ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 - Page 65

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Posted: 14 years ago
please update..it is really good...loved to see Samira's being J!
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Hye Dear,

When u update???????
pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting eagerly for the next part....................
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Hey sweety,
Where are u? when u update???????????
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
love u😳😳😳😳😳
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Hey....when are u updating..........
Please update soon........
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ELo..i mean HeLLo 😆..yes im updating..i knw..i took alot of time ..but sach main..therez so much going on..ughhh..too much stress now a days k bas poocho mat 😕..but ur love and appreciation and ur intezaar..make me do everything 😳..i tried my best to make it longer..and i realli hope that u all like it..and guys..so so so i wanna thank u all from the bottom of my heart..for all the motivating comments..and sowliee..for making u all wait..and that too for so long..and yeah..pray for me..i have a test on Friday..lets hope i dont fail that..😆..that class is such a pain 😡..ok i shud stop now..😆😳😛..here is the update and do leave comments..love ya all..
wid loads of Jhappis..🤗 EnJoy!!

~Chap 21~

After Lunch every 1 sat in the lounge..but after sometime..all came out and were sitting on the grass, in the garden.

Samira: hey Maan!!..u never mentioned k tumne humaray saath bahar jaane ko mana kyon kiya tha..aur specifically ghar par kyon bulaya..?

Maan: ohh woh!..he sed looking at Geet who was talking to Sid but now was listening to Maan and Samira

Maan: actually kya hai na..Geet k paer main chot lagee thi aur woh bhi meri wajah se..aur main usko uss halat main akela nahi chodna chahta tha..

Sid: o really..ab kaisee ho tum?

Geet: im fine now

Samira: so that's y..she sed looking at Geet strangely

Geet: to maan..tum sirf iss liye rukay k meray paer main chot tumhari wajah se lagi thi..i mean..agar tumhari wajah se nahi, kisi aur wajah se lagti to kya tum nahi ruktay!? She asked to confirm..and to prove it to Samira..but for a second she got scared

Maan: hmmm..he started thinking

Geet: haw..uuu!! she who was sitting just a few steps away him on the grass got up to hit him..

Maan quickly moved away and laughed..

"aray yaar mazaq kar raha hoon..itna bhi nahi samjhti mangeta.....ahem I mean Geet!"

Geet: hmm..thats better!..

Sid: Geet tumhara yeh roop?..tumne Maan..the Maan Singh Khurana ko dara diya, he teased

Geet: haan..mushkil tha..but I love challenges..she sed chuckling

Maan: oh hello main darta nahi hoon..bas khayaal rakhta hoon..kahin madam naraz na hojaain..warna isko manana bohot mushkil hai!..

Samira was quietly listening to the convo..

rahul: acha..yeh naraaz bhi hotin hai..

Sid: duh! nahi..Rahul..ofcourse..woh bhi aik insaan hai..

Samira: acha humain to pata he nahi tha!..she murmured

Geet: excuse me..

Samira: hmm..nothing

"Kisi ko Coffee ya chai peeni hai?.." Geet asked

Maan: meri special coffee plz..he sed winking..a wide smile spread across Geet's face..she happily nodded and looked at Samira who was pretending to look bz on the cell phone..but she knew..she was listening to everything

"Sidharth tum?"..she asked frendly

umm..mujhe bhi coffee plz..he sed smilingly..

Rahul: coffee for me 2 plz Ms. Geet..i won't mind a special 1..he sed looking at Maan and then at Geet..

Maan just smiled..thinking y rahul sed that..but he just let it go..

Geet: Sami..i mean SAM..wat about u?

Samira: hmm..black coffee wid no sugar!

Geet: ok..Geet made her way to the kitchen..while Maan was sitting and Sid was half lying down on the grass..Samira and Rahul both were sitting on the garden swing..talking to each other..

Sidharth: sooo..kaisa chal raha hai sab?

Maan: All good Brother..tum sunao..tumhara aur Samira ka kuch bana kya?

Sidharth: WAT!..nahi yaar..no way!

Maan: wat do u mean by no way..college days main to woh tujhko achi lagti thi na..to ab kya huwa?

Sidharth: College days main..woh mera bachpana tha..shez not my types u knw..actually now most of the times she just irritates me..he sed laughing

Maan smiled: acha

Sidharth: kyun..woh to tujh par latto hai..tu bhi Kya..?

Maan quickly interrupted: Nahi yaaar..u knw me..waise yeh zaroori nahi hai..k agar woh tumhe irritate karti hai..to tum usko pasand karna band kardo..

Sidharh: Yaar..pasand to main ab bhi karta hoon usko..but just as a frend..aur I think agar koi aapko irritate karay na..so u can't think about them..in that way..

Maan: lekin Geet..to mujhe kabhi kabhi bohot irritate karti hai..aur woh aur main tou..(there was silence..)

Sidharth quickly got up: "wow..kya kaha tumne..?"

Maan: Kya?

Sidharth: woh aur tum..kya?

Maan: acha woh..hum dono to sabse zyada close hain..i mean I think after my family..shez the most closest person to me..actually shez family..aur abhi se nahi..jabse hum dono chotay thay..tabse..woh mujhe kabhi kabhi bohot irritate karti hai..but I like it..aur uss ne mujhko..

Sidharth: badal diya hai..!..he completed Maan's sentence who was telling Sid everything..lost looking into air.

Maan looked at Sid.."hmm..not really.."

Sid: yeah really.

Maan: Kyon woh kaise..main hamesha se tum logon k saath aisa he tha..frendly

Sid: haan..lekin..Geet k saath

Maan: woh bhi to meri dost hai..aur woh bhi tum sabse pehlay ki!

Sid: acha..sirf dost?

Maan: yep sirf dost..

Sid: don't lie..are u sure?

Maan got quiet for sometime..and was gonna reply but Geet came wid coffee for every1. Bholu was giving every1 their cups..while Geet sat near Maan and Sidharth..

DiDi Jee..aur kuch chahiye?..Bholu asked Geet after he was done

Geet: Nahi Bholu tum jaao..kuch chahiye hoga..main tumko bula loon gee..

Bholu: theek hai didi jee..and Bholu left..

"Geet tum kya iss ghar main servants ki manager ho..Maan..kahin tumne Geet ko part time job to nahi di?..Geet hamesha Bholu k saath kaam he karwa rahee hoti hai..pehlay lunch and now this coffee..and he calls u didi jee..don't tell me..k tumne usko apna bhai banaliya hai!..Get some class babes" wid that sed she laughed..and she was the only 1 laughing on her ridiculous joke..not even Rahul

Sidharth: Samira!..he was gonna tell her to stop when Maan stopped him..Geet looked at Maan..

Maan: Samira!..yeh kya battameezi hai..Geet yahan par jo kuch bhi karay..uski marzi..yeh uska ghar hai..Main kabse note kar raha hoon..tum Geet se kaafi rudely behave kar rahee ho!..woh bechaari kabse try kar rahee hai to be nice wid u..just coz of me!..and look wat are u doing..

Samira: Chill Maan..it was just a joke..

Maan: yeah rite!..plz Samira..i can't tolerate these kind of jokes..which attack sum1 particularly..Geet doesn't its u who needs a class wid ur so call classy jokes!..wid that sed he made his way inside..

Geet who was shockingly looking at Maan..saw him leaving..she looked at Samira..who was angrily looking at her..but she ignored and followed Maan who went inside..

Sidharth: Sam!..tumko aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha!..

This time Samira was almost in tears.."Ok that was my mistake, I didn't knw k Maan aisay react karay ga!.."

Sidharth noticed that she was ashamed of what she just did.."ok then just go and say sorry to Maan and Geet both!"

Samira: but it was a joke..

Sidharh: but it was not nice..y are u so rude to her?

Samira: to whom?

Sidharth: u knw..whom am I talking about!

Samira ignored..

Rahul: I too think sam..u shud just say sorry..

Samira: Ok ok!

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Maan..Maaan..she called him while running toward him..

He stopped..and Geet who was running behind him..bumped into him..

"Dekh kar" Maan sed while holding her by shoulders..

Geet: Maan..im so sorry..meri wajah se

Maan: Geet!..r u out of ur mind?..woh tumhara mazaq bana rahee thi..aur tum sorry bol rahee ho!?

Geet: haan!..but plzz..jo kuch huwa usko bhool jao..waise bhi..i knw k..

Maan interrupted: plzz Geet!..

"Im sorry!" they both turned on the voice..it was Samira..

Maan looked away..Samira walked to him..

Samira: I never knew..that tumko Geet se bhi zyada bura lagay ga..dekho na..im sure Geet ko mera joke samajh main agaya hoga..lekin tum kyon itna..

Maan: Samira..plz stop..Geet kuch nahi bol rahee hai..to sirf iss liye kyunki tum meri dost ho..

Geet surprisingly looked at him that how he just figured out y she didn't say anything!..or else she wud have replied to Samira in her own special way.

Samira: ok!..i sed Sorry..ab kya paer parhoon..k mujhe maaf kardo..she sed angrily

Geet: nahi Samira..it's ok..hota hai..tumne mazaq kiya..aur maine mazaq ki tarhan liya..now just let it go..she sed genuinely

Maan looked at Geet and then Samira

Geet: Maan..tum bhi Samira se sorry bol do..taake dono ki narazgi khatam ho jaye..

Maan smiled at her suggestion: Sam..im sorry..

Sam: Maan im sorry too..maine tumhara mood kharab kardiya

Maan: it's ok!

Samira: aww..i knew it Maan..i knw k tum mujh se zyada der tak naraz nahi reh saktay..she sed hugging him tightly..Maan just smiled..and Geet looked at him and then left..and went outside.

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Sidharth saw Geet cuming out..and walked to her.."is everything ok?" he asked

Geet nodded.."im really sorry on behalf of Samira," he sed apologetically

Geet: Sid..u don't need to be..just leave it..she sighed."waise can I call u Sid..tum mujhe meray aik purane dost ki yaad dilatay ho..uska naam bhi sidharth tha..and main usko Sid bulati thi!"

Sidharth: sure..lekin aik shart par!

Geet looked at him questioningly.."woh kya?"

Sid: pehlay aik achi si smile deni parhay gee..

Geet smiled after listening to his condition..

"Yeh huwi na baat!," he cheered her up.."yeh lo woh dono bhi aagaye,"..he sed looking at Samira and Maan cuming out..Geet turned and saw Samira

Geet turned and saw them cuming..Samira looked pretty happy..

"Iske saath kitna khush dikh raha hai..futse maaf bhi kardiya!" Geet thought angrily.. she was feeling like punching Samira's face..so hard that her front teeth break!..

"Lekin isme Maan ki kya ghalti hai..maine he to usko kaha tha na k maaf kardo..maine kyon kaha..nahi..mujhe bhi mahaan banna tha na..ab jhelo Geet.." she was thinking when they both walked to Sid and Geet and Sid waved his hand infront of her face..

Sid: kahan kho gayeen madam,

Geet came back in present and looked at every1 cluelessly.."kuch nahi" she hardly smiled

Rahul: don't u think guys k ab humko chalna chahiye!..its 5: 45..waise bhi raat ki meri flight hai Sam..aur mujhe thoda kaam bhi hai

Samira: oh yeah, I forgot

Sid: chalo phir hum nikalte hain

Maan: ok then..lekin phir milenge,

Samira: ofcourse..i will miss u..wid that sed she again hugged him..

Maan: Sam tum bilkul bhi nahi badleen

Sid: aik baat to badli hai yaar

Samira now got away and looked at him.."wat?"

Sid: Sam k kaprhay aur bhi chotay hogaye hain..

Geet looked at Sid..who was laughing she tried to hold her laugh but cudnt..Samira slightly hit Sid.

Maan: ahem!..he too laughed

Samira: ok aren't we late now.

Sid: yeah yeah..lets go..thanks so much for the delicious lunch..

Maan: tum kabse formal hone lagay..woh bhi mujhse..

Sid: tujhe kon bol raha hai..main to Geet ko thanks bol raha hoon..for her coffee and for her company..im very happy to make a new amazing frend 2day.

Geet: awww..mujhe bhi bohot maza aaya..u knw wat..its in the name..all sids are cool..she winked and slightly hugged him

"And what about Maan??" maan asked her

Geet: umm..Maan is ..she pretended to think

Samira: hot!

Sid fakely coughed: yeh sach main nahi badlee..

Rahul: ok ok..lets go guys

Maan: chalo hum tum logon ko bahar tumhari car tak chorhdain

Samira: yeah yeah lets go..

All walked to the car and after few moments they left..Maan sighed and looked at Geet who was still looking at the gate..widout looking toward him, she made her way inside..Maan followed her

"Geet"

She stops..Maan walks to her.."mujhe tum se baat karnee hai"

"Bolo"..she sed looking straight..try not to look at him..

Maan: meri taraf dekho..he demanded..she quietly looked at him

Maan: tumne yeh kyon bola k tum meray saath nahi rehteen?

Geet: kyunkiii..she sighed.."acha nahi lag raha tha..u knw..woh log kya sochtay k hum dono akele..

Maan: unlogon ko kya lagta?..he interrupted.

Geet: Maan..tum bachchay ho kya..har baat mujhse pooch rahay ho..tumhari nahi to atleast meri izzat ka kya?..i knw hum dono bohot achay dost hain..lekin bahar waalay yeh nahi dekhaingai..aur waise bhi..tumhare kuch dost haath dho kar meray peechay parh gaye hain!! She sed irritatingly and left and went to kitchen..Maan sighed and again followed her.

Maan: Ok!..Geet..tum kya kar rahee ho?

Geet: kuch khane k liye bana rahee hoon..

Maan: help karoon?

Geet: nahi..Bholu hai na..she sed looking into the fridge..

Maan: Geeeet! tum Sam ki wajah se mujhse naraz ho rahee ho?..lekin main to tumhari side le raha tha..and I knew she was wrong..and that's y..

Geet sighed: I knw Maan..and im sorry but its nothing like that..its just..she got quiet.

Maan walked to her: what?

Geet got away.."Nothing Maan..!..i need to go..mujhe aik kaam hai" wid that sed she rushed to her room..

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Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGOODNESS
I LOVE U
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
Ok thank u for admitting you are late - so cum on.....kaan pakaro aur lag jao kaam par aur uthak baithak lagao!!!!!
hehehe onli joking!!! i knw it can get very straining with soooooo much to dooo n then having to rack ur brain with ideas for the FF!!!!!!!
awwwwwwww i luved how maan saved her back n proper put a full stop to samira!!!!!!!!!!!!!
heheeh i rli thought maan wud get jealous with sid n geet's frendship - hahahahahhaa
oh god
u knw wat im gna read it agen - thats hw much i luved it
heehhehehe
ooo good luk for friday - mujhe bhi bohot kaam hai n i have two tests next week!!!
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

OMGOODNESS

I LOVE U


awwwww..u r again the 1st 1 to comment!! Love ya 2..🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
hate what sameera said
love when maan took geets side
loved how close friends sid and geet be came
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Originally posted by: NZ_rockx


awwwww..u r again the 1st 1 to comment!! Love ya 2..🤗

hehehehehe awwwwwww- yhh i stalk u!!!
nooo realliiiii i saw u had the last post on this....so i quickly scrambled my way to find out if u updated n cudnt contain my happiness!!!! heheheh
btw i updated the post so u myt wanna read it agen!!
⭐️⭐️⭐️

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