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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: saphira7988

i just read chp 2 n 3😊 awesome updates..👏loved it...!!especially chp 3..😉awwww abhay cant stay away from pia already so sweet😃 pls update soon dear n thanks for d pm😊

Hehe.. i know right.. I like his character in this ff...well she is lucky ..:)
I hope you wil like the nex chap too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you ! :)
I am already writing chapter 4 :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Note:

I am right now busy writing the chapter..but i have a
spanish verbal? test..hah i dont know how to tell it in English..anyway its like 7 conversations..so I have to study for that one too :)
Love.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much dear..
I was sittin her learning my spanish when i got a mail that i had a comment :D
haha it made the day a little better! :)
2day new update! I am right now at school..free break hour..
So see you at the next update :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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4:16am on India Forum is like 12:16 Pm.. in this country where I Live..

cute
How is that even Possible?
So if you guys ask yourself why i am update weird times.. mostly i update round 7 PM in here.. and that's like let me count...2:00 am on india forum..
so i dont know where you guys live.. india or other countries.. its difficult to upd at a good time for us all..so .. :)
Thank you for your time and feedback..
You guys are going to LOVE chapter 4 , its a
Sweet and you will get a tooth cavity.. :)
Haha!
Well.. sleep furthur..looks like its almost half past 4 in the morning?
Love,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was just amazing and toon early
liked alot
pm me soon of d next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanaghaffar1997

that was just amazing and toon early
liked alot
pm me soon of d next update

Thanks.

I will PM you :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome updates dear👏..love ur FF!!..waiting for ur next update!plz do pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivani_piya

awesome updates dear👏..love ur FF!!..waiting for ur next update!plz do pm😊

Thank you dear!
I hope you will like chapter 4 too :) xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heey Dear People!
Thank you so much for your feedback and comments..
I am tottay surprised ! Thank you! i am so glad you enjoyed chapter 3!
here comes chapter 4. This one is now my fav :)
Sweetdreams.
Sahar
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"Those eyes Pya.. your eyes.. when I look in them ..it's like my mind goes empty.. I won't even remember my name.. and your sweet smile..and the sound of your laugh, ..god every time I hear the sound of your laugh' it makes me laugh..and that makes me happy' you make me happy Pya.. I know.. it's too soon to tell you this..but why waiting..there is no lifetime enough to care about someone so much' I can't even think about being away from you from now..

I just can't.. and then Abhay stared at her.. he saw slowly .. her eyes got wet and then he saw a drop of tear almost falling down.. Just when he wanted to say something.. he felt her finger against his lips..

"Abhay.. "'.

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Pya's Point of view

Pya couldn't believe her eyes.. this whole night has been one of the best moments in her life.. she was just realizing that this is actually real.. and not any dreams or anything.. before he could say anything more..she pressed her finger against his lips.. it was not her purpose to touch his lips..but now she was doing it.. It felt weird..it felt good..and' before he could say anything more.. she closed the distance of their faces..she came close to his ear..

"I feel the same Abhay.. but I want you to know that this is the first time I feel like this, the first time I am sitting and being so close to a boy..and it happened to be you' and I am glad it happened to be you.. you are nice and sweet..and I like you.. a lot ".. she closed her eyes and placed a soft gentle kiss on his temple.. lingering a little longer with her lips against his temple than normal..she blushed ..

looking down at him..she saw the cutest expression ever.. it was like he was dreaming or smiling so big..either one of them and his eyes were showing happiness and disbelief.. she almost laughed at loud.. and then his eyes met her'

She almost forgot to breath.. Her heart reacted more frenzy that other times.. slowly looking down..feeling a little weird' "stop staring..it's not nice.. ".. she said while avoiding his eyes' she then felt his hand gently cupping her face..making her look at him.. " how could I not stare.. you are beautiful.. and please don't move your face away.. I had not the chance to look at you in my 19 years.. and now I can..I want to stare 24 / 7. .. ".. she had to smile to that one.. he was so cheesy..

"you watch to many movies Abhay.. or are those dialogues yours? ".. he laughed.. "no they came right from my heart..especially made for you.."'again a cheesy line..Pya thought.. still smiling and secretly liking it more than she should..

Abhay slowly removed his head from her lap and sat dawn close to her..stretching a little with his hands'

"you know.. we still have one hour to sleep.. do you want to go back to your room and sleep a hour?"

Abhay asked her.. Pya smiled..as if she could sleep now..

"no I won't be able anyway.. you can go if you want' I am perfectly fine here in this beautiful night and fresh wind.. "' she said smiling a little.. wishing that he totally would ignore her comment about him leaving if he wanted to..

Before saying something else.. Abhay took her hand..both of her hands in his hands.. "Pya look at me.. "' Pya turned her face towards him.. "you don't get it.. I was serious..more than 100% serious about telling you that I can't leave you anymore.. please understand.. I can't.. it's like giving up everything in my life.. ..I will show you Pya' how much I care..and how much I L- ''".. he just once stopped talking and didn't continue his say.. Pya was already getting emotional what he said..but then just she also realized..what he wanted to say.

She looked at him and saw him looking dawn.. " I am sorry Pya, I wasn't controlling what I was saying.. "..before he could finish.. "Say it again.. "' Abhay looked up..in disbelief' what Pya? ..

Say again what you wanted to say'. And he did ..looking right in her eye.. "I care a lot about you..and I 'L'. Love you Pya' ".. he said looking almost sad.. as if he done something wrong..

Pya surprised him by getting close and hugging him ..Abhay was in shock.. but he gladly accepted it..and hugged her back..

"I Love you too Abhay .. "' she told him..and Pya was glad.. finally .. the thing that was torturing her mind and heart was finally out.. she told him..

Abhay froze ' and hugged her more tight ' resting her head on his shoulders..

Abhay Point of view

She rested her head on my shoulder.. I was so happy.. she loved me..and I loved her.. and that in just after meeting her twice.. I could not believe how I survived those years without her' The girl in my arms.. she felt so warm and soft.. so close to me.. I wish the time could stop and I would never need to let her go.. I really couldn't believe how I came in this position.. The girl I am totally in love with, is gorgeous, smart, funny, and beautiful.. and she loved me back..

"Abhay' "' .. hmmm' " why aren't you wearing any shirt or something.. "' I had to laugh..she was so sleepy now and yet she asked me such a silly question.. "I don't know Pya.. does it bothers you? "..

He felt her cheeks getting hot.. "silly Pya.. It was really hot in my room and outside.. so I wanted to get some fresh air.. ".. .. she smiled..

Parting from the hug position..she smiled.. "I love you Pya.. God I can't say it enough.. "..Pya blushed..sensing her tiredness.. He slowly took her hand and turned her around.. before pushing her gently with her body to rest her head on his lap' Pya understood what he meant and laid down her head on his lap..

She took his hand, while holding it she placed it on her stomach.. while his other hand was going through her hair.. feeling comfortable'

"Sleep Pya.. I am here.. ".. Abhay couldn't be more happy.. the scenario in front of him was everything he need it to live.. the girl of his dreams was sleeping in his lap.. smiling ..

He took his phone and made and set a alarm for over a hour.. he took her hand and kissed it slowly.. feeling that Pya was totally asleep.. he rested his head on the head rest and closed his eyes'

Pya's Point of view.

Hearing a soft buzz..made her get awake a little.. she moved..and then felt. Where she was.. she opened her eyes..and then she saw.. the person who made her feel so save and loved'was resting his head backwards.. with his lips giving away a very small smile..Pya woke up.. getting up and standing in front of him.. trying to think how to wake him up..

She came close to his face..and placed her hands on his shoulders..

"Abhay.. ".. she whispered.. "Abhay.. wake up.. "'

Before she could realize what she was doing she almost slipped off on something and by reflex she grabbed Abhay's hand ..with this move she made him wake up in shock..and before they could both do anything..the fell..on the ground..

Abhay helped her before they fall by putting his arms around her waist..and help her not to get hurt for the fall.. he fell and pya fell on him ..and then they made eye contact..

" if this was the way waking up everyday'. Life is too good..".. he joked with her..but still having that serious tone in his voice.

He rolled her so he was now on top of her.. " You are so cheesy Abhay.. ".. she blushed..he was so close.. his hands both side of her holding his own weight.. still staring at her with adoration in his eyes..

Still staring in each other's eyes' they automatically came closer to each other..Abhay slowly and gently pressed himself to her not holding his weight anymore.. getting close to her lips..his own lips begging him to close the distance.. but Abhay knew better than that..

Pya closed her eyes..something that went automatic in her brain.. she wanted to stop this..This was not right.. but she couldn't ..she could not move.. how can it be so wrong when it feels so right..

And thinking about that..she felt his lips.. those soft warm lips..were now laying a soft gentle kiss on her eye lids..

Her heart was beating so hard..

" I ' "'' a kiss in her cheek, " Love " .. A kiss on her temple " You "' a kiss on her chin .. "So much.. ".. slowly moving his lips from her chin towards her neck .. leaving a warm trail of kisses..

Getting al warm and dizzy.. Pya opened her eyes and kissed him on the cheek and run of giggling'

"Pya' ".. he called..laughing to himself.. '

He looked after her till she was inside the hostel.. he smiled to himself..thinking how lucky he was..looking for his phone he saw her pen and diary.. he took it with him to his room.. getting ready for school.

END of Chapter 4

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This was it Friends!

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Edited by Div_Ridz - 14 years ago

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