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tanu

@Armu4eva

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+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Awesome.....words..!! As beautiful as music..!! Luvly work dear..! ❤️ Great great work done..🤗 Please write some more...!!

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Loved this piece
Beautifully written
Loved the environment u created...

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

beautifully written Noor... very nice

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Daania-
Fatima 🤗

Gosh, this was such a beautiful piece.

Every word was so calm, and serene. It gave me such peace reading it.

The way you've chosen words, described nature, it's beauty is all just beyond words. I really was speechless. And the hints of MayUr in it. Gosh, this is just an outstanding piece of writing! Beautiful =]

Thanks a lot dear,
Glad you liked it and it gave you peace :)

I just wrote it out of the blue....din know if you guys would like it or not :)
Glad that you did :)

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
very nice fatima

thx alot for the pm

thanx a lot dear :)

Edited by -shabnoor- - 15 years ago

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: amrita2010
Hey dear,

I want to read it again and again, it was so beautiful, I loved how you have described nature....While reading it, I felt that I was visualizing the exact scene, it's so beautifully expressed. I have no words to express how deeply it had touched me..

Keep them coming, God bless you always :)

Love,

Amrita

Hey Amrita,

Thanks a lot dear, I'm in a trance reading your comment...wow its a compliment that you could picture everything...

Thanks a lot !! :)

Originally posted by: tasfia123
hey fatima🤗
that was awesome
i could feel the whole thing
loved every bit of it
you described the nature wonderfully 👏
too good👍🏼

love
tasfia

Thanks tasfia
touched that you liked every bit of it :)

Originally posted by: kulsumd
hi.
beautiful dear.

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
hiiii
very beautiful

loved it

thanks 4 da pm

Thanks a lot dear,
glad you liked it :)

-Fatima

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: achoose
beautiful piece of work dear..............

Thanks a lot dear :)

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Amazing Fatima

loved it

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
I was the first person to read this, er? 😲 Hence, you know what I've gotta say about this. It ain't weird - I repeat it ain't, a marvelous read. =]

No you weren't the first, you were the second :)
Well I know what you gotta say,
so I wud just say a thank you dear :)

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Fatima
wow awesome update dear
beautifullllll
loved it

thank you fari
Glad you liked it :)

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: .rumki.
nice
thanx 4 pm

Thank you !!!

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Awesome.....words..!! As beautiful as music..!! Luvly work dear..! ❤️ Great great work done..🤗 Please write some more...!!

Thanks a lot,
glad you liked it...
I'll write more as I get time :)

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Loved this piece
Beautifully written
Loved the environment u created...

Thanks dear.....glad you loved the nature :)

Originally posted by: .Divya.
beautifully written Noor... very nice

Thanks a lot divya di :)

Originally posted by: rose.three
heya itz vry nyc....

Thanks a lot varsha :)

Edited by -shabnoor- - 15 years ago

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

POST #2

It had been an early rise, the colour of monsoon added to the vibrant nature, yet another day of rainfall. The cool breeze swayed deliriously and the trees swirled and animals hid in their niche as the sun was busy relaxing itself behind the layers of clouds! Finally, after an hour or so, the sun slowly crawled out of it's niche and the soft, warm rays penetrated my abode with utmost ease. The birds were now chirping and the fresh flowers bloomed welcoming a new day, a new start. It was a lovely day and I sank deeper into my blanket and snuggled inside it, unlike my younger sister who stood by the window and basked in the early sunlight. I however, didn't seem to find peace in the morning like most people do, I love the night and darkness as it provides me tranquility and comfort that I want, it is far more bright, warm and cozy in comparison to the broad daylight.

I hid myself deep within the blanket until darkness completely engulfed me, sleep had left long ago, though I did feel sluggish. My mind wandered and I pondered slipping into my own world, contemplating and reflecting the past and the memories. Ah! and I realize the past has washed itself with the rains and purified me; but the remnants still remained though very vague. Exams are round the corner yet, I do not study. I'm not avoiding it deliberately but I'm unable to give my heart and soul to it, although I'm no topper not even close to being a topper but an average student, still something didn't seem quite right but what? I still am unable to find the reason for the sudden chaos that has engulfed me and my concentration too is dwindling since a past few days. It is such a freaking thing that you are busy figuring out the crap math sums wherein you can't even figure out the math of your life! Ain't it true? Yes, it is indeed but then it has always been me who searches answers or is in the quest of unraveling things and also the one who has to bear the brunt and scoldings from my dad as all the praises are reserved for my younger sister; the one who is very disciplined and never lies. Well that is one outlook that no matter how much I try to change I'm unable too.

It is not that I'm jealous of her, in fact I'm very proud of her and she is my biggest support and my strength, who loves me more than any one could possibly do apart from my mother who is no more, though she was not my real mother she loved me more than anything in this world, I don't even know who my real mother was; my dad never spoke of her nor do I intend on finding about her, for this lady alone was my mother and will always be. It does pain and hurt and my heart cries when dad accuses me of every wrong committed and leaves me all alone. They say I've chosen this path myself, is it? I've been used to hear words like, 'chatterbox' ,'whimsical' and an 'emotionless person' not only from dad but from my aunt and some friends too. They encouraged her and she excelled too, but what about me? "Oh! Nupur, no she is good for nothing and a madcap!". These words ringed loudly in my mind as if they were just said yesterday but then they were uttered long ago. It's true, Time heals all wounds but the memories never leave your side; they are etched in my mind and so I've simply recoiled in my shell and present a facade to this world. Speak what they wish to hear and listen only that should be heard. I guess hardly anyone apart from him knows that I have a flair for writing stories and poems; that I'm an intellectual person too whose true potential is not tapped and that I love silence and also that I'm a trapped soul, trapped in my own past who fears opening up for the fear of losing.

A sudden wave of emotions hits me and the words rush out, I grab my diary that is kept on the bedside table and pen down,

Would you tell me if your jaded or waxed ?
Or rather you prefer calling me unique and whimsical ?
Ideas and notions, is that the reason ?
Build a shell around me and started believing in fairies;
Oh! dear child
Wake up, Wake up to the gory reality that hides;
Smiles and frowns are a part of life !

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Edited by Escapist - 14 years ago

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Erm.... we talking abt a writer in here eh..🤔 ahem ahem.. culd that b u..😆 awesome once again...!! I luv how u describe the moments... ! Its a pleasure to read ur updates.. thanks a ton 🤗

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

hey Fatima
haye mar jawa- awesome update re
totally rocking
the way u describe the whole thing- it was just amazing

u r a superb writer
loved ur update a lot