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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaan you asked the wrong question, you should ask
Who don't want update???? as Every body wants update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

ANY ONE WANTS A UPDATE???



o/ me here sweety
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Posted: 14 years ago

~khamoshi~
Part 5

He looked around & then looked at her, her eyes only her eyes that haunted him. He
could drop deep into them. He stood mesmerized seeing those eyes which looked even more
beautiful now. before they could slip ito that moment daadi held maans ears & dragged
him out of the room, he immediately turned to catch a glimpse of her face but she had ran
away from there. he just hated daadi for ruining the whole momemt. she ran to her room
feeling very nervous. that was the first time she felt his touch, through the curtain
but the warmth was felt deep inside her. His eyes OMG she thought, his eyes could
just consume her. they looked so alluring & deep in love with her. she could still
feel the warmth of his hand around her mouth..oops lips. she shied with her own thought
running into feeling his warmth again, she just wanted to close her eyes & re-live the
moment again & again it felt so beautiful. he walked towards his car looking at his hand
which still could feel the petal like soft sensation of her lips. ooh!! god her
lips he thought & that thought send shivers down his spine. they couldn't send sms
tonight. they were too much drawn into the moment to even share it with each other felt
really odd actually shy. both of them rolled over the bed the whole night thinking
about their close moment & now wondering how electrifying it would be to have her
next to him tomorrow. the night didn't seem to end. they hated every min, it felt
so long, probably they could count every sec...1.........2......................3
........................4.................................................5
it felt so odd & silly. then felt embarressed that they are being desperate, but then
come on she will be my wife...she shied he is my husband.
at 12 mid-night still not able to sleep he send her a message finally overcoming
his oddness afterall it wsa their wedding day today, she promtly replied...
the eagerness felt in each other made them comfartable & better...they finally slept
peacefully awaiting their big day.

rano let her sleep little longer so that she looked fresh in the evening.
she came back to wake her for haldi bath. she was made to wear a lovely simple
yellow saree. she was made to sit between the ladies giggling & teasing her
about how beautiful she looked, how her skin is glowing & that would add up
to his pleassure at night..that thought just made her turn pink. every part
of hers wanted to look beautiful for those eyes today. she wanted to be at her best
the thought itself was making her feel wet & aroused. tonight he may explore
every hidden parts of her, which she had been hidding, protecting from the whole
world. he already seemed to have touched her soul with those eyes, with his
khamoshi..!!he will and only he will have the right, the thought itself was so
desirable. Her inner glow was now showing more on her outer layer.
ladies applied haldi on her hands, neck cheeks with the form of haldi layer
on her skin she could imagine him placing soft kisses on those parts. she closed
her eyes & tried not to get carried away amidst of elders. her thought was
running wild & dreamy. all she could think was about his eyes exploring her
to the fullest, his lips tracing & leaving marks which she will need to hide
the next day. she could strangely still feel his warmth, how it felt when he
touched her, closed her mouth, his strong muscline yet tender touch, his
scent, his roughness his dominace on her it was surely intoxicating. how could
she wait untill their wedding night. she wanted him with her right now.
she snapped out of her imagination,

when taiji poured milk on her radiant skin
the rose petals in the milk was softly scrubbing away the haldi paste, now exposing
her skin with a slight glow of haldi, softness of milk & the scent of rose.
she admired herself in the mirror, anticipating how he would feel, it was all just
for him only him. her every thing was going to be his today.
she didn't fear his acceptance, those eyes spoke more than any one could ever
express in words. those eyes desired her. she knew it from deep with in, he longed
as much she did.

Maan got ready to leave to office. All the ladies held him back & made him
change to have his haldi bath. Maan Singh Khurana..haldi no ways he thought
but daadi insisted it as an custom. she handed in a bowl of haldi & applied a bit
on his face lovingly
daadi - challo apply this properly & have your bath again
maan - daadi I just finished my bath
daadi - sab rasme sirf ladki ke liya hoti hain kya?
geet ki haldi bus khatam huwai hain, she will be getting ready now,
aur tum ho ki ..uff..how can u go to office on your wedding day
maan - daadi I have some meeting
daadi - cancel it now
maan - lekin daadi
daadi - maan jaldi karo, we have to decorate your room also
he blushed with the thought.
he applied the haldi around himself & wondered how she would look
with haldi on her face. then thought flashed face...OH MAN how does she look
Maan Singh Khurana ko yah bhi nahi pata uski biwi dihk thi kaise hain
but a wave of joy, happiness, warmth filled him, she is beautiful for sure.
but wondered how will he be ever able to hold himself in front of her.
he was sure to be blown away seeing her. he knew it. her eyes itself was so mesmerizing
the feel of owning those eyes was enchanting.
he had is shower again washing away the haldi from his hands, muscline chest, neck &
straight shoulders his face that was already glowing with her thoughts.

after her bath. rano took geet to have a light lunch. geet really looked
little tensed as the time was nearing to the cermony. she had mixed feelings
happiness & desire of the new life, but the fear of new place, new family
her understanding with maan their togetherness. she was already comfartable
with his thoughts, some how she felt they could share a great understanding
the most important thing for her. she knew deep with in he was very nice & warm
some thing just told her that...his khamoshi ..probabaly!!!

beauticians came to help geet to dress up for the wedding. she wore a lehnga
it was richly embroidered, made of heavy, quality material and had a shade of red
as it is auspicious. with matching choli. as they tied the knot she shied
with the squeez she felt. Once dressed, ladies helped her to put on her chudas
(red and white wedding bangles) and her gold heavy wedding jewelry. the jewelry
was tastefully selected to have the bend of modern & ethnical flavour.
Finally, a red and gold dupatta was pinned to her hair and
then geet was ready to go. it took hours to dress her up. Mehendi was complementing
her dress & her beautiful looks. they made her wear the golden heavy anklets
that glitered around the beautifully decorated legs. she looked hevenly
maan was sure to go flat!!!! with his first look of his soul.
her makeup was done carefully, eye lashes , lipstick , maskaara etc was applied
in a way that it was adding to her prevailing beauty. she looked BEAUTIFUL.
her dress was shining brilliance that emited her beaming inner joy.
She was not able to look at herself in the mirror she really felt shy.
she looked truly maans dulhan now, the thought made her crave for him
his touch, his claim on her sindoor, mangalsuthar.

maan dressed in knee-length, coat made from heavy suit material almost
the same shade as geets lehnga. he had it tailor made it & insited on
having a similar shade. shade of their togetherness. his Sherwani made
him look even more handsome.

his shoulders looked broder & firmer now
to hold her close in them.He wore his tight-fitting cotton pants below of
similar shade. the churidarjust made is legs look longer. he took
a duppatta that were to be knotted with hers soon.


PRECAP
saath phere!!!

~ PREV PART 4 NEXT PART 6 ~
thanxs a lot for all the beautiful comments
To khamoshi' I am speechless'.Hope u like it.. please please tell me how you feel
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me me me me....
Oh no!!! I want the marriage soooon....cant wait this longer any more....
Edited by bono_jostna - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I can't believe they haven't seen each other yet and their wedding is in a few hours 😲 😆
I hope Maan will be able to keep his balance once he sees his dulhan for the first time 😳

BTW..you used "RADIANT" in ur update 😃
NICE!!!

Thanks for the lovely update Di!
I just love of they always send black Msgs to each other 😆

🤗
Edited by radiant_raisa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very beautifully written....i loved the entire description😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
ur description about preparations was awesome......
saat phere 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it😊
The descriptions, their anxieties so beautifully portrayed!
I wish if such a anxious, curious Maaneet scene gets picturized on them in the show. Wahan bhi toh marriage coming😉 But they are busy fighting (cute fights though) there in the show.
Next update ke liye you made me super curious now!

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
haye!!!! ...

muski plz aik double update kero naa .. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍


luv,

Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update muskan di.. Continue soon.. ;) :)..and i also want invitation card for marriage:) omg me kitni besharam ho gayi hu.. Asking for card..haha..

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