~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
nice update.. happy tht maan spoke his heart out n geet listened to him...
cant wait for the next part.. do continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: mchopra

I need some time to write..it was too good..will come back and comment pakka..

so when are you planning to come back... need more time, ok.. i will wait too..pakka...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear where r u new update needed because ur post help me to overcome this upcoming MC track.....................plz post next one soon ............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really nice update can u plz add me pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello, my name is Devika (few of you asked). Hope you all are doing fine. '.

Ready for next..ok then, here you go.

Part-8

Maan was getting impatient as he waited for her near MD's big table. His fingers were tapping over the table edge trying to relieve his tension. His face was turning to the examining space screen every now and then... Finally he saw the doctor coming in by drying her hands on a towel. Maan looked at her face anxiously. Doctor came and sat nearby....'

Maan in his anxious voice: doctor, is everything alright?

MD: yes.. so far good and she is managing it well too. She continued as she took a prescription sheet from nearby...' I mean ..'I know she is emotionally shattered after the trauma, but your love and support making her to accept the fact in a better way. That is more important than her physical stability...' physically she is alright, she is responding as expected, but mentally she may take time, but I can see the improvement. From that starring look to today she was able to answer my question. I saw her hopelessness deep in her behavior the other day, but now I can see the difference in that. So the credits goes to you.. But.. she paused and looked into his eyes'....

As he was feeling the relief hearing doctor's words, the 'but' sound drawn his eyebrows to the center in concern..

MD: nothing to worry, I just want to remind you that she is not yet ready to consummate physically. You need to consider this as same like post labor time. She needs attention and care.

Maan: I understand that doctor. I will take care of her. His corner eye caught the sight of Geet as she was coming towards them.. he turned and looked at her and brought a small chirpy smile conveying everything is alright to her'.... she tried to smile back too, but then looked at the doctor'

Doctor: OK Geet, you are doing well so far and I talked to your husband already. And then turning to Maan.. Ha Mr. Khurana may be you can take one more appointment after four weeks....'just for a simple follow up.

Maan stood up saying: OK doctor. I will bring her.. and thank you..

MD: Ok Then Geet see you in four weeks.. Geet smiled and said thanks and walked along with Maan. Maan held her shoulder loosely and walked out ..

They sat in car , Maan called Daadi and updated her on Geet's health. The driver stopped the car in front of IP.

They were walking in silently'.... then,

Geet; are you sure?

Maan: sure, what?

Geet; that I need to take care of IP.

Maan: yes Geet, of course. I brought it for you only. I can't be here all the time and also need to straighten up many things in KC. ..'.then looking at her face: why? Are you tensed?

Geet: no.. trying to hide her anxiety...'

Maan read that, he said: I know it was not expected, but I know you can do it,also you have Daadi's help, she has good experience.. and the employees here like you very much. So be yourself and try to learn and manage. Ok. he looked at her face and saw the doubtful shade..

Maan: Geet, you can call me at any time with any help. I can come or I can explain things to you. Then in a smirk tone.. I doubt how Daadi will take that, because she challenged me for this..

She looked at him helplessly..

By then they reached the main hall. Manish looked at Maan and Geet with an exclamation, he can't believe he is seeing them together.. that also both very calm.. so was the case of Romeo and Panday ji and other employees.. they all stood still. They have seen Maan always raising his voice over her, never seen both of them walking in silently..

Maan looked at everyone and then slowly circled his left arm around Geet's shoulder.. The audience's lips fallen apart seeing MSK's gesture and Geet's silence..

MSK: Hello everyone. There is a good news for you.. his eyes tried to reach everyone's expression as he said that'... he continued..

I know you all are bored by my bossing, so I am introducing you to your new boss, and that is Geet.. The employees listened still in disbelief.. they stood in that same position..

Maan: Oh ho.. now what.. aren't you happy..

He looked around again, Geet tried to look up to meet everyone's eyes too to see their reaction.. Their silence made her to go weak again and looked at Maan's face. He looked at her with a convincing glare and checked on the employees response again.. all in same position without any word....'

Maan: What?.. he tried to read their face again.. he saw Panday ji, looking at both of them in disbelief....' then suddenly something strike his head..

Maan: Oh, Ok, I am sorry.. I didn't introduce her in a professional way, right? Ok then..

Hi everyone, Meet Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana, the new boss of your company..

He looked at again on each one's expression, but then the sound from the corner brought everyone's attention; Manish fell on to the ground.

Romeo and Panday ji went near him, and tried to wake him up.. Manish slowly opened his eyes and looked at his friend's face in disbelief.. as if, now what I will do'

Suddenly Geet went nearby; Is He OK.. they heard her concerned voice..

They looked at her face, Manish stood on his feet with his friends support and said: ha, I am fine.. He looked at her face again, he saw the shade of sindoor on her parted hair, he saw her mangalsuthr hanging over her duppatta.. somewhere inside he felt so happy.

Maan: Is everything OK..

Manish: yes , sir, I am fine..

Maan: Ok then, Panday ji, I am promoting you as the manager and rest of the functioning and changes will be handled by Geet. Is that Ok with everyone.

The silence broke with the sound of clapping.. Maan and Geet heard their acceptance ..

Maan: ok then, Let me take her to the cabin, and you all can get back to your work.. Ok..

They tried to disperse as he guided her to the cabin..

Maan held her shoulder and officially made her to sit on that chair.. she sat as he forced and looked at him in embarrassment.

Maan: Ok, Geet, you take care of the rest and call daadi or me at any time. You already know few things about the company, but now you may have to understand different aspects of business. I am sure the management skill will come to you naturally, with your effort. With that he placed a loving kiss over her forehead and again with reassuring look tried to leave..

Geet stood from the seat; suniye..

Maan stopped back and came near her and said: Geet, sit back and relax. I will send Panday ji on my way back, so you two can start from your talk..ok.

Again he made her to sit and walked away giving her a thumbs up..

He told Panday to meet Geet as he was walking out.. but then stopped by hearing Romeo's voice from a corner..

"so when is the party'..

He stopped and looked at that corner and saw Romeo trying to hide his face..

Maan: for you guys, of course.. soon', Let me know your choice. Will do it as your wish ' saying that he walked away with a winning smile on his face.. Romeo gave a high five to Manish..

Maan came out from the building, the driver brought the car near to him.. .. Maan looked on both sides and saw the guards on both sides few feet away. He gave an alert look .. and then put his goggles on and drove away to KC'.

'..........''''''

KC was back into action. They were missing their boss for past few weeks and was tolerating Sasha's tantrums all day.. she acted as if she took in charge of KC, Only Adi sir was giving them some hope.. and almost everyone was wishing for MSK comeback..but when he came yesterday, he was totally in action, he didn't tell anyone where he was.. the rumors went around that he went for camping in a forest as he was unable to face the world after Geet's bashing in front of the media. Sasha was commenting all the time with a winning smile about the Geet's fate.. she tried to recollect the scene where Maan dragged her out from the office.. she enjoyed every piece of it.. and tried to remind herself that no one can pass her to reach MSK..

Tasha in her green dress: Sasha'... while shaking her ponytail.. oh, sorry.. Mam.. Don't you think DD was little too hard on you yesterday..

Sasha faced her with a piercing look.

Tasha: I mean, you were trying to talk to him, but he was asking many things to Adi sir and I think he kind of made you to work on files.. don't you think so..

Sasha tried to recollect MSK's angry tone..but then

Sasha: Don't you know that is MSK. He is always like that when he comes back from camping.. and then with a twitchy smile on her lips'... But I know how to handle him well.. with that she rubbed her hands together..

The atmosphere changed as they felt MSK's presence. Everyone got alert and active in their work. Sasha in a crooked tone: Now you watch my magic...' and she walked towards him...'

MSK walked in with his serious face. His each step spread the energy around. Sasha tried to stop him.. Good morning MK

Maan just acknowledged her greeting with a serious look and walked to his cabin' Adi looked at him and Maan signaled him to follow.

Adi followed him..

Sasha stood with her open mouth.. but then kept her finger on her head as if she got some spark of hope.. asked Tasha to give the file and went o MSK's cabin..

Maan and Adi were in serious talk as they heard the knock..

Sasha walked in..

Adi : Sir, I will take care of this.. anything else..

Maan: no Adi, that is it for now. .ok

Adi: Ok sir, and he left..

Sasha came in

Maan: what's up Sasha?.. while trying to dial a number..

Sasha: MK, I think you need to look at this project. I have done most of the correction work, so if you can just approve it , we can move with next step. Actually I have some suggestions'.... the look on MSK's face shut her mouth which conveyed the importance of the call that he is making...'

The ring was going on the other side .. Maan took the file and in a low voice: I will look into it and let you know.. his eyes conveyed her to leave..

Tasha was peeking everything from side window. She was trying hard to listen to their conversation.. all she could see was MSK's reaction to Sasha.. she brushed on her head back tail more forcefully...'

The day went quick for both Maan and Geet. He saw her sitting near Daadi with a gloomy face'... he went and sat near them..

Maan: so how was your first day Geet..

Daadi also looked at Maan with gloomy face..

Maan: what? Why you both are looking so gloomy.. Is everything ok.

Daadi: No, nothing went OK. Geet felt like she is overwhelmed with so many things in a short time...' and ..

Maan with a teasing smile: so , the girls are backing up on the first day itself..

Daadi remembered her challenge: no no.. we are not stepping back. We only know to take forward steps.. not backward..

Maan: then what is the problem looking at Geet..

Daadi: You only ask her.. anyway I need to go for Sushma's house.. Don't wait for me for the dinner.. ok..

Maan: Hum.. so today is ladies day out?

Daadi: ha.. do you have any problem?

Maan: Nope. I don't have any, as far as you go alone..

Daadi: yes, this time I am going alone..but next time, the girls will go together..

Maan: what?

Daadi looking at Geet: Ok Geet', or do you want to join me today itself.. may be you will get some relief'.

Suddenly Maan looking at Geet's face and then looking at Daadi':.. No Geet is not coming today.. she might be tired.. trying to reason his wordings..

Daadi: ha ..ha.. nice try Maan.. I know you very well.. anyway.. Geet beta, don't worry about the office, it will take time and you will do good , and I am with you..ok'

Maan watched as she walked away.. the minute she disappeared from his eyes, he went near Geet, and looked at her gloomy face.. he kissed her forehead and enveloped his arms around her : Geet, you know what? This expression doesn't suit you well at all. Come with me, I need to fresh up too.. and want to hear about everything.. but then on his way.. Geet, actually I am feeling hungry'.. Is there anything to munch on?....

Geet got alert; I don't know, you go and fresh up, I can check on it..

Maan: very good. Nakul will be there and I will join you soon..

Time passed by and both were back in their room.. MSK's cell rang and he attended it. He saw Geet already in her night suit.. he joined her at the balcony.. he stood behind her and wrapped his arms around her at the waist level..

Maan: what happened Geet?' Tell me na.. are you still thinking of'.... his hands slide over her tummy.. she felt the pain in his voice..

She turned back and looked into his eyes..

Geet: are you still worried about it. You don't have to. She wrapped her arms around his chest level as she was unable to meet his eyes.. and held him tight and continued: I know I didn't say anything about it, yes I am worried about it but you are not responsible for that. It was a bad dream.. and I want to come out of this. He held her more tight as he listened to her.. first time she is opening up her mind without any force.. his arms rubbed on her back comforting her, giving her more strength to speak out..

She continued': and all those moments bring stabbing pain to my heart'... the moment when I didn't listen to you, the moment when I didn't trust you, the moment my hands forced on you'. Then with a feeble voice she added ....the moment I walked away with a new dream'

I am trying to come out from that nightmare. I know I should have screamed loud so that you could hear me and be with me.. but ..but.. everything happened so quick and when I realized about it I was already in that hospital bed. a dark circle formed around my vision. I don't remember anything else.. I can't recollect anything. I don't want to.. I don't want to'.... I just want to think of the time when I opened my eyes in that hospital bed.. Your hands were holding mine.. and I saw your face'... that brought me back to reality.. now onwards I just want to see your face and want to think only about you.... My pain is nothing when it compared to Daadi's past.. You gave her hope, and now I have you'..... I am not alone.. I have you and you are mine and only mine'.... her voice trailed off as she stated the last sentence as rubbing her cheeks on his chest....' he felt the wetness, but he let her cry.. ..his eyes also felt wet with a relief. He knew she is still in her emotional breakthrough.. but her voice gave him so much hope and so much anticipation for tomorrow. He felt his heart light after hearing from her'....

Somehow he wanted to change the topic..

Maan: then why were you so gloomy Geet?

Geet tried to get back to normal tone: that's because, I don't know how to manage the company..

Maan changed his tone too: Why? Is it too much..

Geet: why don't you come to IP office, I will take care of all your files and work'

Maan smiled as he realized how she might have felt being in that chair all alone..

Maan: Geet, I have so much going on in KC and I need to be there.. also Nayantara and Dev is out too, I need to check on that too. So You need to try to manage it for some time. Call Daadi at anytime, she can help you..

Geet: I know But..

Maan: No but, you did really well when I was there..

Geet: That is because you were telling me what to do, and I just followed, but now I need to take decisions and I don't know how....'

Maan: Panday heina.. and Romeo & Manish..

Geet: ya.. but..

Maan loosened his grip and moved to look at her face: don't worry, it will come to you..ok..

Geet: hum'..

The cold wind was circling them and Geet felt shivering'

Maan: let's go inside...

Geet: hum'

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Precap: Geet went to check on the work progress and her eyes gone wild in disbelief seeing the person in white T-shirt and apron blue pants doing the painting' he turned and gave her a naughty smile'

Thank you for the like button and valuable comments..they are inspirational' would like to continue depending on the response' thank you..

Love and TC

Shadow of Geet😃

Edited by avi4rubi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Hi Devika😊

That was again a beautiful update!
Glad that Geet is doing fine though she still needs to recover mentally. But she will since she has Maan's love and support and her own will-power to move ahead.
Loved the way she opened up to Maan, letting her heart out. That was really heart-touching!!!
I appreciate the efforts both Daadi and Maan are taking to get their old Geet back.
IP scene-reactions of the employees was good-light-hearted part.
Precap sounds really interesting.
Yes, please do continue. Your words have magic, trust me!

Shivangi


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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
wow Devika..nice update..
MMm and long one too..wow i really dont come to know when i am readimg but when i scrolled..i was like..ahhh
thanks i know u must be spending so much time writing it down..thanks for that..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
wow nice update.. gud tht geet's improving.. really liked maneet convo.. guess the person is maan..😉😉😉😉 do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏WOW DEVIKA...GRT UPDATE.....😊😊
the best part of ur story is the emtional qoutient n how u really make maan n geet talk to each other....luv the understanding between them....u create magic😃😃
thanks for the pm....
keep up the story...eagerly waiting😃
P.S. CANT WAIT FOR SASHAS REACTION😃😃
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part Devika....good to see Geet getting back to normal and all the support Maan and Dadi are providing her....Its really needed for her to accept the bitter truth....and Maan's belief in her will help her to manage IP as well.....I would like to see Sasha's reaction on seeing Geet as Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana 😛...Pls show that part soon.....

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