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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ilove99

lllllloooovvveeedddd it 😳 its just awesome 👏👏abhiya is so much in love!abhay was so lovely with her hope in the serial he was also like this 😳but hey you did it! hats off dear🤗

Thank you so much dear :)
I know right..i totally am waiting for the right moment ..
in the show..haha..when abhay is going to be so romantic
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: saphira7988

Superb update dear👍🏼 it was so heartwarming to read their confession..😃Abhiya r so in love with each other..very nicely written👏 n d last part with all d kisses was so romantic😍 i really wish we get a episode like ths in d serial😉 plss update soon pls pls pls😆 n thanks for d pm🤗

Thank you so much dear :)
I Love your comments..they always tell me stuff i love to hear..
I know i loved the kiss too hehe..i so hope to that we will get a scene like this on tv :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part
liked it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: RUBA-SIDDIQUI

nice part
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm

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thank you sweety..
I am almost ready with chapter 5
Hope you wil like it ! = )
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it so much !!
do continue !!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aromal

loved it so much !!

do continue !!😳

Thank you deaR!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heey Buddys
Thank you so much for the feedback.. it all made my day.. i was so happy reading your
comments.. I am so glad you all loved it.. and a miracle you all want more..
beginning this story i totally did not expect this..
thanks again, its all because of you guys.
Love,
Sahar
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"Pya' ".. he called..laughing to himself.. '

He looked after her till she was inside the hostel.. he smiled to himself..thinking how lucky he was..looking for his phone he saw her pen and diary.. he took it with him to his room.. getting ready for school.
Orphan & Lucky
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Pya stepped into her room..having a big smile on her face..she walked towards her bed and saw dawn.. sighing loudly and dreamingly'.

"OMG .. Pya what happened to you.. ".. she saw Misha waking up removing blanket..and walking towards here.. moving her hands up and down in front of her eyes..

"I have never seen you so awake and happy in the morning.. ". .. pya turned her head towards her..

I am just very happy Misha.. I can't tell you why..

With Misha looking at her as if she had 3 heads..Pya walked towards the shower and tried to take a douche..

Deciding what to wear.. she chose a black knee length skirt and a white tank top.. with some cute rainbow colour bracelets and a black schoolbag , taking her flats ..she waited for Misha..

"MISSH!! ".. yelling to her when she saw peeping Misha from the shower having all foam on her head and hiding her body behind the door.. "WHAAT ".. she yelled back

Pya laughed.. " Misha the school starts over 15 minutes..you will be late.. "..

No man, my art classes start from the third hour .. you go na.. we see each other at the break! Love you'

And then she closed the door and pya smiled to herself.. she didn't know what to do without her best friend. Still smiling and being excited to see Abhay again..she walked out of the building and before noticing anything she heard her name .. "Pya.. ".. she turned around and saw him standing there.

Abhay Raichand, all jeans and a polo shirt, a Converse bag at his shoulder ..behind him a black car , shining in the sun .. "Abhay.. "..

Before she could realize there are in a public place..she run and jumped into his arms.. hugging him very close and tight..

Abhay did tight his hold around her.. " I know you missed me very much miss, if there was no one else around here..I would hold you so long..but sadly there are people around us.. and I can't ruin your reputation before school even started.. "

Pya blushed but was confused in a way .. what do you mean by ruining my reputation..

"Pya love, you know that I am the son of the headmaster.. that doesn't mean that everyone will accept me , because they think that mom told those teachers to high up my marks..and if they see you with me..they might think that your marks are also not your own deserved one, or using me or something..it won't mean something good at all..

Pya smiled at his worrying about her. .. she came close to him again . " I don't care Abhay.. I only care to be with you.. only you.. no matter what people think.. I Love you..and only you ..for what you are..".. Abhay was touched by her words.. he wanted to hear them again..

He closed the distance and placed soft kiss on her temple.. "I Love you so much Pya .. I am glad you think like that.. but please..I am worried and I won't take any risk.. we can wait .. I Love you, and because I Love you , I can't take the risk.. We can be as friends, but not really more in front of other people.. but never forget how much I love you. ".. he looked at her apologized..

Pya nodded..still wanting to tell the world that she was Abhay's now.. Let's go ..we are going to be late ..Abhay smiled and pressed another kiss on her temple. " You are so understanding, I don't know why I deserve you' ".. Pya smiled at him. "it's me who is asking why .. ".. Abhay looked at her.. "don't be silly Pya. "..

Abhay opened the door for her and she stepped in the car.. and Abhay went to his driver seat..while pya was putting on her seatbelt.. Abhay started the car and started to drive'

While driving..they laughed and enjoyed of the blow while opening the window of the car.. Abhay looked back to Pya and saw her laughing and her hair was getting blow it away by the wind.. he slowly took her hand'when pya looked at him she smiled..he closed the distance between her hand and his lips and placed a soft gentle kiss..

Pya turned her hand .. cupping his face in her hand..softly stroking his face.. "you know Abhay.. I can't believe this.. ".. she said..

Abhay smiled at her.. what? What cant you believe?.... I mean look at me..from one day.. I was just a simple plain orphan girl in India, now I am sitting in the car of the love of my life going to university in London.. it's just unbelievable..sometimes I am scared..I might just wake up and this might all be a dream.

"No I don't think so.. if this is a dream.. then I am dreaming too..and I am not that creative' I hope not.. "' Pya laughed at him.. "you are sometimes so silly.. ".. Abhay smiled..

We are here' Pya looked around and gasped' "don't let the size of the school scare you.. if you are having classes her for 1 year.. you will even think that this school is too small.. and I am here right..no worries .. ".

Pya nodded. Getting excited.. Do you have your time-table or your schedule? .. Pya nodded and took it from her bag and give it to him when he was ready parking. He took the time-table..and smiled..

Thank god, we have at least 2 classes together in a day.. Music and Spanish.. I didn't know you were doing Spanish ? .. She smiled.. I love Spanish.. I always dream to go to Spain sometimes.. I have read a lot of books about Spain, but why you mister? .. Abhay laughed at her use of words..

I have a uncle in Spain.. he has a own company'and maybe if nothing works out in my medical school carrier. .. then going to Spain is plan B..and its handy to know the language. She nodded..

Let's go.. I will show you where you have your first and second classes.. I will pick you up for the third hour..we have music together ' they walked and talked.. people were starring and people were smiling and some were looking like she was some shark .. " Abhay are these people going to stare at me for the rest of the school year or will it stop? .. "It's because you are walking with me.. I am not really someone to make friends with everyone.. people who do understand the reason that I am the son of the big boss.. Pya smiled and looked a little sad..

Pya took his hand and rubbed with her thumb his hand.. " Can I meet your friends? ".. Abhay smiled at her worry . ' of course.. you might get a little overwhelmed by them' oh here is your second hour lesson.. two doors further is your first lesson.. he walked with her till the door..

Just before pya wanted to go inside.. Abhay took her hand and pulled her back..before looking both side before no one was looking.. came close to her ear..

"I will be sitting in the class..thinking all the time about you.. just waiting for the time to go fast so I could'.." .. and he placed a gently warm kiss on the edge of her lips.. Leaving a blushing Pya behind..

Pya did like the lessons .. she did not like the people in her class so much..there was a girl in the last few tables alone..she looked nice..having a little weird fashion sense.. pya took the seat next to her and took the books out of her bag..

Hi I am Sneha.. You are new right.. ?

Hi , Yes I am , I am Pya.. nice to meet you..

Like that the girls talked and talked' Pya was glad she made one more friend..

I saw you walking with Abhay Raichand this morning.. how do you know each other ?

Oh, I met him ..he lives next to the girls hostel.. why..something wrong

No I don't think so, it's only that he has not that good reputation in this school.. he is nice otherwise..I haven't had talked so much to him.. he is kind and ridiculously good-looking.. you just have to be aware of Tyra Malhotra.

Pya got confused.. Why? ..

Just ..she is the queen bee of this school.. she doesn't like people..or girls..especially good-looking girls near Abhay..someway ..she thinks she owns him..

Pya smiled.. thanks for the warning.. I am not really scared of people..

You welcome..just some advice.. Well Pya it was meeting you' I see you the fifth hour? We have Literature together..

Yea.. thanks again Sneha..I see you .

Like that she met a few other people and a few weird people.. there was a boy ..at her second hour..who was bugging her the whole time .. if she wanted someone to guide her at school..something in that way.. she hated to get attention.. she was also very glad when the bell of the second class went off.. she collected all her stuff together.. took her notebook and placed them in her bag.. she walked outside.. just before going out the door her pen fell down on the ground..going to lean forward when she saw another hand take her pen and gave it to her..

She looked up and saw him again.. her love, her everything.. "Abhay ".. she sighed and hugged him close..

"Beauty.. I missed you.. ".. he said winking at her.. she blushed.. getting used at blushing at every word of him'

"I missed you too Abhay.. how was your classes? "' Abhay smiled at her..

Fine.. let's go we have music together now.. I can't wait to sit next to you..

Pya laughed .."just sitting next me is making you so excited? .. ".. Abhay smiled ..

Yes it is Pya.. I Love music, it's like a free hour, and I Love you so much .. and when you have a combination of two things you love so much' people get excited.. you know.. And I want to show you some piano pieces..I want your opinion..

They walked together in the class.. everyone was looking at them.. she noticed that Abhay was like used to this stare.. he didn't mind it anymore.. Pya was glad ..that this wasn't bugging the hell out of Abhay..so she tried to do the same'

Their Music teacher was great and pretty crazy' he explained the real performance at the end of the year..where every student has to show something that they practised or did in this whole year.

Pya was already thinking about singing some song or something..

Just while she was listening and concentrating what the teacher was saying..she felt some hand on her tight'

She looked down and saw Abhay's hand.. while blushing.. "Abhay stop it.. ".. Abhay smiled at her in a evil way.. she felt him move his hands up and dawn slowly..very short .. before moving his hands a little more up and taking her hand and placing it on his lap.. holding her hand so tight she couldn't move'

"Abhay.. ".. she hissed ..Abhay almost laughed at loud..

"Pya.. I will let your hand go.. if you promise me something.. ".. Pya rolled her eyes'

No need for such a stupid games..I will do anyway ..if you ask me something..

He narrowed his eyes..

"Ok ..' Ok , me Pya Chaiswal .. promise to do anything what Abhay Raichand says if he leaves my hand right now ".. getting louder and louder..

Miss Chaiswal, was it right.. could you please listen to me..you can talk later after my briefing. Pya nodded.. Sorry Sir.

When The teacher talked to Pya.. Abhay just undid his hold around her hands.. now she was only laying her hands on his lap..

" I promised.. leave my hand .. "' Abhay winked at her.. " Pya .. I am not holding your hand..its you who is holding me.. getting red by realizing that he was telling the truth..she took hand back..

You are the devil Abhay Raichand' He nodded' and because you promises you will do anything I say.. you will wait till the break'

Pya just nodded..afraid of what he is going to ask.. after the briefing.. The teacher gave them a assignment to finish before this Friday.. they walked towards the instruments , and Abhay took Pya's hand and pulled her towards the piano.. putting on their earphones.. so students wont disturb each other.. He gave a pair of earphones to her and he put one of He started to play one of his favourite parts of Pour le Piano .. When he finished..he looked to her and saw her almost losing a tear..

"always girls who are crying. .. why crying beauty .. I can't see that.. please stop crying Love.. ".. Abhay wiped away the tear.

It was so beautiful .. Abhay.. I loved it..

Together they walked out of the music room..towards the canteen to eat something..

Pya did loved the canteen it was so big, much bigger than the canteen of her hostel.. she walked around and looked with open eyes..

"it's something .. ".. he said whit a approving voice..

It is indeed something.. how long we have a break? .. she asked.. looking at him. Smiling

We have for 1 hour, we only need to be in the class over a hour' then we have Spanish. S ?

Pya smiled at him..they both took some food from the canteen restaurant.. Pya took a piece of vegetarian pizza and he took a healthy sandwich.. they both talked and eat their food..and when they were ready..they had still 45 minutes break..

Let's go Pya..I know some place I want to show you.. pya collected her bag and phone and took his hand..together they walked they building out and took the walk instead the car..

" were are almost there.. ".. they had walked for 10 minutes..

He came behind her and closed her eyes with his hand.. do you trust me Pya?..

More than myself Abhay.. she answered him..

He couldn't wipe the smile of his face..she was so cute, and always saying the things he wanted to hear .. the things that showed that she did love him. Before he could show her the place..he didn't remove his hands and came close to her neck from behind.. "Pya.. how can I deserve you.. ".. and he removed her hear and swiped it all to her shoulders.. slowly coming closer and placing a gentle warm kiss on her neck.. ..getting addicted..he slowly moved his lips to right and left..kissing every inch of her neck.

Abhay.. she sighed' "you make me crazy..please remove your hands..I want to see the place.. ".. Abhay removed..and Pya gasped..

There she was..a meadow..trees all around them, flowers on the grass.. showing of their colours..while the sun was shining and making it all look like gold and the trees moved ..making it a little cooler and fresh..

"its beautiful Abhay..how could you find someplace like this..

He took his jacket and from his bag and placed it on the ground.. "come sit..enjoy of the sun for 20 minutes.. ".. he said smiling to her..

She walked towards him and sat dawn on his jacket.. he sat dawn almost on the ground when she pulled his hand and let him sit on his jacket to.. he sat dawn next to her.. very close'armed her waist from her back and she leaned into his shoulder'

" You promised you will do everything what I say ..remember? .. ".. Pya looked a little suspicious ..

She nodded.. "I want you to accept something I am going to give you.. ".. Abhay explained to her..

Something I want to give you.. something that will promise you my love..

He took his school bag and took a little black velvet box.. he opened and took a pretty silver ring with one small diamond out of it'

This is a promising ring Pya.. it means that I am going to seal my promise with this ring..

He took her hand ..not daring to look at her..

" Pya, you are the girl.. the girl that is perfect to me.. The girl that I can't live without..the girl my eyes want to see, the girl my ears want to hear.. and the girl..that makes my heart beat so fast..

Pya Chaiswal.. Would you make me the happiest man on earth by accepting this ring and becoming my girlfriend.. "..

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END of Chapter 5

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This was it Friends!

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Edited by Div_Ridz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
wow nice one sweetie loved it love abhiya's secretiveness hehehhe
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
S i do!!!!!!!!☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
hope i finished pia's line...
that was cute update..
every1 staring at pia n abhay on d 1st day itself.how come mish haven't seen her yet n fired her with 20 questions.
so in next chap may b mish will c them together.
hei waiting 4 ur next update..
update soon plssssssssssssssss.
love,
ramani
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
nice simple flow in the story.. loved it..

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