Critics' corner! Pg 142- Dec 28th epi

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear friends,
Announcing the launch of much-awaited *coughing* Critics' corner:):):)

There are some members in this forum, even if they are a minority, who like to talk about various aspects of the show both in appreciation and to comment critically.

Here is how 'criticism' is defined in this thread. Please check this link on wikipedia:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Criticism

To quote from the same page, "Criticism is the judgement of the merits and faults of the work or actions of an individual or group by another (the critic). To criticize does not necessarily imply to find fault, but the word is often taken to mean the simple expression of an objection against prejudice, or a disapproval. Another meaning of criticism is the study, evaluation, and interpretation of literature, social movements, film, arts, and similar objects and events. The goal of this type of criticism is to understand the work or event more thoroughly."

Here are some ground rules that we should all follow in order to make this thread productive an engaging:

1. Constructive and Objective criticisim only

2. Provide criticisim for the whole show- not just RaSam or ShaNak- this way it stays objective, and constructive as in..you cannot just say- I loved RaSam scene, tell us what you liked about it..You cannot just say you find Shanak boring...why are they boring?

3. We are here for RBO fans, RBO forum, RBO lovers, RBO critics and RBO CVs who want a better show. Everyone is welcome - this is an extremely friendly forum that welcomes everyone with open arms...except those who want to instigate us against each other...frankly, if you are that kind, stay away...we don't need no instigation...we can do it ourselves...but we are too classy a folk...and such behaviour shall be reported to the moderators!

So let us discuss/debate/analyse a show we all much love... take it apart scene by scene, line by line, angle by angle, and examine till our eyes and brains pop out!😆

{Sorry folks, I forgot to acknowledge Saaz who also contributed towards this write-up. Thanks Saaz and very sorry for being so forgetful}.

Ensoy:)
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Souma.N thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First one in 😆

Thank God you started this...much needed...I feel relieved already..

Since last night I have been seaching for some space to speak
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG..Gaayu you rock.!! Will try to give my take after every episode..will start from today itself...😆...Oh No Rasam..i guess i have to start getting used to that name.😭😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks gaayu much needed one hope we all do it in an constructive manner and enjoy watching our show
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ITS ABOUT TIME!
Thanks Gaayu!
Thanks for posting the definition!
Very well done!
it was required!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Watched the US episode last nite, TERRIBLE show!
The look on Shaan and Khanak's faces were not at all convincing
When she catches him play the titel track...........
Their looks their expression and their body language were all too artificial
I couldnt believe this the couple that gave us the most intense dramatic moments of RBO
Both desperately need a change in wardrobe!
With Yashji's movie releasing in aweek, I am really not sure how much attanetion this show is getting at this time
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww....Gaayu...a much needed thread indeed....😃
There were days that we did nothng but praise the actrs, CV's etc ...though we did ...sometimes criticize their editing...when the precap scenes went missing from the epi aired.....😆😆but truly then there was less..very less to critise over and so much to praise...as the CV's left us in awe with their brilliance...with simple but great dialogues, scenes, direction...etc without ever being OTT (over the top).
But these days....its seems like...there is truly nothing to praise...except for the actors themselves...(especially KT & Yash)...the actors (all the old and new) are not at fault...the new comers have really not got anything to work with truly..bad dialogues and scenes really lift no one up...be it the drama or the acting itself..
Hated Khanak saying Thanku...last we saw when she gave the speech to the investors she could say Thank you properly...so what was with the Thanku???? All of the sudden to Rahul?????..the CV's forgot that she knows some words in English porperly courtesy Shaan!!!...So how come shes back to square one with that word??? Was it to show us her Gareebi???? The word that was like over repeated in the last two epis?? Or her being uneducated???
Scene executions...the whole Duck Khanak introduction could have been better??? As they had never met had they?? It was not bad but could have been much better...the only good thing was the cute fight over Duck by Sam and Khanak..with good dialogues for all.....the only saving grace of the whole epi.
The thing is RBO needs to pay attention to the dialogues and scene..making sure they are not repetive and OTT...
Khanak's make up needs to be toned down...her face looks to white, caked with foundation...before the make up looked so natural..bringing out her dusky complexion...hope we get back to that natural look...then a heavily caked face..making her look too fair when she has such a beautiful complexion.
Sam needs better clothes...why can't she wear jeans shirts, dresses??? The cloths she worn in the last two epis the purple and the blue green churidar were bad ...really bad...she needs to be dressed up...better..with clothes that will look good on her...
There truly is less to praise....these days and more to be disappointed with...
Hope that the hope we all have...is shown a ray of light....or....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thnx Gaayu...............!!!!we really needed 1 thread & shriya di always keep on talking about healthy criticisms & here we can really open up.....!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ gaayu thanx a lot for this
appreciation:
1yashu/karan are very comfortable when doing intimate scenes This is for sure from SR song seq.
2.d also from the scenes that followed...and thye giv e their own touch even to a phone conversation..Both(yasharan) are brilliant actors.
3 .They are definitley in my view the life of RBO and in my point of view they light up smiles whenever they are together..
4.loved yashu's hair tied up she was very pretty and that red salwar suited her well..I loved her cute acting in explanining the hero fight scene.
.5.It was very innocent so much like old khanak. madhvi-sunil discussing shaans irresponsibility and wanting him to take up business over singign iexactly at teh time of shaan stepping into new career adds tension to this track and makes it more interesting
6.liked rahul in fighting scene seems to be a good fighter..
7.duck (jas)was much better yesterday..but needs to do more home work
8.priyanka 's voice is good..acting defintely bettter than earlier..
criticism:
1. I find rahul/sam scenes not that much appealing in terms of dialogues and dialogues need special attention in all scenes...
costumes:..
.2especially sams tight dresses dont suit her since she unfortunately lacks the figure to sport it..
3.and rahul also needs to sport something rich to showcase his wealth...(he needs to waer suits in office because
business men are expected to wear it most of the times...
4. jas karans costumes are weird at time..
5.shaan can be made to wear striped shirts..
6...Too much dialgoues on rich/poor status etc. seems , this is outdated in todays world.
7..no need for khanks poor status( i dont think she can be called poor rather middle class and middle class comprises the majority of indians ..)to be made a mockery..rahul/khanak meeting could have been some thing else like drunken brawl..
If at all they wanted to show rahuls concern for the poor they could have shown him donating for such causes and khanak coming to know of it..may be from hindi newspaper etc.,
weighing the pros over cons i liked shaan/khanak plus duck/sam/shaan/khanak scenes a lot plus rahuls fight.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic post Kubare
Her hair looks like some one dipped it in sugar syrup!
I realize its not thick and full of body but atleast it was lustrous.
It was sooooooooo silky and shiny,
Each time, he used to tuck a lock behind her ear, or when he rested his chin on the top of her head every time they hugged (when she was upset or otherwise), I used to think, he must feel "OMG! She has the silkiest hair"😳
I know they are not romantically seeing each other but I am sure as a healthy hot blooded male and female I am sure they admire/appreciate some things about the other😉
Aaj kal uske baal............ sorry! Really bad!
In an effort to make her into a city sophisticate all her natural charm is totally gone!
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