OS.PART 1&2.khanak me sirf aur sirf tumhara hu PG1

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dr swati

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Posted: 15 years ago

wont be in touch wid u 4 nxt 4/5 daz......so leaving u all wid my first ever O.S.....here it is........ cafe............shaan hugging sam.....n he is wid all smiles........sam.......oh.......i love u......kahan thi tum.........aur ye kya.....u hv totaly changed.......i cnt believe its u duck........shaan........ sam n shaan turns towards hm duck......sammmmmmmmmmmm

hugs sam...........

khanak....(jus watching it n hv tears in eyes........)...ye shantanu ko kya hhua hai......kyu isse itna chipak rahe hain.........\khanak.....shanatanu.....

shaan...are khanak u knw ye sam hai.............meri sabse achi dost.....my bst frn...........

khanak............(par shantanu ki bst frn to me hn)...par shantanu suniye to.........ye wo cake,,,,

shaan......are sam ye....(ignores kahank>>>)

sam............so miss dhulwadi.......ye mera dost hai.....n ye cake iske liye hai...........

shaan....tum janti ho ise...n wts d matter of cake???y u both were fighting......bw sam.....khanak is my wife(hs arms around khanak)

sam.......gvs surprised look......oh ok.......so u got married......bulaya bhi nai............chalo thtk hai...........bt m surprised to see ur choice

sam n shaan gvs a high 5

kahank left crying

sam.......bt i must say...mere naal koi panga nai lenda....n sh ws fighting 4 d cake.........jus 4u......u luky man ur wife truely loves u........

shaan........smiles(v all vl die wid tht)........yehhh i knw......sh's d bst thng happened to me...........even i love hr a lot......(yurns toward kahank...bt sh's nt thr......)

dharam.....watchng khanak in mirror...kahank all in tears

shaan......sam sam.......wow m so happy to see u.....bt hv to leave nw....don knw whr khanak hs gone.....pl don mind........vl catch u later on.....loves...

(to be continued................................)

Edited by drswati - 15 years ago

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iluvmanar

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Posted: 15 years ago

Swati...where r u going yaar? we'll miss u....and awesome OS yaar...but itni jaldi khatam ho gaya...when will the continuing part be published...

luv u...❤️

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dr swati

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanar
Swati...where r u going yaar? we'll miss u....and awesome OS yaar...but itni jaldi khatam ho gaya...when will the continuing part be published...

luv u...❤️

going for confo........well part 2 b4 leaving

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bellyjerefisher

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Posted: 15 years ago

loved it swati plss do continue now onlyy plssssssssssssss
my khanak but soon shaan wil go behind her only so chill mere saathiyo😆

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dr swati

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Posted: 15 years ago

2nd part. shaan ....dharam madam ko dekha hai.... dharam.....nai.....pucho kyu....kyunki......madam ka kuch pata nai shaan......(kahan gai yaar...m so stupid.......again did d same)khanak....kahank..kahanak........ sunil.........shaan!!!!!!!! shaaan............dad mujhe kahank se milna hai...aapse bad me baat karta hun............. kahank...........kaanak.....kahank........ enters d room.....no1 thr......kahank.......knocks d toilet.....no response........(kahan gai..............) shaan wondering all around..............ya kitchen shaaan see's kahank crying in kitchen......he went behind her.....kahank kept quiet.....start doind hr kitchn job shaan .(in husky voice).......hmm..kha...kahank........khanak plz...............pl m m m m realy sorry woh......... kahank......hari bha...........(walks) shaan ....(holds hr hand).....kahank pl don ignore me i said na sory

khanak.....aur kitna sory bolege......na me ab kuch kahungi na room me jaungi.......aapko mere alawa sab acha lagta hai........sab ke gale lagte ho mujhe chodke...............sab se bat karte ho.......bas.............

shaan ......aisa.......aisa nai hai........i love uuuuuuuuuuuuuu

kahank.......mujhe nai pata us rat kya hua......par me us puri rat intezar karti rai shaan kahan hai......kab ayenge.....kab hum ek honge.......kal bhi maine sab kia........parrrrrrrrrrrr

kahank........lagta hai me aapko achi nai lagti.......madern ani hn.......chote kapde nai pehnti,,,,,,,,,,,,,anbrezi nai bolti

shaan looking at her...........listeng quietly

kahank again hs tears in eyes

shaan 9dude u r wrong making hr cry........cum on make hr happy......gv wt sh want n deserves............sh's totaly correct........)

shaan tighty hugs kahank..kahank tries to avoid,,,,,,,,,bt not............shaan moving hs hanad on hr hanads n hair

shaan........kahank pata hai...itni ladkio me tum kyu pasand ayi......ocz ur so simple yet so beautiful............so natural....still so awsome...........n bhagwan janta hai,.........me tumse kitna pyaar karta hun......bt khanak i knw i don desrve u....m such an idiot......makes u sad alwaz..........tum jo ho mujhe itna chahti ho.....n me.................

shaan........ok its my turn nw

lifts kahank

moves towards room...........

dharam n harilal cumin out of their room.............(dharam.......sir kam ho gaya............shaan smiles)

shaan n kahank in room.....wt.............khanak is surprised.........roses all around................scented n lighted room..............

shaan closes door....................n tu hi tu satrangi re................

shaan pulls d khanak's duppatta............n so............................

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destinylove

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Posted: 15 years ago

wow dear swati both the parts are superb.....yar simple and excellent..

BTW what is this u are going off for 4 days..are u taking the lap top

..Please keep in touch daily if possible yaar

that too at this point when the forum is going to be landing In SICU we need u all the more..takecare dear.. loved u O.S(both parts). write more..

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bellyjerefisher

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Posted: 15 years ago

lovely lovely lovely soooooooooooo sweet

i wpould have hit shaan wid a belan if i were in his place

lovely swati

loved the idea very much

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iluvmanar

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Posted: 15 years ago

wow...that's awesome...thanks 4 d second part....😃

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Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

Loved the part 2...

Hey you are going away for 4 days at the entirely wrong time !!

Will Miss you..

Try to come online and keep in touch

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dr swati

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: togepe30
Loved the part 2...
Hey you are going away for 4 days at the entirely wrong time !!

Will Miss you..

Try to come online and keep in touch

no way

coz confo vl kp bsy thru out

vl try to catch mng recap

vl miss all

i knw d bad timing

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