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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

awww that is fine...take your time with the updates
Am sure you will come back with a bang lol
I will wait for your update..Skool and home comes first
wow you stayed away from your mom for 3 months?😲😲
I don't know what I would do without my mom lol
hahaa you can forget about dads helping around the house at al 😆😆 I know what you mean My dad is the same wway 😆😆
Good luck!
Be safe and will wait for you to come back 😳😳

LOl......yes indeed I stayed away from 3 months😭😭 but this happens every year - but this time....it felt like a lifetime😭😭 cos I wasnt able to have much contact what with the time differences and me leaving home early for uni and coming back pretty late for me to call her and then being knackered and all - ufff......I'm sooo glad to have her back - its like im on top of world at the moment - but then..............with her come the drawbacks lool - my updating will be ever slow til i get it into my routine!!!! - she doesnt know about me and IF - i'm scared what she'll think if she ever found out - she'll for defo think it's to do with me and my life and the numerous rumours that im with some munda shunda will take a toll for the worse😃
im back for now - hoping to update today or tomoz........taken a pledge for it -lool oh wait i wrote that in ur other reply tooo lool - oh deary
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Awe don't worry about enjoy your sweet reunion with your mum I know I would if my mum came back after a long time and just relax and update when it's suitable for you as I'm a loyal reads of your ff so would be waiting patiently for your updates 😊

Shamima Shamima - lool...................
yes yes......I have had my rather long reunion- still going on but in uni hours....its work work work and for me that includes my FFs tooo
and for such loyal and wonderful readers - itna toh kar hi sakti hoon😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ...just loved the strange journey...
just completed reading it from the first part....
plz add me to your PM list n update as soon as u get time...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

hey ...just loved the strange journey...

just completed reading it from the first part....
plz add me to your PM list n update as soon as u get time...

Hey welcome to Our Strange Journey - Glad you liked it sooo far - I am indeed about to begin typing the writing of the next update!!! so stay tuned - I've sent you a friend request so plzz do accept if you wish to get my PMs
Thanks once again
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey you allll crazy crazy fans of my fanfics!!!
I'm typing as I speak - no no not this...I mean I'm typing away for the next update - the much awaited walk.......lool hmmmmmm read your comments- loved them all and also replied - so stay tuned
I know I made you wait far too long for your liking but please do hold on tight and and await the walk to unfold!!!
Thanks for all your support jaanis
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

Hey you allll crazy crazy fans of my fanfics!!!

I'm typing as I speak - no no not this...I mean I'm typing away for the next update - the much awaited walk.......lool hmmmmmm read your comments- loved them all and also replied - so stay tuned
I know I made you wait far too long for your liking but please do hold on tight and and await the walk to unfold!!!
Thanks for all your support jaanis



FINALLY.............omg after ages ur updating...........it better be long 😡........or....... else run for ur life
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Posted: 14 years ago
Helloes meri jaani-ios!!!!!
I is back...........finally - omg omg omg omg it feeels sooooo nyc to see the love that you all have showered upon me!!!! You guys are the best!!!!!!!! Thank You all for your comments and support and of course for your patience in waiitng for me while I had my reasons to be away - but needless to say - main door hoke bhi door na ho payi!!!!! Thank you soooooooo much - I cannot thank you all enough!!!!!!!!
This update is specially dedicated to my pyari Chicklet😳 aka maankigeet4ever, Priya😃 aka komlika - my bday pressie to you - hope you like it⭐️, Haritha aka maansmishti -Thanks for sharing your wonderful pyar ki dastaan with me😳, Sufee aka Suprabha for telling me how much you loved my FFs when I was feeling low⭐️ and last but not least................Simi aka mrs.msk for supporting me as a backbone and being my no#1 fan😛
However this update is for alll you crazy people out there tooo - without you it would not be possible to write...........the people above just happened to be the ones who were chasing me the most and motivating me to write and write - Thank you all!!!!!!
This brings me to my next bit.....each update I will dedicate to someone or some group of people - to show my love and appreciation....this will be determined by your comments and love for me - hehe😆😆i know i'm being extra greedy but kya karoon - I'm in need of love these days - feeling unloved from all 4 corners of life 😭😭
ok ok ok thats enough of my bad bad - now it's time to hand over my update to you all to read and criticise and love and laugh and cry
I know it's short - but it's a start - so hopefully I can be back soon with more
Love you all😃
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Recap:

(Since it's been ages since I updated, so going to summarise a little bit for you)

Maan calls Geet after having faced many teasing interrogations from Dev, in order to tell her that he has her planner. Their conversation ends up going on for 2 or so hours, with Geet constantly yapping and yapping and yapping and our bechara Maan listening to her and her thoughts out aloud. All in all, at the end of it when they do realise how long they have been talking for, Maan suggests they meet up in the park where they can do the handing over of the book *or have another chance to check each other out- as per Tishuu's nath khat dimaag*. They both decided to meet in 20 mins, and Maan has just reached the park and called Geet to say - that she looks good as it is and no need to dress up for him. Geet eases the air and says she'll be there soon......ab aage...

It had been 5 minutes since Maan had called up Geet and she had claimed to be here in 2 minutes. Initially the wait for 2 minutes seemed too short, Maan was getting nervous by the second, especially after what he had let slip out from his mouth....... "you look good as it is....." - what was I thinking have I completely lost it? Why would I say that to her? I mean ok, not trying to "diss" the girl - of course she looks good, no no pretty ohh even thats not good enough. Wait let me think..... ok how about ...gorgeous/beautiful... ... ...ador.....oh I'm doing it again....argh...I'm doing what Geet does.....AGAIN.....this is not me...this is not what Maan Singh Khurana does...........I do not have crazy conversations within myself or speak my thoughts out loud as I did earlier with her...I mean what is happening to me? Maybe Dev is right....maybe I am unwell.....of course there is no other reason for why I would be talking to myself as if there is another person in my head who is sooo interested in what is going on in my mind and making facial expressions that speak louder than words - oh no thank Goodness I don't do that, that would be embarrassing for me - but then she does look cute when she plays an array of emotions on her sweet face, almost makes it easier to understand what she's feeling without even having the need for her to voice the thoughts..........wait what? Did I just call her sweet? Cute? WHAT????? And oh god I'm doing it again........I'm talking to myself once again - oh dear what have you done to me Geet....I was better off without meeting you ever......shes making me go crazy.......theres certainly something wrong with me..........ahhhh how did I even get myself into this?.....seriously........Geet and her big mouth.......if only she had listened to me for once and I could've told her the necessary over the phone and then this stupid meeting up idea wouldn't have ever crossed my mind.......ahhhhhhhhhh why can't she just hurry up and come and I'll handover this stupid planner and leave - Haan thats what I'll do... the whole thing would be over.........*as Maan passes his hand over his pocket, as if reaching for the object he was mentioning of .....and then he realised.......* Oh noooooo the planner......oh bugger - I forgot it on my bed....oh great just great......I get subjected to all the babble of Geet and then manage to do something good for once and what do I do...forget the goddamn object of our talks. Just great.......oh dear.. I cannot even go home and grab it - even if i ran at jet speed...because surely by the time I get back, she'll be disappointed at not seeing me, she'll think I'll stood her up on our first.....first? first what... argh......no no that's not right....maybe I could call her and say that I'm not feeling well - and anyways at the rate things are going I'll be mad any time soon - anyone who would take a peek into my mind would think so at first glance.....no no what if she's already here....then she'll feel bad......god knows what she must have gone through to get here - certainly a lot seen as she's not here YET and it's already been 5 minutes......hmm....maybe I could just go and get it....the most that will happen is that she'll have to wait - so what...she's making me wait anyway....and plus.....everything is fair in ......in........oh but im sure she has other things to get on with too....and aise main making her wait...no no that is something I do not want to happen - no way am I going to make her wait for me...poor girl......no that is something Maan Singh Khurana doesn't do.......but then......her coming here isn't goin to be of any use......apart from the fact that I will get to see her again and talk to her..........no no what am I thinking - no way........but then what can I do..... ....hmmm maybe ...yeah just maybe........if I can somehow get Geet into her talking mode (oh god never did I think I would ever love her for her talking endlessly mode) - wait what...love...her?? Maan you are seriously ill -maybe I should cancel this whole thing - yea...I'll do that... I'll call her and tell her that I'm not well or there was an emergency and I cannot meet her - yea...nooo what if she gets furious?? Oh dear nooo way.....oh man what can I do......oh yhh ...my idea...yea...what if I get her into the talks and somehow distract her and then....then...... get her to walk to my house and then give her the planner and then it'll be over.....yes thats perfect.....noooooo no thats the worst idea ever Maan......you're going to make the poor girl walk all the way to the park, and then all the way to your house and have her walk all the way back, just for a stupid mistake I made...and she suffers? No no bad idea......hmm then.......oh yea...maybe I could get her talking and let time go and then hurry off and then when I get home I'll drop a call to say that due to her talking endlessly- we forgot the exchange but now its too late and she'll have to wait until tomorrow in school now - yes thats perfect.............ohhhhh but why do I feel sooo bad about it?...........ufff - I'm at it again!!!! Talking to the invisible person within me - oh dear lord help me!!!!! no no.....thats it...it's final.......I'm going to tell her the truth......I'll tell her that I accidently forgot it and that I'm sorry and then....yes yes...I'll wait for her reaction - what's the worse that can happen - she'll scream and shout at me -so what.... Maan Singh Khurana is no glass doll - I'll take it - afterall it is MY fault....and it's only Geet........afterall at least it wont be lying and hurting her more unknowingly...no no this is the best...she'll be angry at first but then at least she'll know how sorry I am - yes yes....and even if she does scream and shout -I'll take it...afterall anything for my Ge..... - no no Maan SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Excuse me???"

"GEET" Maan said as he broke out of his trance.......startled at finding the person of his thoughts right there right in front of him with a not too happy expression, more like angry and arms crossed.

Geet: Did you just tell me to SHUT UP???? Huh...is that why you called me here???? Ek toh I've been standing here for so long, trying to get your attention and there is you who is as lost as a puppy and to top it you're telling ME to Shut up....excuse you mister........but that is not called for...how ru.....*but Geet couldn't continue as Maan put his hand over her mouth to stop her from singing praises for him further*

Maan: Shut up Geet ..............I didn't say Shut up to you!

Geet who by now was totally numb by Maan's actions and the feeling of his long slick fingers and warm palm on the surface of her lips wasn't heping her in coming back to her senses....she was taken aback by his action -needless to say...so was Maan.......as he instantly took his hand away as he saw Geet's eyes widen with shock

Maan: Woh....Sorry *As he turned himself away from Geet and looked here and there, unable to face Geet*

Geet: ENOUGH!!!😡😡😡

Precap:

ooooooooooo ot oh Geet ko gussa agaya.......oh no - what will Maan do now??😲😲😆😆😆😆

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Next update...................??? duno when😕 Soon I hope

Don't forget to hit the like button!!!!! and comment plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



FINALLY.............omg after ages ur updating...........it better be long 😡........or....... else run for ur life
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ot oh......😲😲😲😲 Bhaggooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

ot oh......😲 Bhaggooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😆😆😆



yeah.........hurry up 😆.......im waiting for update 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



yeah.........hurry up 😆.......im waiting for update 😡

It's posted hun xx 😆

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