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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
that sure was some hot paint....! well written
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
I love everything that you write!
Loved the mischief in this one..so cute and romantic! <3

Waiting for another OS soon! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Ahaa! It was hot, I mean really hot and cute, at the same time!!! When can we see Maneet like this again in the serial? OOoooops! I mean I wish I could see them like that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet had shifted to the main house because the outhouse was in a mess, now that they were giving finishing touches to the walls and moving the furniture around. Dadima and Maan had been more than happy with this change. Dadima, because she would get to spend a few days with them before they moved into the outhouse permanently, and Maan because...well because Geet was even closer to him. Not that her living in the outhouse mattered much because he would go there anytime any day without having to give explanations. But things were now different. Now he would have to sneak into her room without making it obvious to dadima which sounded like a fun challenge to him.


One day, he entered her room to fulfill yet another fantasy of his when he heard her in the shower. She was humming a tune but he couldn't hear it clearly. While he waited for her to come out, an idea struck him and he walked out of the room. When he returned, his jaw dropped at the sight of her. She was wearing a robe. A Robe! He had never seen her like that before. Immediately, his mind was clouded with thoughts, all kinds of thoughts about how he could take advantage of her in this state. He was brought out of his reverie when she called out to him, actually yelled at him and asked him to go out. On the contrary, he closed the door behind him and locked it.


As nervous as she was because he had never seen her like this, she was grounded with the thought of him coming closer to her. Before she could protest, he grabbed her by her waist, put his hand on her back and brought her closer to him. His perfume didn't help much as he bent down to kiss her on the neck. She had once casually told him that that particular perfume turned her on and she knew what a fool she had been when he started putting that on every time he had something cooking in his mind. Despite all her scenes going weak at the same time because his necking and his scent, she managed to say "Maan, stop it! It's too early in the night and Dadima is still awake, she could come in any time." "Shhh...don't worry about her. She is out for a jagrata at her friend's place. She won't be back until morning. So we have a whole night to take advantage of."


She was about to say something when he took a band of cloth and placed in over her eyes. "Maan...!" she called out but he stopped her by placing his lips on hers. "This will be fun, trust me. Just give me a few minutes" and with that, he picked her up and sat her on the recliner.


She tried to get up but he pulled her back and said "Please Geet, trust me. I won't do anything other than feed you." And with that, he placed a strawberry in her mouth. She happily ate it saying "Hmm..I love strawberries".


He then brought out a peanut and put it in her mouth which was followed by a grape, a banana chip, tamarind and chocolate. He mused at the noises she made when she ate those one after another, in a peculiar order – sour, salty, tangy and sweet. And then she held his hand in place as he brought out the next item "No Maan. I feel bad that I'm eating alone. Why don't you first take a bit of this and then I'll have the rest. I dare you!" She added the last bit with a smirk on her face. He was shocked. He knew that she knew he couldn't eat chillies. How did she know?


"How did you know?"


"Well, anyone who works in the kitchen would know the smell of ingredients they use. I guessed the grape and tamarind. I couldn't guess banana chips and chocolate, but they were a pleasant surprise. And Maan, these chillies have a strong smell. I wonder how you couldn't tell that they smell so strong."


"I don't know. Maybe I underestimated your smartness. But but but..let's see if you can guess this one" And with that he brought out a cube of ice near her nose. He could tell she was struggling with that one because she brought herself closer to him to inhale deeply to figure out what it was and when she couldn't, she hmmphed in frustration. Finally she said "OK now, enough of this game. Time to go to bed".


"Not yet sweetheart" and he brushed her lips with the cube. She jerked at the sudden coolness and gave a surprised gasp. Her mouth fell open and he quickly released a drop into her mouth. Before she could get over that, she felt him loosen the knot of her robe. She protested and he, of course, resisted. "I will not go beyond this I promise" as he opened the robe in the middle to reveal the skin along her midline from her belly up. She arched and bit her lip to avoid moaning as he ran his finger along the long line of exposed skin that was now making his mind run wilder and her reaction wasn't helping him in his self restrain either. He held the cube of ice in his hand and let the drops fall on her skin in a trail starting at her neck and working his way down, the cube melting quickly due to the heat of his hands. He placed drops in a circle around her belly button and waited till they moved in closer to fall into it. And when it did, she hissed loudly.


She was fast becoming breathless and was glad that her eyes were closed lest they give out how aroused she now was. She held onto her breath as she waited for the few moments that she didn't feel the drops. And when they finally resumed, something had changed. Did didn't realize what the change was until he slid the cube of ice through her skin up and finally on her lips before crashing down on them. He wasn't wearing a shirt now!


His phone rang and he stepped out of the room to take the call. She waited a few minutes for his return but when he didn't, she opened her blindfold. No sooner she did that, she heard dadima call for her. She jumped off the recliner and quickly tied her robe while she prayed for her not to enter her room and sure enough she did enter her room. She stopped in her steps in embarrassment "Geet! Sorry beta, lagta hai humne aapko disturb kiya."


Geet: "Dadima, aap yahan? Aap toh jagrate ke liye gaye the naa"

Dadima: "Nahi bete, Maan ne aapko bataya nahi? Hum toh dinner pe gaye the. Abhi thodi der pehle humne Maan ko phone bhi kiya tha, unhone bataya nahi? Chalo koi baat nahi."


As she turned to leave, she spoke again "Geet, aapne dinner nahi kiya?"


Geet: "Ji dadima, abhi thodi der pehle ki kiya tha"

Dadima: "Toh phir yeh itne saare fruits yahan par?"

Geet: "Ji woh...woh main..."


Right at that moment, Maan entered all dressed ready to go to bed and asked "Geet, itne saare fruits? Aur yeh ice? Yeh ice kis liye?"


Dadima walked over to Geet and said "Aapka robe bhi geela ho gaya hai. Par kaise? Aisa kijiye, aap change kar lijiye, phir baat karte hain". Dadima hugged her and then whispered in her ear "beta, humse kuch chupa nahi hai" and gave her a wink as she held the band in her hand before walking out the door.

She knew this was all Maan's plan when she saw him smirk as he walked out the door with dadima. Embarrassed to death, Geet wondered how she is going to face dadima now.

P.S. - OK I know I suck! Thanks for reading though...hehehe

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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
OMG Dol u never fail to amaze me now do u!!! Oh my how do u come up with such ideas awesome!!!!! Loved it sooo much and haha loved Maan at the end acting all oblivious!!! Tooooo good!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Dol, I was just hoping to read something from you and you fulfilled my wish. Thank you Dost. It is always a pleasure to read what you write.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Hahaha I love IT

One word for u girl: AWESOME
Edited by Lov26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Dol you do not suck at all!!

Infact you are one of my favourite OS writers on IF.
Ahh Maan is such a tease! I'm so glad you made a part 2 of this!

I've missed reading your stuff, I really hope I haven't missed any.

Lovely update! I can't wait till you write your next one!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
hey it didnt suck
it was actually fun to read😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
showed other side of maan .naughitness at its best one word to go :awesome
Edited by acjanfeb1 - 14 years ago

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