Chup tum raho- New PRIDA SS Update on Pg 24 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven

awesome sia di....👍🏼

prithvi is surely a dhakan...😆

continue soon...

wanna read more 😊


-mah



thanx for liking it dear

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: petunia121

Sia !!

Hey Great concept !!
Married for Two years and stillllll......... 😉😆
Well we LOVE reading about these two " DHAKKANS " and Greater their " DHAKKANGIRI " the more we Love them ........don't we....... 😛😃
Amiya


Glad u lliked the concept but to tell u the truth its just a very short OS something like just a scene
hope u like the other parts too
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter- 2


The Kiss


The MIL talks to her son too..

Prithvi then gets back to there room ,he finds her sitting on the bed wid her laptop on da lap doing some work seriously.As he enters there was this air of awkwardness,she remembers what her MIL said n the same at his end what his Mother said to him.He gives her a look n a little smile and freshens up

Both stole glances as they both ate ...this happened for some days
His Mother was a constant reminder though ...one day he gathers his courage and spoke to her in da nite, He sat beside her and says 'Damini i want to speak to you '

"Yes" Prithvi?
"Woh daminiii...hm..." Prithvi hesitantly
"oh woh prithvi singhals ki file mere paas hee rehgayee i'll give it to u in a while" she cuts.

Prithvi grins

"Yeh baat nia i want to talk to u something v personal to both of us"says Prithvi.

she realizes that its time they had to face each other and it was a little embarrassing for both of them

"Damini kya Maa ne tumnse kuch pucha? "he asks
"kis baare main?"confused Damini

" hh humare baren main" he says

she looks away
"hm woh hhhan ..i im sorry... " blurts Pri

"sorry? " a confused wife replies😕

"I knw this shouldn't b like that" he continued
" i mean a relationship must have some base we neither have love,frndship or any thing for each other"cries Pri
"I guess kaheena kahee im responsible for that its nt like im nt a man i mean I AM A MAN!😲
i mean u know what i mean right damini?" he continues
"
han i got u" a Damini little hesitantly

"hmm wat do u think a couple does?" Prithvi

"wat?" exclaims Damini
"i mean ,oh come on now u cant be so dumb" Prithvi
she then realizes on wat he was referring and blushed deeply ☺️yet that was awkward then he says i guess we should start a fresh...darr say hee sahee lets give our relationship a name she gives a knowing look hmm..

Then he comes closer to her she gulps...he comes even closer to her and bends touches her skin...he cheek wid his fingers...and brings his lips closer to her's...she closes her eyes...and he gives her a kiss... but alas the kiss ended in a min or two❤️
she felt shivers through her spine with butterflies in her stomach it was all dreamy☺️
"i guess there is no spark i didnt feel did u??" he rudely squashes her dreams💔

she feels a little sad...later she too agrees to his point
" yeh ua right there was no spark..." a sad wife

And after that they never think on it...

One day as Prithvi was seriously doing his work and one of his employee comes in...
"sir i want a day off..."requests the employee
"why?"pri quests

" sir my wife is expecting our first child and i had to be wid her."says the employee.

he remembers there first kiss it really did effect him some whr deep but was too stupid to hav nt been relizing that and grins in himself,there was something happening
making damzi and da staff go what!!!!! Pri had grin on his face this guy smiles too 😲

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It was December chilled out side,there was a Party on its way...it was Pri's friends Sameer's party
who didn't knew that Prithvi was married,it was there first meeting after prida's marriage .Pri requested damzi to join her and the MIL insisted damzi go ,so that thy get to know each other they reached the party

Damzi as always dazzling in a purple net saree.. with backless blouse but dude was a dhakkan he dint even care to complement her...and she was expecting that of him all the old frnds met each other it was like more of a Reunion
Prithvi leaves Damini alone and joined his friends they where some occasions he would call her and introduce her to his frnds

"Hi akshay this is damini my wife" Pri
"oh hello bhahi how r u " asks Akshay.

she would patiently reply n always had to paste a smile kya hubby mila hai
Then as she lazes around in the party a guy bumps into her and apologies too he introduces him self
" hi im Sameer...Sameer Shah and u?"
"M Damini Saxena" she replies.

PS: This OS is the most shortest in da history n plz excuse me for those horrible grammatical mistakes
Edited by sia88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
kya yaar itna acha ja raha tha n u ended there...
now looking fwd wat happens btw Sameer n Damz...😆

@ ur image... dont worry in open wont spoil it..😉
Edited by Kanchan.S - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Read 3 updates at one go..😃

Sia.. nice start.. stubborn PriDa ... 🤔 😃

waiting to read ahead..

-- Mru



Edited by Mru_bee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
hey sia !!

nice work yaar ...par yeh chote chote update kyun ??
Pri kabhi apni dhakkangiri se baaz nahin ayega ..."no sparks"..huh ...budhu kahin ka ..bechari meri damzi ..kitna intezaar karegi ..tst tsk...

hope humara luv guru Sam will act as a catalyst here ..w8ng fr more ....and this time hoping fr a longer update !!

--khwahish😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Ohh Sia, me so late in commenting.😲
@ first 2 parts; quiet an intersting OS but short tooo. btw why so much dhakkan-giri... Kia yaar koi to inaaain sudharey😊... About ur headache, i think you got this ache handlling 2 dakhans ....ek sath😉...
You doing gr8 job👏.....Will read 3rd & comment soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
hey sia di....just read all ur 3 parts
nice concept mmm...2 yrs nothn yeh dono kabhi nahi sudhrenge!

and very shy damzi i see..aur di kitna acha chal raha tha and u just stopped it? wanna see wat sameer will do to improvise to sad souls!
plzzz do update fast
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Nice..update soon n hey Sia..will u stop making Pri so much of a dhakkan...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Sia- Loved both d updates👏👏….!! Pri is at height of Dhakkangiri 😆😆….!!! Hope Sam will help Prida somehow 😉…!!! Now eagerly looking forward how story is gonna develop between these two…!! Update soon…!!! Take care…!!!

-Nitika

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