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Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

Here go the entries for poetry contest !!! Voting to start from 12th !! So take your time to read and analyze well !!! Marking system will be told later !!!

THEME :- I'll Be There For You

POEM 1

There was an officer named Freddy,
Who was everyone's buddy,
His best pal was Sudhakar,
Who was a good company maker,
They worked for years together,
Never leaving even for a minute each other.
They were silent chaps always,
Who did their work in proper ways.
They were truly each others company,
People they were, who had talents a many.
But one day, Sudhakar was transferred,
Leaving Freddy totally unanswered.
He felt the pinch of losing his friend,
With whom he could no more make amends.

But he still worked without complaining,
Sometimes muddy, sometimes raining,
He always hoped for some company,
Always seeing Daya and Abhijeet's friendly privacy,
But his prayer took some time to be answered,
For some one special was there to be sent forward,
Soon came the day, for his companion came streaming in like a lake,
That lovely boy's name was Vivek,

It took sometime for Freddy to understand,
That it was the boy of his demand.
He was a mischevious, nuaghty fellow of twenty four,
Adding to the Team, an energy lot more.
Always tricking, teasing, bullying, and pulling Freedy's leg,
While Freddy would all do is beg.
But soon they started sharing a rapport,
As the second lovely DUO jodi in a support.
Always for each other they were,
Phasoafying, joking, helping, and standing by each other.
Sometimes taking up, sometime pulling down,
This was how was how Freddy's and Vivek's relationship worked without even a frown.

Difficulties came in at times,
But they were together at all times,
An example of this is Aakhri Chunauti,
Which made the relation of this DUO even more deary,
Vivek proved his love for Freddy in that scene,
Where he showed Freddy could not be mean.
The poem will now go in a flash back,
Where it proves that love can give hatred a smack.

Vivek was standing there all alone,
Trying to revive his three companions in a weak tone.
He still is very depressed,
Not finding the man he wanted to address.
But soon his depression turns into affection,
Seeing that man stand with an aggression.
He ran toward him in a speed,
All he knew that Freddy was his current need.
Ran in his arms like a little child,
But Freddy's reaction was very mild.
Pointed Freddy his gun suddenly on Vivek's head,
His body weak and eyes red.
Begged Vivek in front of him "Don't do it sir"
I'm Vivek, your biggest admirer.
You're our Team's strenght,
Please don't get the villian's scent.

But Freddy stood there intact,
slowly with Vivek trying to interact.
The villian commanded him to fire with a boom,
Hiding in a a tiny room,
However, this contradicted with Freddy's conscious,
He soon found it all conspirous.
Slowly reviving himself back to normal,
He realised how his actions were abnormal,
Guilt ran into him like a current,
Looks at Vivek saying "Sorry this wasn't what I meant",
I cannot kill you with my hands,
Not even on God's commands.
Tell ACP sir I love him a lot,
Never let anyone tie on the relationships of CID a knot.
And there went a gun shot in the air,
Leaving all the audience with upright hair.

But, this DUO even faced this and many more difficulties together,
Promising never to leave each other.
They are the two jewels of we audiences,
Who are well deservant of our applauses.
We always hope to see them creating their magic on-screen
Be it on CID, or anywhere off screen.

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Poem 2

Tumhara saath meri rahon mein nahi hota toh yeh zindigi kya hoti?

Tumhara jaisa yaar har ek ko milta toh yeh duniya kitni khubsurat hoti.

Har baar jab main kisi muskhil mein hota hoon toh tumhara haath nazar ata hai

Jab bhi ansu bahana ho, yah muskurana ho, toh tumari hi yaad aati hai

Kya kahoon, Voh lafz hi nahi milte,

Jisse yeh bata sakoon ke tum meri jaan se barkaar ho mere dost.

Ansu aa jate hai, acche aur bure lamhe ko yaad karke.

Kuch jo hum bhool chuke hai, phir bhi dil ke kitne kareeb hai yeh lamhe,

Kyun ki tera hi saath tha..

Main tumhare chehre par khushi hi dekhna chahata hoon,

Aur yeh muskurahat hum lekar aayenge'

Mere Dost, Meri Jaan Ho Tum

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POEM 3

sub ko lagay dabangg saa
rishta hay ye alug saa
dil ko lagay hay saccha;

mushkil kabhi jo aayey
door aaisi bandh yun jayey
gaanth kholna jo chahyey
phansta isi mein aayey;

aisi hay apni yaari
dushman per paray hay bhaari
gar aanch aayey ek per
jaa'n doosray nay waari;

sub ko lagay dabangg saa
rishta hay ye alug saa
dil ko lagay hay saccha....

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POEM 4

ABHI say mera aisa nata hay
sath hamesha wo nibhata hay
dimagh apna buhat chalata hay
punch hr dam mujhay lagata hay;

shooting us ki kamal ki bus hay
intelligency bhi us ki achi hay
per jub naraz mujh say hota hay
dil ko meray chout sii lagti hay;

thora sensitive hay logun DAYA
lekin dil ka buhat hee hay acha
aata hay nazar wo simple saa
sharp lekin hay wo buhat zyada;

us ko rokna buhat hee mushkil hay
marta jub wo kararay thapper tou
jub kabhi roothta hay mujh say wo
lagay jeena buhat hee mushkil hay;

ABHI aur DAYA ki yaari mein
koi bhi darar na aa paayey
hum tou dua karein gay bus yehi
sath rahein ye dono poori zindagi.....

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Poem 5

When all else seems to be failing

When all hopes of happiness seems to be paling

Someone holds us and makes us stand

Who else could it be but our closest friend

I was oblivious to such a friendship's existence

But CID showed me many a friendship tinged with benevolence

When I witnessed the true friendship of Daya-Abhijeet

I acknowledged that I was bestowed with a treat

There has never been a friendship so selfless

The depth of their feelings for each other being bottomless

In times of peril they become one

With their unified strength many a battle they have won

When one is afflicted, the other feels the pain

In helping each other they never seek any gain

When Daya for his life fought

With grief Abhijeet became fraught

His tears spoke of his heartfelt woe

Reeling were left we from this unbearable blow

As Daya emerged safe from the tunnel of death

Jubilant became Abhijeet as he found an invaluable wealth

When Abhijeet with troubles became shrouded

His bosom buddy Daya with worry became abounded

Even though Abhijeet chose to be harsh

Daya's concern for him did not become sparse

When abhijeet seeking apology wanted this friendship to be restored

Forgave him Daya without a grudge and his invaluable friendship he bestowed

In matters of friendship acp-salunkhe are not far behind

Agreed that it is a bit of a different kind

Though they always seem to be having rows

But between them unceasingly love and care flows

When salunkhe fell into troubled waters

Acp moved heaven and earth to clear these matters

Salunkhe's loyalty to acp is unconditional

Acp's belief in salunkhe's ability is unequivocal

Be it acp-salunkhe or daya-abhijeet

CID has gifted us many a cherishable feat

The other is always there when one feels blue

Saying to each other "I will be there for you"

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POEM 6

Is duniya ke itihas mein jab dosti ki hui baat

Sabse pehle aati hai Abhi-Daya ki yaad

Nahi choda kabhi ek doosre ka saath

inki dosti ki mein deti dil kholke daat

Kya bonding aur kya chemistry dikhai

Dekhe lagta jaise do bichde bhai

Itni honesty ek doosre ke ssath

khade hokar karo in donon ko sallam

Is rishte ki neev kabhi nahi hili

Inko baar baar dekhna meri khwahish hai dili

Ant mein dooa mein dongi yahi

Ki inki dosti ko kisi ki nazar na lagi

Kabhi ek dooje sealag

chalta rehe inki aatmaon ka milan

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Theme - ACP Pradyuman Pillar Of CID

POEM 7

ACP Pradyuman-Pillar Of CID

If God is acknowledged as our creator

Then Father is hailed as our protector

For our father is like our guiding light

He makes horrendous troubles look slight

I asked myself in whom I search a father like my own

Many a worthy face in my mind's eye shone

But I chose to name just one

And it is none other than ACP Pradyuman

ACP sir, you are everyone's pillar of strength

CID values you as its priceless wealth

When you are in the lead one can follow blindfolded

In your presence,no miscreant can remain emboldened

Abhijeet-Daya's trust in you is unequivocal

Spare you not anyone who is diabolical

When Abhijeet was accused of a heinous murder

Rebuked him you did yet halted him from crumbling further

You stood by him and proved him innocent

There is none like you whose heart is so magnificent

When Daya lay in the hands of an evil captor

Even then you didn't let your strength falter

Saved him from the jaws of death

In exhibiting valour you show no dearth

You have also made a very hard sacrifice

In remaining loyal to your duty you had to pay a price

When your beloved son chose to go astray

Even then from your principles you did not sway

With your own hands you chose to end his life

When speculations regarding your loyalty were strife

In doing so your heart did quake

But in pulling the trigger your hand did not shake

When HD to destroy CID became hell bent

To his unscrupulous demands you did not become pliant

You are the highest edifice of valour

In front of you everyone else is rendered paler

At times you are mistaken to be hard-hearted

But inside many a grief you hide under which many would have smarted

When your face softens with a smile so beatific

Never have I witnessed a sight so prolific

ACP sir our deference for you shall never sway

We shall always love you come what may

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Theme - Hum Kisi Se Kam Nahin

POEM 8

Everytime there is a robbery, a suicide or a murder,

Without their help, CID can't move any further.

From keeping a watchful eye on somebody to fingerprint collection,

Their roles can't be overlookedin the task of detection.

Whether it's tracking the number of a cell phone, an address, a Xerox machine, or a car's engine-

It's a cakewalk for them, theyare seen going CLICK CLICK witha camera in the crime scene

They search Koogle-Oogle & provide the trio with important information,

They are serving CID for years, surprisingly with no promotion..

Though Fredricks is sometimes bothered with his wife,

He has never been negligent with his duty,it's his life.

Always ready to help the trio, in their happiness & pain he is deeply involved,

Initially " a silent member", but funny now, he always helped a lot in getting mysteries solved

Sometimes he is scolded sometimes teased, sometimes laughed at,

When He is fit as a fiddle, why sometimes he is called fat???

The ladies Asha, Tasha, Muskaan, Aditietc, are smart & fiercely independent,

Even when it comes tolosing their own lives, they are never hesitant.

Always at par with the men, they don't give in to fears,

They are dutyful, co operating and obedient to theirseniors.

Vivek runs so fast, like aregal white mare,

Quintessentially hadsome, inelligent, smart & fair.

He performs the most dangerous stunts in a manner so graceful & agile,

On seeing him jumping from a high terrace our hearts stop, for a while.

He disguises himself, accompanies our disguised duo to provide help,

But never tries to outdo them, yet keeps on reinventing himself.

Sudhakar was an expert in his job, Sachin is now improving.

"Hum bhi kisi se kam nahi",- that's what he is hell -bent in proving.

They work hard, going out of their way, so that the CID badge maintains it's gleam,

As a result every Friday-Saturday we get to see an invincible & dedicated team.

So Next time we see, ACP sir calling any one of them to give an order,

We know for sure he/she will enthusiastically reply to him, saying , "Yes SIR".

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Theme - Our Unity Is Our Power

POEM 9

jury hain is tarah say aapus mein
jesay ungliyaan hun haathun mein
dushmanun ko lagay buhat bhaari
badal jayey jub ye mukkay mein;

aik ho ker hum kaam kartay hain
bina khauf burai say lartay hain
UNITY mein hee humari taaqat hay
alug ho ker akelay phirtay hain;

hum bachayein gay sub ko mushkil say
hum gunahgaar ko saza dein gay
sath nibhayein gay aik dojay ga
aur mulk say burai ko mita dein gay......

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Theme- Women In CID

POEM 10

A HEART STARING

sitting in the bureau
checking the files,
searching for clue
staring at the tiles.

sometimes i find myself
staring at a seat,
i don't take my eyes off
as that is where you used to sit.

now i stare at ACP sir's cabin
and remember your first day
it was so long ago,
but i felt it was just yesterday.

that day, you got scared
that day, i still remember
then someone came to your rescue,
our beloved freddy sir.

i stare at the place,
where you jumped in joy;
me too was wishing to jump,
like a crazy little boy.

then you carried on,
improved day by day
you became a super cop,
like a powerful laser ray.

you were great in disguise,
superb with gun,
your presence was always
like a blazing sun.

now i have gone outside,
to do some task of daya sir,
suddenly i stumble upon
a very old ice-cream seller.

i stare at those ice creams
but my mind stare at something else
my inner eyes make me see,
through a foggy lens.

i remember a lovely scene,
offering someone ice-creams;
that thought would never leave,
it still comes in my dreams.

days & days passed,
our lives we carried on
chatting happily &
doing investigation.

then you saved CID,
by saving the pillers;
you kept your head cool
even in front of those killers.

you were terrified that day
watching the pillars crumbling
you gave them back their sanity,
stopped them from killing.

now i am at the hospital,
to see a injured man,
suddenly something flashes before me
an image of a dying woman.

it had happened suddenly
unexpected & fast;
this was the very bed,
where you breathed your last.

just a few months ago,
you were taken away from me,
a thought that still haunts my heart
a scene i don't want to see.

now i am outside
see the ice-cream seller
i buy two scoops;
one for me, another for you dear.

here i am back at the bureau
with those two scoops;
take one in my desk,
& i put the other on yours.

now i am back to work
checking some case,
all files are here & there,
thus; a total mess.

i stare at the ice-cream
hoping the amount to decrease,
it is such a good flavour,
eat it please.

i stare here & there,
like a hide & seek game;
but the amount of ice-cream
remains the same.

i stare with a faint hope
though there is no possibilities such
please come back to me, love
i miss you too much.


POEM 11

Pyari Si Tasha

dil tha chhota sa,
ek nayi Asha,
sahas bhari man pe,
chhoti si asha.

duniya se jurm ko
dur karne ki asha,
yehi thi humari
pyari si Tasha.

aayi thi woh bohut
ashayein leke;
first aayi thi toh
police training me,

bhagti thi woh toh
bijli ki tarha;
thi toh uski
jabardast nishana,
aise hi thi toh
mere dil ki Tasha.

har waqt pe woh
khilaf the jurm ke,
saath de te toh
sabhi officers ke.

pata nahin ekdin
chali gayi kahan woh
chhor ke chale gaye
humaray sab ko,
duniya se chali gayi
mere pyaari Tasha.

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POEM 12

Women In CID- A strength indeed

The hand that rocks
the cradle rules the world

The strength of a
woman prevents everything untoward

CID has proved time
and again that women too have mettle

They can do many things other than just being a child-bearing chattel

In Asha we had our
first woman of steel

Her strength and
determination made culprits reel

With our Trio she
marched shoulder to shoulder

Undeterred always even
though troubles in her way stood like a boulder

Aditi gave valour a
new brand

For CID she did many
an act grand

Alone she walked into
the man-eater's den

Proving yet again that
women are no lesser than men

In Muskaan, we had our
lady of brawn

Like a magnificent
star she always shone

Stopped a bank robbery
single-handedly

Her attacks on criminals
has always been deadly

Tasha was the
quintessential feminine youth

She proved her worth
many a times as a sleuth

When TRIO's conduct
due to HD ran amok

She stood by them like
a rock

CID has given women's
strength a new name

They have given women
a new platform of fame

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POEM 13

Ab nahi raha wo purana jhamana

Hum ko bhi hein kuch kar dikhana

Chudiya pehene ke liye nahi bani hein ye kalaiyan

Muthhi mein karani hein hame saari ye duniya.

Salonse ghar ki char diwaron mein rahi

Apano ki na jaane kitani yatanaye sahi

Kisiki beti kisiki biwi kisi behen kisi ki Patni

Har ristye mein kahi khoyi meine pehechan apani.

Lekin ab jhamana badal hein gaya

CID ke en tin ladakiyon hame hein dikhaya

Aadhunik stri ka ye tino hein swarup

Enaka har rup hein bahot anup.

Aisa kaunsa kaam nahi jo nahi kar sakati hein naari

Usako dekhakar keheti hein duniya saari

Aadhunikata aur sanskaronka anupam sanagm hein.

Asha tumane dikhaya jhamane ko ki nari mein kitana dam hein.

Ghunghat uth gaya dehelij par kar di

Ladakiyon har kshetra mein kamal kar di.

Wo sharam ka tut gaya zootha bharam

Sabako dikhalaya naari bhi nahi kisise kam.

Natkhat lekin majboot eradon wali

Har mushakilon ka samana hasate huve karane wali

Agar man mein ho kuch kar dikhane ka jajaba

Niyati ka yeattitude dekhake achhe achhe kahete hein toba.

Samay aane par desh ke liye jaan bhi kar sakate hein
nyochhavar

Kaat kar fek denge dushmano mere desh pe daali buri nazar

Desh ke liye sine pe goli bhi ham kha sakate hein

Apane desh ke liye jaan ko bhi dav laga sakate hein.

Chhoti si umar mein Tasha ne saare jaha ko ye dikha diya

Sare jag mein bharatiy nari ka naam uncha kar diya

Usaka ye balidaan ham hamesha yaad rakhenge.

Tasha ham sare tuze kabhi na bhul payege.

Ye hein naari aaj ke jhamane ki

Hein enaki fitart jhamane ko saath leke chalaneki.

Katavya,Karm aur sanskaronaka ye hein anokha sangam

Dikhayenge sare jaha ko ham bhi nahi kisise kam.

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POEM 14

Woman Power

Ab nahi raha wo purana jhamana

Hum ko bhi hein kuch kar dikhana

Chudiya pehene ke liye nahi bani hein ye kalaiyan

Muthhi mein karani hein hame saari ye duniya.

Salonse ghar ki char diwaron mein rahi

Apano ki na jaane kitani yatanaye sahi

Kisiki beti kisiki biwi kisi behen kisi ki Patni

Har ristye mein kahi khoyi meine pehechan apani.

Lekin ab jhamana badal hein gaya

CID ke en tin ladakiyon hame hein dikhaya

Adhunik stri ka ye tino hein swarup

Enaka har rup hein bahot anup.

Aisa kaunsa kaam nahi jo nahi kar sakati hein naari

Usako dekhakar keheti hein duniya saari

Adhnikata aur sanskaronka anupam sanagm hein.

Asha tumane dikhaya jhamane ko ki nari mein kitana dam hein.

Ghunghat uth gaya dehelij par kar di

Ladakiyon har kshetra mein kamal kar di.

Wo sharam ka tut gaya zootha bharam

Sabako dikhalaya naari bhi nahi kisise kam.

Natkhat lekin majboot eradon wali

Har mushakilon ka samana hasate huve karane wali

Agar man mein ho kuch kar dikhane ka jajaba

Niyati ka attitude dekhake achhe achhe kahete hein toba.

Samay aane par desh ke liye jaan bhi kar sakate hein
nyochhavar

Kaat kar fek denge dshmano mere desh pe daali buri nazar

Desh ke liye sine pe goli bhi ham kha sakate hein

Apane desh ke liye jaan ko bhi dav laga sakate hein.

Chhoti si umar mein Tasha ne saare jaha ko ye dikha diya

Sare jag mein bharatiy nari ka naam uncha kar diya

Usaka ye balidaan ham hamesha yaad rakhenge.

Tasha ham sare tuze kabhi na bhul payege.

Ye hein mari aaj ke jhamane ki

Hein enaki hein fitart jhamane ko saath leke chalaneki.

Katavya,Karm aur sanskaronaka ye hein anokha sangam

Dikhayenge sare jaha ko ham bhi nahi kisise kam.

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Posted: 15 years ago

In case any poems are missing please PM me !! I'll post them !!! Have been a bit too busy so might have skipped by mistake !!!! I've similarised the colour and size of all poems to avoid letting out the poet !!!

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Vis make this a sticky when you get time !!!

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Good Bhavna I know I could not post anything and disappointed you but it was avery hectic time ,

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Posted: 15 years ago

Nice job done Bhavana di..... 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice work Bhavnab.............

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

Ok everyone !! I had by mistake skipped an entry so added it !!! Entry 14 added !!! If any more entries have been skipped please do let me know !!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

welldone everyone....👏

my advance congrats to the winner....and my gift is send to bhavs !!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

great work bhavana!👍🏼..we have so many people here on IF possessing great talent in poetry..All poem entries are wonderful😊

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

#10

Ok guys 12th is here !!! Voting starts !!! I have been asked by 4 participants to keep voting a secret !! So I'd like all of you to mark every poem on a scale of 10 depending on clarity,flow,use of words,stlye and above all whether it suits the theme perfectly and to how much it justifies the theme !! Please pm me your marks 15th evening 5pm !!! Winners will be announced soon after !!

Giving details via cell so if any error please forgive !! I wanted have simple voting but Many say it's difficult to choose !!
Simple they are !!! Mark each poem on 10 & pm to me !!

Edited by Bhavanab - 15 years ago