New FF The Reason..DUTTA DOES CARE...Pg40.........

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INDEX..............

Part 1...The reason....Pg1...............

Part 2............When darkness descends..............Pg 7.....................

Part 3...........Heart break.....pg 14..............

Part 4............The dark knight...........pg 19................

New promo.....Pg 22...........
Prt 5............yeh Dooriyaan.............Pg 24...............
Prt 6............I'll always be der 4 u...........pg31
NOTE : Pg. no. 34 i'm sooooo sorry😳.............


part 7.................be mine forever...........pg 35..................
Part 8............Everywer i go .......i see its u Dutta saab.........pg 38
part 9.........DUTTA DOES CARE..........................Pg40
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Thankx lekin OMG...............u used one of the pics i sent...............awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............Thank u sooooooooooooooooo much..............🤗
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I needed one of Don Dutta u just gave me the perfect one...
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pics are simply superb
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Part 1..................😊

Hi everyone😍'''''.well this is my third FF for tasha and sach aaj tak mainey itni kahaaniyaan kabhi nahiin likhi jitni I am doing for Dutta and nakku'''reason I guess u all have given my work soooooo much love and encouragement kii main apney aapko rok nahiin paati to share my thpooughts with u all '''..chahey wohh koi FF ho'One shot''siggies yaa vms yaa posts!........................🤗

Well here's another one since mots of u wanted FR my way and not like show for my FF ltl''isliye I thought of starting this one to explore the current track in ltl!..............Hope u all like and hope I can give u some unforgettable dialogues and moments too!..................

And haan iss baar I will defuinitely maintain an INDEX!...............😆

Ok coming to part 1!................😳

It begins with the scene which will happen tonight'Nakusha confronting kala like a true shernii and accepting her challenge like a true shernii'''''..Making it clear to her that she won't let Dutta suffer anymore at her hands''''..and what big a mistake she had made by telling her the truth!......................

And while a detrmined nakku looks on''''.a little surprised yet overconfident kala walks out''''''

Nakku looks at all the burnt photos and picks up the one kala had burnt and looks at some part of the picture still intact'..a smiling dutta with his arm around nakusha'''''

Nakku moves her hand across the pic and stares at it longingly''''''😛

Sometime later that night u see a shattered and broken dutta stand in the balcony leaning against a pillar'''''and recalling all pics in his room'..drinking more daroo he closes his eyes''the pain was immense''''no his hurt hand wasn't the pain''''..the betrayl nakku gave and the way she was scrathing his wounds was making things unbearable for dutta!................

Neechey''.just below where dutta was up''''Nakku stand in the hall''''.Poistion samjh gaye naa''''..Dutta upar balcony mein and right under the balcony nakku in the hall'''''

She looks into the darkness of the hall''''..and recalls kala's words and thinks to herself-----Saab'''..aap'.aap nahiin jaantey kala taayi aapki kitni badi dushman hai'''''.🤔

Just then nakku feels something on her face and touches to see it was water''''.she looks up and finds dutta standing in the balcony'..leaning against a pillar''''and she realizes that was nor drop of water but dutta's tears!...............😳

Nakku could feel the warmth of dutta's tears and as she stares at her wet finger with which she wipes it away''''.she realizes how much pain and suffering dutta had been goin through and the worst was the fact that it was Nakku who was causing him all the hurt!...................😭

U see Nakku walking upto the staircase upto dutta's room'''.wahaan se a broken dutta staggers down the staircase and the two come face to face'''''..

Dutta keeps on looking at nakusha''''..He was dead drunk and ab had no strength of saying anything to nakku'''''..😆


The two stand face to face as the moonlight falls on them....................❤️

The two just stand and stare at each other'''''.

Dutta thinks to himself hurtfully----Kya nakku!.........Tunney toh ek pal mein dutta shrreram patil ko khatam kar diyaa''''Khatam kar diyaa tere dhokey ne iss dutta ko!................😭

Nakku thinks to herself as the two stand staring at each other-----Dhoka toh diyaa hai saab'..Lekin mainney nahiin ''''..kalaa taayi aur wohh bhi hum sab ko'''.main toh sab kuch keh detii'''''kaash''''.kaash main kala taayi ke iraadon ko jaan paati toh aaj'''..aaj aapko yeh dard naa hotaa'''''.

Dutta thinks to himself-----Dard koi paraaya dey toh itnaa nahiin dukhtaa naku''''..Lekin tu''.tujhey toh apnaa maana tha re''''Kya kami reh gayi this mere pyar mein jo tunney aisaa kiya MERE SAATH!?>'...................😒

Nakku thinks to herself as Dutta just stares at her-----Kalaa taayi aapkey saath kya kar rahii hai aap nahiin jaantey'''''.Vo aapki zindagi narakh banana chahti hain naa''''LEKIN MAIN UNHEIN AISAA NAHIIN KARNEY DEGII!....................Main aapke jeevan ko khushiyon se bhar degii''Abb KABHI AAPKO UNKII SAAZISH KAA SHIKAAR NAHIIN BANNEY DEGII!.............''.Bas ek baar'''..Ek baar aap meri baat sunn lo'''''''😳

Dutta thinking to himself----Sunna toh tha tujhey nakku''''.Suna tha'''..Saab main AAPSE PYAR KARTI HAI''''HUMEHSAA SE KARTII AAYI HAI!...................Yeh tha teraa pyaar!...............😭

Nakku steps forward towards Dutta and thinks to herself''holding back her tears and with sheer determintation in her heart----Meraa pyaar'''.toh merii zindagi hai saab'''''.aur main jaanti hai ek naa ek din app APNI NAKUSHA KO'''''.AUR USSKEY PYAAR DONON KO DIL SE APNAAOGEY!..........................☺️

Nakku says---saab''''..

The spell seems to be broken as dutta realizes how mad he was at nakku!..............

He glares hard at her and then walks away silently''''😔

This time nakku too goes after him'''''determined to tell him everything NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS!...............

Precap---It's a scene on an empty road''''Its raining hard''''and angry dutta''''.hodling nakku by her arms and breaking the bottle in his hand by throwing it on the road!............Nakku looks on as a drunk dutta snatches the MS around nakku's nexk and pulls it off hard!.....................

Kaisa lagaa?!.............😊

Jaldii bataao''''..😊

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😆

Originally posted by: shilpita87

I needed one of Don Dutta u just gave me the perfect one...

😆Oh i c.....................😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg 😍
Its so beautifully written especially datta's tears falling on Naku's face and they both talking to each other silently was just awesome.
Edited by aarathikb - 14 years ago
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😆yeh kaisa reply hai................
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Originally posted by: aarathikb

omg 😍

Its so beautifully written especially datta's tears falling on Naku's face and they both talking to each other silently was just awesome.

😛Wow sooooooooooooooooo glad u could get it all and imagine it just the way i wanted u too....................Yaa when it comes to tasha................SILENCE SPEAKS VOLUMES ALWAYS!................................👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it Sheeba. Continue soon

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