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Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you... thanks for the support and lovely comments.. so ready for their SR, sorry in advance if I disappoint you with this part.... here you go...
Part-11
Geet went near the balcony.. holding onto the satin curtains; she looked at the full moon.. the soft wind was blowing by.. she was enjoying the beauty of the full circle and stood in trance.
Maan had his shower after his daily exercise and wearing his track pant he started walking towards his room. He still had the towel around his neck and was drying his hair with one end of it. He paused for a second as he saw the closed doors.
He slowly opened the door. All the lights were turned off. The aroma of the candle already filled the surrounding and into his nostrils. He paused after taking few steps into the room and his eyes gone wild as he saw the lighted candles everywhere'
He looked at the bed and it was all empty.. he throw the towel onto the near rack and sharpened his eyes and looked around. He found his Geet standing near balcony. He took long soft strokes towards her with a tender smile on his lips. He stood next to her. Found her standing in trance.. he just looked at her posture.
The pallu which was waving with the smooth wind brushed over his face.. he slowly touched the soft material and brought it down... Her hair was put to the front from the right shoulder. Her low cut blouse revealed her glowing skin under the candle light.. He slightly moved to the side and looked at her face.. her hazel colored eyes were still fixed on the full moon. She has the sindoor over the hair partition.. she was breathing calm.. underneath the big broad necklace he saw the shining beads and with the locket resting in her hand'
The smooth wind was making her saree to stick to her body; revealing all her curves' he was unable to resist his desire to hold her in his arms.. he moved further towards her , closing the space between them and she jerked as his right hand held her shoulder and his left hand slide over her waist line to the front. She tried to look sideways into his eyes.. but then the husky whispering brought chills to her body.. " chaand pe kiska chehara thooth rehe ho? mere? Mei tho yeha hum, thumhare pass"' ( are you trying to find my face in that full moon? I am right here, very close to you)..
She tried to speak out, but he turned her around and put his finger over her lips.." shhh"'. His eyes tried to read hers .. "you already talked so much, isn't it my turn to tell you something"' she looked into his eyes lovingly' "you did all these for me, right? Just for me. And I love it..".. his voice went low again, his lips neared her ear.. she was feeling his breath near her ear..and she felt the tickling. Her hands touched his bare skin at the chest level.. she felt a current passing through her. 'you look really beautiful , just like an angel,came to earth only for me, you are mine and you are Maan ki Geet'.. saying that his lips touched her earlobe.. she felt the burning.. the goosebumps appered within fraction of seconds.. she moved her neck to the other side as she was unable to take that tickle sensation any more.
But he didn't let her move an inch. He grabbed her by her waist and took her into his tight embrace. First she stood in shock but then hiding her face in his bare chest, she circled her arms around him at his neck. Their body crushed into each other.. Maan slowly closed his eyes, to feel her completely.. she closed her eyes in trance too, and felt his cold skin'. his hands were tracing her back.. her heart started pacing faster.. he smiled as he felt her arms tightening over his body'
His hand just slide under the knot of her blouse.. her heart stopped beating for a second. She froze. And he felt it.. he slightly loosened his grip and moved back and looked into her eyes.. she was unable to meet his eyes, she looked down. But his eyes demanded her to look into his eyes.. slowly she met his passionate eyes.. but then she closed her eyes' her cheeks completely blushed.. her shivering lips'. Everything conveyed her desire to him'
His lips touched her forehead. . her closed eyelids, her nose tip' then her blushed cheeks' then a small peck at the corner of her lips.. he took her lips into his as she slightly tilted back her head , grabbing onto his hair tightly' time just passed by..
He loosened his grip on her.. she still in his hold, looked into his eyes.. she felt so shy.. she wanted to move away.. but then he held her pallu.. she stood with holding onto her pallu over her raising chest.... he came near holding onto her pallu and stood behind touching her body slightly.. and with a quick movement he just took the pallu away from her grip and made her to turn to face him.. before she could think , she stood in front of him with the pallu on the ground' she felt her body going weak.. she stood in front of him with heavy breathing and faster heartbeats.. her lips still shivering 'he looked at his wife.. her clavicle was going deeper with each breath.. his hands went behind her neck and he took her necklace off'her breath was falling onto his chest'. he went more closer and took her earrings off' her chest was raising high with each breathing' his lips trailed over her neck' she cued under his warmth.. his lips trailed down slowly'. he looked at her flat tummy.. the saree was bordering at the waist level .. he kneeled down and slowly his hands slide over her curves.. and his lips touched her belly button' she sucked the air in.. she felt a butterfly tickling over her lower abdomen.. he rested his cheeks over her naked tummy' she felt her body going weaker.. she stood on her feet only because of his support.. she thought she may fall down otherwise..
He slowly raised on his feet and then picked her up in his arms.. she circled her arms around his neck.. he walked towards the bed looking into her eyes' he slowly placed her onto the bed' she didn't see the saree falling onto the ground. She was seeing only his eyes' he slowly placed her onto the bed..
She felt shy and suddenly turned to the other side. Maan sat next to her.. and then looked at her back.. she felt the tickling as his lips touched her back again.. laying on her side, she tried to bring her knee to her chest level as the sensation was passing thru her .. but then she felt the loosening of her blouse tie on the back.. she tried to control her heart beat..
The smooth blanky just covered them as her blouse hit the floor.. she closed her eyes as he turned her towards him''. He looked at her face once and then he showered her with his love, his warmth, his energy....
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Hope you will like it. I think it is time to wrap up... but i need to fill something that I wanted to see on screen, so once I get that point , this story will end. Let me know what you think. I really valur your feedback..
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