FF~ PYAAR KI DASTAAN

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiii

I'm Reshma..
I've read many ffs posted here..
I thought of writing one of my own and ended up in the sketch line of the story.. I was a great fan of harshad asnd Aditi(now too)... Now i'm a great fan of TL....

Please do comment... and forgive my grammar mistakes if any.. as i'm really bad in Hindi....

PYAAR KI DASTAAN

DEAR PAPA,
I KNOW YOU LOVE ME SO MUCH... BUT I LOVE HIM...AND I'VE DECIDED TO LIVE MY LIFE WITH HIM....

IF I MARRY RISHAB, I WOULD BE CHEATING TWO PEOPLE.... ONE IS RISHAB AND OTHER WOULD BE HIM.... MY LOVE.... I KNOW I WOULD BE HURTING YOU ALL....BUT I DON'T HAVE ANY OTHER OPTION.... PLEASE DO NOT FOLLOW US....

I KNOW AFTER READING THIS, YOU WOULD BE MAD AT ME... STILL, I CAN'T CHEAT HIM...
I'M LEAVING.... FOR EVER....
BYEE

Heer Maan...


Heer Maan...
A rich girl from Delhi.. Her father is a business tycoon... Unfortunately, her mother is paralysed for more than 5 years.. She is a very sweet girl... She had fall in love with(YOU'LL SEE LATER)...... Today is her wedding day and she is to be married to Rishab Rampal, another business tycoon.. Her wedding rituals would start shortly.....She did not want to cheat Rishab or her loveR... She has decided to leave the house 4 ever and go with her lover who is from Bengal.

She is looking awesome in her red joda and other accessories.... She had just finished her letter to her father, and now she's finding ways to get out of that house....

She gets a call..

"Yes.. I'm Heer..where???? .... Oh yeah.... OK... I'll see.." She hung the call and moved towards her balcony.. She saw him standing near a tree.. She waved to him He waved back.

Anurag Ganguly..



"I'll go to maa's room.."thought Heer and she opened her door... She could see the chaos, like in every marriage houses....

"Wow.. she looks awesome..." commented one lady..
"yeah she does" added the other..

"Heer, where are you going?" One lady stopped her way.
BUVA, I'M GOING TO MAA'S ROOM.." she replied

"Yah, let her see her mom now... " said another lady

Heer went to her mom's room where she found her mom laying in the bed..

"Mom.. I always shared my feelings to you... always.. and ther's no secret b/w you and mee. Maa, I'm going maa.. i can't marry Rishab.. You used to say naa, always do what your mind says.. My mind says this maa.. I'll live with my love.. Not Rishab..."
Heer touched her feet and left the room in tears.. She reached the kitchen and through the back door, she came out...

She reached where Anurag was standing... and hugged him..This was unexpected for him.. He held her for some time but left her soon.

"No time her.. Let's leave.."

He put Heer's bag around his neck and started his bike with Heer behind him....

They reached a court.. Wedding court... Anurag helped her to get down.. They saw the registrar.


"Please sign your agreement.. That's all" he said
"No... the dulha has not arrived yet..." said Anurag, shocking Heer and officer....

Soon Anurag got a call and he went out leaving confused Heer and registrar...

"The dulha has arrived.." said Anurag, hanging the call... He saw Heer with wet eyes...

"Chill Heer.. he's here...."
Heer followed her gaze to the other side of the building.. To her surprise... she saw another Anurag there..

Was it her vision?? Or else...????

"Heer... I'm Anurag.... not your Prem......"

Heer looked at the other guy.. yes.. He's Prem... Prem Ganguly.. whom she loved 3 years back.... Whom she's loving now.. Whom she'll love for ever... But who is he?? The one who is standing next to her??

"Hurry up!!" cried the officer....

Prem and Heer did the formalities and Anurag was there with them as a witness.

After the formalities...

"lets go.." said Anurag..
Anurag sat in the driver seat and Prem and Heer were in the back. Heer was still confused about Anurag and Prem...

She had met Prem when he came here, Delhi for his studies 3 years ago. She was his junior.. and they fell in love.. But she never knew about Anurag... Prem sensed this..

"Heer,this is Anurag.. My brother..My twin" Prem said.. Heer looked at Anurag.. Yes, they were identical even their name signifies the same meaning.. Love.... She caught Prem's hand and placed her head on his shoulders...

"Heer, you wanna change your clothes??" asked Anurag..
"Yeah.." replied Heer..
"Anurag, first, let's go to a hotel and let Heer fresh up.." said Prem.

They reached a hotel and Heer changed her joda.. They had dinner together.

"Prem, I'll go and get the car.. You two wait here.." said Anurag.
"Onu, have you returned your friend's bike?" asked Prem.
"He'll come and pick it from the court.. " Anurag replied.

Prem and Heer were there, hand in hand.. But they saw Heer's father along woith the police.

"Heer, get inside the car.. Inspector, he kidnapped my daughter.. " said Balraj Maan
"Yes.. Mr..??"
"Prem.... Prem Ganguly..'Replied Prem..
"yeah.. you are under arrest,... " said the inspector.
"I'm sorry sir.. You can't arrest me.." said Prem.
Everyone shocked... Prem smiled..

"Mr. Balraj Maan... Heer is my wife now.. Heer is no longer Heer Maan.. She is Heer Prem Ganguly..." said Prem.. and he showed their marriage agreement...

"Sorry sir.. we can't do anything.. Your daughter is his wife.." said the officer and left him..

"You... Heer.. I've never gone against your wish.... You should have obeyed me... I always wanted your happiness...." said her father... Heer became emotional..

"Papa, If you want me to be happy, allow me to stay with him... I love him... we'll never come to disturb you.."said Heer..
Her father left the place and at the same time, Anurag reached with the car. they got inside..

Prem has completed his MBA form Delhi, where he met Heer... He and Anurag are inseparables.. More over they are like good friends.. Anurag is a doctor... If there is an award for the best brothers, surely, the winners would be Anurag and Prem.. Both their names signifying LOVE..

Prem had found Heer as his dream girl.. they're in love for more than 3 years... And now, they are husband and wife!!!!

And now.... Both Anurag and Prem are returning to Kolkata with Heer...Anurag has planned everything about how would he present Heer infornt of the family..

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Ganguly House, Kolkata

The family members are having dinner.. Here, Shekar Ganguly, head of the house, Nilanjana ganguly, and Sanjana, their little daughter is present.

A middle aged lady is shown..

NILANJANA GANGULY..


A very sweet mother, Mother of Prem, Anurag and Sanjana. their sister.. A very responsible wife, Anurag is the apple of her eye. She loves Prem too.. But Prem is his dad's champ.. She always keep the family together with her love, care and goodness.. She's the best mother..

Shekar Ganguly


Reserved character, but at the sametime, he likes Prem as he's his right hand in business. And like in every story, he wants his favorite son Prem, to marry Nupur, his best friend's daughter.

SANJANA GANGULY


A spoilt brat.. Main reasons are Anurag and Prem who pampered her a lot.. She is very modern... and very sensitive.. She gets everything she wants.. Hence she's proved to be a spoilt brat!!

Shekar: Nilanjana, how is Taani?
Nilanjana: She's fine... But...
Shekar: You should have called her here naa?
Nilanjana: I called her, but she told she'll come later..
Shekar: Let Onu and Prem come, she'll feel better. After all, they are best firends naa??
Sanju: Mom!! I want 1 more roti.. And after all, are you guys planning to make Taani stay here for ever?
Nilanjana; Sanju, shut up!!

They saw a girl entering the hall with a jug of water..

Taani Banerjee




Very simple and loving... She was born in a very rich family, but after her parents' death, her step brother took all their wealth... Nilanjana and Laboni(Taani's mom) were good friends and Nilanjana made her stay at their home. That's one simple example showing Nilanjana's loving and caring character.

She placed the water jug on the table..

Shekar: Taani, are you not having dinner?
Taani; Uncle, I'l have it later..
Sanju; Taani, can you please bring some rotis from the kitchen?
Nilanjana; Sanju, help yourselves.. taani is not your servant.
Taani: No problem aunty. I'll bing.

Shr brought the rotis and served it. Meanwhile, the phone rings. As all of them were busy with their dinner, taani went to get it. Anurag was on the other side.

Anurag: Mom!! Onu here.. We are coming. Mom get ready for a surprise... mom?/ Are you there?
Taani; Anurag, I'm Taani.
Anurag: Oh Taani.. Tell mom that we'll reach there tomorrow morning. We are about to take the flight.
Taani: Ok..

Taani smiled.. Probably, for the first time, afetr her parent's death. She, Prem and Anurag were childhood friends.

Same time, in the flight.

Everyone were staring at the three, seeing two very similar boys and a girl.. they took their seats, Heer in the middle and both Anurag and Prem on her either sides.

Heer: Prem, tell me about your family..
Prem: My family? It's our family Heer.
Heer: Ok what ever.. Tell naa...
Anurag: I'll start..... Shekar Ganguly... head of the family.. Bilkul sadu!!!
Prem: Onu... You are telling about our dad...
Anurag; yaah.. he's our dad... But not my type.. And next.. mrs. Nilanjana Ganguly..
Heer: Mom?
Prem: yeah... Very sweet... Aur yeh Anurag... Maa ka ladla...
Anurag: Oye.. baap ka ladla prem...
Heer: Stop it!! then?
Prem: Our one and only sister.. Sanjana..
Anurag; Sanju in short... Humari ladli!!!
Prem; Bas!! now, Mr and Mrs. prem ganguly... and mr Anurag Ganguly!!!!
Anurag: Prem, Taani... Tell about her naa
Heer; Taani?
Anurag; Yes.. Taani... Our child hood friend.. Unfortunately, her parents died in a car crash and now she's staying in our house... My very sweet mom brought her here....
Prem: This is our family.
Anurag; One more.. prem, Nupur..
Prem: Wwaaat!!! I mean... why???
Heer: Nupur kaun?
Anurag; Prem's to be wife!!!
Prem: Actually Heer... Dad wants me to marry her.. But you know.. I.. I ... don't....

He saw Heer and Anurag laughing...

Heer: If you are willing to marry Nupur, the you'll have to divorce mee naa?? Which I will never give in my life...

Guys.. this is the love story of PREM, HEER, ANURAG & TAANI.. their journey together.... About two inseparable brothers ANURAG AND PREM.... and their respective spouses..... Who would die for each other.........

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnks for this beautifull ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Reshu..
Good start!!! Keep writing!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Reshma!i am very fond of ur FF's.u r a new writer but u r a marvlous.

first i was a silent reader and don't know how to make id on IF but then i try and now i am here to
comment.😊
wow!premeer and tannu both are in one pakage.i know the stry is very interesting.
please countinue.i promise i am tring to comment on this daily.
i really want to know what will hapened in premeer married life and how tannu will fall in luv😊
please update warna,after two months i am going to hostel aur uske bad sirf weekend's par he mila karon gi. plz update i can't sleep before imaginate this.
and all the ph and tannu fans plz plz plz comment on this FF.
and plz update it reshu and add me in ur pm list.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...this concept is really brilliant..luved it..!!!! nyce idea!!! will be looking forward 2 ur ff...do update soon..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please update soon.
and guys please comment on this.plzzz.
reshu plz update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very gud concept... w8ing fr more...:)
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please update!its a long time.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice concept Reshu...
update soon...
And if ur gonna have a PM list add me too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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when r u going to update?please update soon ther wise i m going to angry with u.😔

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