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Today's episode made me put my thinking cap on. I thought a little bit about love. And what it makes us do. And how it makes us tick. I thought to try something different from my usual style. Hope you like it.😊 Its free verse, which I am totally not used to. Anyways, read on and tell me what you think.


What is love?

Is it the tiny spring my heart gives

When I catch an unexpected glimpse of you?

Is it the steaming cup of chai you

Have waiting for me when I come home at the end of a long day?

Maybe it's the pretty pink pillow covers we bought together,

even though you hate pink. (and I love it)

Or is that too prosaic?

Maybe it's the little dent in your chin

That deepens when you look at me like that.

Like you could look at me forever. Like I am

The only person in the world, even though

We are in the middle of a crowded party.

As we sneak a quick kiss, when the children

Aren't looking. Or are pretending to sleep.

Your mouth over mine, hot breaths mingling.

A familiar comfort steals over me.

I wonder what I would've done without you.

And I realize that I couldn't have

Done without you.

Without you I am merely another cloud

Maybe I had a silver lining. I don't know.

With you, I am the silver cloud.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwww!! that's beautiful!!!!!!!!
will comment in detail later..but I loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww this was so sweet vidhya😊 really enjoyd it. Beautifully writtenšŸ‘šŸ¼
i guess every1's sort of depressed after today's epi, but hey, we all know they're gona cum together and when that happens we'll be in for a nice treat😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one n the words so meaningful and true and every line will mean a lot and is connected sumhow to who ever has been in love superb poem thanks 4 sharing
Edited by Lifu18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thts really sweet and meaningful !!
This small small things describe the love we share !!
There is no need to tel I love u all the time to ur loved ones as dese small things count a million !! =D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Vidya,this is soo beautiful and sweetā­ļø
I loved the warm and cozy feeling that you conveyed through this poem,
Like sitting besides a fireplace, with a warm blanket in a snow blizzard....šŸ˜
Lovely!!!

Specially these lines,

What is love?

Is it the tiny spring my heart gives

When I catch an unexpected glimpse of you?

--

Maybe it's the little dent in your chin

That deepens when you look at me like that.

--

With you, I am the silver cloud. ā­ļø


Edited by cutemug - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its too gud
do write more😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rozy77

aww this was so sweet vidhya😊 really enjoyd it. Beautifully writtenšŸ‘šŸ¼

i guess every1's sort of depressed after today's epi, but hey, we all know they're gona cum together and when that happens we'll be in for a nice treat😃



Thanks Rozy! I thought a little cheering up is necessary...don't like all the negativity. Need good vibes😃! Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lifu18

nice one n the words so meaningful and true and every line will mean a lot and is connected sumhow to who ever has been in love superb poem thanks 4 sharing



Yep...we can all draw on life experience, and somehow find a connect. Love is in the small things, for most part. Thanks😊!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: amail1601

awwwwww!! that's beautiful!!!!!!!!

will comment in detail later..but I loved it!



Thanks! I'll wait to read it. 😊

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