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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for ur new thread dear🥳 and hope you open more😳 and make us full deewani of ur ff's😍
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Congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo muskan

happy to see ur new thread

hope u update soon and fantastic as well.

love

MEENA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~madhoshi~
part 70

geet - mujhe aap se koi shikayat nahi
she kissed his chest close to the heart & wispered I love you 
and I know you love me 2, 3, ..10 aap nahi kehte toh kya, yeh dhadkane toh sirf
mera naam leti hain, she raised to kiss his nose in saanson mein sirf meri
khusbhoo basti hain aur she shied & kissed his eyes one after & the other
inhe mere allawa kuch aur dekhna kabool hi nahi
maan closed his eyes in contenment not able to hold back himself
he leaned close and kissed her cheek. Soft kisses.. he glanced into her face. 
Her eyes were clear and trusting. She didn't fear him or their joining. 
She lived by rules he couldn't understand. He envied her simplistic belief.
maano uski koi alag hi duniya thi. jab se woh mile the, unki duniya sab se alag aur sab se juda. he hugged her close, burying his face into her curved portions
mujse itna pyaar mat karo. main iske layak nahi
geet - kaho toh jeena chodh doon, lekin aap se pyaar na karoon woh mujhse nahi hoga
maan closed her lips with his crying - kyun aisi baatein karti ho
geet catching for her breath - phir aap bhi aisi baatein mat karo
they slept cuddled up. maan got up early & watched babies moment.
he kept his hand on her tummy. she wanted to turn. she got up & turned 
& rested her head on his strong arms. he moved her curls & kept wondering
how can some one be so innocent & loving. she opened her eyes. maan looked away
she smiled - mujhe dekh rahe the
maan - nahi, pulls his hand away & leaves to the gym
baby~mujhe dekh rahe the aapko nahi😛
geet~nahi mujhe dekh rahe the
baby~high hopes😈    
geet~umm

later in the day geet was looking into some new project proposal
pari comes in & gives a file to geet & walks out
baby~mama yeh pari bilkul papa ki type ki hai na  
geet~tu chup kar
geet notices pari going to maan again and again.
she was little restless & also saw maan smiling thats it she rushed into his 
cabin & stared at him. & closed the blinds that lead his view to pari's cabin
maan maintained a stirn look. 
geet - aap sab se toh has has ke baat karte hain mujhse kyun nahi
maan rolling the blue prints & getting ready to leave for a meeting - aisa kuch nahi hain
geet looked emotional today. he knew may be due to her hormonal changes .
he walked out to the lift. she followed. pari came running behind & gave a file
pari - MK u need this for this meeting
maan noded. pari left as the lift closed
geet - dekha u smiled at her
maan - aisa kuch nahi hain, just leave me alone
geet - nahi & sat in the car with him
maan - geet I have an important client meeting
she looked out turning her face. 
brij called maan & said he will be coming to meet them today 
maan gave the phone to geet & drove to the house
geet - sachi
brij - umm
geet - I will be waiting 
she gives the phone back to maan. he still maintained a stirn look.
geet - aap mujhe dekhte kyun nahi, haste kyun nai
maan was not able to explain his reluctance to her - just leave me alone will u 
they got stuck in a bridge because of the traffic
geet - u have to smile at me now
maan closes his eyes - geet waise hi main bahut pareshan hoon aur tum mujhe aur pareshan kar rahi ho
geet - main pareshan kar rahi hoon 
maan looked the other side. geet opened the door & went & stood near the rim of the bridge
maan did'nt notice she was out. when he felt she was quiet he turned to see, he got terrified.
he looked out & the traffic began to move. he saw through the windows across the moving cars
she stood crying next to the rim, he parked the car aside & ran to her.
maan shouted - yahan kya kar rahi ho
geet - main toh aap ko pareshan kar rahi hoon na
and snapped his hand in a jerk & fell off the bridge losing her balance.
maan leaned forward to catch her. his eyes could bare to see the fear in her eyes
he jumped at once & took her to the shore he patted her cheeks, geet geet
she was lifeless, drenched cold & not responding.. he took a deep breath & blow
into her. he could not press her stomach that would hurt the baby
baby~mama utto   
maan cried - GEET GEET
she spat the water out & hugged him. maan kissed her passionately 
& then pulled her away in a jerk - kya karti ho, kaha ne mujhse door raho
kyun nahi samajhti main tumse pyar nahi karta. 
pulls her wet hair
backward taking in her lips into his - I hate u samjhi tum
he took her to the hospital & got her checked 
dr - you are lucky, nothing happened to them
brij rushed to the hospital 
brij - what happened how did u fall from there
maan - iska pair slip ho gaya tha
brij siged in relief - mere ko laga u guys had some misunderstanding & again tried 
killing herself
maan - AGAIN!!
brij  - uss din she tried to end her life.
maan was shattered
brij - geet tum kya karti rehti ho
geet was little sacred & tensed 
maan very coldly - brij tum isse aapne saat HP lejao
geet looked at him shocked 
brij - I guess that will be good change for her
geet - main aapko chodkar kahin nahi jaoongi she hugged him from back
brij smiled at her & left them alone to sort it out
he snaps her hand away & chali jao meri zindagi se
geet - main aap ko pareshan nahi karoongi, promise
and hugs him
maan - tum samajhti kyun nahi, main tumse pyar nahi karta
he closes his eyes & clutches his fist main sameera se pyar karta hoon
it hit her hard, tears rolled down her eyes - phir mujhse shaadi kyun ki
kyun mujhe aapne paas rakhte the jab bhi main aapse door jaati thi
she hugged him closer aap jhooth bol rahe ho
maan pushes her hand down & moving away from her in anger
there was nothing between us, it was just physical nothing else
I have tried explaining u. I don't have any feeling for u. but u don't seem 
to get it. pata nahi tumhare dimag main yah pyar ka bhoot kahan se chad gaya
it was all so easy & simple. I don't know why u have to complicate every thing
geet did'nt react she was still not able to understand what he meant 
She raised her head and met his gaze. He saw the pain in her beautiful eyes, 
the hurt and disillusionment he had put there.


geet - sab kuch theek nahi ho sakta she said weakly
he stood cold
geet - mujhe laga ho sakta tha, ab nahi lagta. 
maan flinched as if she slapped him
geet - mujhe laga mera pyar kaafi tha humare rishte ke liye
maan rudly - nahi
geet - mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi laga, you have to love me back &  ur not going to
he knew it woud hurt, lekin itna ...nahi socha tha
she quitely walked to brij - ghar chalein

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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Nice update...Why was maan so rude to her :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Oh no that was so painful to read :-{
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Congrats for ur new thread dear🥳 awsum  updt
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
excellent update
geet is sooo innocent
feel really bad for geet😭 hmm
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
ohhh Geet is sooo innocent and so miss this is wat u mentioned to me rite...Maan was too rude... AWESOME update di...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
It was so painful but really like it dear😳, i hope Maan will change saar se Sameera ka bhoot utar jayen