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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

OHHHHHH what a wonderful update ...esp duttas tear falling on nakku ..for a moment i thought his blood dropped but no tears are more painful than blood ...beautifully written ...well done...and sorry my update made u shy but what to do guys were pming me and asking for something really passionate for the 25th part ...i tried to keep it as subtle and impactful as possible....

and nice signature line

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ujju111
excellently written sheeba👏, the dialogues, the positioning, the tear drop scene.. the emotions- every thing was just perfect.😃⭐️👏. cvs please show a scene as sheeba has sugggested😊.. we pretty well know that u ppl do see these ffs n often follow them too😉.. hats off to u sheeba-a truely talented girl..
god bless u!🤗

Yaa cvs sheeba request u too.................😆Hey thank uuuuuuuuuuuu dear............I just hope this FF too lives upto ur expectations and the OS i wrote for u..that one too.............................😳

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

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Originally posted by: stranger2rose
OHHHHHH what a wonderful update ...esp duttas tear falling on nakku ..for a moment i thought his blood dropped but no tears are more painful than blood ...beautifully written ...well done...and sorry my update made u shy but what to do guys were pming me and asking for something really passionate for the 25th part ...i tried to keep it as subtle and impactful as possible....
and nice signature line

Hey glad u liked it...........Yaa khoon nahiin ansoo..........and plus sahii bolaa dutta's tears toh...........OMG can't bear him crying...........Imagine dutta ke aansoon mein kitni tapish hogii rose.....................😭😛

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554064

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Hey sheebz🤗......New FF too good girl.....as usual ur very Creative 👏.....Tear drop scene ws sooo good......n wht n Khamoshi me Ankhon hi Ankhon me Dil ka dard jubaan pe aagya👏 yaar very nice.....superb Dialoge sheebz,,,,,,👏

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Congrats for the new FF...

Great update... i love how his tears fell on her... and how they were tlking through their eyes and heart..amazing

Continue soon

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Dhanashree

@pinks0986

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Sheeba............dat was just wonderful yaar..............loved it............😛😛😛😛😛

i love the scene where Dutta's tear falls on Nakku's cheek.........dats was just tooooooooo beautiful..............& yes the silent conversation was Amazing............😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

waiting for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

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Originally posted by: Sophia21
Congrats for the new FF...😛Thank u dear............

Great update... i love how his tears fell on her... and how they were tlking through their eyes and heart..amazing

😳I am soooooooooooooooo glad u could feel it all the way i wanted u to!.............I really wish show mein aisaa kuch ho jaaye.......................⭐️

Continue soon

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

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Originally posted by: pinkyk
Sheeba............dat was just wonderful yaar..............loved it............😛

i love the scene where Dutta's tear falls on Nakku's cheek.........dats was just tooooooooo beautiful..............& yes the silent conversation was Amazing............😳

waiting for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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OMGgggggggggggggg............pinkky wow.........what a pic...............awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u made my day..............Glad u liked the update lekin yeh pic has made me all dreamy hai dutta u drive me crazy shonaa.....................😳

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Dhanashree

@pinks0986

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba
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Thank you jee.....lekin yeh maine nahi banaya hai..mere fb pe iska update aaya tha so i thought shayad tujhe ahcha lagega..so uploaded for uuuuuuuuuuu😃😃😃😃😃😃