up I'm going to open a Chocolate Factory," Geet said, while Maan just smiled at her sleep talk, "Just like Willy Wonka!" Maan laughed. "But, I'm not going to sell the chocolate. I'm gonna eat it!"
"Okay," Maan replied chuckling, even though he knew she was sleeping and couldn't hear.
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Maan was in a dilemma. Shortly, they had reached the pathway. Geet was still sleeping, and talking occassionally. Maan recognized, where on the pathway they were. In fifteen minutes they would reach a normal town in Manali, if they went right. But, going left, there were two hours left to get to the farmhouse. He didn't know what to do. If he went to town then, Geet could easily blurt out everything about him. If he went back to the farmhosue, she'd probably faint do to illness in the way.
Maan decided that at the point, keeping Geet healthy was more important. He would handle her and make sure she doesn't blurt out anything. When he had started heading towards town, Geet had suddenly woken up. She noticed she was in Maan's arms and started yelling.
"Aaahhh! Why are you holding me! Stop it! Put me down! Your touching me! How dare you! Aaahhh!" Geet yelled. Maan got extremely annoyed at put her down angrily.
"What the hell! What's your problem, you pagal ladki!" Maan screamed at her.
Geet gave him an angry look, still shivering. She was a powerful girl, that she survived the whole day in the snow, without being dressed accordingly to the weather.
"Can you please, quickly just get us ho-" Geet sentence was not completed, as she sneezed.
Maan chuckled at her, mockingly.
Geet glared at him, "Shut Up!"
Maan sighed. She was back to her normal attitude. She shivered as they walked. Geet started to get all drowsy again. Then, what Maan was fearing happened. She fainted. Maan caught her in his arms. He was extremely worried. He picked her up and ran down the path. They finally reached the town. It was silent, as everyone was sleeping. Maan saw a very small little house in the corner. The light was on. He hopefully, walked there, and knocked on the door.
A nice old lady, opened the door.
"Hi. What happened? Is she okay?" the lady asked concerned, when she saw Geet unconcious in Maan's arms.
"I'm extremely sorry to-" Maan started, but the lady cut him off.
The lady moved from the door, "Come in first. You poor little thing! Carrying your sick wife around like that."
"Thank You," Maan said gratefully. This lady reminded him of his Dadi.
The lady was actually a retired doctor. While the lady was treating Geet, she asked what happened, that made her so ill. Maan cooked up a story about how Geet is a mental patient and sometimes she starts acting all weird with him and doesn't accept him as her husband. He said that she didn't believe him, and was trying to run away, but instead she got lost in the forest. Maan said that he found her fainted and carried her to town.
The lady dried Geet's hair. "Aww! She's so lucky to have a husband like you. There aren't many men like you nowadays, carrying around their wives from the forest, in such terrible weather."
"She doesn't value me at all. She treats me really bad..." Maan said with a fake sad face.
The lady smiled, "Maybe she just hasn't realized her love yet."
Love? My ass! The only thing she loves is chocolate! Maan smiled back at her.
The lady - whose name by the way, was Geeta - finished drying Geet's hair. She said that there might be a saree of her daughter's in the guest room which there was. It was a red saree with minimal design, and light embroidery. It was all that was there so Maan brang it. Geeta was in awe when Maan looked away while she changed Geet's clothes. 'What a sweet husband!' she thought.
She said Geet would be concious in the morning. Maan carried her to the guest room. There was no couch, and he wasn't in a Bollywood movie, so he just slept beside her. It was a king sized bed, after all.
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Geet regained conciousness the next morning. She stared up at the ceiling. I was walking in the forest with Maan... How did I get here? She looked beside her. Her eyes widened seeing Maan beside her, and her clothes changed. The shock changed to anger. She was about to scream, when Maan shifted himself on top of her and used his hand to cover her mouth. He had woken up a minute ago and knew Geet would scream any second.
"Shut up. Don't even try to scream!" Maan said threateningly.
Geet looked at him with big angry eyes. He removed his hand for her to reply.
"Or else?" Geet asked.
Maan made the most intimidating face he could. "You have no idea..."
Geet was frightened by the intensity he said those words with. She shuddered. He was happy when he felt her shudder under him. It meant that his scare worked.
Noticing the position they were in, she used her hands to try and get him off her. "Move."
Maan took her wrist and pinned them to either side, and leaned in. "You better remember what I said..." Maan said in her ear, and then got off.
Geet sat up quickly, "Where are we?"
"You fainted last night, so I brought you to this house, where the sweet owner treated you, changed your clothes, and let us stay here." Maan said emphasizing on the 'changed your clothes' part.
"Oh..." she said, then shyly added, "Sorry, for misunderstanding." She stood up, straightening the red saree she was wearing.
Maan picked up a towel from the small closet and his clothes from the day before. He had changed into Geeta Aunty's son's clothes for the night. "It's okay," Maan said before
entering the bathroom.
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Maan thanked god that he entered the bathroom right away, or else he would've surely gotten carried away seeing Geet in that red saree that made her look so sexy.
He took a quick shower and put his clothes on. Maan got out and saw Geet fixing the sheets, and pillows. Maan tried to avoid checking her out.
"I spoke to Geeta Aunty. She told me how good of a husband you are," Geet said, glaring at him during the husband part. "Oh! She was also asking if I am feeling mentally stable!" Geet gave him a furious look when he let out a chuckle. "You are so lucky I played along."
"You should be happy you played along," Maan said. He didn't have in mind what exactly he would do if she exposed him. But, he trusted that she wouldn't after that warning he gave her. "Your clothes are probably dry by now. Take a shower and then we're leaving." Maan said,
"And remember! You better not tell Geeta Aunty anything."
Geet gave him a look of disgust and entered the bathroom. Why am I not exposing him? He can't do anything if I tell Geeta Aunty he is a kidnapper. He'll be sent to jail! Geet paused, and thought. But, he'll be too fast for Geeta Aunty and he'll be outta here with me in no time. He's so fast! And he might even injure Geeta Aunty so she can't call the police. I guess I shouldn't put Geeta Aunty's life in danger, like that. And who knows, what he'll do to me after that! Geet shivered thinking of the possibilities.
She took a warm shower and put her clothes on. She felt much better. Her cold was gone already. Even though she hated that Maan Singh Khurana, she had to admit that he did a lot for her last night. He didn't have to bring her to town. Maan could've not cared, and just carried her unconcious body to the farmhouse. He was a kidnapper, but a good one who knew what he was doing. Geet found it funny that she was admiring his kidnapping skills. She got out of the bathroom. Geeta Aunty made them eat breakfast. She even gave them proper coats of her son and daughter who both moved out with their spouses. After she made sure they had coats, hats and mitts, she let them leave the house. She was such a sweet lady.
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Maan sighed of relief when they reached the path. After a two hour walk they'd reach the farmhouse. Maan was happy that Geet was unable to escape. Now she couldn't do anything because rarely does anyone come in this forest.
Maan and Geet were walking side by side. Pretty close together. They walked for a good half hour. Geet wished someone would be in the forest so she could yell for help.
They walked on, but then they saw a tensed lady walking a few feet away. She was heading in their direction. Maan saw the look on Geet's face. Obviously, she would try to ask for help. When the tensed lady was just 2 feet away Maan pinned Geet against a tree, and smacked his lips over top of hers.
The lady was about to ask them, if they'd seen her precious lost dog anywhere, but then saw them kiss, and decided to wait and not disturb the so-in-love couple.
Maan quickly held Geet's hands that were pushing him away, and held them down so the lady wouldn't know that he forced the kiss on Geet.
The lady blushed seeing them kiss like they met after 5 years. Maan continued kissing Geet for a whole three minutes. Geet tried to speak but her voice was completely muffled by the force of his kiss. After a while Geet gave up on freeing herself. The lady also gave up on waiting for them to be done kissing and walked away embarassed. Maan broke away from the one-sided seven minute kiss. And Geet moved away catching her breath. Geet noticed that the girl hadn't gone too far and decided on running to her. Maan sensed Geet's plan and pulled Geet over to himself, kissing her wildly again.
Geet was so tired of struggling and trying to make him let go of her. The lady had long gone, and here Maan was still passionately kissing Geet. His hands wandered at her waist gripping her so she doesn't keep trying to push him away. Geet's fists stopped at his chest when his tongue entered her mouth. She was determined to not lose control. She angrily bit his tongue. At once he broke away from that long kiss and jumped back.
Maan looked at her annoyed, "What the hell! You pagal ladki!"
Geet glared at him. She felt like killing him right there. But what could she really do. Slapping him never made a difference.
With that glare, Maan realized that if he said even one more word she would slap him, or do something worse. He decided to just continue walking. Maan realized that Geet wasn't walking. He turned. Obviously! She's way to stubborn to follow me like a good girl. Especially when this sherni awakes inside of her. Sometimes, I wonder if she just likes to annoy me this much. Okay, okay. I'm her kidnapper, and she's not supposed to listen to me. But, why does she have to give me such a hard time? Geet was just standing there, looking downwards with her arms crossed over her chest. It was evident by her face that she was very upset about what happened.
Ughh! OMG! I hate this Maan Singh Khurana dude so much! Why couldn't I get a better kidnapper! First of all, why did I of all people have to be kidnapped! He's turning my wonderful life into hell!
Maan walked over to her. "Geet. Start Walking."
Geet didn't budge.
What a little BRAT! Maan was getting pissed off at her. He pulled her by her elbow.
She shrugged his hand off, and her hand flung and hit his nose.
"Oww!" he shouted glaring at her.
Geet looked down. She would've said sorry, but no. There was that big fat ego stopping her. Just like Maan. He would've said sorry to Geet about the kisses, but he had an ego of his own too. The one that said, 'First of all, Maan Singh Khurana doesn't say sorry. Second of all, I'm her kidnapper and can do whatever I want with this Handa chicka'
Maan was angry about the nose thing, and her attitude over all. True, that he is a kidnapper. But that doesn't mean she talks to him so arrogantly, acts so stubborn, treats him like filth after all he does for her, when he should just tie her up and throw her in a room.
Maan jerked her to him in one pull by her waist. She hit his chest and her face was just centimeters away. Maan glared at her. "You better start walking, right now! Or else I swear, I won't feel the slightest shame if I have to start a makeout session with you right now, in the middle of this snowy forest. And trust me there will be more to come, once we reach the farmhouse."
Geet was horrified. The intensity of his words freaked her out. She knew he wasn't just threatening her. By the proximity they were sharing at the moment, it was obvious that he meant what he said. She leaned her head backwards a bit, because his lips were dangerously close to hers.
Maan took this as an oppurtunity to further make her realize that he meant it. His lips travelled down to her neck, where he gave her hickey, just above her collarbone.
Geet gasped. She quickly pushed him away and started walking, without saying another word.
Maan with a smirk on his face followed her.

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Precap:
New character enters the story.
Neev. A 4 year old child.
Any guesses, who this child is. Hmmm... I wonder who his mom and dad are...
Lolzz... Make sure you tell me who you think this child is.
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Edited by MaanKiGeet... - 14 years ago
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Yayyyyy u updated..lolz
wohoo..and am first to comment😆
OMGGGG
Awesomee-licious updatee
loved it
Amazingggg partttt
Hayeeeeee love the maaneet scenes
esp when maan kissed geet forcefully..lolz
love the lady wala kissing scene lmao the last part
Fabuolus part jassi
Continue soonnnnnn
Thank u soo much
love ya

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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awesome update.......... nice lady to help maaneet...... is neev maan son?

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