My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) #1 - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear . Interesting concept . Want to know more . And how geet and maan come together .
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzzzz dont show her pregnant truth being out is fine......but then u are the creator so it depends upon u......nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice ff
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 5

Mean while

Brij went in search for Munshi ji as he learned that he was the man here who knew about Maan's whereabouts,
Darjee had told him to make sure that Maan was a genuine guy and to trace his background. He will make sure that this time they will not repeat the same mistake,
after he being convinced about him he have to make sure that Maan agrees to marry Geet, no doubt Geet was beautiful and her eyes were her biggest asset, only a blind man will refuse her,

He found Munshi ji at the place where Maan was staying, he has to act smartly to get the required information from this man and at the same time sound as if he was not concerned,

he will talk to him like a stupid villager, which will make him speak his mind.
B: hello ji, myself Brij Handa
M ji: Handa the Choudhary Handa
B (folding his hands): ji, his grandson
M ji: look if you are here for that land then please come later chote Saab is not here
B: what he is not here, ok ji I will wait for him (sits on the steps)
M ji: no, no just go, chote Saab does not want to discuss about the land just go
B (though angry shows otherwise): no, ji, no I am not here to talk
about that
M ji: then
B: actually Darjee was desperate, that's why I came?
M ji: I did not get you
B: ji actually Maan ji came to our place in the morning for that breakfast, and said he will answer tomorrow, but Darjee is getting restless, so sent me to ask him, and now if I go without meeting him, I will not be allowed to enter the house
M ji: what answer?
B: if I tell you, you will tell him that I am discussing this with others, ok I will tell you but promise me that you will not tell anyone else
M ji (curious): ok I will not tell anyone
B (got it): actually last night I came here with the marriage proposal of my sister Geet, the one in whose name the land is, I told him that if he marries her the land will be his and apart from that we will give him the adjoining land also of same value of course
M ji: he agreed
B: what to do ji, he touched not just touched carried her in front of the whole village, now who will marry her
M ji: just for this reason you want her to marry him, OMG, but how can you be so sure he agreed
B: he came to our house in the morning to see Geet and even talked to her alone and than said he will tell us tomorrow and he signaled that it will be yes 90%
M ji (shocked): this is not possible?
B (looking shocked and confused): why ji? Is he already married? OMG what will I tell Darjee, stupid me (looking at M ji for the reaction and satisfied in getting the right reaction) he is already married, why did he not tell me last night? Hai now what will we do?
M ji: wait, it's not like that
B; like what?
M ji: I mean he is not married
B: thank God, then is he not straight I mean
M ji (stunned): no, ways
B: then what is the problem? He is engaged?
M ji: no
B: his parents do not want him to marry?
M ji: no, I mean his parents are not any more, he only has Dadi Maa
B: she is not willing or has she chosen some girl for him?
M ji: no
B: is he not in the position to afford a family? I mean is he well to do
M ji: are you mad? He brought that land for 2 crores without a second thought, and you saying he can't afford. He is so rich that he can buy whole HSPur, he is the owner of KC, and did you get it?
B (amazed wow but remained aloof): so what is the problem?
M ji (stupid villager and I thought he was intelligent, he is only macho with no brains do not even understand that why a rich man like him will marry a mere village girl): you go now, come in the evening
B: but ji I
M ji (interrupted): he will be back till night, if you pursue him he might be annoyed he is a man with a lot of attitude and short tempered also
B: ok ji, if so don't tell me I was here I don't want to jeopardize my sister's marriage
M ji: ok will not tell now go
B: ok ji thank you ji
He moves out of M ji's sight keeps sufficient distance to see what the elderly man will do
As soon as M ji was alone he punched his cell
Hello Savitri Devi, M ji speaking

'''''

Madam, chote Saab went to see a girl today

''''''.

No, Madam, her brother came in last night with a marriage proposal
'''''
They are the Handa's a big name here

'''''.

Yes she is beautiful

'''''.

May be 18, she went to school
, lately
''''..
Yes he also went to see the girl today

'''''.

Why? The other day she fainted and chote Saab carried her to her house
''''
Many people witnessed this and said many embarrassing things

'''''

Yes, Madam, her family now said that who will marry her, so came to him with the proposal

'''''.

What, you are coming here

'''''.

But chote Saab

'''''

Ok I will not tell him

'''''..

When will you be here?

''''''

Ok, I will make the arrangements

'''''..

Not please Madam before doing this at least let him answer them

'''''

But what if he refuses

'''''.

But

'''''..

Ok

'''''.

Namaste

Cuts the call

Brij satisfied goes to tell Darjee
so Brij and Darjee working to make things move, only if they had taken this much paind before, Geet would have been safe, but ....
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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow !!!awsome one yaar..loved it so much !!! waiting for more updates ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it...... So dadi is coming......
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Posted: 14 years ago
too gd ...dadi is coming 2 see her DIL....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update shruthi....omg this brij is very much contrast to the show....good that atleast he is thinking abt his sister now in a +ve way......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: puth

awesome update shruthi....omg this brij is very much contrast to the show....good that atleast he is thinking abt his sister now in a +ve way......

hey
you got it wrong
he is not thiking about his sister
he is thiking about family reputation
they want to marry her before the truth about DEV discloses
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting for their marriage . Is geet really pregnent ? Sorry for having this confusion , but read it after a long time .
Waiting for next
Luv u

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