OS: Forgiveness.. the bond of love!!!

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craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

😆Hey all...

just my version or OS on how this jhagda between maan and geet will be solved.

This is my first attempt to do something i havent done till date!!!!

Please read it and let me know if you like it!!!

here u go!!!

Forgiveness.. the bond of love!!!!!

Geet tries to call Maan but will not get through!!!!😭

Maan comes in with his so called arrogant attitude.. talks to her rudely and even doesnot smileat her.. but geet smiles at him and asks him.. aap aagaye... maan shocked🤢 ...suddenly thinks.. why is she smiling!!! is she cooking up something new and says to himself.. yeh geet ka kuch bharosa nahi hai.. kuch bhi kar sakthi hai...

and he turns backs and looks at her...she just smiles and go to kitchen! and makes some indian dish.... just to irritate maan

and serves on the table.. maan seeing this starts shouting at her and she doesnt mind.. and she starts calling dadi and annie.... and as they both come in geet says.. dadi.. eat na!!!

and maan sees that no one is giving him importance and he doesnt eat and gets upa nd goes!!! and still thinks... something is really cooking in her mind!!!

Maan gets irritated on why is geet so happy and he gets scared.. and kahi woh kuch plan to karke nahi baiti hai.. aaj mein kaise bachu!!!

and goes outside and sits thinking this and that and how to escape from geet tonight and so much!!!😳

geet thinks.. kabhi to yeh andar ayengena poore din to wahan baitne wale nahi hain!!!! mere zaalim singh khurana!!!

and here maan is too afriad to enter the bedroom.. he doesnt wnat to reject her again!! it hurts him too seeing tears in his eyes.. today he is scared,...that too for himself!!!!!😉

and he goes out to the terrace.. roams here and there thinking kaise bhi samay kat loo taki geet so jaaye!!!

geet thinks.. why didnt he come till now.. slowly gets out to the room and sees that maan is not in the house and goes to the terrace...

here maan is roaming here and there murmuring geet soya hoga ki nahi soya hoga ki nahi!!!😕😕

geet looks at him adorable and smiles and says.... yeh to budhu ke budhu hi rahenge... mere maan!!😃

slowly comes behind him and hugs him.. he is shocked suddenly tries to remove her hands.... and but geet to geet hai.. kaske pakda hua hai....😛

and maan tries to say.. geet mujhe chodo aur jaake so jaao!! geet slowly murmurs in his ears.... mujhe doctor ne sab bata diya.... ab aap yeh arrogance chodo... aur mere saath chalo sone... mein aapko kuch nahi karungi.. darna mat aap mujhse... 😳😆

chalo na maan.. tand lagi hai mujhe...

maan smiles wiuth tears in his eyes and turns her round to face him.. kisses her forehead and says... sorry geet!! geet closes his mouth with her hands and says.. sorry maan!!

and hey hug!!!!!

and smiles and laughs and goes to their bedroom

In the bedroom...

maan picks up the pillow and starts to go to sofa then geet calls hima nd says... yehan par so jaoo na...

mein aapko kuch nahi karungi.. and smirks....

maan smiles and laughs with her.....

and thus ends the night!!

Please like the post and comments please guys!!!

deepzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😃

Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago

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Lyla Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice!
Very nice n romantic
Love it

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sumona28

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Posted: 14 years ago

Very romantic and mindblowing .

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saanjh rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

mazaa aa gaya pad kar. on second note geet never had patience so as soon as maan will enter she will run and hug him tight and then will start her emotional sorry and thank u.and both crying.

what say dear?

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craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjh1234
mazaa aa gaya pad kar. on second note geet never had patience so as soon as maan will enter she will run and hug him tight and then will start her emotional sorry and thank u.and both crying.
what say dear?

but i really want geet to torture maan like what i said....

i know geet wil run and huga dn cry!!!

still i hope something like this happens

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dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice post ... deepti ... & i know U want maan to feel bad & say sorry ... as u want geet to make him realise that he made a mistake by yelling at her & talking to her in that tone ..... am i right deepthi ....

I thnk tomorrow both will say sorry to each other ... as thy both hurt each other ...

but i think over here .... geet will not wait tht long ... she will try to talk to him immediately ... she can't keep anything in her stomach for a long time ...& whn it comes to maan .... she will try to solve it immediately ... & she will blurt it out ASAP finding him alone ... if he is not alone ... she might drag him .... & thy both will then have their intimate moments ....😊

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craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dewdropred
nice post ... deepti ... & i know U want maan to feel bad & say sorry ... as u want geet to make him realise that he made a mistake by yelling at her & talking to her in that tone ..... am i right deepthi ....

I thnk tomorrow both will say sorry to each other ... as thy both hurt each other ...

but i think over here .... geet will not wait tht long ... she will try to talk to him immediately ... she can't keep anything in her stomach for a long time ...& whn it comes to maan .... she will try to solve it immediately ... & she will blurt it out ASAP finding him alone ... if he is not alone ... she might drag him .... & thy both will then have their intimate moments ....😊

yeah a bit wanted maan to say sorry coz he hurt geet a lot!!!

still as in my POV.. i want both of them to say saorry to each other.. without much explanations...

and i know geet will run and hug him and say sorry!!!... still i would love to see somethoing like this to happen ven though i know it wont!!!

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dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maneet1985

yeah a bit wanted maan to say sorry coz he hurt geet a lot!!!

still as in my POV.. i want both of them to say saorry to each other.. without much explanations...

and i know geet will run and hug him and say sorry!!!... still i would love to see somethoing like this to happen ven though i know it wont!!!

deepthi both will say sorry to each other ... coz thy both hurt each other ...

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craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dewdropred

deepthi both will say sorry to each other ... coz thy both hurt each other ...

yes i wnat that!!! maybe that will happen!!!!

both trying to say sorry to each other and bothe stopping eachother from saying...

hayeeeeeeeee

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Shweta13

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanjh1234
mazaa aa gaya pad kar. on second note geet never had patience so as soon as maan will enter she will run and hug him tight and then will start her emotional sorry and thank u.and both crying.
what say dear?

I agree with you ..... infct i think maan will come to know from Doc that Geet knows everyhing as he was suppose to go to Doc 2mrw so he will come rushing for geet and she will be waiting fr him aakhein bichaye ........... thay will hug, cry, love nad kiss, say sorry to each other .