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Hi!! everyone 🤗 myself madiha most of u dnt knw me. Im actually writing a OS on request of my best friend Sanaya {sanaya-luv-arti}. she forced me to wrtie because i was so nervous thanx to her that i got the courage to write Premeer one of my fav all time couple itz my first time writing a os and i thought why not to try it on premeer 😉 hope u guys like it.. please do read and comment also press the like tab😳 anyways here u go:

Guys I need your help" said prem to Meher and Preet." What kind of help do u need" asked meher". Actually im in love" said prem" Both were shocked to death" they couldn't believe what they just heard". Are you serious? Asked preet" with confused expression". Yes im serious and the girl is none than Heer". Together both said said: KYA???. Prem tum apne hosh main toh ho na tum kya keh rahi ho." Said meher" Yes guys main hosh main hoon and this is the truth. Please guys help me. I really love her aura main use batana chata hoon. I just want to make the day special for her" Please help me". They both said ok we will, lekin heer nahi aayi gey" said prem"

Kyun nahi aayi gi" said preet" prem dont worry uski responsibility main leti hoon, she will come for sure don't worry" said meher". Then meher said preet hume tyari bhi karni hai chalo na" haan chalo" said preet" . Ok bye PB". He bid adieu to meher and prret and said "aaj ka din bohat special hoga tumhare liye heer, tum aaj ka din nahi bhool paogi" On the other side we see a girl writing something like a journal" and she wrote: "kash us din tum meri feelings ko samjah sakte kay jo maine us din kaha who sab sach tha" said heer to herself.

FLASHBACK:

Heer: Prem main tumse kuch kehna chati hoon, bohat dino sey lekin darti thi kahin tum hamari dosti na tor do iski wajah sey, main tumse pyar karti hoon I LOVE YOU prem mujhe nahi pata kab sey lekin jab sey maine pyaar ka matlab jana hai sirf tumhi sey pyar kiya hai aisa ek din nahi tha jab maine tumhe yaad na kiya ho tum mujhse hamesha puchte thay na kay mujhe kabhi kisi sey pyar hua aur aaj main kehti hoon haan hua hai aur who tum ho prem tum". Then prem said heer tum yahan tum kab aayi". She was confused didn't prem hear what I said" she said to herself. Prem tumne kuch suna kya?

Tumne kuch kaha tha oh im sorry actually main ipod sun raha tha" said prem". She couldn't believe what ever she said he didn't hear. She was devastated; she couldn't control her tears and ran away from there".

FLASHBACK ENDS

Tears started to roll down her cheek". She heard meher voice and wiped of her tears.

H: arey meher tu aa gayi, itni jaldi preet sey jagra hua kya"

M: nahi didi woh kya hain na aaj hum sab dinner pe jah rahe hain"

H: dinner kis kay saath

M: didi preet kay saath, tum bhi chalo na

H: tum pagal ho kya main tum dono ko saath jake kya karoon gi aur waise bhi preet ney tujhe buluya hai dinner pe mera wahan kya kaam"

M: oh god didi toh mann nahi rahi kya karoon, idea didi agar main bhi aapko is dinner pe na leke gayi toh mera naam meher maan nahi" she said to herself"

M: didi agar tum nahi jaogi toh main bhi nahi jaogi"

H: meher tum pagal ho kya mera wahan pe kya kaam"

M: didi tum ja rahi ho yes or no?

H: meher yeh kya mazak hai "agar main na gayi toh yeh waqai main nahi jayegi" she said to herself" acha main chalo gi tere saath" ab khush. Bohat didi you are the world's best sister" said meher". Acha ab zyada maska mat lagao aur tyar ho" said heer". Didi main tyar hoon aap tyar ho chalo main aapko tyar karti hoon" said meher". Mujhe kyun tyar kar rahi hai dinner pe tune jana hai" said heer" didi please koi sawal mat karo main jaise kehti hoon waise hi karo warna tumhe pata hai kay main kya karoongi samjhi". Said meher". I was confused yeh meher ko kya hogaya pata nahi kya karna cha rahi hai" said heer to herself.

Meher heer ko tyar kar rahi thi she told heer to go and where this dress. She quietly went in because from past 1 hour she asked meher but in vain she is not telling so there is no point I ask her again" said heer to herself. As soon as heer went into washroom she dialed preet number and said:

M: haan preet sab tyariyan hogayi

P: haan sab ready tum log ka baa rahe ho.

M: ok good hum log bhi bas aa rahe hain ok acha main rakhti hoon didi aa rahi bye

P: ok bye

Meher ended the call and heer came out from washroom and meher was like "wow didi aap bohat pyari lag rahi hain". Heer said acha ab chale der ho rahai hai. Haan chalo. They sat on the car and meher send a text message to preet saying" we are coming".

Preet phone beeped and he checked the message. He told prem and he said "ja preet check kar sab theek hain na". arey PB aap itni tension kyun le rahe ho, sab theek hai, aapko pata hai aap duniya ke pehle insan ho jo itna pareshan ho raha hai. Agar aisi hi pareshan hotey raho gey na toh heer waqai main "no" kehdi gi" said preet smiling". Tu mera mazak ou raha hai, nahi PB bas ek advice de raha hoon" he said winking. Wait I will tell you right now and he start running behind preet. Suddenly they hear the car horn and looked hiding from the tree as soon as heer stepped out he was mesmerized by her beauty. He just couldn't stop staring at her. unless preet pinched him and he said: ouch preet why did you pinched me". Said prem with irrated voice. "mere pyare PB agar ab aise hi dekhte raho gey na toh who waqai main "no" kar dey gi chalo ab jaldi sey ab jao main abhi heer ko bejhta hoon". Prem said ok with a sigh when he was about to go preet said "good luck" and im sure heer bhabhi mann jayegi". Prem said haan preet mujhe itna vishwas toh hai. Chal abhi mai chalta hoon tu heer ko jaldi behj na. Wah PB bari jaldi hai" he said winking". Tu jata hai kay" nahi nahi main ja raha hoon. and prem smiled and also went away. Meher and heer were standing outside the garden. Yeh preet kahan reh gaya isne bola kay yahan milna lekin khud gayab hogay" said meher. Usko call karlo na" said heer. Nahi didi uska phone switched off aa raha hai, ek kaam karo didi ab yahan kari ho aur main use dekh kay aati hoon" said meher. Main bhi tere saath chalti hoon" said heer. Nahi didi ab ruko main bas 5 min main aayi ok. Meher went and heer was standing there and saying "kahan reh gayi yeh larki, lagta hai mujhe khud hi dekna parega". As heer was going she couldn't see because of darkness and was afraid a little she was calling meher but no respond and suddenly the lights went on and she was shocked to see decorations. It was really beautiful, but she was wondering who did that and suddenly she heard a voice. This sound seem familiar to her and as soon as she turned around prem was right behind her" and they had an eye-lock. After the eye-lock broke heer was about say something when prem put hand on her mouth and said "kuch mat kaho aaj mujhe kehne do, kyunki main jo aaj kehna chata hoon who bohat pehle sey kehna chata tha par kabhi himmat nahi hui". He removed his hand and cupped her face and said "heer I LOVE YOU" for a moment she couldn't believe her ears is that true kay prem mujhse pyar karta hai" she said to herself". Haan heer yeh sach main tumse bohat pyar karta hoon lekin kabhi keh nahi paya. Tumhe yaad hai us din jab tum mere room main aayi thi aur tumne kaha kay tum mujhse pyar karti ho lekin main sun nahi paya us ipod ki wajah sey. She said iska matalb tumne suna jo maine kaha. Prem said nahi lekin jab tum mere gahr sey rotey hui gayi thi na toh main tumhara ghar aaya aur tumahare room main check kiya lekin tum wahan nahi thi, toh maine tumhari diary dekhi aur usme para jo tumne mujhe us din kaha tha woh us diary main likha tha. Jab maine para toh main bohat khush hua kay tum mujhse pyar karti ho, main bhi tumse pyar karta tha lekin main confuse tha kat tum mujhse pyar karti ho kay nahi, lekin jab maine tumhari diary pari phir mujhe pura yakeen hogaya and yeh sab maine tumhara liye kiya" Heer was so happy that she couldn't control herself and just threw herself in his arms, the place where she feels heaven. Prem main bhi tumse bohat karti hoon I LOVE YOU TOO" . Mujhe vishwas nahi ho raha abhi yeh sab ek sapna sa lag raha" said heer" Nahi heer yeh sapna nahi haqeeqat hai. Then they broke hug and prem sat on his knees and took out a ring and said: "Heer will you marry me". She was on cloud nine and tears form in her eyes and she said "yes I will". He slid the ring in her fingers and had an eye-lock. Then his lips were almost touching her lips, they were so close that an air couldn't go throw, without wasting time prem joined his lips to her and the kiss turned passionate after 5 mins they broke the kiss and were breathing heavily. Heer was blushing like hell and she hugged him. And she said thank u so much for the perfect gift'



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Res! yay im the First one!!

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I have totally No Words to Describe this Os thnk god that i convinced yu to make an Os warna tera talent toh ander choppe rehta! or dont be nervous jaaana im with yu na! no one will throw shoes on yu or sadde we tomatoes so dont worry it was mindblastic! mindblowing Fantastica Amazing Awesom Gr8 keep it up i luved the way how mehr and preet helped them as usual yu know meri bhain premeer ki sabse barri fan hai 🤣 woh joh repeating Episodes aate hai na ek bhi miss nahi karti woh! toh uskop dkeh dkeh ke im use to it i just LOVE IT! i loved the eneding wen they finally confess their love and kissed on the lips! i just luv the Ending too good yaara! im just speechless i dont have anythingelse that i could type and post here yur first try Was Awesum blossom i tjhought that it wasnt yur first Os srsly it was amazing!
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totally awesome yaar
love the ending yaar
u did really good job , keep it up yaar
thanks for sharing yaar
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awesomeeeee too good lovely shot
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeee too good lovely shot


thank u soo much😳
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kaha mar gayi?? reply my Comment!
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee oneshot 😳 😳 😳
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Originally posted by: Sanaya-luv-arti

Res! yay im the First one!!


*edited*

I have totally No Words to Describe this Os thnk god that i convinced yu to make an Os warna tera talent toh ander choppe rehta! or dont be nervous jaaana im with yu na! no one will throw shoes on yu or sadde we tomatoes so dont worry it was mindblastic! mindblowing Fantastica Amazing Awesom Gr8 keep it up i luved the way how mehr and preet helped them as usual yu know meri bhain premeer ki sabse barri fan hai 🤣 woh joh repeating Episodes aate hai na ek bhi miss nahi karti woh! toh uskop dkeh dkeh ke im use to it i just LOVE IT! i loved the eneding wen they finally confess their love and kissed on the lips! i just luv the Ending too good yaara! im just speechless i dont have anythingelse that i could type and post here yur first try Was Awesum blossom i tjhought that it wasnt yur first Os srsly it was amazing!


so happy 4 u ur the first 😃 thank u sooooooo much jaan ur comments means a lot to me 😳 wow thats cool 🤣 she is a crayz fan of premmer ryt really i feel like crying😭 thank u soooo much bestie i ❤️ u mucho i dnt tujhe thank u kaise bolon bas thank u sooo mcuh jaan 🤗 🤗🤗 luv u thank u once again
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Originally posted by: heer_varsha

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee oneshot 😳 😳 😳


aww... thank u soo much dear😳
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Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-


so happy 4 u ur the first 😃 thank u sooooooo much jaan ur comments means a lot to me 😳 wow thats cool 🤣 she is a crayz fan of premmer ryt really i feel like crying😭 thank u soooo much bestie i ❤️ u mucho i dnt tujhe thank u kaise bolon bas thank u sooo mcuh jaan 🤗 🤗🤗 luv u thank u once again

par firstly mujeh bata why yu crying or thnkxx kyun bolli be? thnkxx for why? wat did i do?

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