Jalan. AR? LoveStory! *Complete* Thank you's Pg 50

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Hey Everyone, I am Priyanka for those who dont know me, this is my first FF, I hope you guys like it and forgive me for any mistakes that has occurred in any part of this FF, Please do give feedback as I love knowing each and everyones thoughts. Enjoy, hope it doesnt bore you hehee -Priyanka
Part 1

It was a beautiful Monday morning; Monday, the day everyone dread's. The sun was piercing through the window disturbing an angelic Ridhimma's sleep, unable to withstand the intense shine on her face making her utterly uncomfortable, she opened her almond green eyes now awake from her dreams. Disappointed to see the morning had come after all today was the day she had feared; her first day at a new college. She looked at her time, happy to know that she had successfully woken up at 6.30am, she was never a morning person but today she needs to make an effort if she was to be accepted by her peers into the college. She took a quick shower slipped into a beautiful red shalwar and kameez, her long dark hair out and in soft waves, her makeup simple only consisting of eyeliner, mascara and lip-gloss. With her daily morning routine done she began to drive to Cardige College, her heart beating faster by the second as she got closer to the college, the sickening feeling of nerves and doubts was now swimming in Ridhimma's stomach, and she took glances of herself in the mirror now self conscious of her image. Only few more anxious minutes til she reached the college.

Meanwhile in the college, the heartthrob of many girls the famous playboy Armaan Malik had now arrived in his red and black motorcycle, the girls now whispering among themselves praising his looks, he offcourse noticed the attention and greeted them with a sweet smile making the girls go in aww in front of his eyes, he smiled at their stupidity he decided to greet them formally, just as he was about to greet them a loud beep approached his ears leaving him in absolute shock, he turned around to see who dared to disturb Armaan Malik, the lights of the car were on, blurring Armaan's image making him impatient to see who this unfortunate person was. BEEEEEP BEEEEP went on continuously, an angry person seemed to come out of the car, her black high heels were the first thing he noticed, a smile crept in his lips thinking 'this is going to be fun', her longs legs covered in tight red kameez followed by a fitted red shalwar accompanied by a red dupatta, her long dark hair seemed to be pushed back by the wind, her dark green eyes fumed with anger, she was now approaching him leaving him mesmerized by her beauty making him dazed. She stood near him filled with anger she began to say;

Are you blind? Can't you see your blocking the Car park?? Move your Bike! She said in an angry tone.

As the words sank, he came back to reality now hurt by the tone she spoke to HIM, to ARMAAN MALIK!

Don't you know who I am? YOU'RE TALKING TO THE ARMAAN MALIK. He said arrogantly showing his dimples.

Ridhimma now enraged by his words, thought of something to shut it him up.

I don't care if you're THE king or Prime Minister and I surely don't give a damn if you're whatever you said your name was, now move your bike. She said fuming with anger.

As she said this, the people who were around them observing the scene was left in utter shock almost numb about the fact that someone would speak to Armaan in that tone and manner let alone a girl. Armaan's mouth was wide open incapable of speech, he stood there narrowing his eyes at her, at that instance luckily the bell rang forcing armaan to move his bike unwillingly making way for no other than Ridhimma to park her car.

The crowd now restless about not knowing who she was, it was the talk of the school, some chose not to believe such thing as it was unimaginable for a girl to speak to "Mr Cool ;Armaan" in such manner.

Ridhimma now fused by anger was walking towards her first class, images of the scene kept playing in her mind, and just the sight of his face would disgust her let alone his personality, she wished to never see him. As she was so furious she failed to notice the beautiful scenery surrounding her, Cardige College was stunning with open views of the beautiful garden, long corridors and wide classrooms. At the picture of the College her anger faded forgetting the incident as she was always quick to forget and forgive, her eyes fixed on the garden when a sudden force landed her in strong arms on the ground, her eyes closed due to the fall, she could feel his breaths on her skin making her uncomfortable she slowly opened her eyes only to be staring into cold light blue eyes gazing at her somewhat lost in her eyes, his hands tightened around her waist, she was on the bottom, it took her a while to realize it was no other that low- life scumbag she had encountered earlier.

Her body language immediately changed and her angelic voice made him come out of the trance. She stated an angry 'Get off me!' which made him jerk off her instantaneously. He lend her his hand to help her stand but she refused and stood by herself adjusting her clothes, he picked up her books and handed it towards her, she looked at him surprised by his actions, she had been rude to him but he insisted in helping her? She took the books and stated a low 'thanks' not meeting his gaze.

He smiled at her simplicity, he hadn't forgotten about the incident that happened earlier but he wasn't the type who would take things to heart especially said by a girl. He knew he was at fault in the morning and somewhat the episode made him respect Ridhimma because she had been perhaps the first person who treated him in such style. He nervously began to say ' Sorry woh aa woh for the morning' taken back by the state he was in front of Ridhimma as he was never nervous near a girl but convinced himself that it was because that she had treated him differently.

She looked up at his condition and smiled, it was her first day and she didn't need or want to start it off badly with anyone therefore she said 'It's Ok and I am sorry I should've not yelled.' He met her gaze and said it was all fine and that he dealt with worse but not with a girl he mumbled. She smiled and began walking away as soon as he replied as she was late for class, armaan chased behind her baffling with words at this point Ridhimma turned around annoyed and said 'Do you need anything?' for a second there he was lost in her eyes but found the courage to say 'Friends?- I am Armaan Malik' presenting his hands towards her she looked stunned but agreed gladly while smiling she shook his hand saying ' Ridhimma Gupta', a sudden electric shock was sent through their bodies, making time stand still while they were lost within each other's eyes, she was afraid by the sudden change in her body and took her hand away swiftly breaking the eye lock.

They both smiled and walked their opposite ways as their classes were located at different places. Armaan now compelled with happiness, a sort he never experienced but did not read into his feelings deeper, Ridhimma was also happy that she had a friend, a friend? She asked herself but pushed that notion away as soon as it came in her head.

Hope you all like this FF, the index is below :) <3 Priyanka
INDEX
Part 1: Pg 1
Part 2: Pg 2
Part 3: Pg 4
Part 4: Pg 6
Part 5: Pg 9
Part 6: Pg 11
Part 7: Pg 12
Part 8: Pg 15
Part 9: Pg 17
Part 10: Pg 21
Part 11: Pg 24
Part 12: Pg 27
Part 13: Pg 30
Part 14: Pg 33
Part 15: Pg 37
Part 16: Pg 41
Last Part A- Pg 45
Last Part B- Pg 50 :)
Thank you's - Pg 50
~*My Other Work*~
Dil Ke Dhadkan AR?FF
Dangerous Forbidden Desire - An AR FF
~*One shots*~
Armaan- An Ar OS
I Love You - An AR OS (One Shot)
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AMMY12 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey frnd the start was very nice.
First the f8 and thn frndshp. Nice cncpt.
Update nxt part soon.
And plz add me in ur pm list.
T.c.
Anuj.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMY12

hey frnd the start was very nice.
First the f8 and thn frndshp. Nice cncpt.
Update nxt part soon.
And plz add me in ur pm list.
T.c.
Anuj.

hey THANK YOU. it means alot aaha and defz i will add you to pm list tnxz for the comment i will update very soon coz i have written few parts and i hate waiting for people to update lol. tnxz again yaar LOVE PRIYANKA.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey,

Good start......
Friendship is the start of everything.
would love to read how love blossom's b/w them.......
Update soon and plz add me to ur pm list.
take care.....

Luv,
Neha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha2607

Hey,

Good start......
Friendship is the start of everything.
would love to read how love blossom's b/w them.......
Update soon and plz add me to ur pm list.
take care.....

Luv,
Neha

Thank you, i agree friendship is the start of everything thats why i merely made them friends. i will update very soon and sure i will add you to the PM list. :) thank you for commenting Love Priyanka xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy dear
awesome start
loved it
teh fight and their banter was awesome
cont soon
n plzz pm me the next updates
thx
dhruvika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept
plsss can u pm me wen u update the next part
Update soon
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Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

heyy dear

awesome start
loved it
teh fight and their banter was awesome
cont soon
n plzz pm me the next updates
thx
dhruvika

nawwww THANK YOU hun, i am glad that you liked it. i will surely add you to pm list :) infact i am updating very soon. thank you again for taking time to comment. LOVE Priyanka
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Originally posted by: ashwini16

nice concept
plsss can u pm me wen u update the next part
Update soon

Thank you hun <3 yes i would love to PM you when I update, infact i am updating very very soon xx
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Part 2

Class was now done and lunchtime had come, she was observing the place when her eyes landed on a familiar scene; Armaan Malik chatting up some girls she smiled and laughed at him, he simply doesn't give up she said under her breath remembering the mornings incident. She looked around the place and did not know anyone close enough to her that she could hang out with, saddened by this fact she missed her friends closing her eyes she remembered ' Muskaan, Angali, Niki, Abhi , Rahul , Atul and especially Rohit' she smiled to herself just thinking about them, when she opened her eyes she was frightened to see a man right in front of her smiling she soon realize it was Armaan and sighed. Everyone was chattering about them as soon as they sighted them together thinking they would cause another scene but surprised by the fact that they were talking in a friendly conduct She could hear them whisper. "Her name is Ridhimma she is in my Medical class" said one, while others would just stare at them awkwardly.

She was tensed now as she wasn't used to this much attention, she whispered to Armaan "Why are they staring at us?', he smiled at her and said "they are here to see if we are going to cause a scene" she laughed at his comment, he stared at her amazed "Did I say something funny?' she was still laughing but managed to say 'no no no, it's funny because they care what a scumbag like you do?' jokingly, he smiled unable to control himself seeing her look so beautiful ,he grabbed her tightly towards him gently twisting her hand behind her back making her stare into his eyes, now locked at each other's gaze, she was amazed to see such honesty and purity chained behind those eyes that could see through hers she began to blush at how close they were, she looked away now uncomfortable closing her eyes, he went near her ear and whispered ' maybe not what a scumbag like me but I am sure they care what a beautiful girl like you does' she didn't how to react to the situation, the schools eyes were focused on them and on top of that she was now facing close- approximately with Armaan which made her shiver, sensing her uneasiness he let her go. Embarrassed by his actions in front of everyone, he looked at Ridhimma her eyes were closed, her face distressed he felt bad for losing control of himself, he said ' Ridhimma' which immediately made her open her eyes in horror she yelled 'ROHIT?' automatically without thinking.

A burst of jealously sparkled in his eyes, she didn't notice as she was consumed by embarrassment, he didn't surface his emotions as he wasn't able to digest it, he acted cool and ignored her last comment saying ' Sorry Ridhimma' she simply walked away, hurt. He began chasing her 'Ridhimma I am sorry Baba' he said pleading. 'Ridhimma please stop' he held her arm, she turned around and a SLAP was placed on his face. Before he had a chance to say anything she was furious at him saying ' You know what Armaan, at first I thought you were just a flirt but a decent guy, now I realized how wrong I was – your just a low- life spoilt brat' she said tearfully. His heart was crashed at the sight of those tears, he was wounded by the fact that he had caused them, he came closer and wiped her tears off saying 'I am sorry Ridhimma, I didn't mean to..' as he was about to continue she pushed him away and said angrily 'Mean to embarrass me in front of the whole school? Mean to make me the laughing stock? DOES IT GIVE YOU PLEASURE TO HURT SOMEONELESE??' He looked at her with sadness written over his face this made Ridhimma sympathize with him but she ignored that feeling. He merely shook his head ashamed to meet her eyes, he managed to say a confident 'No Ridhimma, I A-' , 'Baaaas Armaan, Enough!' she interrupted and walked away leaving him destroyed.

As she was walking away, tears automatically approached her eyes, knowing the real reason behind it. It wasn't the fact that she was embarrassed in front of the whole school; it was the fact that Armaan made her feel like that angered her. He was meant to be her friend but he let her down, this time she was determined to not forgive him and rather ignore him for the duration of her time in college. She wiped her tears off and went in class as lunch was over, a forced smile sat on her face while few people in class spoke to her. 'Hey I am Sapna' a girl said softly to Ridhimma with a smile. 'Hi I am Ridhimma' she said smiling. The girl introduced few of her friends 'This is Amit, Raj, Tamana and Sid' they all greeted her she simply smiled and said 'Hey'. The professor now angry told them to shut up and pay attention.

On the opposite class, Armaan sat there uncomfortably as the images of Ridhimma appeared in his mind making him absolutely sad. Those tears in her eyes hurt him, confused by his feelings towards her he questioned himself. 'Why am I sad when she is the one crying? It isn't like I haven't made girls cry before maybe it's because I care about her... I mean our friendship? He convinced himself' I have to fix this he said to himself and a plan struck him, he smiled and mumbled 'Ridhimma'.

College was finished for the day and now she had arrived at her small but beautiful apartment decorated wonderfully, in different shades of colours mainly blue and purple; her favourite colours. She went into her room placed her bag on the bed and sighed 'What a Day' she was glad it had finished. One person kept reappearing in her thoughts and that was Rohit, how she wished he was here, he always shielded her from pain and constantly managed a smile out of her but she was brought back out of her thoughts when a sudden loud knock on her door caught her attention.

She went towards her door and slowly opened it, shaken by who was standing there she immediately tried to close the door but the person was too strong, he pushed the door open and rushed inside before she said anything he closed her mouth by placing his hands in top of her lips, pushed her back to the wall and closed in the distance between them. Her eyes met his, those blue eyes now staring at her in silence reading her thoughts, she was nervous and afraid, afraid to think, afraid to speak, her heart racing quickly, her knees began to tremble, he sensed her feelings, 'I followed you here' he said softly as if he hadn't done anything wrong. Both frozen in the same condition without thinking he said ' Look Ridhimma I am truly Sorry, I never meant to hurt you', 'In fact I was hurt by own actions myself, I know I shouldn't have treated you that way in front of the whole school, I lost control but I promise I will never let you down again'. She was in shock, her anger towards him discoloured as she saw honesty in his eyes, he took his hands of her lips and took a step back allowing her to speak she looked at him, her mind and heart at battle now trying to adjust what she should do now, her heart won. She smiled & raised her hand 'Never again?' he placed his hand on top of hers and said 'never again' smiling. He took his other hand behind his back holding a small teddy bear with a love heart pillow with the words 'Sorry' in graved in them, she was amused by his gestures and took the teddy bear uncontrollably smiling at his cuteness, she hugged him leaving him frozen by her touch, she said 'Thank you'.

Hey guys hope you're enjoying reading this ff, I really didn't want to go with the "revenge" type of story so I made them friends again this time a stronger bond and there is a twist in the story coming soon muahahaa. But trust me AR love story will be continuing for a while so you guys can have your dose of AR before the twist. J don't forget to comment and like. Love Priyanka

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