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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: roshaniD

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy my sweet lil sis...😊😊


first of all a big apology for being so late to read your FF.. 😳😳 but i'm back home in SL for a month and couldn't get away from family... 😆😆

I'm so glad you based your FF on TL and not sangini... our Harshu always gets the best of us doesn't he??? 😉😉

coming to the FF... loved the beginning especially Onu's POV kind of deep na... Taani seems sweet, reminded me me of RORY's first day at Chilton (Gilmore Girls..) 😃😃

brilliant writing as always... two thumbs up... 👏👏

update soon and send a PM as well... I will check when i have time... 😳😉



🤗 Hey Roshi di!!
OMG!! Missed you soo much my partner in crime!!
and don't apologize... you certainly do deserve a break and I did knw you were in SL
so how was the enjoying and partying going??
😆 Nah... I put Sangini and TL together so dont worry you will find AG here as well
and ofcourse he is my sweetypie 😳
hehehe... yea wen i think abt it Taani does remind me of Rory lolz..
thank sooo much...
and sure take your time...
its sooo nice to see u
luv ya!! 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sharmeeli

MINDBLOWING UPDATE YAAR🤗 it's anu isn't it who is holding taani... plzzz update ASAP yaar😳 and thanks for the PM😳


hello sis..
aww thank you soo much!!
I cant thank you enough for the appreciation 😳
no prob!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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DISTRACTION!

RECAP: Taani reaches her class and settles down, she finds out that she has an assembly to attend with the whole school. While going down the stairs she falls but someone saves her.





PRIYAMWADA RAICHAND: Also known as Pihu but only to those that she feels are close to him. She is a girl that can be a total B*t*h, and then suddenly become a warm hearted woman that is every man's dream. It was hard getting around her, if she hates someone, she will hate them to guts. But, if she likes someone, she can admire them so much that they will be embarrassed from her compliments. She is a person that is straight forward and that is what makes her stand out from all others.



Now this was a sight that was just magical, just perfect. I haven't seen two strangers being so perfect in my life that too in each other's arms. But knowing one of my best friends it was kind of... awkward... he was not the type of a person that could handle such a delicate figure. He was rather rude, especially to strangers. And now! This guy was staring at the creature for what seemed like an eternity.

Just this morning he had been so restless and devastated. I had called out his name for umpteenth time and he wouldn't reply to a single word I said. I snapped my fingers in front of his face "Onu!"

His attention drifted to me and everyone else that had been sitting at the table near the corner of the cafeteria, our hang out for the past four years through happiness and sorrow. Ok, now that was a bit cheesy but that was the fact.

" I mi m sorry," he stuttered an apology.

"Its ok yaar, par I can't believe ke tumne Rudra ki aawaz bhi nahi suni!???" Pihu said teasingly as she looked at Rudra.




RUDRA SINGH RATHORE: In short sirf Rudra. Like his name, he derives from a royal family that is not only well known for their pride and reputation in India but their international textiles business keeps them known around the world. Rudra was a child with anger management problems, but these weren't where people get angry easily. On the contrary, he would get angry after hours of bugging but if he gets mad there is no stopping unless Pihu or his girlfriend Gauri doesn't come in the middle. He claims himself to be an awesome singer, which he is, but when he yells... Well, let's just say you will definitely go deaf.

GAURI RATHORE: A close family friend and childhood friend of Rudra and Pihu, she shifted to Mumbai when she was small leaving Rudra and Pihu. But once again met them in high school, after which she started dating Rudra and they have been together for the past two years now.





"Kya yaar Onu, teri wajah se mujhe iss kavwe (crow) ki aawaz suni padi," their friend claimed making an annoyed faced towards Rudra

" Oye! Khanchakar kahin ka! Tu apne aap ko samajh ta kya hai, huh? How dare you insult Rudra like that?" His girlfriend exclaimed in her very own Marathi mixed with Punjabi style.

"Yeh lo... shuru ho gaye dono...," Pihu sighed seeing the two fight like always.

" Well, what can we expect...they are... Sushant and Ankita!" Onu said kind of agreeing with Pihu






(Due to some forum rules I wasn't able to use Sushi and Ankita's real names, sorry)

SUSHANT RAJPUT: A funny, loving, cute, handsome, smart etc etc... inki jitni tariff ki jaye utni kam lagti hai because he might not be a Greek god but he certainly is a friend and a partner that every girl wants. Too bad, his already been taken by his best friend Ankita.

ANKITA SHUKLA: Sushant's best friend but over the years had developed feelings for him as well but isn't very sure of herself. The two fight but understand each other the most, even though they weren't together for a long time they have great bonding.




"Accha! Your saying like he's singing like Sonu Nigam or Shaan!" Sushant replied

"Oh pleaasseee! Save it. At least he sings better than YOU!" Ankita stuck out her tongue as she rubbed her comment in Sushant's face.

And the fight goes on.

"Tu phirse kho gya? What's the matter yaar... why you looking so lost today?" Pihu asked Onu, who was again lost looking through the window at a group of girls, actually one girl in particular.

"Nothin like tht, I was just looking at the girl over there," he pointed to a girl dressed decently in skinny jeans and dark red t-shirt. She seemed like a new comer, Pihu glanced at her and noted how simple she was looking compared to all the others. Onu turned to face her, " She reminds me of when I came to this school for the first time," he chuckled then continued, " I was so nervous and scared."

Pihu nodded in agreement. The bell rang making everyone disperse into their own classes, Pihu and Anurag walked hand in hand as they made towards their class. Lucky for Anurag since he always had Pihu in all his classes all his life which sometimes surprised a lot of people.

When they went to class the same thing had been repeated that had been going on for the past 3 years, the teacher introduced herself then proceeded with the attendance and told the class to make their way to the auditorium for an assembly.


So here we are back to where we had left off, Pihu thinking about Onu and the strange girl. Her trance of thoughts broke as the girl thanked Onu in a melodious voice. He slowly let go off her and she climbed down the steps and disappeared in the crowd. Onu turned back to talk with Pihu but there she was with a cheesy grin on her face.

"So Mr. Cool Dude, first you stock this girl in the morning and now this hindi soap opera scene," she grinned even wider making Onu only stare at her with disbelief, "Wah lag raha tha jaise DDLJ ke Raj aur Simran ko dekh rahi thi." Now the last sentence was a saracastic remark which made Onu smile.

He always loved Pihu's sarcasm which was real great entertainer for him as she said it in a way that would melt his heart or spread a smile across his face. Some people think that it's rude, but he knows that its part of who she is and he loves her that way.

"Paaahh—leeasseee. Don't get all the Romeo Juliet thing started with me, I mean she's NOT my type. AND it's only a COINCIDENCE, got it?" Onu asked, but he knew that Pihu wasn't going to let go of this easily cause a mischievous smile was still on her face. He just ignored her and dragged her down the stairs while she just laughed at his frustration with her remark.



-Vishu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
hiyaaaaaaaa my daaaaaarlin munchkin 🤗

ok finally read it......yippieeeeeeeee 🥳

u got additi here and me sooooooooooo happy!!!! dis pihu is soooooooooooo AG yar fab job vishu 👍🏼 dialogues and expressions.. it ws very imaginable.... tnx for bringin her here and she & anurag remind me of rahul & anjali from kuch kuch hota hai 😍 pls dont let anurag break her heart cz i know he's supposed to fall for taani 😆

sushant & ankita bit ws fun. dis sushant's our preet na?!!?! he cant be manav for sure 😆 ok now time for rudra & gauri... big confusion... dese two are datin each other rite?!!?! not married na?!? so how come they both hav da same last name?!?!😕 me confused

fabulous work jaana.......... update soon!!!!

luv u loads
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
first of all.. sooooooooo soorry dearie..
i read ur ff just nw... nd it was fantastic..
i knw u r a fantastic writer......
thanks 4 d pm..
do pm me wenever u update...

i'm so happy as i saw pihu here... i love aditi.. nd ofcourse.. the story wud be incomplete without our dear dear harshu........
good 2 see Sushi toooooo...

Update soon as we all wanna see hw d story comes... and hw TaAnu develops their feelings........
😃

tc
cathy


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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
hey Vishu, 😎

After so long. I thought u had forgotten that u started the FF. 😆😆

It's amazing lil sis, seriously. 👏 👏plussssss you have everyone here...😉 so everyone can enjoy... 😉

me so hapy sushi is there...😍😍

anddd so glad u put AG in it as well..

but i guess if harshu is Onu will end up with Taani na???? 😕What about Pihu?😕

he he sorry for being so annoying....but simply Amazing stuff.... really loved it... but please update soon.. u take too long...

Love
Roshi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey vishu just read ur ff and liked it very much..it has an amazing concept and a very gud character sketch..can u add me to ur pm list...update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤗LOVED the update yaar!!!!🤗 plzzz continue soon😳 and thanks for the PM dear😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
heyy vishu....🤗
loved the the update...its the first time i am commenting here and i am loving it....😳
please update soon...😍
could u pm me too..😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

AUTHOR'S NOTE


I am very grateful to all the readers that have been reading this ff
however I will not be able to continue writing it as I am not able to
have enough time to write due to my daily schedule
and also because of another ff I have open of HC
So... thank you so much to all my readers...really appreciate all
the time you all have put in to read this story
but I am going to be DISCONTINUING this ff

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