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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

its was good they solve there

misunderstanding
amazing confession
love Geet turning
bold so cute to keep him
quite with a kiss
super hit update
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
thanks pm



Yes, all misunderstandings are solved and Geet was forced to stop Maan the most effective way she could.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ManEetkiDeewaNi

Yes...you have made me so happy....

I loved the part went Geet is on the swing...you actually are able to see how weak and vulnerable she is even if she puts such a strong mask on...

and thank goodness that Maan came..and he explained his situation so well that any girl can fall in love...and i fell in love...
and than the kiss...it was just sweet bliss..

thank you for the update...it was wonderful


Glad to have made you happy. So you could empathise with my Geet? Yes, any girl would fall for him and Geet was already in love with him so all the more reason why she could not bear to see him plead and sealed his lips with hers.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: skjgmd

hey thank you for the updates😊

Thanks.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Awe so sweet maan confessed his love to her and cleared the misunderstanding and awe geet understood the depth of his feelings and reciprocated it with a loving kiss anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊


Yes, Maan confessed his love and cleared the misunderstanding. Geet is very understanding and conveyed her acceptance in that kiss.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KavyaNaik123

hey,,,,,update soooooooooonnn,waitng eagerly



Kavya, give a a few minutes, please.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: madhavipatil

update update update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz waiting

Wait, wait wait, Madhavi!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE 😆



Coming up in a couple of minutes.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part XXIX

Moments later Geet broke free, embarrassed at what she had done quite impulsively to stop Maan from pleading with her as she had already accepted him in her heart. She bent her head down, unable to meet his gaze.


Lifting her chin up with his finger, Maan couldn't resist teasing her, "Now, THAT was unexpected."


Geet's blush deepened and she tried to move away but Maan dragged her back into his arms. Suddenly struck by a thought, Geet pushed herself back, and looked into Maan's eyes.


"How is Sameera taking all this?" she asked with concern written all over her face.


It is then that Maan realised he had not explained to her what had transpired between him and Sameera in her house.

He guided her to the swing and once they were seated, he narrated the entire chain of events of that evening starting from Sameera waylaying him and questioning him about his behaviour towards Geet to her making him see what he failed to see. He also told her what she had said about their own relationship and how it was bound to fail given their temperaments.

Geet looked a little sceptical but looking back, she found no instance when Sameera displayed even a shadow of remorse at their relationship breaking up. Was she such a good actress or was it that love for Maan was as much a mirage to her as it was to him? One thing she knew from her own experience, the length of time of knowing a person is no guarantee that your love for that person would be deeper. She knew Dev since childhood and yet what she thought as love was not love after all. Maan and she agreed that it was their joint duty to ensure that Sameera finds true love soon and decided to do their part in helping her do so.

Maan then held her hand and said in a serious tone, "Our marriage did not take place under the most ideal conditions. I married you for the sake of ensuring and preserving my sister's happiness. So at least there was something in it for me from the start. It is a huge bonus that I ended up getting the most precious woman on the face of this earth. But this marriage has not been a fair deal to you. You did not get anything but hardship by marrying me. You had to give up a lot of comfort for my sake. In the initial weeks of marriage you also had to put up with my temper tantrums and taunts. I had even come home drunk one day and took out on you my anger against your brother. In all your goodness you did not utter a word against any of it. On the contrary you not only took good care of me but also my Baba. At the beginning of our marriage I mocked you as 'Your highness' but in truth you are my queen and I want to treat you as one. Although I want to give you everything, at present I am unable to."


"I have everything I want, Maan", assured Geet. "I have you and there is nothing more that I need. It is not what a man has that counts but what he is. I could have never hoped to have got a better husband than you. I admire your righteousness, your independence, your love and care for your family, your sense of duty and diligence, your sense of humour, your principles, your... "

"Bas, bas, bas..Geet. I am merely a human being, not a demi-god. Please don't put me on such a high pedestal, lest I fall some day. I know that you value human relationships more than any material things. That only goes to show the goodness of your heart but I do have some ambitions in life. I want to achieve them. I want to be my own man and not merely an employee. In pursuit of my dream I had not taken up a job for a long time but as I have to run a home, I took up this job at the hotel. But I've not stopped dreaming about owning my own hotel someday. I need to work hard towards achieving that dream by learning all there is to know about running a hotel business. This would involve long working hours. Can you put up with my long periods of absence from home?"


Geet looked at her husband appreciatively and taking his hand in hers, she said, "From today, your dreams are my dreams. I am willing to put up with any inconvenience till you fulfill yours. I am sure you are going to achieve your dream pretty soon because you have the drive needed to achieve it."


Maan smiled at his wife and nodded his head. "There is one other thing," he said tightening his hold on her hand.


She looked at him curiously.


He hesitated for moment before saying, "Can we postpone consummating our relationship for a while?"


Seeing her puzzled expression he hastened to add, "Believe me there is nothing more that I want than making you mine and becoming yours but I want to make myself worthy of you. I want to provide you with at least certain basic conveniences before I make you mine."


Geet gazed at her husband with new found respect. Here is a man who was willing to reign in his desires till he provides certain comforts. As she remained silent, Maan got nervous and fidgeted around.


"Geet, I won't make you wait for too long, may be a month at the most. I don't think even I can wait beyond that." He laughed as he said this.


Geet's lips twisted in a smile hearing this but she sobered down almost immediately. Looking into his eyes, she earnestly said, "Maan, I don't really need anything more than I already have, for I have the most priceless thing in the world - your love. But if you feel you need to do something for me before consummating our marriage, I am willing to wait. Until then we can be lovers who immensely enjoy each other's company but do not take the final step to physical intimacy."

Maan was so happy that his wife understood him. He hugged her again and kissed her forehead.

They went down to meet Sneha and tell her that their misunderstandings have been resolved. Sneha was very happy to hear that her friend was back with her husband. She insisted that they have dinner with her before they left for their home. During dinner Sneha light heartedly mentioned to Maan that Geet had some strong crushes back in school. Hearing this, Maan was curious to know more. Despite Geet jabbing her friend at the ribs to stop her from revealing her secrets, Sneha went ahead and spilt the beans. Geet seemed to have had crushes on fictional, historical and mythological characters. Among the fictional characters, her strongest crush was on Mr. Darcy from Pride and Prejudice. Among the historical characters she had a crush on Martin Luther King. Her favourite mythological character was Karna from Mahabharat.


"Now, that is quite a variety you have up there," joked Maan.


Geet punched his shoulder and screwed Sneha's ears for revealing her crushes to her husband.

After their dinner Maan and Geet took leave and rode back home. On the way, Maan took a detour to the nearby Madh Island beach. Geet's eyes widened in excitement. As they got off from the bike they saw a guy in a trolley selling candy floss. Geet pestered Maan into buying her one. Maan was amused at Geet's tastes. He bought her a big fluffy candy floss which Geet eagerly grabbed in her hand and proceeded to munch as they strolled up the beach. She offered it to him but he declined.

In the breeze the candy was flying all around and Geet had a tough time holding it and eating it. Once she finished, her face was quite a sight. Pink streaks of candy stuck to her cheeks, nose and corners of her lips. Maan couldn't resist smiling at her comic look. Geet glared at him and asked him what was the matter. He pointed out the streaks to her and Geet did her best to remove them. Bits of candy were still stuck to her face despite her valiant efforts to get them off. When Maan asked her if he could help, Geet nodded and extended her face to him with her eyes closed. He leant forward and proceeded to lick the candy off her cheeks and nose. When she felt the wetness, her eyes flew open and before he could get to the corner of her lips, she pushed him away, admonishing him for displaying such amorous behaviour in a public place where people may see them. Maan raised his eyebrows quizzically and asked her which people. It is then that Geet looked around and found that they were surrounded by couples who were up to naughtier pranks. Geet turned a deep red. Smiling at her coyness, Maan whispered that he was only being naughty with his wife, whereas most of the couples there were not even married to each other. Geet punched his chest in response and reminded him that it was time they get back home.

They then got back on the bike and just before starting it, Maan turned around and asked her if she can progress from holding his shoulder to holding his waist, now that they have progressed from friends to lovers. Geet smiled and obliged him. Maan then kick started his bike and they sped into the night in the direction of their chawl.


Continued here:

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Opti,

I am sorry dear.. Even though I reserved the space .. I wasn't able to update it..

Liked the update very much.. It was great as usual.. Hope everything will be fine between Maan and Geet...but I like small small quarells so that Maan will be manofying Geet...


Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome..
love it.
they're back together..

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