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Posted: 14 years ago


love u love love u ❤️🤗❤️.........pls pls pls update truly magical as well 😉😉😉😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

deewangi
part 2

geet - I really love u
maan fluttered his eyes in disbelief and scared if it was another prank played
by his friends. but her eyes looked so geniun. he was terrified to even
look back at her. he immediately looked down. she moved closer to him
he inched back looking at her black shoes stepping towards him
he was cornered to the wall she raised her hand around him & locked her hand behind
she patted a kiss on his cheek very softly & said I love u a lot.
he closed his eyes tight as tight he could. his hand was cold & he felt shaken from
his soul. he for the first time felt some thing like this in his entire life.
she smiled & shied, excited enthu, like she have found what she desired the most in
her life. she kissed & bounced back & jumped..oh its u, its really u
she held his arms & kept jumping shaking him along with her.
he opened his eyes one at time, she was bouncing in air with her pony tail
following her thats the first time he looked at her fully from top to bottom
she was so truly excited & delighted. she was probably only reaching untill his neck
she wore blue skirt reaching to her knee level her tie was not in place, she looked
really young. not sure how young. he was not sure what stuck her that she said all that
& she was so excited about it. she made too much of noice catching the sir's attention
from maan's class, he came out & shouted at both of them.
geet - main chilla rahi thi yah nahi, so don't shout at him
maan looked down
sir was pissed of & shouted at geet - which class & what are u doing here
geet - 6th B
maans jaw dropped open..6th
sir - who is ur class teacher
geet - Ms sunita
sir dragged her to the staff room
she looked behind waiting for maan to look at her, he did she smiled & winked back at him
he looked down immediately.
as the sir had left the class room, his peers came out & started troubling him
peer 1 - who was that?
peer 2 - girl frd?
peer 1 - iski GF kaise ho sakti hain
peer 3 - bhuat hot thi, did u see her skirt was shorter than usual girl
maan was getting irritated for some reason when they said something about geet.
he was used to them bulling him but he could not able to take that.. he clucthed his fist
peer 4 - wow maan ko gussa bhi aata hain
peer 2 - phir chale jata hain
they all laughed out loud
peer 1 - guys guys did u notice when she was jumping her skirt almost
maan gave punch straight on his face not letting him complete.
peer 1 broke his nose & fell down & had to be rushed to the hospital. others just moved away
from him not sure what he may do next. maan just ran to the wash room & washed his hand
which still had the blood stain of his peer. he got scared & sat in one of the cumoard
and feared but was not guilty for what he did. daadi was called & they looked for maan.
the teacher found maan sitting cuddled up in the loo.
principal to daadi - Savitri devi, even with his poor performance in studies we always
supported him & tried to promote him to the next class, lekin gunda gardi & all
totally not acceptable.humari school ki bhi koi reputation hain.
daadi was really shocked maan never even talks back to any one then raising his hand was
beyound her imagination. she was still trying to register maan actually punched some one
that too this hard that he had to be taken to the hospital.
principal - waise bhi yah aakhri saal hain uska yanha pe.
daadi - but why do u say that. u do have up till 11th & 12th right
principal - thats if he passes 10th right, his performance is been consistently poor
I don't think he will even clear his pre-boards
daadi gave a disappointing look to maan who stood their looking down.

geet mam totally unaware of all this ran to her friends after the class &
hugged them screaming loud. main usse mili, yes yes yes I met him
ridz - kya bol rahi hain
geet - hain yaar I met him, I really did
meera - are u serious
geet turned them around threw the papers up
arohi - phir kya huwa
geet - I told him I love u & kissed him
i touched him, he was so cute, so sweet
arohi - usne kuch nahi kaha
geet - nahi, he just kept watching me
ridz - what was his reply?
geet - what reply?
meera - stupid u said I love u what did he say
all of them were really curious
geet - yaar maine to reply poch hi nahi
arohi gave her a wak - tu pagal hain kya?
geet - actually I don't care all I know is love him a lot.

precap
finally caught the stocker!!
~NEXT PART 3~
please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ahhhh......so so cute geet is !!! awsome update yaar...actually she proposed .... i think maan ll be studying good from now on to prove others wrong ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaaaay u updated baji!!
Geet is sooo cute, and Maan is really sweet!!! 😳
Geet actually told Maan she loves him awww 😳, and he was soooo quiet, it was soooo sweet of him to hit that boy because of what he said about Geet!!
Hope Maan does really well in his studies and proves everybody wrong!!! :)
Geet and her friends part was really sweet, and how Geet didn't even ask Maan what he feels for her 😆 😳!!
Can't wait for the next update, excited..!
Plz update soon baji! x
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woah too good :-)
I woke up this morning and was looking for an update on Madhoshi :-{
Sach me I miss that story
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hahaha...this was soooo cute
He punched his classmate becoz he was talking shit bout his Geet...cool that trait of his is still there!
Thanks a lot for the update
Geet as usual is jhalli..haha...cute
loved it loads
please update soon
love you
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG..loved the update
Awesome..
Awww...Geet is soooo cute
Hehe she told him she loves him and kissed him..aww
Heheh Wow maan punched that kid..lol
Loved it
Awesome part.
Update asap
Thanks!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyy di!!
omgg firstly, congrats on your new ff and needless to say, i am sure it will turn out be another masterpiece, just like all others!!😉....and its good you made one or else i was ready to pester you nonstop for starting another since you deprived me of two now!😆
awww geet is mad cool in your ff and maan, ultra adorableee....though it is kinda hard to imagine msk being bullied😆...but heyy he hit someone, soo he is still our angry young man!😉.....aww geet's i love you was just just sooo lovablee!!😳😆....i lovee how she is a carefree kinda person in this ff and maan standing up for her already was shoo sweet!!
pweez continue soon!!....dil maange more!!😆
lovee you!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update..!!!
Aww geet is soo cute..!!!
And maan is soo sweet..!!!
He punched his classmate lol..!!!
Nobody will dare to mess with him now😉
Cant wait for the next update..!!
Please continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update, hai msk not so good with studies, maybe geet will help him, or maybe he just wants to be dumb but he is very very smart, cant wait for the next update, thanks you are just too good

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