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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
i can see the banner but i hv uploaded it on PB so that u guys & i agree with Shareen dolly's banner was amazing toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good😍im drooling over it
hope now its visible to u guys
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: shareen

Hey dolly!...Umm mayb u cn upload the banner in pb!..It's an amazing one!...Just loved it!..Really really beautifully made!..😃

☺️thanku he he☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waiting for u guys to unreserve the posts
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wonderful update Liana .....
hopefully you don't stop any of your magical creations be it creative gallery of fanfiction
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: nanditasingh

wonderful update Liana .....
hopefully you don't stop any of your magical creations be it creative gallery of fanfiction

Awwww nanditathank u sooooooooooo much for liking &commenting really happy that u loved this OS&i ll try to contineu writing more os😳 love u🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aw di thats such a great OS
mujhe nahi pata tha k aap itna achi OS writer ho
di im seepchless seriously
its fantastic loved it from the bigenning to the end its was awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Edited my comment on pg 8! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Hello Everyone🤗 how r u all?? hope u all r doing good. First of all I want to apologize for not replying to your comments, the reason behind this is I wasn't planning to write anymore but then I realize it's my friend shareen's bday coming & I thought I should write an one shot for her birthday though she is inactive from IF we(me, dolly)want to celebrate her birthday with u guys through this SS yes it ll b a SS with 3 parts now wishing shareen a very happy birthday🥳 many many happy returns of the day!!may allah bless u & brings lots of happiness in ur life & get success to ur life

Pyar se na raha koi dil begana

Yeh hai ek ehsas anjana

Kabhi deti hai khushiya hazar

Kabhi laye gaam ki bahar

Phir bhi har dil ko rehta hai pyar ka intezaar

Yes love is what we want no matter what it give us happiness or pain, we still want to have love & here we will get to know how the different souls met & become one

Love is in the Air

Love u doll (dolly18)🤗thanks for making this beautiful banner for us(Me & shareen)

It has been few years passed that she lost her parents in an car accident but life didn't stop for her there as she has to live for her 2 younger brother yes Heer she is living &raising her 2 younger brother Mayank & Samrat the way her parents dreamt to do so. Heer is a simple middle class girl who had seen lots of pain & suffer a lot after her parents died but she didn't lose hope because of her 2 younger brothers, today she is had completed her graduation & finding a good job so that she can afford the expenses of her 2 brother's further studies.her 2 brother Mayand & Samrat,it seems her world is around them.the trio living happily in their little home with peace.Mayank being elder in 2 brother's he knew his di doing a lot for them & alwaystry to help di out,he really work hard & get scholarship so that his di can easily manage their house along with their studies on the other hand Samrat the ladla of Heer & Mayank he loves his di&bhai a lot but still have some childish behavior both heer & Mayank knew he is a guy of golden heart but lil immature & for that he get scold by both😆.

It was the day when heer has her new job interview &also the st day of SaYank's new college

Heer(shouting while coming downstair)Mayank!!samrat!! Get up u hv college get ready otherwise u ll b late

Mayank was all ready & preparing breakfast

Mayank: Di im ready but ur ladla is still sleeping

Heer :that's like my good bro & what did u say Samrat is still sleeping??😲

Mayank just nodded his head

Heer gave a hopeless expression &went towords SaYank's room

Samrat is sleeping like a sweet baby when heer entered shouting SAMRAT!!!!!

Samrat in a sleepy tone:kya di kitna acha sapna dekh raha tha

Heer: Sapne bad mein dekhna at first get ready & go to college its ur 1st day

Samrat:no di please let me sleep lil more

Heer: No,not a sec get up otherwise I ll pour cold water on u

Hearing about cold water Samrat's eyes get open fully & he sat on the bad

Di!!Di !i woke up please dnt pour cold water I ll get ready & ll b on time

Mayank standing infront of the door & saying full nautanki

Samrat: u love me more than him that's y he is jealous

Mayank: No im not

Heer: oho u 2 stop fighting u know I love u both equally

Na kaam na jiada(heer asked Mayank to come nearer to samrat&heer)

Di ka pyaar tum dono ke liye hai adha adha 🤗 they hugged soon they break the hug & did their breakfast together & after that heer gave dahi sakkar to both of her bro & asked them to leave for college before leaving both samrat&mayank come to Heer & gave her a chocolate for good luck for job intro

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Mumbai is a big city & in this city there is another family which im going to introduce its Prem's family like Heer, Prem's life also go around his 2 younger sister, his family Nupur & Gunjan. Prem's parent's died 2 years ago that broke Prem but he had to manage himself just to takecare of his 2 little sister's, now whatever he is doing to secure their life,Prem's dad left big business empire for them & now he is doing great,now he only living for his two sister, Nupur older than gunjan but she is lively,bubbly & fun loving on the other hand their parents death made gunjan calm & nervous she cant express her feelings properly & that make prem worry about her it doesn't mean their parent's death didn't affect Nupur it did but Nupur knew how to hide it with her naughtiness, nupur is like the life of their house

BHAIYA!!!!!! nupur shouting

Prem was reading his newspaper but hearing nupur's voice he kept it down

Nupur:What I have told u??

Prem(lil scared&not looking to Nupur's eye):yehi dnt read newspaper before breakfast

Nupur:PB!!look in to my eyes &say

Prem(meeting his eyes with her):sorry next time nehi hoga

Nupur: aap har bath yehi kehte hai

Prem(holding his ear):sorry please

Nupur trying not to look at him but she looked as Prem was making puppy faces which make her to laugh loud &they hug suddenly Gunjan came from the kitchen with plates of breakfast saying, hug??with out me[L] Awwwwwwww both stretch their hand &gunjan comes in to have a group hug

Prem's office

Prem to Preet(Prem's only &best friend,who work with prem) : meri personal assistant k job k liye sab candidate agaye??

Preet: yes they r here.

Prem: Ok then start the interview

After taking interviews of almost 15 candidate both prem & preet where tired & 16th candidate was none other than Heer

She was nervous & in simple salwar kurta not much make up & all,her first sight disappoint Preet but Prem don't know y want to take her interview

Prem: come in & please have a seat

Heer: thanks

Preet:show me your file

Heer hand over her file to preet

Preet: Ms.Heer impressive result but for this job we need some one experienced

Heer(Nervously reply): sir I know I don't have experience but if u don't give fresher a chance to prove themselves then how we ll get experience, I don't have any experience but I can promise if you give me an opportunity I ll work hard to do well

Prem could see the spark on Heer's eyes though she was nervous, she was determine about her goal

Preet: But…interrupted by Prem

Prem: Ms Heer Congratulation u got the job you can join us from tomorrow

Heer: thank you sooo much sir

Prem : best of luck I want you to work hard with ur dignity & honesty

Heer: sure sir I wont disappoint you

After heer left the room Preet looked at Prem with confusion

Prem: Preet I know what im doing the girl ll be good for this post I can see the same spark in her eyes which I have from the start

Preet: as ur wish buddy just hope u wont go wrong

Prem : Thanks for having faith on me

Preet: Anytime

This made Prem emotional & he hugged Preet

At College

Samrat & Mayank entered to the huge campus it's a big place & almost thousand of people roaming around but become nervous & puzzled while walking they got separate from each other & Mayank got bumped with someone

By God!! it was none other than Nupur

Nupur:ache hai ya button dikhai nehi deta

Mayank: im sorry didn't notice

Nupur: sorry to aise keh rahe ho jaise ehsaan kar rahe ho

Mayank: dekhiye im new here & lost my brother &was searching for him

Nupur: dekho mister this is a college not a "kumb ka mela" that your bro ll get lost here ladkiyo k sath flirt karne ka achha bahana hai

Mayank:dekhiye main aisa wesa larka nehi hu u r taking me wrong

On the other hand samrat was searching mayank & didn't notice he went to the restricted area & fall in a hole

Samrat: oh no!!!koi hai.is there anybody please help me.hello please help!!

Suddenly a girls voice came

Aap mera haath pakar ke upar ajaiye

Samrat was feeling hesitate to give his hand

Don't think too much u can trust me

Trust Me this 2 words had something on it which convince samrat to listen to her he gave his hand &with her help come out of the hole & the girl was Gunjan.

Samrat:thanks thank you for helping me

Gunjan: my pleasure

Samrat:hi im samrat & im new here

Gunjan: hi im gunjan oh I see that's y u went in wrong place

Samrat:really??

Gunjan : yes there is going some construction work for which this area is closed for us but luckily I was passing by & heard your voice

Samrat: thank god, actually me & my elder brother get newly admitted to this college we were together but in this huge crowd I lost him & was looking for him

Gunjan:oh he must b there…Gunjan was interrupted by some noise & she knw the voice it nupur she was fighting with someone &samrat also recognized mayank's voice

Samrat:thts my brother

Gunjan: thts my sister

Both eyes were big in shock & confusion both run to the corridor

In one side Destiny brings SaYank to GuNur's college & on the other hand it brings Heer to Prem's office, now let see if there is love in the air or not to know what happen next please stay with us till the next 2 parts

p.s. im not a creative writer so there can be many mistakes & similarity with the show I watch so please forgive me if this SS disappoint u guys im extremely happy that u guys bring out some time to have a look on it 😳& all so comment which is really encouraging & my special thanks to bday girl SHAREEN & dolly for always supporting. love u guys🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice os..........plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear....

Awesome Update...so sorry i'm late here to edit the reserved spot..my pre - boards are going on & i dint want to just rush-read...i love your write up...
God! i missed wishing Shareen...i'm firstly bad with birthdays to top it exam time..sigh
Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago

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