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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: amrita2010
Vru, thanks for the link sweetie.
I still am wondering how come I miss this particular thread😲 it is not wise to talk about it now coz I found it by now

This is really a great and unique concept....54words

I read all the parts in one go, and people like me, this is the best because I usually cannot read long FFs and One shots.

Great work by two masterminds, Vru, as I already know her and the new one, Sookie.

Do include me in your pm list.

Thanks Amrita..

Sookie is the Best...she usually writes..long tales..but this 54 words..are succinct and vivid at the same time

they say a picture says thousand words..here..54 words..creates 25fps motion picture that was for 30 minutes or more...

love her..and thanks for liking her work and my replies to her..

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

@jasw: Yeah, I have stopped watching. My patience level is very, very thin :D Thanks :-)

@Deej: Thanks a lot for your comment :-). Thanks for explaining my writing in a real nice fashion. Yeah, this was the time when I liked the show too.

@whitepearl: Thank you so much!

@Rush: Eh? What sharing space? :-) I think my idea is most awesome where I give links to two perspectives of the same episode. One in 55 words and the other in verse format. :D

@Fatima: Thanks :-)

@Newdime: Thank you! Welcome back to you too :-)

@afsha: Thanks :-)

@Sur: I am not reminding you again :D Oh yeah! Awesome team (Am taking full credit for the idea :D)

@amrita: Thank you very much for the comment and welcome to the thread! Sure will PM you soon :)

@Deepa: Thank you! :-)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

7. Choice

A face covered in turmeric colored veil bar the brown eyes created havoc to his ritualistic behavior with people. The implication of his words stung her ego and the beliefs she held. In their game of push and pull he pushed her a little too far.

The reverberation of an almost-slap deafened his ears.

Next part updated - Daddy

Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Hey Sookie..

obviously you need to take full credit..without 54 words..there is no verse..to talk about..
thanks hun...

Choices are difficult yet simple
she chose to fight rather than crumple

a raised hand though stopped
anger midway cropped

the give and take
was choice to make

but more than them
fate was causing mayhem

entwining beyond their choice
a conscience beyond their voice

sorry lost the thought..between night and day...

found my words again.... but yes...

Edited by -RushTrip- - 14 years ago

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Loved the choice of words in Choice, Sookie. Too good!

Rush, this was awesome!

" they say a picture says thousand words..here..54 words..creates 25fps motion picture that was for 30 minutes or more"!

👏 to both of you!

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

It's not just 54 words; it's the journey that repeats all over again. It's amazing that 54 words give the niceties in just mare of few seconds.👏

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Hey sookie*
Its been an era i have been to IF and OMG what i see,,
This one absolutely left me speechless..
U always surprise me with u r creativity dear...and now geet n 54 words combination seems to be speaking more than it seems to be..the whole story of geet..as someone pointed out..the whole journey of geet !!
Vrushali (hope i got u r name right dear..)..u write toooooo good :) ..ur poems they just compliments to sookie's verse and makes it more interesting to read..i have to say i am looking forward to read your work soon..god bless :)

Loved this thread..
Good wishes to both of you....
Sri:-)

P.S:Sookie..Hope to catch up u r stories i missed soon and thanks a lot for all ur PM's :)

Edited by sri_4 - 14 years ago

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

I wish I could find a better way to appreciate this....to show my love for this....May be I shall find 54 words to comment on these soon

Its really glad to experience the journey with both of you, right from the beginning...

It feels more like that they are happening right in front of my eyes

Great work by both of you!

Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

You guys leave me speechless every time I read this....
the first 54 words are so apt that it transports you to a different world
and then the verses below .....add to the beauty of that world !!!

Splendid !

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Absoluv

@Absoluv

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Choice

A face covered in turmeric colored veil bar the brown eyes created havoc to his ritualistic behavior with people. The implication of his words stung her ego and the beliefs she held. In their game of push and pull he pushed her a little too far.

The reverberation of an almost-slap deafened his ears.

SUPERB......EXCELLENT...How do u convey so much in so few words....loved it Sookie....😊

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