Unbreakable Bonds [Mayur and Gunur] : Pt 4 : Pg 32 - Page 19

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Mahi...update kar lo na... Mera intezaar kar rahi thi kya?

nahi mera bhi kar rahi thi
GM tum aajkal bahut bigad gayi ho
kab update karogi
Nivi tumhari Laadli na bahut bigada gayi hai
samjhao warna main dant dungi achhe se
Dono Mahi milkar vaise hi bahut jugalbandi kar rahe hai
aur Mahi 1 - kaha hai update kal kal karte kya ye sal nikalane ka vichar hai
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

mahi

u are really good at siggies

do consider this option someday

i am a fan our your siggies

and chane ke dhal par ek saath chadege



Thanks yar.....hmm....i think i wanna make a siggie for u for sure.....

i wud be considering this.....

Thanks yaar........but i am not a fan of my siggies at all....

Ya sure......chane ke dhal par ek saath.....lol.....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Mahi...update kar lo na... Mera intezaar kar rahi thi kya?




Updating soon.....😆

Intezaaar hai.....toh bas haath ke theek hone ka......
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabehere

nahi mera bhi kar rahi thi
GM tum aajkal bahut bigad gayi ho
kab update karogi
Nivi tumhari Laadli na bahut bigada gayi hai
samjhao warna main dant dungi achhe se
Dono Mahi milkar vaise hi bahut jugalbandi kar rahe hai
aur Mahi 1 - kaha hai update kal kal karte kya ye sal nikalane ka vichar hai



Aur kya.....i am waiting for both......Nivi di and my SA...

I know i know......updating is so less na? Sorry for that SA

HAWWW!!!!!!! u going to scold me? :(

Dekhlo nivi di, SA is scolding me!!!! *crying and hiding behind nivi di's pallu*

yeah....we two Mahi's are very chatur....

No saal.....only few days....😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur



Thanks yar.....hmm....i think i wanna make a siggie for u for sure.....

i wud be considering this.....

Thanks yaar........but i am not a fan of my siggies at all....

Ya sure......chane ke dhal par ek saath.....lol.....



siggy for me yay

i am waiting


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur



Aur kya.....i am waiting for both......Nivi di and my SA...

I know i know......updating is so less na? Sorry for that SA

HAWWW!!!!!!! u going to scold me? :(

Dekhlo nivi di, SA is scolding me!!!! *crying and hiding behind nivi di's pallu*

yeah....we two Mahi's are very chatur....

No saal.....only few days....😛



aru di aab hum dono mahi hai toh ek jaisi harkate karegi na

and mahi is right we both are chatur

and btw mahi update kaha hai?


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima



aru di aab hum dono mahi hai toh ek jaisi harkate karegi na

and mahi is right we both are chatur

and btw mahi update kaha hai?




update coming on deepawali........
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Posted: 14 years ago

I always owe you for the beautiful responses you give me which make me work harder to satisfy you all.

I am Extremely Sorry for the delay, but i had written beneath my oneshot that i was really busy with my studies, so i cudn't update....actually i wasn't studying......but my mother wasn't letting me sit on net either......

But here comes my next part, one step closer to the mystery. I sincerely hope that my efforts would bore fruit.

Today I wanted to leave individual messages. So here it goes.

Because even if I don't reply back, trust me that your comments really mean to me.

@ divya_kandivya- Thanks a ton di....i am glad that u r enjoying....


@ palz_Arti4ever- Thanks a ton yaar......glad that u r enjoying....i am hopefully updating today itself......


@ tehzeeb- Thanks a ton yaar.......glad u enjoyed....


@ARMAANKSGFAN- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....glad u loved it and u found it interesting......


@ nivya- Hmm...so yeh ban gaya na aapka favourite? I tell you, abhi ismein bahut kuch baaki hai...bahut saare raaz....even i love fights and misunderstandings between mayur because i love to see how to recoil back.....i loveeee their patchup....yeah, see i am updating before republic day atleast.....

@ achoose- Thanks a ton yaar.......i am gonna give more clues this time.....maybe u catch them up.....Thanks a ton...


@ fanofmjht- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....i wud be updating shortly...


@Nirjhor105- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....and ya i wud send u the pms too.....ohk i wud use dark colours from now onwards...and i am extremely sorry for the inconvenience.....


@ samiralovemayur- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@Roknstarz_mjht - Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....


@sam- Thanks for loving it yaar.....yeah, i knew......i wud take care n u too tc..

@ ridds- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ ght_sajan- Thanks a lot yaar....thanks for liking that line....i hope you enjoy the further updates too.....


@ Shreyu- thanks buddy.......i am so glad that u loved the update.....hmm.....about that....u have to wait......but atleast tumne guess toh kiya....

@ aashi- thanks a ton aashi.......glad u enjoyed....thanks for liking the siggies too....

@ preety88- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ kirti123- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....and i am glad that u aren't that angry by my late updates....i am taking too much of time na......

@ dmgmjht4ever- yeah, this nupur is a way too different....haina? thanks for liking her....she is so unlike me...thanks for loving it...yup, clues were there par tum guess hi nahi kar paayi....yaar never compare yourself with anyone....u r grt at what u write....i love your work yaar....i am gonna read ur "letters to mayank" on this sunday for sure....


@DazzlingAngel- Thanks a ton buddy.....glad you liked it...


@ Alini- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....i am glad that u r finding it more interesting...

@ love.mayurarti- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ Daania- Hey! Thanks yaar. You know how much it means to me. Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....Nupur is too tough and different in this ff...hmm.....so this is ur guess? let me see if this is true or not....hopefully its a yes...Thanks a ton! i am glad that u love this ff so much.

@ dbr_kmichi- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....i am glad that u love it....


@ shinki- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ nikhita- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ taibaa- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ sariska_mnarti- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....i am happy that u love this nupur....there is a lot more to come....


@ prithvisanyo1- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....i am happy that u love it so much..

@ zarfishan1983- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ samratrocks- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....i am glad that u think me to be a wonderful writer...thanks.....


@ drfizaahmed - Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....n i m glad that u think this to be different.....


@ Aish- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....thanks for loving this ff....glad that u like Nupur....

@ sweety_ursh- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ daniella05- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....

@ taman07- Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....


@ mahima- Thanks mahi2...Hey this "so cute" siggie is actually so cute...yaar siggie gallery wont be a hit i guess....i don't make nice na....aha/....stolen ur heart? abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai meri behen.....tum toh mujhe chane ke jhaad par chadha hi dogi......Thanks mahi...i am soooooo happy after reading ur comment....love you a lot....and thanks for everything.....

@ prachi_mjht - Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....



@ kweetrockstar - Thanks a ton for loving the ff....i am happy for that....would be continuing this soon....


@ Yash - Thanks a ton yaar....hmm..so this is ur guess......glad u like this story.....and i guess i wud reveal the mystery in the next ka next update.....



@ Afsha- i have all the time for you yaar....nupur definetly has hurt mayank a lot....let's see what happens....love ya and miss ya.....



@ dua_adil -
Thanks a ton yaar.....glad u are enjoying....and i am happy that u love this ff as much as i do......mayur in love? let's see about this......



@ Senny- Thanks a lot yaar....i am happy that u liked it....




@ cool_shwets- I am fine.......what about you yaar? Yup, too much of unsolved riddles....and i wud be updating sooner....Thanks a ton yaar.....i always love to try out some new styles....just to improve myself.....and i am happy that u love that....thanks for loving it....thanks yaar...


And i also want to thanks all the like tab pressers.

Thanks for making your presence visible.

Love,

Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


^^See the above post for replies...

Part 3-

Nupur's pov-

Well I knew that. For sure I did. I could feel my heart beats increasing when he whispered those words on my cheeks. Hell, I could feel his breaths making me go weak in my knees.

Just don't do this. You shouldn't be in this condition. This is sin! This time my conscience was right. I shouldn't have had been here at the first place. He was damn close to me. This is wrong. I tried to reason out with myself. I shouldn't enjoy this. No!

I pushed him aside with all my might, but it looked as if he was mentally prepared for it. He didn't let me go of his clutches. This is wrong. Can I do anything? Do you want to do anything? Yeah. Oh! Stop telling lies.

He literally pulled me more closely and whispered on my cheeks. Mayank said, "If you are thinking that you can avoid me, then that's wrong. What you did was wrong, so I won't let you go away either. You have to repent for everything."

He still thinks that it was my mistake. It was! No! It wasn't. I thought that he would understand and not blame me. You were selfish, admit this. But did you explain him? Why couldn't he trust me? Urgh! You and your big ego. Can you shut up for a while? Nope. I can't.

I tried to maintain a distance between us and said, "I don't want to give any justifications of any of my acts. I did what I thought was right. Now stop harassing me Mr. Mayank Sharma. And please, it doesn't suits you to go so close to an employee. This isn't you."

I knew I was rude, but I had to maintain a distance. And he deserved it. Did he? Maybe he didn't, but I had to do this. He looked hurt yet amused. He said, "And all this is coming from the mouth of a girl who-" now I had it enough. I couldn't tolerate to hear more so I cut him in between and said, "Shut up! Just shut up for God sake. I don't want to hear a word coming from your mouth. Keep your opinion to yourself, Mr. Sharma. I am just tired of hearing it everyday from your mouth. Only I know that I did nothing. For God sake! I DID NOTHING. Now can you leave me alone and just sign the damned resignation papers?"

He was taken aback for a while. I knew what he was thinking. How could I speak? A girl who never even dared say a rude word to anyone, say anything to him. But then, things had changed. He changed me. He was the culprit. Weren't you the one?

I needed some time alone but can he see me contented? He pulled me towards himself and forcefully kissed me on my forehead. When I tried to say a word, he said, "It's a part of my revenge. I won't sign the resignation papers. You can't go off so easily. You are the culprit. Nothing can change that. Now I will make sure that you go through the same pain which I went through. And for your kind information, if you are thinking that why am I kissing you, then let me tell you that by this, I can see horror on your face. I love to see your eyes full of tears. Something more is left."

He pulled me closer and I bumped into his chest. He was gazing at my lips. That was it! I couldn't tolerate any more. This time I am with you. He is going mad. Well, wasn't he always? He was, but that was a different case.


With every inch, I could feel his breath on my upper lip. It pained especially when I knew that he hated me. How I wish that I could explain him everything. I wish he could know the truth. It wasn't me!

I felt utter pain when he came closer to me. I just closed my eyes to stop myself from seeing the nightmare. I never knew that one day would come when all this would happen. You caused this. This time, for once, I didn't wish to hear my conscience.

I felt his lips brushing on mine. But before her could press his lips against mine, I felt a jerk. Someone pulled me away from him. When I looked up to that person, I was shocked to see Gunjan there. Now, you broke her heart too? Yeah, right.

She just hugged me and caressed my back. After so many years, I felt the same warmth in her embrace. And I realized that even if we hate someone, whom we actually love, we only find comfort in his arms at the time of emotional crisis. Yeah, true.

She just hugged me for a few moments and then turned to Mayank. She faced him and I could see thousands of tears, lingering in her eyes. You caused her pain too. You spoiled her life too. I know that she must be really hurt.

She turned to Mayank and said, "I never knew that you can stoop so low, Mr. Sharma. You should have atleast thought once, before trying to molest her like this. You are her goddamn Jiju!"

As soon as I heard those words, I came back to reality. All the events of the past started haunting me. All that happened years back, just gave me shivers. All the things came rushing back to me head. All the events started circulating in my head and it started spinning. And before I could know anything, I just fainted.


To be continued...

I hope you all like this part.

I tried to show Mayur's and Majan's relationship here.

And now you can see that this tale is really mysterious and there are loads of mysteries and truths coming up in next update.

I dropped loads of clues, let's see who can catch them.

I would be updating as soon as possible.

Also, that this mini ff would be ending up in three parts or less.

Please do comment and hit the like tab.

With Love,
-Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
mayu is nupur's brother in law 😲😲😲
waiting eagerly for the next update
plz continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊

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