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Posted: 19 years ago
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Update March 29th by sree

As Mamta walks, a car knocks her down. She falls to the ground, her leg is hurt. Paasers-by gather there, stop the car. A lady gets down from the car. She is Tanisha. Tanisha goes to Mamta, who gets up , but is limping. The men scold Tanisha, but Tanisha tells them that it is her mistake and that she will take the girl to the doctor. SAying this, she disperses the crowd, makes mamta sit in the car. She drives the car for sometime. She then stops the car, drags Mamta out of the car. She tells Mamta to go to her native place and not enter the Srivastav house again. Mamta says that she has decided to be back there, she will now be with Krish. Tanisha tells Mamta that she can even kill Krish, so that she does not come into the house again. Mamta says Tanisha cannot dare to kill Krish, bcos Krish is the only means for her to get the property. Tanisha says right, i cannot kill him. But a small accident, will mean , Krish is dependent for life to me... Mamta is shocked. Tanisha then tells Mamta that she gives her 1 day time, she has to leave this place. Otherwise, she will have the car steering in her hand, while Krish will be under the tyre. Mamta is stunned. Tanisha throws Mamta's bag out of the car and leaves.

Mamta is walking on the road. A strong wind blows. She comes across a temple. She tells God that she cannot take this any longer. She has to fight for her rights. She tells God that he has to help her get back her rights.

Nanda is in Krish's room, feeding him, when Tanisha comes there. She offers to feed Krish. Nanda gets up to go out, but, she Tanisha stops her. She asks Nanda whether she met Mamta and gave her the letter. Nanda says yes, she tells Tanisha that Mamta is coming back here. I am so happy, says Nanda. Tanisha says i am not happy. Nanda is shocked to hear this. Tanisha then cooks a story, tells Nanda that babuji and maaji are dead against Mamta. They feel Mamta came here only to kidnap the kid. Akshay has vowed that once Mamta comes here, he will get her caught by police. Nanda is shocked. Tanisha tells Nanda that she cannot do anything against her family, though she wants to help Mamta. So she asks Nanda to tell Mamta not to come here. She also tells Nanda to tell Akshay that Mamta refused to come here, after reading the letter. Nanda agrees.

Night. Tanisha, Akshay and Krish are in the room. Nanda comes in. She tells Akshay that she gave the letter to Mamta. Akshay asks, so is she coming back? Nanda very hesitantly tells him that Mamta refused to come. Akshay is shocked. Akshay asks but why? Nanda then keeps looking at Tanisha, then folds her hands and pleads to Akshay that he should not send Mamta to the police station if she comes here. She cries. Akshay does not understand what she is talking about. He tries to explain. Nanda tries to continue talking about that, when Tanisha asks her to go out of the room. Akshay sees Tanisha with a doubting face. Tanisha then goes to get coffee. Akshay tells her that she needs to have it written in her mind that he will surely get Mamta back in this house, inspite of her plans. He tells her that he is now keeping quiet , bcos he does not want to hurt Tanisha. He says i can go and search for Mamta even today, but i do not know to cash on other people's worries. He says the day he succeeds in bringing Mamta home, he will spit out the real facts about her. Tanisha is shocked, she gets out of the room.

Tanisha is in the hall, when there is a call. Nanda picks it up from another room. Tanisha picks it up from the hall. It is Mamta. Nanda is about to tell mamta about what Tanisha told her, but before she said that, Tanisha manages to cut the phone wire with a sicssors. So the connection is cut. Tanisha is happy that there will not be any kind of communication between Mamta and Nanda now.

Mamta is very upset, she tries to call again and again. But she does not get the line. She then decides to go to Akshay's office the next morning to tell the fact to him.

Shaina is talking to Karan over the phone. Karan is being very romantic when Nanda comes there. Nanda asks whether the call is from Karan. Shaina cuts the phone as Nanda comes. Nanda tells Shaina to convey the message to Karan that 24 hours time is over. Karan calls again. So Shaina tells the message to Karan that Nanda is here, she says that 24 hours time is over. Karan is shocked. He manages the situation, tells Shaina that Nanda wanted to Bhima Policy, and that he had promised her to get it in 24 hours. He tells Shaina that she needs to tell Nanda that he is working on it. Shaina after the phone talk, tells Nanda that Karan said, he is working on it.

Next morning. Akshay's office. Mamta comes tot he office, wants to meet Akshay. The receptionist stops her, tells her that there is a letter for her from Tanisha. Mamta takes it and reads. Tanisha writes that she knew Mamta will come to the office to talk to Akshay. She asks her to come into Akshay's cabin, as she is sitting there, waiting for her. She has threatened in the letter that she will harm Krish if she tries to talk to Akshay. She says that she has prepared milk in 2 bottles and kept it near Krish's table. It is his milk dirnking time. The bottle with blue lid contains milk, but the bottle with red lid has poison in the milk. So if Mamta talks to Akshay, she will just give a call to Nanda , tells her to feed Krish with milk from the bottle with red lid. Mamta is shocked. Tanisha writes that if Mamta goes out silently from the office, then Krish will drink milk from blue lid bottle. Otherwise, he will have to drink milk from red lid bottle. Mamta is in tears as she reads it...


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Update March 30th by sree

Mamta cries as she reads the letter. She feels giddy, is about to fall down, but holds the table. The receptionist too helps her, gives her water. Mamta then tells her that needs to talk to Tanisha. The receptionist agrees, dials Tanisha's room and gives the phone to Mamta. Tanisha asks her whether she got shocked on reading the letter. Tanisha asks her what has she decided now? Mamta is about to speak , when Tanisha tells Mamta that she has got a call on her mobile from Nanda. It is Krish's eating time, so Nanda has called to know which bottle milk is to be given. Mamta is shocked now. But tanisha has faked that she has got a call from Nanda. She pretends as though she is talking to Nanda, but she is talking to convey this to Mamta. Tanisha tells Nanda that she has to give Krish the milk from the red bottle, bcos red is his favourite colour. Mamta is in tears, she screams, begs Tanisha not to ask Nanda do that. Tanisha then pretends to be talking to Mamta now, asks her what does she want? Mamta then tired, and sad, says she accepts defeat now. She tells Tanisha that she is ready to go to her native place. Mamta cries. Tanisha then pretends to tell Nanda to give Krish the milk which is in bule bottle, as red one was prepared much earlier, and it will be poison now as it is not fresh. Mamta then asks Tanisha that she wants to see Krish for the last time. Tanisha says that she will bring Krish. Tanisha cuts the phone, saying that Mamta should not meet anyone from the family till she leaves this place. Mamta agrees.

Mamta is now leaving the office, when she tells herself that she cannot succumb to Tanisha like this. She has to tell Akshay everything. So Mamta walks towards Akshay's cabin. The receptionist tries to stop her, but Mamta goes near Akshay's cabin. Akshay is in a meeting with 2 people. Mamta keeps seeing him from the window. She is in two minds whether to talk to Akshay or not. Mamta just keeps watching him, as Akshay is talking to those people. Akshay by chance, turns to the window side, sees Mamta there. On seeing her, he runs out of the cabin, but Mamta is not there. He does not know whether Mamta came her or it was his illusion.

Akshay is in deep thoughts in his room, when the receptionist comes in, tells him that a lday had just come. She forgot her purse. She keeps the purse on Akshay's table and leaves. Akshay sees the purse, recollects something, takes it and sees inside.There is the photo of Akshay,Mamta and Krish which they took in the park. Now Akshay is certain that Mamta had come here. He runs to the reception, asks the lady whether the person who came left long time back. The recptionisst tells Akshay that she actually came to meet you, but then , she talked to Tanisha madam and left. Akshay now tells himself that Mamta came to meet me, but Tanisha did not allow her to meet me. This is the truth. He then goes into Tanisha's room in anger to ask her.

Tanisha is in her cabin, sipping her coffee when Akshay comes there. He asks her whether Mamta had come here. Tanisha is silent. Akshay then tells Tanisha that Mamta had come to meet him, but Tanisha saw to it that Mamta does not meet him. Tanisha says you are openly accusing me. I sent her bcos you were busy in a meeting.Akshay sarcastically thanks her, tells her that he is sure to bring back Mamta into the house, inspite of the problems Tanisha is creating. Akshay goes out of the room, an angry man. Tanisha tells herself that she will never let Akshay and Mamta see each other.

Mamta is walking in the street, when a woman asks her to buy a tabeez. Mamta agrees, takes one, but then, she notices that her purse is not with her. She returns the tabeez to the lady, but the lady asks Mamta to keep it. Mamta in return gives her ring, but the lady does not take it. She gives Mamta the tabeeZ.

Mamta is in the park. She is writing a small chit to Akshay. She writes 2 lines in the letter. She then strikes it off. She again writes 2 lines. As she is writing, Tanisha comes there n her car, with Krish. Mamta sees her, hurriedly tears the chit she wrote, rolls it and puts it into the tabeez hole on the side. Tanisha comes, gives Krish to Mamta. Mamta hugs her kid and cries a lot. Tanisha then asks Mamta to stop her emotional drama, gives her the tickets to her native place. She also gives Mamta her salary. She tells Mamta that she has been lenient in giving the full month's salary inspite of the fact that Mamta worked at her place only for 15 days this month. Tanisha then tells Mamta that she is born to win and rule. Tanisha mocks at Mamta that Mamta is born only to lose. Mamta then asks Tanisha whether she can put this tabeex on to Krish. Tanisha sees the tabeez, then agrees. Mamta tells her that this is just pure love of a mother for her kid. Tanisha agrees. Mamta puts it on Krish.

In the meantime, Pulwari and Banwari are in the park searching for Mamta. They do not get her. As they roam about, they see Mamta with Krish, they also see Tanisha. So they both go into a hiding, see what is happening between them. They both see Mamta putting that tabeez onto Krish. Tanisha then takes away Krish from her.He starts to cry. Tanisha tells Mamta that the time has come when she has to say goodbye to Krish. Mamta asks Tanisha to take him away, she starts to cry aloud as she sees Tanisha going with Krish.

Tanisha goes near the car, scolds Krish, asks him not to cry, takes the tabeez out and throws it on the gorund and starts her car. Pulwari takes the tabeez,keeps it with her. Both Pulwari and Banwari go and meet Mamta. Mamta tries to hide her tears, but both Pulwari and Banwari tell her that they know she is crying. Mamta says that she has got a good job elsewhere, so she is leaving this place. Pulwari asks her to come back to the house. Mamta says that she cannot. Pulwari asks whether it is bcos of Tanisha. Mamta denies it. Pulwari tells Mamta that she knows she is lying. Mamta tells her that if she knows, then why is she asking her? Banwari says bcos we both want to help you. Mamta says if you really want to help me, then, do not tell anyone that you met me here. They both promise after little bit of hesitation.

Tanisha brings Krish home, puts him on his bed, goes. Krish is crying. Pulwari comes there, consoles Krish, puts the same tabeez on him. Krish recognises the tabeez, holds it and is smiling now. Tanisha comes there. She sees the tabeez, takes it out of Krish's neck. Krish starts crying again. Tanisha questions Pulwari, who gave this. Pulwari remains silent. Tanisha then gives the tabeez back to Pulwari, tells her to throw it. Oulwari is about to go when Tanisha takes it back. She sees the tabeez closely, remembering Mamta's words, that this is no trick but pure love of a mother towards her kid...


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Update 31st March by sree

Tanisha is checking that tabeeez. She notices that it has a small opening on the side. She sees that there is a chit placed in that hole. She takes that chit out. As Tanisha is taking it out, Pulwari stays there in the same room, watching it. Tanisha opens the chit, reads it. It reads: Akshayji, i am going from this place forever. Please take care of Krish. Tanisha is angry. She smiles wickedly, then tears the letter, telling herself that Mamta's plan to handover this chit to Akshay was not possible. Tanisha tears that chit and throws the small pieces of paper in the air. She then threatens Pulwari, asks her from where she got that tabezz. She then orders Pulwari to get out of the house. She holds her hand is dragging her out of the room, as Pulwari cries.

In the hall, Damayanti and Anand are trying frantically to make a call. But the phone is not working. Then Anand checks that the wire has actually been cut. When he is noticing the cut wire, Tanisha comes there with Pulwari. So Tanisha leaves Pulwari's hands. Anand tells his wife that this has been cut by someone. Tanisha says a mice might have doen it. Anand notices the edges of the wire, tells that this has been evenly cut. So this has been done with the help of a scissors. Tanisha is now shocked. She asks Pulwari to go and lodge a complaint that their phone is not working. Saying this, Tanisha drives Pulwari out.

Akshay is very restless, he is in his room. He keeps thinking about Mamta's coming to his office, to meet him. He remembers the ay she vanished when he saw her. He is tensed. He then takes Mamta's purse which she had left behind, which he has kept in the cupboard. He throws all the things down, searches for some address. He then gets a visiting card in the purse. He is shocked to see that the card reads Sameer Malhotra. Akshay then recollects the incident when the police had directed him to Sameer's house, when he asked about Mamta. Akshay tells himself that Mamta had definitely met sameer then. I will go to his house to check.Akshay drives towards Sameer's house.

Mamta is crying in the park. She feels sad to leave Krish behind and go. She tells herself that she must be the only mother who is leaving her kid and going for the kid's own safety. She weeps. She prays to God that Akshay should see that chit wheich she had sent for him.

Tanisha comes to Krish's room. Nanda is there with Krish. Tanisha tells Nanda that she is going out for sometime now. She asks Nanda to be with Krish, make him sleep. Nanda then asks Tanisha whether she can go out after Krish sleeps. Tanisha asks her, where are you going? Nanda says that she has not met Mamta for 2 days. She has not been able to talk to her over the phone too. So she needs to go to the park to see Mamta. Tanisha asks her not to go and she leaves.

Akshay comes to Sameer's house. Devika opens the door for him. Sameer also comes. Even before Akshay could ask anything, Sameer says i know you have come here asking for Mamta. Akshay is shocked. Akshay asks her where is she now? Sameer says she does not stay here. Sameer then sarcastically asks Akshay what is his and his family's relationship with Mamta? She is just a Nanny, why give her so much importance that people from your house come here to meet her well past midnight? Akshay does not understand anything, but says that few relationships do not have a name. Akshay asks where is Mamta now? Sameer says so she ran out of your house again, is it? Akshay is totally surprised. Sameer says that she left from here saying she is going back to Srivastav house as she has got her job back. Akshay is stunned. Sameer then refers to Tanisha coming and meeting Mamta here. On hearing Tanisha's name, Devika asks whether this is the Tanisha who we met in that calley in Pune few days back? Sameer somehow manages to tell Akshay that they both saw Tanisha when they were in the valley on TV. Akshay does not take Devika's statement seriously, as he is eager to get to know about Mamta. So Akshay leaves from there.

Mamta arrives at the Bandra station. The train has arrived. She keeps sitting there, on a bench, she remembers the nice time she had with Krish. She cries a lot. She then gets into the train.

Akshay comes home. He is now even more restless. He does not know what to do. When he is in the room, Banwari comes there. He starts to tell him that he has something important to tell him. Banwari is about to tell asto who he saw in the park today, when Tanisha comes there. Tanisha at once, asks Banwari to go and do some work. He leaves. Tanisha also leaves along with Banwari. Tanisha goes out.

Akshay then tries to search all the papers and files of Tanisha so that he gets any lcue. He throws all the files out, into the bed, he does not get anything relating to Mamta there. As he is frustrated, he sees a papaer peep out of a file. He takes it,sees that it is a receipt given for buying a train ticket for Shahedpur. He then starts to throw it back to the bed, when he realises that it is the native town of Mamta. Then he reads the paper carefully. He sees that the ticket has been bought in the name of Mamta. He is shocked. He tells himself that this means Mamta is leaving this cit and going. He looks stunned, as Pulwari and Banwari stand near the door. They both say in chorus that they knew that Mamta is going. Akshay screams at them, tells them that they should have told him earlier. Banwari says i came to tell you only that, but Tanisha did not allow me to speak. Akshay then realises that Tanisha is behind all this. Pulwari tells Akshay that they know that Mamta is leaving this place forever. Akshay says she cannot leave, i will get her back. He checks the time, he tells himself that there are 10 more minutes for Mamta's train to start. He needs to go soon and stop Mamta. He rushes. Pulwari and Banwari are happy and pray to god.

Mamta is inside the train, when Tanisha comes there. Tanisha tells Mamta that the chit she sent for Akshay did not reach him, instead, reached her and she tore it to pieces. Mamta is crying. She asks Tanisha whether she could not see that chit as the love of a mother for her kid. She asks Tanisha , dont you have feelings? Tanisha is in all smiles. Mamta tells Tanisha that if God plans to unite me and Krish, there will come a day when Krish will come to me. You cannot stop things from happening, as everything happens based on God's wishes. Tanisha smiles wickedly. Mamta prays that Krish should be alright and he should be happy. The train is about to start. Mamta is in tears.

Akshay is driving the car frantically. He gets caught in the trafiic, so stops the car, runs to the station. The whistle is blown and the train starts moving slowly. Mamta keeps praying for Krish, with folded hands and her eyes closed. Tanisha is still standing there, seeing the train go slowly. As Mamta is praying, a hand comes and holds Mamta's hands. Mamta opens her eyes, is shocked. Tanisha who sees thep erson from outside the train, is shocked too. Mamta looks in the direction of the person. The person is Akshay. He holds Mamta's hands.


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