FF- PYAAR KE LIE (8june) part 23, pg 99 - Page 40

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Greattttt updatessss can't wait for the update
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wow so Maan ignore Geet interesting promo pls cont soon thanks pm
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nice promo aab update jaldi se do
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Lollpop dikhana rahe ho promo de rahe ho update nahi
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please update soon!!!can't wait for maaneet to meet................................
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PART 18

Geet met pari n ridz' they bid good bye to each other with tears in their eyes'

They assured each other no matter how, they'll always b in contact' geet tells ridz come soon to delhi for ur internship'

Rano n geet wanted to give surprise to khurana family, so they didn't tell them about their visit.. they took the train'

At KM:

Morning 8 am'.

Dadi: Maan, please have ur breakfast'.

Maan: dadi maa, m not hungry,, aap kar lijiye, I'll do it in office'

Dadi: beta, hum dekh rahe hai, ab aapke pass hamare liye bilkul bhi time nahi hai'

Prerna: han maa,, aap thik keh rahi hai,, ise to hamari koi parwah hi nahi hai' tabhi to ye humse duur London chala gya hai,, aur jab bhi 1 yr me 4-5 baar aata hai kuch time k liye to outhouse me rehta hai, ya office me'(she n dadi has tears in their eyes')

Maan can't see tears in their loved once eyes' he loved his family a lot,, but some circumstances made him like that(keep thinking guys,,what circumstances??? It's a suspense' )'..

Maan: m sorry mom, m sorry dadi(he held his ears') n hug the ladies' acha chaliye ab btaiye breakfast me kya hai???

Dadi n prerna are smiles but they are really worried for Maan' they always pray to God,, that somehow their Maan comes back to them' his smile comes back to his face'

Dadi n prerna(self thought): Please god,, do some magic'

They are praying n babaji listening them' just then Rano n Geet's car stopped at HM'

Geet comes out of the car,, felling very happy to come back to her house after 4 yrs' she never imagined that she'll ever come back here again,,, but kismat'''..

Rano: geet geet???

Geet: yes mumma'

Rano: where were u lost???

Geet: kuch nahi mumma,, bs purani yadien yaad aa gyi'.

Rano(smiles ): hmmmm' acha chalo help me with this luggage'

Geet: oops,,, sry' chaliye'

Driver helps them with their luggage'

Rano: geet,, u go n get fresh,,, I manage something to eat'.

Geet: k mumma, fir me KM jaungi'breakfast baad me karungi'.

Rano:kk,,, as u wish' I knw u r very excited to meet them,, even I am equally excited.. but I have some work,, I'll join u after sometime'

Geet: k mumma'

Geet went to her room,, n remembering all masti n her childhood which she spent here' she is extremely very happy'

Geet(self-talk): ab jaldi se fresh o jati hu,, fir sabse milkar aungi'

At KM:

Maan: dad, are you coming with me???

Aunu: no maan, u go,' I'll come later'

Maan: k dad' bye' bye dadi maa, bye mom'

Everyone: bye beta'

Maan cell rings..

Maan: hello'

Caller: hello Mr. Maan,, good moring,, m Mr. chopra'

Maan: good morning Mr. Chopra'

As he is busy with his call, he is coming out of KM n moves towards his car..

Geet is also moving towards KM(happily).. she saw some children playing in the nearby garden,, she goes to them'

Maan walked by that garden, still on his call'

Geet is wearing pink color chuddidar suit with very light makeup(just lip gloss n kajal), looking simple yet extremely stunning'

Geet is playing with those kids n laughing'

Maan hears her laugh, and try to see who is laughing' he see a girl playing with kids in the park,, but his badluck,, she is back-facing him' so he can't see her face'

Maan(thinking): what m I thinking??? These girls are distraction' ufff'

He gets back to his call avoiding her'.

Geet bids bye to kids and again starts moving towards KM'.

Each and everything there reminds her to her childhood' she is lost in her thoughts. On the other hand,, Maan is also busy with that stupid call, he is not looking ahead.. geet is also not looking ahead,,, nd both bump into each other' geet is about to fall,,, Maan hold her from her waist tightly' she closed her eyes due to fear of falling'Maan saw her scared face n lost' she opened her big brown almond eyes which met to Maan's eyes' both lost in each other's eyes,, they forget the world around them' they are in the same position for very long'

Both comes back to reality together,, they both felt awkward,, n start moving opposite to each other' but both stop at once.. turned their faces towards each other exactly at the same time'n '''..TUM?????????????????????????????

Geet look at Maan from Toe to head with mouth opened' same with maan' both never imagined they met after so long,, n this change,,OMG,, what a nice change'hmmmmmm'maannna padega dono smart lag rahe hai(hehehe)'.

Geet: hey ,, hi' Hw r u???

Maan remembers their bachpan n how she left her without telling him'he becomes angry'

Maan: hmmm(n abt to leave')

Geet: OMG yaar, tum to bilkul badal gaye ho,' not bad han'(with a cute smile on her face)'

Maan(see her cute smile n smiles in his mind(but angry young man apni smile kese dikha sakta hai'hehe)): ummmm'

Geet: kya ummm'??? (thinks:phle kya kum attitude tha, jo ab aur dikha raha hai?? nyways).. Maan,, tum bolna bhul gaye ho kya??? N starts laughing loudly'

Inwardly maan is very haapy to see her again n wo b haste hue,, he missed that stupid smile badly.. he missed her badly' but never tell this to anyone,,, instead he is very angry at her for not calling him once within these 4 yrs, for leaving him alone' but now everything is changed,,' he is changed' he is no longer that maan who smiles.. now he hates smiling.. but after seeing geet smiling like this, he don't knw y,, he felt happy'.

Past memories hits his thoughts' he comes back to his angry self'

Maan: shut up,,, will u????(very rudely)'

Geet was taken a back' n stops laughing at once'

Geet: kya hua??? Tum to aise gussa kar rahe ho,, jese mene tumhare head par pani daal diya ho,,, hehe,,, wese litna maza ayega na agar me aise karungi to???(again starts laughing')

Maan (thinks): ye kabhi nahi badal sakti,, phle thodi kam joker thi but ab to puri joker ho gayi hai'

Maan is leaving from there but geet shouted'

Geet: hey, where r u going???

Maan: tumse matlab'

Geet: how rude,, me itne time baad ayi hu,, n u r talking to me like this' Bandar'

Maan heard the word Bandar'n remembers how geet called him Bandar in bachpan' but he has to forget those memory.. he wants to remember only one thing that he is "MAAN, MAAN SINGH KHURANA" who hates emotions,, who hates girls, who can never trust anyone' especially girls'..(BUT y????? socho socho'.)

Geet show him her tongue'

Geet: khadus kahin ka'

N leaves to KM to meet others'.

At KM:

Prerna is instructing servants to clean table properly... geet comes from behind and puts her hands on her eyes...

prena touches her hands n smiles... n shouted immediately.""GEEET"...

n turns and hug her tightly.. geet too hugs her back...

Geet: mom,, apko kese pata chala me hu???


Prerna: apne bache ko to me uske ehsaas se hi pehchaan leti hu.. samjhi udhu.. n pulls her cheeks... aur tu yahn achanak???


Geet: surprise surprise... mene aur mumma ne decide kiya tha aapko surprise dene ka...

Prerna: hmm... n again hugs her... we missed u alot beta..


Geet: me to mom...love u...


Aunu also comes there...

Aunu: geeeeeeeeeeetttttttt...


Geet: papaaaaaaaaaa,, she goes to him,, n hug me...oh papa i missed u very much...


Papa: tabhi delhi nahi ati thi?? n pulls her ears...

Geet: ouch.. papa chodiye na,, dard ho raha hai..(very innocently)


Papa: nautanki... babhi kahan hai??


Geet: mumma abi aa rahi hai...Dadi maa kahan hai???

Papa: beta wo apne room me hai...

Geet: k... me unhe b milkar aati hu...

she goes to dadi's room... dadi is in wash room,.. she hides herself behind curtains...

dadi comes out of the washroom, geet shouted "dddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaadddddiiiiiiiiii"

dadi first got scared,, but after seeing geet... she also shouted her name... she feels she is the most joyful person on this earth today... after so much time,, she felt that much happy....

they hug each other... n came down to drawing room where other's are sitting....



Precap: geet joining KC.....

Edited by sweetwidheart - 14 years ago
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........amazing part......
i think that maan has changed bcuz maybe his so called girlfriend sameera has ditched him....
....that's y he might hating girls n running away frm joy.....
i think there is nothing 2 worry kz wen geet is here have no fear......she will surely make him bcum the former maan.........
.....nyways continue soon as i cnt wait 4 the cute n romantic office moments...hope so......
Edited by zahra15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
bandahar he deserve it the way he broke her heart ullu bhi but she did medicine right with pari and ridzy

one more please i know we are greedy for your updates

please please pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
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Posted: 14 years ago
its 2:15 am 😲and im reading your update haha😆😆
seriously you made my morning😃😃
it is sucha brilliant update👏👏👏
i loved the chemistry between MaaNeet👍🏼😳😳
thanks a lot for updating this quick😃
please please make the updates longer😉😆
thanks for the pm😃
wishes👍🏼
Kituu
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update............thank god maan is angry she didnt tell him or call him..................
but y he hates gals did sam fool him or tricked him in anything...........
waiting to know that..................

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