~*Fan Fic-Tu Muskura*~ *LAST PART, PART 16 PG 93* - Page 65

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wonderful update.. luved sasha n geet's plan.. the letter was really nice.. cant wait for the next part.. do continue soon
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Originally posted by: nilu710

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~*NOTE*~

Hey everyone enjoy this part....I hope you all like it...but do listen to this song that I posted in the fan fic...it brings a whole new impact to the part....ok now ENJOY!!!!!

Part 16


LAST PART


"Aapke Geet" was the last line on the letter that she had written to him....with that one line Geet's love was shown to him...Maan slowly placed the letter back in the envelope and head to the door when his eyes were stopped by another letter this time in a red envelope hanging on the door...he slowly opened the letter with a grin on his face...

Suniye

ek aur baat mujhe kehna tia aap se....once you enter this room... aape Geet yaha nahi hogi... instead aapke dulhan aapka intezaar karo gi...

jis tara humari shaadi huwi thi.... aapko apni dulhan nahi mile

par aaj tumhari dulhan tumhare intezar kar rahi hai

Maan stood there frozen reading the letter thinking to himself how lucky he was to have a wife like Geet

Maan: Geet yeh sab mere liye....tonight is truly a new start to our relationship

He said as he folded both letters and put them on the end table that was sitting in the hall....Maan took a deep breath as he slowly opened the door and was stunned at what his eyes saw...

The entrance had red and white rose petals scattered on the floor...the lights in the room where dimly closed as candles where enchanting the room with its sent and pure innocents....he made his way to the bed room where the path of roses where leading him....

Finally his eyes drifted to the most beautiful sight he had ever seen....the bedroom was covered with flowers...every corner was filled with love....his eyes made their way to the bed....there he saw the bed covered in flowers and a canopy of flowers hanging around the bed...

Then he saw her....the most exquisite beauty he had ever seen...Geet....His Geet

Geet was sitting in the middle of the flower covered bed waiting for Maan....her heart was pounding as she could hear his footsteps coming near the bed....he softy moved the flower draping from the bed as he sat next to her....Geet was now nervous and curled her toes as she brang her feet closer to her....

Maan sat there enthralled with her beauty...amazed that she was doing this all for him....he slowly reached out toward her and lifted her ghunghat and placed it on top of her head.....Geet was shy and couldn't make eye contact with him...she kept looking down smiling as she could feel her face burning up....

Maan cupped her face in his hands and raised her head so that she was looking at him....he leaned in towards her and tenderly kissed her forehead....she was melting in his grasp

Maan: Geet (he said delicately) aaj tumne mere jaan laliye thi...mujhe laga tha ki tum....

He tried saying but not able to complete the sentence

Maan: but know that I know you are alright...I just wanted to tell you... Geet tum meri jaan ho....I LOVE YOU

He leaned in to kiss her soft lips.....those same lips that that he was dying to kiss....as he made his way to them Geet quickly got off the bed and ran to the window....her heart was pounding...she was losing control of herself...Maan saw the affect that he was having on her and smirked as he walked towards the window....

He made his way towards her...she had her back towards him as she was staring at the night sky...he gently brang his hands up to her waist and tenderly trailed her back as he made his way up to her duppata.....he gently took off her duppata and threw it on the floor....Geet slowly backed into him resting her body on his....she could feel herself about to fall any minute...

He softly kissed her neck as he turned her around to face him...she had her head lowered not able to look into his eyes....

Maan: Geet... jab tum sharam aati ho...toh bahut khoobsurat lagti ho

He said as he removed her hair that was in a tight bun and let her silky hair fall down....

Geet: Maan

She said shyly but was not able to say anything else...she tried to run away but he grabbed her wrist and pulled her back to him...smashing her into his hard chest....he turned her around but she quickly hugged him tightly...he could feel her chest heaving heavily....they both loved the affect they had on each other....Geet slowly backed away...they where lost in each other's eyes....Maan gently lifted her up and walked towards the bed...he placed her on the bed tenderly....as he ripped his shirt off....exposing his Greek god body


LISTEN TO THIS SONG TO GET THE WHOLE IMPACT!!

Shabd-Chahaton Ka Silsila

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xTDrsgWJyZM[/YOUTUBE]


Geet had her eyes closed.....but she could feel Maan by her feet....He slowly took off each of her Payal's as he kissed her ankles....his hands affectionately made their way up her legs and stopped once they reached her waist....with one swiftly move he took the delicate gold jewel that was wrapped around her waist and ripped it off and threw it to the floor....Geet breathed deeply as his lips pressed up against her waist kissing her softly.....he softly kissed his way up to her neck...Geet felt butterflies in her stomach as Maan took her necklace in between his teeth and ripped it off of her....he slowly and softly kissed her neck....her hands made their way around his back....her nails dug into his back as he ripped her necklace....he slowly kissed her throat as he made his way to her ears....as he took her earnings off he gently kissed her ears....he brang his face close to hers as he looked into her eyes...her eyes where enchanting....he made his way down to her lips with a smirk on his face....but Geet turned her body around....

Her back was towards him as she smiled into her pillow....Maan wasn't about to give up...he got a naughty smile on his face and he moved her hair to one side....Geet was wearing a backless blouse and was securely tied by two dori's....he delicately traced his way down with his fingers..causing a rush in her system....he brang his lips close to her ear

Maan: (whispering) don't say I didn't warn you

He said as he kissed her cheek....Geet was blushing....Maan gently wrapped the dori's between his finger and tugged them open....revealing her now bare back....he kissed every inch of her back...his hands wrapped themselves securely around her waist...his fingers tingled her every senses....he clutched her waist and roughly turned her around to face him.....he made his way on top of her kissing her everywhere....her hands where back on his bare back and as they slowly made their way into his hair...

As he kissed her shoulder and neck he looked at her with a mischievous grin

Maan: ijazat hai

Geet looked down and smiled...Maan knew it was finally time to feel those lips...he leaned down and tenderly kissed her lips....the kiss drastically turned passionate as they both finally had each other....Geet could feel a tear fall from her eyes...today she was truly Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana...as Maan pulled away from the kiss he took her bottom lip and bit it gently...Geet shied away...but before she could think his lips where passionately kissing her again...they slowly rose to their knees not breaking away from the kiss....Maan started to kiss her neck as Geet hugged him tightly and placed her head on his shoulder...Maan slowly placed his hands on her blouse and took it off...now there was nothing between them....Maan had his arms wrapped around Geet as he passionately kissed every inch of her...Geet went weak in the knees and feel back on the bed....Maan smiled at her and slowly moved on top of her bringing the covers over top of them and holding her hands that where grasping the silk bed sheets....

Geet: I Love You Maan

She said breaking away from the kiss

Maan: I Love You Too Geet

He said as he smashed his lips against hers...Tonight was the start of their new life...nothing and no one could separate them now...in all senses they become one soul....that night they where Do jisms ek jaan

Edited by Maaneet-Fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update ............. ☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg omg
that was amazing
do continue
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeee Part dear....really loved it....do pot the next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update☺️☺️......at last maan and geet got what they want😊
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Sweet update!!! 😉

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