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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Wow! Love this thread! Sookie & Rush both of you are awesome in your respective way! Just saw the saturday episode everything seems to be so good! Going by your sequence we'll get the 54 words for Saturday episode in a very long time!😃 Nevertheless, I'm loving this journey!

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whitepearl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Spellbound ...U are very good. These initial stages marks the inception of an end to an ignominious act of betrayal.

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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Sookie, I am really inspired by your idea and thought of writing a 54 word analysis on Sat episode.😃 Will wait for your artistic take when the time comes!😊 I'm just overwhelmed by yesterday's episode and can't get it out of my mind .. so please bear with me and my attempt!! 😆

Saturday episode was crackling with passion with just feather light touches, with caressing and intoxicating eyes, with husky drawl of Maan.

Our innocent, vulnerable Geet had no armour against this soft seduction! Amazing was the sensuous love portrayed by romantic and teasing Maan.

Geet couldn't help but follow her Pied Piper for the punishment!

Edited by jasw - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: mayurrocks
Sookie!!! 🤗 👏 Speechless!!

Brightness consumes her in its womb and he breaks her fall.
Loved it!!!! 😊 You know, when you write this, I can actually visualize that day and the scene where she passes out and he lifts her up. She's in yellow dress and gosh, what makes me even more contented is that Maan who had been unintentionally rude to Geet that time, now considers her as his oxygen, his life! Also that first impression is not always the last impression! 😊 Its the time that counts the most.

Took the words out of my mouth 😆

Once again fantastico Sookie 👏

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Pebblez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

So this is like, a break from your Sookie-who-never-can-stop-writing-the-longest-chapters-ever to a minimum 54 word 'story' you call it. Hmmm, are you practicing specificity? :P let me know too, I'd love to know whether it works or not!!

No but, jokes apart, this is really great..even though I'd rather prefer to not have flashbacks from the drama when I read the lines, I'd want to have a totally unknown image of it...but still, these are verrrryy intriguing still. And I am thoroughly impressed, like always :) you should WRITE a lot *cough* more! (you know what um talkign about!) :P

Till now, Rabbit's favorite. Let's see whether you outdo yourself or not :D laterz, freak.

Kiran

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Bublish

@Bublish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

i dont knw wht to say ... speechless..

thx 4 pm dear..

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

the last line reminded me of that scene in the show and Maan's irritation too...........................nice one..............

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Sookie it was vivid...but then the scenes are ingrained in our heads..and you just brush away the dust that seemed to have gathered on that memory...

He stamped his right
but lost all his might

when she saw bright
spoiling his fight

his words had bite
but he picked her up alright

the aggressor was left limp
with concern and a blimp

that spoke of what he felt
for her and her family was to be dealt

it was a start of journey
the heat before the fire surely

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

@blueflames: Yeah! Thank you very much :-)

@mayurrocks: Thank you very much! Yeah, that was the scene. I don't know what they are now though :-)

@sukklover/Tama: Thank you very much!

@pixie: Thanks.

@Fatima: I think Maan doesn't care much for civilities. But it doesn't mean that he is unkind. Unfortunately that's not Maan anymore. :-)

@afsha: Thank you very much!

@ammygurl: Thanks. Will get to that in few days I guess.

@jasw: Thanks! Vrush is pretty awesome, no? I think this thread has gone a notch higher because of it. :-) Sorry to disappoint you but I dont think I will be writing anything post Pari much.

@whitepearl: Hmm...that's interesting :-) And yeah, you are right.

@Nadia: Thank you very much :-)

@Kizza: :D I am soooo busssyyyy you know...that's why writing tiny stories. Guess what kiddo? It works. Its fun to write without being *cough* preachy *cough* . So yeah, I'll see how long its gonna take for me to get there (Freak? Me?? Come on! You cannot judge me that way just because of Grimm.)

@Bublish: Thank you very much :-)

@Deepa: Thank you very much.. Yep, it was meant to remind people :-)

@Vrush: The earlier scenes were something I truly liked. This was one of the times where characterization of Maan was made clearer. He is a guy who doesn't care a shit about emotions and all that jazz. But it doesn't mean to say that he is unkind. People often mistake his arrogance and rudeness to being something else.

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

6. Geet

"Geet"

His voice resonate every nook and corner and the owner of the two syllables stands in front of him. Her patience dies with his words and she rips the paper.

Shards of paper strew around them like the way dreams did in her life.

Only, dreams didn't come in duplicates, her mind mocks.

Next part updated - Choice

Edited by -Sookie- - 15 years ago