The story continues. Weekend retreat Scene31 pg 19

So Now that we are all waiting for NivREN wedding I just thought I will write out some scenes and make my heart feel more at peace : )

Btw this is my first ff/short story/scene writing etc etc every so please excuse my mistakes. I hope you enjoy reading it as much I am enjoying writing it !


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writing.... just writing...

Thanks for all the comments. I am just doing a continuous flow of thought. Hopefully i will do justice to all the characters that I have fallen in love with


ALLRIGHT GUYZ thats it for this weekend. Will continue next weekend!! I hope the story goes in teh direction of what we want. NIvreN and Divsid!

I am sure they both can be unique.

Scene 1….

Nivedita is panting and running like a crazed up woman on the road. Her thoughts are just on one thing, how could siddharth do this? What if he goes and stops the wedding? What will happen to Di? What will chachi say? How can they face the people ? What will happen to our family's honor. I have to reach the mansion before sidarth does and stop this from happening.

She is still running , with her hair flying all over her face which is filled with worry and tears gleaming in her eyes. Her thoughts are suddenly diverted. She hears a motor cycle sound?

She turns around! And she sees Viren.

Viren: Kya hua niveditha. Thum hamph kiyun rahi ho?

Nivi: viren, Viren woh sidharth aya tha, use sab kuch pata chal gaya hai humaray baray main. Woh bohot gussey main hain,

Viren: Niveditha shanth ho jao aur bolo hua kya?

Nivi: Viren thum ghar chalo , main rastahy main batathi hun ki hua kya…

Nivi sits on the bike

Nivi: Viren Tezi se chalo. Please…

Viren: Teekh hai mujhe pakad lo

Niveditha puts her hands on the shoulders of Viren. All of a sudden she feels safe, secure and a warm thought that everything will be all right comes to her mind.

Viren: Han bolo niveditha hua kya?

Nivi then tells viren her conversation with sidhdarth. Viren's eyebrows contract and his face turns red with anger. He does not let niveditha see his facial expression.

One thought occurs in his mind. Dada Sahib.

His heart starts racing. What if Sid gets there before them and stops the wedding? How can he be so khudgarz. After all this time why ?

No he will not let this happen. Not after so much has passed between all the four. Their family's honor, the entire Shimla will be present. What was Sid Thinking??

Viren : thum fikar nahi karo nivi kuch nahi hoga.

He thinks in his mind ( humaray parivar ko)

Scene 2

Nivi and Viren arrive at the mansion. Viren sees his mother, tayjee and dadima pacing through the hall in worry.

Viren asks nivi to stay from the mansion until the right time approaches.

Dadima: Viren…Sidharth kahan hai? Thumhay mila? Yahan mahurat ka samay nikla jar raha hai aur sidharth ka koi pata nahi. Kahan he woh?

Dadima's voice is shaking with fear and anxiety. She cannot control the tears in her eyes. Her face is filled with a worry that Viren doesn't understand.

Viren: Dadima kuch nahi sidhdharth aa rahe hain aap fikar na karayn.

Taijee: Lekin viren Sidharth hai kahan ?

Then the door opens and Sidhdharth enters. Everyone rushes towards him and start hurling questions at him. Sidhdharts eyes seek only one person and one person alone. Viren.

His eyes are filled with anger and shock. They are teary and fiery. He wants to hurt his brother real bad for the first time in his life. But he has to master that feeling because there are other important things he has to tend to first.

Taijee (sid's mom): Sidhharth !! Kahan chala gaya they thum?

Sidhdharth doesn't answer. He just remains still and quiet. He continues looking at Viren.

Why doesn't viren show any sign of remorse? He knows that I know the truth now. He was helping putul and supporting her in this act? I would have lost my love if I did not figure out everything. But no more.. I will not let this act continue for a moment more. Tonight everything will be set right. I will get what is mine and what rightfully belongs to me.

And no one can stop that ….

uhhmm shayad aisa hi hoga.. aur viren bolega that HE IS going to marry NIVEDITA..

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

uhhmm shayad aisa hi hoga.. aur viren bolega that HE IS going to marry NIVEDITA..

shelly tmhe kia hogya tm b yehi chahti ho k viren nivi ki shadi ho ??

Scene 3…

Dadima: Thum kuch bol kiyun nahi rahe ho sidhharth. Yahan mahurat nikla ja raha hai.

She then looks at the eyes of Sidharth and follows his gazes which are fixed on Viren.

Viren?

Dadima: Kya hua Viren. Koi kuch kahega bhi. ?

Chanchal senses something terribly wrong has happened. She always feared that her over emotional son might one day just make all her efforts go in vain but no she cannot think like that. Now that the main problem has been solved. She has a satisfied smirk on her face as she remembers how she and jawahar gave sleeping pills to bauji. So there will not be any more commotion and no one will interrupt her plan.

She is jerked awake from her thoughts by sidhharths voice.

Viren!

Viren had been expecting this. He was ready for it.

Viren: Han sidharth.

Viren's eyes were blazing with anger! He had mixed emotions running though his mind. The same emotions that were running through him when he saw dada sahib being rushed into the hospital, his state, and his condition that has left such a great man so incapable. Sidharth was again today thinking about himself. Once more he has left everyone in peril.

Sidharth then turns to face dadima , Vandana and Chanchal .

Vandana senses something has gone wrong and she has a shrewd idea of what might have went wrong. Her son , she knew well lacked the heart of his father in making decisions related to heart. He always put his mind before his heart and when ever he was faced with a dilemma between heart and mind he choose to follow his mind.

Today, she noticed there was something different about him and she feared that for the first time he was going to listen to his heart and not worry about what his mind had to say!...

mein aise kabhi chahhongi kya? par ab mein to bahut fruatrated hogayi hun yaar.. bata nahin sakti hun. i can't see SID-PUTUL separated. mein to apne mann ko thoda mazboot karneki koshish kar rahi hun. otherwise mujhe to heart attack hi hoga.

Originally posted by: shaf13

shelly tmhe kia hogya tm b yehi chahti ho k viren nivi ki shadi ho ??

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

mein aise kabhi chahhongi kya? par ab mein to bahut fruatrated hogayi hun yaar.. bata nahin sakti hun. i can't see SID-PUTUL separated. mein to apne mann ko thoda mazboot karneki koshish kar rahi hun. otherwise mujhe to heart attack hi hoga.

han serious yaar mera b haal aisa hi hai mai b apne mann ko mazboot krne ki koshish hi kr ri hn par pta kio jsy jsy waqt shadi ka kareeb arha hai darr barh rhahai mera 😭😭😭😭😭😭...yaar hm sb ko heart hojaega agar sid nivi separate huay 😭😭😭😭....i also cant see sid putul separated