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Posted: 14 years ago
musky tumhe keya ho gaya.. itna painfull separation maneet ka.. kue.. mujhe sabse bora laga maan jab bola it was just physical attraction, this word break my heart. i feel so sad for geet. but seriously maan should paid 4 that. geet should not come untill maann accept his love 4 her.. eagerly waiting.. pls update first..
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.......
feeling bad for geet...😭
maan has gone mad...
waiting for the next update...!!!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey wen ru going to update? Waitng eagerly...i hate maan..how could he say such harsh wordz to geet knowng she is 7 months pregnant..he shuld pay for it now...plz plz plz update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

first.. congo on this new thread......!!!!

owsumm update.. loved it...
but why maan was soo rude to geet......
feeling sorry for geet...!!!!
please update soon..........
waiting eagerly for the next part..!!!
love,,
Adeena.
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooo sad end!!maaneet seperation!!!y z he doing tis?plz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg
why maan is becoming rude day by day
its a painful update yaar
and now the problem nt is back hmm
plz update sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet really has to go so that maan can realise what is her place in his life.........................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please pleas please pleases please please please update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
yet again you have managed to surprise me .....though i do feel like kicking Maan in his buttocks !!!
Geet better not go back to him that easily.
its time for the dude to grovel BIG TIME !!!
thanx for some gr8 updates.

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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 71

it was week in HP. geet was not able to understand why he said all that
she cried & cried hiding her emotions from every one. she could'nt share
her feelings to any one. baby was quite & not talking anymore.
it was a the usual day geet stood near the window expecting maan may
call or come looking for her. she closed her eyes every night expecting
what happened that day was just a bad dream & when she wakes up it will all
be fine. but nothing seem to change. every day was darker than the earlier one.
until today when brij came shouting - yeh maan aapne aap ko samajhta kya hai
geet looked at him confused & terrified. she knew the worst had happened what
more was left that brij was shouting so much
rano - kya baat hain
brij - maan has sent the divorce papers
geet looked at the papers blankly. she kept them aside & went inside
rano - tumhara kuch unke saath fight hua tha kya
geet kept quite & slept

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MG3LV6cE-q8&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

OUTHOUSE

maan looked at the empty room & wondered why he had to do this.
looking at her all the while had now got to him. It made him want her more
but now she was not there anywhere. She didn't even have to touch him. If he
closed his eyes he was able to see her. how she cuddled up next to him every night
even though he turned her down, yet every morning she looked at him with the calm,
& loving eyes. he could admit the truth. He adored being with her, next to her,
close to her. More than that, he lived for the sound of her voice, they way she
said suniye, the way she walked, her innocence, her belief in him, the light in her face
when she smiled at him. He admired everything about her. But he refused to love her.
how could he say some thing so rude to her about their relationship to be just being physical.
Which was insane, he told himself. it would have killed her from inside. but that was the
only way to keep her away from him he thought.
Kyon use jeete jee maut ka ehsaas de jaati woh
Kyon uski yaadon Kho bhula na paata woh
Kyon use apne har saans par yaad aati woh
Kyon uski yaad mein duniya bhool jaata woh

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9s7PoUr-bRA&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

HP

brij - sign this paper & give it to me. I will throw it on his face
tell him we don't want any thing from his property or money
she kept quite
brij -
don't tell me u still love him
she looked away
her emotions & reactions were quite misleading. every one was extra careful with her
knowing her unexpected reations & some times the ultimate step. now it was not her
it was her baby too. which was 7 1/2 months now.
geet looked at her big stomach & thought about maan and iciness settled over her,
freezing her blood and opening a crevice in her soul. It didn't matter what she had
said or how she had tried to convince him of her feelings their feelings and her
commitment. He didn't care. He didn't believe. He was and always
had been a stranger-ajnaabe jine kabhi nahi milna tha. She probably had created a
mask and put it over his real face. It had all been make-believe.
Kyon usne pyaar kiya aur pyaar karna sikhaaya,
Kyon usne jeena sikha kar iski zindagi cheenli,
Kyon Kyon Kyon Kyon, yeh sab iske saath hi kyon,
Kise jaake sunaati woh apni gham-e-hayaat,
sirf wohi tho tha jisko yah apni dil ki baatein sunaati thi
ab jaakar kise sunaati apni dastaan-e-dard-e-ishq
.

OUTHOUSE
he wondered if she was fine. he knew it would be driving her crazy but, he made
sure she was with her family. they took care of her. better than he could.
being close to him was only putting her in trouble he tried sleeping he could barely.
every time he closed his eyes he could feel her rolling into his arms
sochta rehta use neend bhi aati hogi
ya iski tarha faqat aashq bahati hogi
wo to shayad iski shakal aur naam bhulana chahti hogi
shaam hote hi chokhat pe jala kar shameen
kya woh apni palkon pe kayi khwaab sulati hogi
kaise reh thi hogi iske bina, jab iska yeh hal tha uske bina

daadi & dev came to know about the divorce & were shocked
daadi -
maan aapne geet aur bache ke bare main ek bar bhi nahi socha
maan kept quiet & walked away. drove his car really fast
he reached real high speed when he realized his car could'nt stop
he tried the brakes did'nt seem to work. he gets a call
he answeres it without seeing the number
NT -
Veerji
that voice made him annoyed, speeing up further.
NT -
aap ghadi nahi roohk pa rahe....so sad
maan yelled -
Naintara
NT -
try to concentrate on driving, that needs ur attention more
see u, that is if ur alive
maan tries his level best to control the car avoiding the vehicles
coming from other direction. but while avoiding a truck hits a another car
& falls off the cliff. smashing the car into tiny bits of pieces
it took recovery team 5hrs to find him in that condition almost dead
they rushed him to hospital. daadi, dev & meera reached hospital
and they wondered whether to inform geet about it. the operation went on for couple of hrs


dr - we are really sorry, he was brought in almost dead. we have done what we could do
daadi broke down completly
meera called geets home brij picked the call. least was he intrested
brij - thanxs. may God rest his soul in peace & cut the call

precap
3 weeks maan still in hospital no geet!!

LINK TO PART 72
VM CREDIT KuteKutie & lvzlyf12
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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