RIDE LIKE THE WIND~~entire fic pg8 :D

ok guys this is my first fanfic [thts a warning incase u dint realise 😃].thing is im not good at this stuff so pleeej bear with me😳 .me is now a double goldie[2000 posts yipee😃] and i thot i might as well inaugrate my 2000's with my first evr fic 😃

newayz its a pretty small fic jst abt 4 or 5 parts 😆 and therere some parts tht're really lame so plzzzzz u hv to bear with me for tht too 😆😳.......and if u dont wanna post tht its bad ovr here,u can always tell me on yahoo 😳 [btw this is an ashi yuvi fic for those who dint guess 😛]

here it goes.....

ashi was walkin back inside maurya after having had lunch with her mother. looking to the side she caught sight of a sleek yellow car.
wow, she whispered, as she went over to examine it. running her hand over the side she thought,"wat an awesome car!!i wonder ki yeh kiska hoga.."
almost as if in answer to her thoughts a voice spoke up behind her. "so,wacko,i c ki uve met my new car!"
ashi let out an inward groan. "oh no,not him!!" she thought as she turned around,ready with her i-hate-yuvi look.
"hey bhaggu," she said, "of course!!i should have guessed...itna rocking aur sufi car sirf yuvraj dev ka ho sakta hai!!" she smiled sweetly..
yuvi was visibly taken aback at the sincerity in her voice. regaining his composure he rushed forward n felt her forehead. "wacko,wacko,tum teekh ho na wacko??!! tumhe kuch ho toh nahi gaya? was i dreaming ya abhi abhi tumne mujhe ek compliment di?!"
ashis smile widened as she replied,"of course not psycho!! mein tumhare car ko compliment kar rahi thi,tumhe nahi...waise bhi wat i meant was..tum jaise losers apne inferiority aise-" she pointed at the car- "bade bade cheezon mein chipane ki koshish karte ho!!"
yuvi rolled his eyes but was quick to reply. "well thank god wacko ki tum pagal nahi ho gaye ho. after all tum mujhe kyun compliment doge,right? lekin nahi,tum abhi bhi wohi wacko ho jo main jaanta hun,jo yeh sochti hai,ki uski silly aur stupid wisecracks bahut funny hai,hah,hah,HAH!!"
"watever yuvi..newayz i changed my mind..agar yeh car tumhara hai na, then im sure ki yeh koi dumpster hai...jst lyk u...bahar se itna macho hone ki koshish karte ho...andar se koi dam hi nahi!!"
smirking ashi started walking away,when yuvi caught her by the arm to stop her.

thts part1 do reply soon 😊

Its good..i like the words u've used,sound just like ashi n uv!! keep it up and post the other part asap :-)

P.S-niyu dont forget to read my fic! 😉

wondr ful niyu 👏 👏 👏 especialy liked d endin 😳 pls continue soon.........me waiting......
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it is fantastic its just too gr8 plz cont fast 👏

thnxxx guys 😳
ill post the next part a while l8er n sal,dun wry i wont frgt to read ur fic 😉

wowwwwwww niuuuuuuu
really awsome re 👏
nw continueeee asappppp 😳

niyu dear......u right soooo well.....itne dinon tak kahan thi?????pls pls pls pls jaldi continue karp......plsssssssssssssssss

Niyu.....niyu.....niyu.........my dear neicy darling.....u hab got such a cool fanfic!!!! It sounds eggjactly like AY!! 😳

N now, dis is blackmail haan.......I will post the next batch of robby-diego pix from d beach scene ONLY n ONLY if u post d nxt part of this fanfic! 😈

Niyu it is so good 😃 👏 and please write asap because i am waiting.

Very nice Niyu

plz continue soon

Divu