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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

very sizzling hot, keep it up, yeah the papers will cause much turmoil in the house

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-Veena-

@-Veena-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Holyy bucketzzzz..

*pours cold water on the head*

hwaaat dude.. great job.. great emotions.

Great write Mahi.. thanks.

Thanks for the kind Pm.. loves!

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84
hey dear pree no problems at all to day is sunday...I loved it fully very good dear..very romantic and sizzling hot...do continue...

@Shriya - Thanks a lot dear, after i posted it, seeing the length..was wondering if anyone wud have the patience to read it.

@Simi - Thanks dear. Your aaram se comment pleased me n brought a big smile.

@Vandu - Thanks for reading the OS and thanks for pointing Rishta.com - it is super duper cool show.

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
mahi mahi mahi mahi mahi mahi🤗

dies dies dies dies dies dies dies

fallen oln the ground n still thinking wat was this😲

superb i just loved it like anything n i love the length of the os
its just the way i like it
perfect
my sunday is made now

gosh every single shanak moment was like super duper hot

u r toooooooooooooooooooooo good
dear
extremely talented

killer os n awesome scenes

superb👏👍🏼⭐️⭐️⭐️

thnk u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much fr such a treat❤️

@Karishma - Thanks a bunch dear...ur words make me feel so special....it makes me feel as though i am gud at writing...ur words make me feel that....

@iluvmanar - Thanks dear. Sorry dont know ur name. Yes i wanted to continue it the next day. But cudnt due to work load.

@unnatia - Thanks for liking it.

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: kubare
Mahi darling .....👏👏👏⭐️⭐️👏👏👏

Wonderfully written dear and not long at all just perfect....loved it and have to say loved the side coments like Shampoo effect, maan main ladoo phoota...etc....😆😆😆😆hilarious....😆😆😆😆😆😆

Aww...so you sent Shaan darlingto the farmhouse... :( not fair...me wanted him to go directly to the bedroom...😉😆😆😆😆

So...when can we expect an other one from you???😃

@Krishna - Thanks dear. That mun mein ladoo foota was inspiration from cadbury's do shots ..:). Yes I wanted to complete it next day but cudnt join u all on IF due to work load. However the story has gone further now ..so no use of posting it....

I had sent Shaan to Farm house for some fair reason though....this is hw i had planned to take the OS.....After Shaan leaves...khanak decorates room for the romance(as in the prev epi Khanak indicated her readiness). But however shaan comes to know abt the divorce papers in the envelope...so he returns home broken....Khanak consoles him and cajoles him as shaan cries over her shoulder uncontrollably...she hugs him and pacifies him...this later leads to u know where😉

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: m4manju
thanks for the PM mahi... i so loved it that couldnt resist to read it twice though i hav exams tomorrow 😃 ... beautiful OS indeed....😊

Hey Manju Thanks dear. So how did ur exams go? @adventure_gurl....Thanks a lot for ur words. Sorry dont know ur name.

@Veena - I have to say u r queen of emotions....Thanks for appreciating....always loved the way u express ur feelings

Edited by pree.mahi - 15 years ago

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

IshBin, loveshanak, shanakrocks, JULIEL, -Nitya-, Thanks to all of you for liking it 😊

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Cutiepie121

@cutiepie121

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: pree.mahi

@Krishna - Thanks dear. That mun mein ladoo foota was inspiration from cadbury's do shots ..:). Yes I wanted to complete it next day but cudnt join u all on IF due to work load. However the story has gone further now ..so no use of posting it....

I had sent Shaan to Farm house for some fair reason though....this is hw i had planned to take the OS.....After Shaan leaves...khanak decorates room for the romance(as in the prev epi Khanak indicated her readiness). But however shaan comes to know abt the divorce papers in the envelope...so he returns home broken....Khanak consoles him and cajoles him as shaan cries over her shoulder uncontrollably...she hugs him and pacifies him...this later leads to u know where😉

Hi Mahi...

Please do post the OS that u have written. We will relive the Shanak moments through the OS

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