My First Serious Crush:Maaneet FF:Ch10 Pg35 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: maansee

GITANJALI IS SWEET NAME................

MAAN FIGHT WITH GEET 😆 STARTED AGAIN ......................


ya..😆..they LOVE fighting with each-other!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

Nice part... loved it


thanks for liking and commenting!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: hansasma

hahaha!! love the way the story is going do pm me when you update next.


thanks,

asma


😃I am very happy that you are liking my story!..thanks for commenting!..added u to my PM list😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: preethia

woah!!!!!!!!!!!1 yeh dono toh chup hi nahin reh sakthey................loved the update........thanks for the pm pl cont soon


😆..thanks for loving it🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Really Nice
Superb
Cont Soon
Add Me To Your PM List Pls , Thanks


thanks😃added you to my PM list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Interesting story line... loved it.... pls add me to yr pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Chapter 3:

Everyone starts leaving the class and Prachi is waiting for Geet at the door!.. Geet asks Prachi to carry on as she has something important to do and she will talk about it later to her!Prachi feels weird but she had some work at home,so she leaves reluctantly.

Geet-So, you wanted to have a talk!..LETS have it NOW😡!

Maan was surprised and angry at the same time.

Maan(in his head)-What does she think of herself,..firstly she calls ME and item boy and here she is not scared of me..ah..Geet you will repent not taking me seriously😡😡!!

Both move towards each-other with fire in their eyes and with intentions to kill the other person!(😉😆)

They are just inches part and TA'DA--..the fight starts..Geet hits him on his head and he hits back on her arm..she punches him and in reply he again hits her on the same place..Geet hits him with her leg just near his private part and he holds her hand and turns it around hurting her badly..she tries to free herself but Maan is not letting it go..In all this they forget the close proximity they are sharing,.BUT both are JERKS😆.. they are not feeling anything as they are so involved in the fight👎🏼😆!..Geet uses her elbow and hits man and is able to free herself and again full-on fight is on!..they both are fighting but at the same time are careful not to hit too hard also. Both run out of breath and say at the same time"BREAK TIME!!"..and realize what they were doing and how they were literally fighting for last 15 minutes!..Both burst out laughing🤣!

Geet thinks "what was that..Prachi was right..I am changing..I hit a GUY😲..earlier I couldn't gather my guts to answer back a boy and here I am full-on fighting with one of the most talked about guyz in my batch😲"

Maan's thoughts "DUDE..!!..what is up with you..you always behave gentleman-type in front of girls than why do you behave so YOURSELF with her😆!..I don't know why I am unable to hold me real self when I am with her!..I swear I haven't enjoyed this much for such a long time !!"

There is utter silence as both are trying to gather what they were doing and were trying to make themselves understand their behaviour!..

Suddenly ,final bell rings which means that soon all classrooms will be locked up and anyone still on school premises should leave immediately. Both gather their stuff and start walking towards the exit!

Maan-ahem..you are not hurt somewhere seriously?are you?

Geet-no,,..you are such a lame fighter..*giggles*😆

Maan-and I thought to be nice to you for once!

Geet-ok..ok ,..sorry..no I am not hurt..I hope I didn't hurt you that bad too!

Maan-no..it was FUN infact!

Both laugh and look at each-other and have a small eyelock!

Geet breaks it and says- I had so much fun after ages!

Maan 'same here'I mean,not that I get any less fun irritating you😉*Geet rolls her eyes*,but today was freaking awesome..you are a female Sunny Deol you know*starts laughing🤣*

Geet-haha,..very funny!..and I don't know why I thought you would behave decently with a GIRL!

Maan-ya..I would have..if there was a GIRL involved😛!

Geet-WHAT😡?

Maan* laughing*-ok..just kidding yar..I surprised myself too..I never behave like this with girls you know..But with you I just cant help it!

Geet*surprisingly*-you too..and I thought I was the only one behaving odd here..I mean I have never argued and fought so much with a guy before..I just behave too much of my realself wih you..no idea why!!

Maan-Oh God..you are joking..thats exactly how I feel!..I seriously haven't been so myself with any girl before!

Maan and Geet are quite stunned with themselves and more stunned with how they have been sharing their feelings with each-other !..Both decide something and say at the exact time-FRIENDS?😲😉😃

Both smile!

Maan-So,friends Geetanjali?*forwarding his hand*

Geet rolls her eyes and gives a stern look!

Maan-I mean Geet!!

Geet smiles and shakes hand with him and both smile.

Geet-But that doesn't mean that we don't fight

Maan-or I don't irritate you

Geet-or I don't hit you

Maan-it just means that we will behave how we do but we will be friends at the same time..

Geet-Cool👍🏼

Maan-supercool⭐️*flashes his killer smile*

Geet-but one more thing,you cant use your killer smile on me!

Maan*smirks*-so , you do find my smile KILLER?..huh😉!

Geet-not AGAIN!

More bickering on the way to their homes and they finally bid each-other good-bye by promising to be more trouble for the other one the next day😳😉😊

End of Chapter 3!

I hope you are liking the story.Please let me know how you find it!..Looking forward to your comments!😊

Edited by MAANEET_hamesha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
awesome update
Wow Luvvd Maaneet fite
Dey both beating da crap out ov each other LOL
Dey both fink & speak alike especially wen dey sed *BREAK TYM* Awww
Yayy atleast der frends
Cont soon Xx...
Thanks 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
loved it so finally dosti toh ban gai chalo.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
omg loved it
its sooo cute

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