Yeh Kaisa Kahani -newOS p27

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey! i know sab soch re ho ki mein pagal hoon - tum mile aur meri khwabon mein jo aaye abhi chal re hai aur ab ek aur?

well actually yeh ek mini hai, main class main baithe baithe bore hora tha toh yeh likra tha. orignally yeh ek os hone wala tha, lekin phir maine socha ek yeh ek mini ar ff bana loo. so it will be around 2-3 parts total. maine socha ki ek thread open karoon for my OS's aur mini's since i tend to do a lot in my notebooks. dheere dheere i will type/post them all here.

anyways below is the intro. lemme know what you guys think. should i continue? will you read it? or should i close the thread and only focus on the other two?

- tumhari ashu

index:
inteezar kab tak hum karenge: page 1
tukh mein rab dikhta hai - page 14
second choice - page 20
page 21
My BFB - page 27

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Intezaar Kab Tak Hum Karenge:
Intro

Jab Abhi bhaiya ne mujhe bataya ki uske puraane dost wapaas agaya aur woh hum dono ki chote behen muskaan ki shaadi mein ayega mujhe yakeen nahin hua. main kahinn baar sapna dekha ki woh wapaas agaya aur woh bhi mujhe utna hi pyaar karta hai jitna ki main use karta hoon. Haan main toh hamesha se hi usko pyaar karte aya hoon, lekin halaat hi kuch aise hai ki i shouldn't. umar mein woh mujhse 6 saal baare hain. now that i am 26, this age difference doesn't seem so bad, but when i was 16 and he was 22, toh loving him galat tha. kya woh sach bhi mujhe pyaar karta hain? i doubt it kyun ki woh toh hamesha ek casanova type tha - forever flirting, lekin 10 years ago jo hua still leaves me curious.

flashback

mera 16 janam din tha aur bohot mazaa aya. meri sab dost aye thi meri party mein, woh bhi aya tha. actually since uski ma papa hamesha larte rehte the he was almost always at our house. haan toh cake katne ki baad usne meri face pe cake lagay aur pghir main uski piche bhaag ne lagi, bhaagte bhaagte phir hum hotel ki garden tak chale gaye aur ek swing pe beth gaya kyun ki hum dono out of breath ho chuki the.

main: tum ne meri face pe cake kyun lagaya?

woh: kyun ki ridzi aj tumhari liye aj ek bohot bara din hai. 16 hone ka matlab hai ki ab tum bache nahin rehe, ab toh tum...you know certain things are more acceptable now, but i wanted to do a childish act to make it memorable 😉

ridz: acha aur ab jo mujhe meri face saaf karna hai? huh?

woh: hmm actually i can help with that *with a naughty grin*

tab maine realize kiya ki how close we were sitting, meri saase aur dhakan tez hogaya tha lekin i had to keep my cool

woh: tum nahin jaana chate ho kaise?

ridz: kaise?

woh: aise

phir usne dheere dheere meri aur paas aata raha, i felt like meri dil was beating so fast that i might die. only i knew how hard it was for me to keep my feelings for him hidden.
then achanak he began kissing my cheek, kissing and sucking the cake off. i could feel his tongue licking the cake off. i closed my eyes relishing the moment, wondering if i was dreaming, if i was i didnt want to awake from this dream.

dheere dheere usne meri hoothon ki paas aata raha.
phir before i realized what was happening i felt his lips over mine, aur dheere se softly se mujhe kiss kar raha tha. i was too stunned to respond immeadiately. he started sucking on my upper lip and then unconsciously i began responding slowly. achanak se he he slowly nibbled on my upper lip making me gasp - phir uske tongue meri muh ki under ghus gaya. meri muh ki har kone explore kar raha tha. mujhe pata hi nahin chala ki kab uske haath meri waist pe agaya pulling me closer aur meri haat uske neck me gaya - aur ek uske baal mein => massaging and pulling him closer to me. humare sweet sa simple kiss bohot passionate bangaya tha. phir achanak...

"riddhima!"

humne jaldi se seperate kiya aur kara ho gaya

ridz - abhi bhaiya? woh main...

abhi: ridz chup raho, maine sab kuch dekhliya. tum abhi bhi bohot chote ho, nadaan ho, don't interfere.
*phir turning to his friend*
dekho yaar tum meri bohot acha dost ho lekin meri behen se dur raho, woh bohot nadan hain. she doesnt know what's right and wrong yet. woh apni dil deh betigi aur phir jab woh realize karegi ki tum ek casanova type player ho , haan i know i know ki tum kabhie koi larki ki izaat nahin lutaya lekin phir bhi, jab woh realize karegi toh woh tut jayegi, tum aj se dur raho meri behen se samji? you were thinking about going abroad to get away from your parents and the whole divorce mess right? so go. aur aj ki bad ridz se milne ka ya baat karne ka kosish mat karna varna mein bhul jaunga ki hum friends hain. i never expected this from you yaar, meri behen ki saat? aur yeh toh galat hain! tum 22 ho! aur woh aj hi 16 hua hai! bachi hai!

woh: lekin abhi main...

abhi: nahin, aur kuch nahin Armaan. please chale jao yahaan se. chalo ridz hum ander jati hai.

flashback ends

us din ki bad i never heard from him, or saw from him again. in fact he never kept in touch with abhi either. we later heard he had gone to the US.

anyways so ab muski ki shaadi ho rahe hai woh bhi rahul ki saat! muski 23 hai aur rahul 26. they fight like cats and dogs, kaise aur kab woh dono ko pyaar hogaya yeh toh godji hi jaane! rahul actually nikki bhabi ki chota bhai hai! nikki bhabhi - abhi bhaiya ki biwi!

muski ki shaadi ki liye hum ne ek poora hotel book kiya - goa mein! aur sirf shaadi ki guests rehne wala hai is hotel mein. armaan ki liye jo room book kiya hai woh meri room ki opposite hain. abhi bhaiya hasn't realized this yet, and even if he does i doubt he will react. actually he knows ki i am in love with someone, aur he has made some guesses also. little does he know that i have been in love with the same man all my life - none other than his old best friend.

sab guests ah chuka hain, sirf armaan hi rehgaya. aur pata nahin ki how he will look like after all these years. kya uski shaadi ho chuka hain, after all he is 32 now.


"Riddhima! jaldi karo!!"

ridz was jolted out of her train of thought by nikki's constant banging on her door.


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PART 1

Riddhima was sitting on the balcony of her hotel room, dressed in a white sundress over her 2 piece. She had simple silver hoop earrings and minimum makeup on.

imagine this dress but in all white with silver and blue sequins



Ridz jumped up and rushed to open the door.

"Hi Nikki bhabz, bas ek minute"

She bends down and begins talking to Nikki's stomach.

"Hi Baby@ kaiso ho meri pyari si angel? Ab toh sirf 2 mahine ka intezar hain, phir tum aur main dono milke tumhari mamma ko pareshan karenge. Ab main tumhari mama se bhaat karti ho okay, woh mujhe ghoor ghoor ki dekh re hai.. love you angel!"

Nikki - "Ridz! Jaldi aao! mujhe bhook lagi hai! and sab bhar wait karehe! you know all the ceremonies begin tomorrow, so this is our last lunch in piece! Tonight we will start going crazy with everything and won't even have a chance to breath!"

Ridz: okay okay chalo!

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The gang had a table on the beach itself while everyone else (the rest of the families and guests) were inside in the dining room.

The Gang consisted of Anjali, 27, and Atul, 30, (married), Nikki, 28, and Abhi, 32, (married & preggy), Sapna, 26, and Amit, 29, (married), Rahul, 26, & Muskaan, 23, (getting married in a few days) and Riddhima (26 and single).

But there was another guy at the table (his back is towards us and Ridz) he is chatting away with Abhi and Atul. Riddhima goes and sits next to Rahul without even noticing the mystery man. She is deeply engrossed in teasing Rahul, but has a strange feeling of apnapan in her heart - not b/c of rahul - but b/c of an unknown something. It was like she can finally breath! She feels an unnatural breeze on her and looks up to see a pair of blue eyes (right across the table from her) staring at her intently,

Riddhima gasps and a name escapes her lips like a whisper - almost inaudiable, "armaan..."

He smiles at her as if acknowledging that he heard her and yes he recognizes her too. (everyone else becomes engrossed in their own personal conversations...leaving AR to their own)

Armaan: toh riddhimaji ne finally se notice kiya ke main yahaan ayaa hoon!

ridz: armaan! kaiso ho? aur kab aya?

Armaan: well i reached nearly half an hour ago, and was at the table well before you, but it took you nearly 10 minutes to notice me! Other then that I am good, i was a bit tired, but I feel perfect now.

Ridz: Are! So you have known I was right here for 10 minutes and never said anything? haaa kyun?? acha chalo im not talking to you! poora 10 saal baad I am seeing you...

Armaan and ridz have a short eye lock while they once again remember the night 10 years ago...

Armaan seperates first as the waiter who brought their lunch bumped into him by mistake,

Armaan: waise I wanted to see how long it takes you to notice! You are still just as unattentive!

Ridz: huh? armaan i was never unattentive okay!

Armaan: nahin, bohot kuch tha aur hai jo tumne kabhie notice nahin kiya...waise it's good to see you after so many years! So how are you? update me on your life!

Riddhima: Well um kya batao? Mein ek doctor hoon, woh bhi Sanjeevni mein!

Armaan: wow toh tumhaara woh sapna toh poora hogaya! waise ek suprise batao! tum he yaad tha na ki mein bhi medical par raha tha? well i've been working at John Hopkins University Hospital, lekin I just transferred to Mumbai - woh bhi tumhari Sanjeevni mein.

Ridz: wow no way! omg armaan so tum ho wo famous cardiologist - aka Dr. Dil- jo join kara hain?

Armaan: famous idk, lekin haan log mujhe dr. dil kehte hain lol, okay enough about work tell me tumhari chote behen ki shaadi horeha, kya tum bhi kisise pyaar karta ho? I am assuming you arent married as no sindoor or mangalsura...

Ridz: well single? idk pataa nahin, kya hain na main kisi ko apni jaa se bhi zyaada pyaar karta hoon, aur uske bina kisike baare main sochta bhi nahin hoon. we aren't like together or anything, lekin I love him. Ab tum batao! tumhari shaadi ya kuch?

Armaan: shaadi? nahin abhi bhi nahin, lekin ek larki hain meri zindigi main, actually bohot saal o se hain meri zindagi mein. even when i am not near her i can hear her voice, imagine her with me, I love her so much..

ridz: aw so tumhari girlfriend hain voh?

armaan: aise hi kuch samjo

ridz: toh use shaadi kyun nahin karte?

armaan: kyun mera pyaar ek tarfa hain, aur waise bhi society ki liye unacceptable - waise i think she loves someone else...*his eyes water at that thought*

ridz: i'm so sorry armaan...

armaan: its okay, kyun ki i have decided even if i cant be with her in this life, i will live with her memories... waise hum dono ki story kuch similar sa lagraha abhi! lekin main dua karta hoon ki tumhe tumhari pyaar mil jaye.

ridz: mujhe nahin lagta ki mera pyaar poora hoga...lekin phir bhi main intezaar karunga...


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PART 2

They finish their talks during lunch and the couples all go upstairs for some "personal" time - muskaan -rahul have gone to meet relatives ect., leaving AR alone to take a stroll on the beach... (actually everyone was so preoccupied with other matters nobody realized they left AR alone)...


Riddhima and Armaan took off their shoes and began walking along the shoreline...

They talk to each other and catch up on each others lives - well they talk more about their friends and not much about themselves, when suddenly...

ridz: hey wow armaan dekho uske paas guitar hai! chalo na! you still play na? pleasee kuch bajao!

armaan: haan, i still play, lekin...

ridz: pleasee armaan meri liye?

armaan: theek hai, chalo

they ask the boy with the guitar and he readily agrees, they sit down on beach chairs and...

armaan: okay please hasna mat, okay? i havent played for anyone in a long time. ive been messing around a lot and wrote a few things, but nobody other than me have heard them... you''ll be the first...

ridz: i know i'll love it already! caalo bajao!

armaan starts strumming...

Zindagi Do Pal ki
Zindagi Do Pal ki

Intezar KAb tak
Hum karenge bhala
Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge bhala
(he looks into riddhima's beautiul green eyes)
Zindagi do pal ki

Dil mein Tumhari chupa di hai mene to apni yeh jaan
Abb Tumhi Isko Sambhalo Humein Apna hosh Kahan
(he looks up at the sky)

Bekhudi do pal ki
Zindagi do pal ki
Intezar KAb tak (he sheds a tear)
Hum karenge bhala
Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge bhala (looks at ridz eyes again)

Ek chota sa vaada is umar se zyada Sachcha hain sanam
Har modh par saath Is liye rahete hain ab dono

Dosti do pal ki (smiles at ridz)
Zindagi do pal ki
Intezar KAb tak (another tear)
Hum karenge bhala
Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge bhala

Zindagi Do Pal ki
Zindagi Do Pal ki

(he sighs as he finishes his song)

ridz, who has tears in her eyes threatening to spill any second, says: tum use bohot pyaar karte ho na?

armaan: apni jaan se bhi zyaada?

ridz: kabhie usko bataya?

armaan: directly nahin, lekin apni ankhon se kaha hai, aur ek baar kehene wala tha lekin phir sab kuch garbar hogaya tha. lekin there is a big problem, i am not supposed to love her...it's not right..

ridz: garbar hogaya toh phirse try karo. aur why can't you love her is she married?

armaan: nahin, abhi tak shaadi nahi hua hai uski

ridz: then problem kya hai?

armaan: age diffence hai, she's quite a bit younger than me...

ridz looks up at him curiously and just looks at him for a moment thinking...

ridz: armaan age is but a number, agar pyaar sacha ho toh intezaar nahin karna chahiye,

armaan is about to say something but riddhima interrupts

ridz: waise it's getting really late, i need to run! mama will kil me! there is so much work left to be done...i'll catch you later!


with that ridz literally runs all the way back to the hotel, leaving armaan shocked with her sudden leave...
ridz however runs to her room rather than to her mom,
once in her room she falls on her bed and begins crying on her pillow...

"woh mujhe pyaar nahin karta...mera pehla pyaar adhura reh gaya... ye sab meri hi galti hai, kisne kaha ki usko pyaar kar baith? lekin kya karun, i can't help it if i love him..."

Ridz lies in the same position crying for god knows how long when suddenly she hears,

"hey shona, kya hua? you okay? why are you crying?"

ridz gasps and gets up/turns around to face him

ridz - armaan tum yahaan?

armaan: haan woh actually my room is right across from yours and i heard crying sounds and your door was open so i...

riddhima realizes she never closed the door in her rush and mentally smacks herself, she looks over to the door and surprisingly finds it locked!

armaan notices, and says - woh i didnt want anyone else to see and you know its your sisters wedding and ...

ridz: haan shit i have to go work! let me just freshen up and i'll be right out...

she wipes her tears and stands up, but armaan , who was sitting on her bed, pulls her back on the bed

armaan: shona, tum kyun ro rahe the?

ridz: woh, kuch nahi...

armaan: us larke ke liye jise tum pyaar karte ho?

ridz looks at him wondering how he knew?

armaan: main is liye keh sakta hoon b/c jab koi pyaar ki wajase rote hai toh alag hota hai...trust me i've been crying for 10 years...

ridz looks up at armaan shocked and somehow manages to ask kyun

armaan closes his eyes and says: well pata nahin ki kaise kahun and please i hope ki you dont take it the wrong way lekin main jo larki se pyaar karta hoon, woh aur kohi nahin..woh tum ho riddhima...

riddhima is shocked

armaan places her hand on her cheek and wipes away a fresh tear

armaan: please i know ki i shouldnt have told you when you were crying remembering someone else, but i dont know when i'll get the chance again, aur i love you so much shona...10 years ago jab i kissed you on your 16th birthday it wasnt spur of the moment or me being a casanova, but because i loved you even then. I've always loved you, it's always been you shona...*he sheds a few tears*

ridz smiles slightly...

ridz: ar...ar...armaan...tum sach keh reh hona? koi mazaak nahi hain na? meri dil bardhast nahin kr payegi if you are joking armaan...main bhi tumse pyaar karta hoon, hamesha se

armaan looks up at her and asks her pleadingly through his eyes, she slightly nods and says

ridz: haan i love you armaan, aur abhi tumhaari wajas se hi ro rahi thi...thinking you were in love with someone else...

armaan smiles and simply leans foward and places his lips over hers and softly gave her a simple kiss once, twice, three times, then smiling greatly as if satisfied that this was real he placed his lips over hers once more, more fiercely this time, he parted her lips and began to explore her mouth with his tongue, before they realized he was on top of her still engaged in a passionate kiss with one hand in her hand and the other in her hair, while one of her hands was on his chest and the other around his neck pulling him closer. they engaged in the passionate kiss until they were out of breath, but rather then backing off armaan traced her jaw line down to her collarbone with kisses.

Their blissful moment was interrupted as Riddhima's cellphone began ringing.

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note to readers - i know this is going really fast but as i said it's a mini mini
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PART 3 - note the below content in orange (obviously not the whole part) may not be suitable for those under 18

Ridz: armaan phoneee

armaan: shona let it ringgg na if its important they can leave a message or call back, pleasee

with that armaan captures riddhima's mouth yet again.

there kiss is left incomplete as the phone rings again.

ridz: hello?

armaan kissing her neck

ridz: haan woh sorry bhabz, woh main beach pe walk ki lie gaya tha, i didn't realize when it got late

armaan works his way up he neck and kisses the sensitive spot behind her ear

ridz: aah...woh no sorry, nahin kuch kuch nahin bhabz, woh give me 10 minutes to freshen up then promise i'll come help

armaan bites her earlobe lightly (she had taken her earrings out)

ridz: nahin nahin im coming bhabz, okay byeee

she quickly hangs up and throws the phone to the side

ridz: armaaannn what are you doing? main phone pe tha...

armaan: lekin ab toh nahin ho na, aur we have 10 minutes, mujhe pyaar karne do.

ridz: nahin, bhabz said if we arent down in 2 minutes she will crack my head open and make an omellete with my brains - i tell you she is picking these up from muskaan...or maybe its the pregnancy...

armaan: must be both...hahaha

ridz: toh armaan chaloo

they get up and freshen up in ridz's bathroom - ie fixing themselves so nobody can tell they were crying, or making out

ridz is about to open the door when armaan suddenly spins her around so she is facing him and kisses her full on the mouth, a slow and sweet one

as they seperate he says i love you shona, okay ab chalo

ridz: nahin, tum aise jaoge?

armaan: kaise?

ridz: yeh lipstick phen kar?

armaan: kyun? yeh meri pyaar ka nishani hai

ridz: armaannn, tum bhi na...*ridz wipes the lipstick off his lips - making armaan lick his lips afterwords*

armaan:yummyy

ridz: chaloo

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they work hard to get all the preparations done for the wedding ceremonies stealing glances from each other...

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At night:

everyone goes off their respective rooms for the night as they have long day ahead of them, about 15 minutes after they go to their respective rooms, riddhima hears a knock on her door..
she runs to open in without realizing that she has just showered and is in her nightgown ( a scandalous red one that ends midthigh)

ridz: armaan?

armaan is standing at the doorway with his mouth hanging open (literally) at the sight in front of him; armaan also showered. he was wearing white pajama pants and a white undershirt, showing off his muscles, tattoos, and rock hard abs...

armaan: wow, itna sexy toh mere sapne main bhi nahin lagti ho tum

riddhima simply blushes

armaan: oye hoyyy, waise mujhe under nahin bulaoge?

ridz: haan aao

armaan goes and makes himself comfortable on riddhima's bed while ridz locks the door.

ridz: armaannn what are you up to?

armaan: i was missing you shona, aur haan mere room main ac is broken and the balcony door is jammed so i can't open that either. i called the front desk but all other rooms are occupied and the repairman cant come till the morning.

ridz: acha to armaan saab yahaan sona chate hai

armaan: actually main na sirf atul, abhi, aur rahul aur amit ko janta hoon yaahan par. atul anji ki saat hai, amit sapna ki saat, aur rahul is sleeping as tomorrow is a big day so i dont want to inconvenience him. so my options were you my love or a lawnchair on the beach, lekin i thought i'd try with you first jaaneman

ridz: oh really...and aur koi reason nahin hain?

armaan: *naughtily* kyun aur koi reason hona chahiye tha?

ridz: *innocently* nahin, bilkul nahin, aur haan you can stay

armaan: ooh so mere shona bohat innocent hain haan?

armaans pulls riddhima so she falls on top of him, then he rolls her over so he is over her. he blows the bangs away from her face and says - "i love you shona"

ridz: i love you too armaan

armaan slowly lowers his face closer to hers and slowly begins sucking on her upperlip, while allowing her to suck his lower. He gently nibbles her lip. suddenly she feels his hand going up her leg under her nightgown, his fingers playing with the straps of her underwear causing her to gasp. His tongue enters her mouth and passionately kisses her to no extent, she to responds just as passionately if not more. meanwhile her hands are busy playing with his hair while one of his hand is still playing at her hip while the other is feeling the softness of her b****ts. they break their kiss when they are both completely out of breath.

ridz: armaan please aj mujhe apna bana do, please armaan aj raat mujhe puri tarah, meri jism meri soul sab kuch tumhare bana do...

in response armaan kisses her again this time more passionately if possible.

riddhima takes of his undershirt and he takes off her night gown, soon they are both relived of all clothing.

Armaan covers them both with the duvet before proceeding to kiss her all over her body, she also kisses his chest.

armaan feels her body like no man has ever before touched her. feeling her softness, teasing her, making her wait for it.

ridz groans - armaan please

this was enough for armaan, he swiftly parts her legs before entering her, starting slowly, then slowly becoming more and more violently hard as they were both caught in the moment - they truely became one in the true sense of the word.

After their steamy love making session, riddhima lay with her head on armaans chest drawing love hearts on his abs while he smiles in euphoric pleasure of having her in his arms.

ridz: i love you armaan

armaan: i love you too shona, *he kisses the top of her head* hey ridz, kya tum mujhe...

armaan was interrupted however as someone yelled out

"riddhima!"

stunned armaan and riddhima looked up in horror to find shashank and abhi staring at them laying naked in each others arms


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Part 4 -
some parts below are ages 16 and up (only like 4 lines), i want to say 13 as this one is very short and not detailed, but i dont want modji to ban me :D

armaan immeadiately sat up and ridz covered herself with the bed sheet

Armaan: wo...main wo...uncle...

abhi: armaan how could you? i trusted you, aur tum ne mere behen ki saath?

armaan: nahin, please i love her. main use shaadi karna chata hoon. uske bina jee nahin paunga. hamesha se hi i love her...

shashank: yeh possible nahin hain armaan, tumhare age difference dehko. aur riddhima i am so disappointed in you. aj toh mujhe sharam ara hain ki tum mere beti ho

armaan: please uncle main marjaungi riddhima ki bina...please i love her...main jee nahin paunga...

ridz: armaan! armaan! utho! kya hua?

armaan suddenly jumps up. and looks around. Riddhima had been sleeping on his chest. they were both asleep. it was all a dream. Armaan had no idea when they fell asleep after their sweet love making, but they did.

ridz: armaann kya hua? you were shaking and mumbling something in your sleep. koi bura sapna dekha kya?

armaan: haan bohat bura, shona tum mujhe chor kar kabhie jauge nahin na?

ridz: kabhie nahin, lekin aisa kya dekha jo itna dar gaye mere superman?

armaan: i saw that abhi and shashank caught us here like this. aur woh bohot naraz the. they didnt approve of me or us...because of the age difference...*he sheds a single tear*

ridz kisses his tear away and then says "armaan papa loves you. so does everyone else. aur rahe age difference ki baat ki, it doesnt matter to me. and i am sure my parents wil understand that. besides everyone is dying to see me get married. i mean my baby sister is getting married before me. you have no idea how hard it was to convince my parents that it was okay for her to get married first...

armaan: i love you riddhima.

he places his lips over hers and kisses her slowly and sweetly.
after breaking the sweet kiss, armaan bends over and pulls something out of his pants pocket and turns back to face ridz.

armaan: shona, i've dreamed of this moment so many times but never imagined that it would ever come true. i love you so much, ab toh ek ek pal tumhari bina mere liye bohot mushkil hai. mujhse shaadi karogi?

he opens the box to reveal a beautiful diamond ring. On the side it has a hear and on either side of the heart is says A and R

Armaan: actually mere nani ki thi,you know what captivated me most? mere nani aur nana ki intitials AR the. humare taara...toh kaho shona, karogi mujhse shaadi, banogi mrs. riddhima armaan mallik?

ridz has tears in her eyes, - haan, haan armaan main tumse shaadi karongi.

armaan puts the ring on her finger and catches her lips with his again. this time much more passionately. She responds with equal fervor. After breaking the kiss, his lips explore her body once again, slowly kissing every inch of her body. They make love again for a bit until going back to sleep.

In the morning...

ridz: chalo ab armaan tumhare room main jao aur shower karlo, aj bohot important din hai muski ki liye.

armaan: sirf muski ki liye nahin, humare liye bi, aj main uncle se tumhare haat ki liye puchungi. you know my parents are not involved in my life really. As my dad calls every now and then, but we aren't that close. I hope shashank uncle don't have a problem with that...

ridz: kuch nahin hoga, ab chalo we have to get ready!

armaan: actually my shower isn't working, main tumhare waala use karloon?

ridz: haan, sure...wait ek minute. tum ne toh kaal raat shower liye the..*armaan looks up at the ceiling sheepishly* armaan tumhare ac bhi theek hai kya?

armaan: actually na, haan, lekin please gussa mat ho, but it was the only way to spend more time with you alone, aur i swear mujhe pata nahin tha ki kaal raat hum woh naughty khel khelenge...

ridz: armaan! tum bhi na! ab jao tumhare room mein aur tayaar ho jao!

armaan: nahin mujhe tumhare saath nahana hain...

he kisses her lips and picks her up in his arms and carries her to the shower where gets in with her.

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Downstairs

Shashank: armaan beta! thank god you are here! i need to talk to you before the ceremonies begin. riddhima tum bhi aajao.

armaan and riddhima who had just come downstairs look at each other conveying worrying glances. *does he know?*

armaan: haan uncle, actually i wanted to ask you something as well.

padma: sure no problem, aur waise don't worry about breakfast we will have it together there.

they lead the pair to a private veranda where armaan is shocked to see his dad waiting.

armaan: da..da..dad? ap?

a voice from behind him says, "sirf, da..da..dad? tumhari mo..mo..mom bhi yahaan hai"

shocked armaan turns and sees that indeed his mom and dad were in the same room!

ridz sensing armaans shock and inability to speak says, "nameste aunty nameste uncle. (she touches their feet) kaise ho ap dono?"

billy (armaan's dad) - hum toh bilkul theek hai, lekin lagta hai koi shock main chala gaya

ridz then pinches armaan to bring him out of his shock

armaan jumps out of his trance/shock making everyone including shashank laugh

armaan: dad, mom aap dono yahaan? ek saath? i mean um?

billy: well tumhare mom aur main always fought over everything but there was always one thing we always agreed on beta.

anaya (his mom) - aur woh ho tum beta

billy: armaan you may not say anything but i am you dad i know your dil ki baat, aur you know you are getting old. you need to settle down and get married.

armaan: haan woh actually

anaya: well see armaan about that, we have arranged your marriage. And i am sure you will love the girl. She is simply perfect for you.

armaan: kya? mom? nahin, you should have asked me once ki mere dil ki baat kya hai?

billy: i know you wont let me down beta, i have already given my word. and well the girls parents have also agreed whole heartedly.

armaan: i'm sorry dad, i don't want you to have to go back on your word, lekin mujhe yeh nahin hoga.

at this point ridz is in tears - she and armaan are holding hands - but the parents dont notice

shashank: armaan don't you want to know who the girl is at least?

armaan: lekin uncle?

padma: it's okay shashank rehne do, armaan has always been like a son to us lekin i think armaan doesnt want to be our son-in law...

armaan/riddhima: kya? saach?!

anaya: waise we asked you both here to know your answers, but seeing as riddhima is wearing my mother's ring already I am assuming that it's a yes from both sides?

shashank: it is a yes right? i mean we knew you both loved each other when you were young, but you were too young to see it perhaps.

*riddhima blushes and armaan hugs her hiding her in his chest*

armaan and riddhima look at each other and armaan says while still looking at ridz "haan its a yes"

padma: waise armaan if you are done romancing my daughter in front of me can i ask what did you want to ask shashank?

armaan and ridz seperate and armaan laughs and says "actually i wanted to ask for her hand in marriage..."

with this everyone laughs...

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The end :D

Alternate Ending:
actually this will continue from when they go downstairs (srry gouys there is no way im going to make armaans dream real - that is too creepy!)


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Downstairs

Shashank: armaan beta! thank god you are here! i need to talk to you before the ceremonies begin. riddhima tum bhi aajao.

armaan and riddhima who had just come downstairs look at each other conveying worrying glances. *does he know?*

armaan: haan uncle, actually i wanted to ask you something as well.

padma: sure no problem, aur waise don't worry about breakfast we will have it together there.

they lead the pair to a private veranda where armaan is shocked to see his dad waiting.

armaan: da..da..dad? ap?

a voice from behind him says, "sirf, da..da..dad? tumhari mo..mo..mom bhi yahaan hai"

shocked armaan turns and sees that indeed his mom and dad were in the same room!

ridz sensing armaans shock and inability to speak says, "nameste aunty nameste uncle. (she touches their feet) kaise ho ap dono?"

billy (armaan's dad) - hum toh bilkul theek hai, lekin lagta hai koi shock main chala gaya

ridz then pinches armaan to bring him out of his shock

armaan jumps out of his trance/shock making everyone including shashank laugh

armaan: dad, mom aap dono yahaan? ek saath? i mean um?

billy: well tumhare mom aur main always fought over everything but there was always one thing we always agreed on beta.

anaya (his mom) - aur woh ho tum beta

billy: armaan you may not say anything but i am you dad i know your dil ki baat, aur you know you are getting old. you need to settle down and get married.

armaan: haan woh actually

anaya: well see armaan about that, we have arranged your marriage. And i am sure you will love the girl. She is simply perfect for you.

armaan: kya? mom? nahin, you should have asked me once ki mere dil ki baat kya hai?

billy: i know you wont let me down beta, i have already given my word. and well the girls parents have also agreed whole heartedly.

Shashank interrupts before Armaan can say anything.

Shashank: and the best part is ki riddhima bhi same ghar mein shaadi karenge

ridz:: kya?

padma: haan actually rriddhima we have arranged your marriage with Siddhant Modi

Anaya: aur armaan your marriage has been arranged with Sid's older sister Suvarna Modi.

Billy: wow dekho, speak of the devil and here they come. Bache meet the Modi's - Karan, Naina, and their kids Suvarna and Siddhant.

Sue: Hi, you must be armaan

Sid: Hi , and you must be Riddhima, I must say, you are even more beautiful then your picture.

Before Ridz or Armaan can say anything, the parents engage sid and sue in marriage talks. Settling small details...

Armaan: dad!

...

RIdz: mom!

...

AR: GUYS!
...

Armaan and Riddhima tried hard to get their attention, but it was impossible

ridz was in tears at this point

ridz: Armaan, ab kya hoga?

armaan: shona we were seperated for so long, i wont let anyone seperate us any longer. No way.

armaan: MOM DAD! guys suno toh!

billy: just a minute beta

ridz: mama please suno!

padma: do minute ridz, bas let's finalize everything okay

both had replied without even turning to see the teary eyed duo holding hands

ridz (turning t face armaan): armaan, mujhe darr lag raha hai ab main marjuangi tumhari bina

armaan (puts his free hand on her cheek): shh shona, you trust me na?

ridz: apne jaan se bhi zyada

armaan slowly leans in and captures her lips, he leaves her hand and cheek and grab her waist. Riddhima puts her hands around his neck, one in his hair, pulling him in. They didn't care if their parents and the modi family were all right there. All they knew was they loved each oher and needed to feel each other. They needed to feel secure that they can never be apart. The kiss was becoming more and more passionate. They were oblivious to their surroundings. Nothing mattered anymore.

"RIDDHIMA! ARMAAN!"

Suddenly the situation came rushing back to them... they were to be engaged that to different people.

Shashank: Riddhima, yeh kya hai? what were you doing? huh? tumhari shaadi has just been fixed with sid and you are standing here kissing armaan?

billy: armaan i have never been more disappointed with you

armaan: mere baat toh suno! We have been trying to say something for so long, but you guys don't even care!

Karan: that's because we were finalizing the details. Billy, shashank we are still willing to consider these proposals if armaan and riddhima promise to stay away from each other.

Shashank: Haan, i trust my daughter. Once married, she will never betray her husband.

Suddenly they hear a crashing sound. Armaan has broken a glass.

Armaan: why don't you guys listen? i can't marry you sue. I am sorry, lekin i can't go through with this relation.

Ridz: aur sid, i am sorry, I can't marry you either,

karan: what is this nonsense? of course you will.

armaan: sorry uncle. Lekin we can't be married with two different people.

Armaan then pierces his thumb with a broken piece of glass. He then fills riddhima's maang with the blood coming from his thumb.

armaan: ab toh you believe me right? I am married already.

Shashank: what rubbish. we don't accept this marriage.

Sid/Sue: lekin we do. Congrats guys. Don't worry we were being forced into marriage as well. you know linking the modi, mallik and gupta names means business...lol

Anaya/Padma: we accept this marriage as well. Can't you men see? our children love each other so dearly.

Billy: I think Shanky and I need a moment alone to think and talk about this.

Naina: Bhai saab, keep in mind, they are your children. It is them getting married, not you. Karan, we should go. And Sid, Sue you are free to marry whoever you wish.

With that the modi's leave.

Padma and Anaya take Billy and Shashank to a seperate room to talk privately with them.

So now AR alone:

Ridz: armaan tumhare finger...

armaan: shh main theek hoon shona. i'm sorry, i couldnt see any other way around. They weren't listening.

Ridz: shh don't apologize. i was dying to become Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Mallik. all that matters to me is that we are together. I have always loved you armaan. It never mattered to me how we got married, only that it was to each other.

armaan: i love you shona

ridz: i love you too jaan

armaan, smiles flashing his dimples: waise mrs. mallik, i like the sound of your new name.

ridz, smiles at his irresistible smile and kissed his dimple and said : so do i mr. mallik. Waise do you think they will accept us?

armaan: haan, i think they were just embarresed that it happened in front of the modi's. The only thing I am worried about is what they will say about our age difference...

ridz: armaan when we don't care about it, why should they?

shashank: aur waise, in our generation, an age gap was a good thing

ridz: papa?

shashank: haan beta, hume yeh rishta manzoor hai

armaan: sach?

billy: lekin we have a condition

armaan: kya?

shashank: you both have to get married with all the proper traditions, with muskaan and rahul.

armaan: done!

billy: and

armaan: uff hamesha koi and hota hai kya?

billy ignores armaan's comments and says, : and no hanky panky until you are properly married - you know with the saat pheres and all

armaan and riddhima just look at each other, and a flashback of the previous night and the morning in the shower replays in their head, but they weren't about to discuss their sex lie with their parents, so armaan winked at riddhima, which made ridz blush

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the end :D again lol

okay i will post an epilogue eventually (after thursday for sure - note to tanvi , this doesn't mean i will update friday lol! probably monday-ish, actually i need to update the other ffs first, so this one wll have to wait)

please everyone pray my exam goes well

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Epilogue - pms later

"Armaaann"

Armaan smiles a naughty smile and walks over to his bedroom.

ar- kya hua shona?

ridz - kya hua? armaan tumne phirse mere cupboard lock kia? chalo ab give me the key, kya pehnungi main? hmm? aur ab kya kareho? tumm darwaza bi lock kiya? woh kyu?

actually riddhima had just come out of the shower and was only in a towel when she noticed her cupboard with all her clothing was locked...

armaan: kya pehnogi? hmm well... hum tum...ek kamre main bhand ho aur chaabi koh jaaye...

armaan starts taking his shirt off

armaan: main hoon, tum ho, aur humari pyaari se do saal ki beti Arzoo, apne cousins ki saath hai abhi ki ghar main... toh kapre ka kya zarurat hai?

ridz: badmaash...

armaan comes closer to ridz, and pulls her so she is crushed against his bare chest...

armaan: mujhe na humari honeymoon ka bohot yaad are hai, kyun na ek second honeymoon mein jaaye?

ridz: haan pehle baar toh tumne mere sab kapre lock kar diya tha aur woh bhi for one whole week!

armaan: dont tell me you didnt enjoy making love to me for an entire week, no interruptions just you and me...

ridz: armaan yaad ai jab woh neighbor came to our cottage? he thought you were keeping me hostage! i can't believe we didnt leave the cottage at all for an entire week!

armaan: haan, kitna mazaa aya, ab mujhe na ek flashback ki zarurat hai

ridz: flashback ya remake?

armaan: hmm mrs. mallik tum toh bohot naughty ho gaye ho

ridz: kya karu mr. mallik? woh toh meri husbaand ka asar hai...

with that armaan lifts riddhima and places her on the bed settling on top of her.

armaan: waise i think arzoo ki liye ab ek chota bhai zarurat hai...

ridz: hmm main bhi aisa hi kuch soch ra tha

armaan captures riddhima's lips and they begin their journey to discover each others body once again. they make love so often, even after being married 3 years and having a 2 year old daughter, they cant seem to say away from each other. each time they make love it seems like the first time...

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done done done :D

will upload another short story on AR soon
:D

-Ashu




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovedd the beginning..very interesting indeed :D

theyre gunna meet after soo many years and wow....there is a huge age gap...cant wait to read how the story unfolds ;)
and loved the cake scenee ;) so nadaan and young lol..
im glad youre starting another ff ;)..since its a new story, and plus with no dmg..im more than happy to read more ffs these days :D
do pm me and great start :D
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AWESOME 😛
loved it............😳
but d age dif. is huge
plzzzzzzzzzzzz make it 3-4 years yaar........😛
😛but loved dis diff. concept............😊
plz continue soonnnnnnnn
nd thnx 4 d pm

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awesome update dear
just loved it 👏⭐️
continue soon 😊
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Superb part frnd.
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awesome

armaan is 32!!!

thanx 4 the pm


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hey Ashu.. woww hun another ff..:)
good girl tht u bring more ff so i can read... aha but its soo sweet of u..:)
it was a great start and i wud love to read more.. it sounds soo interesting..<3
but 2 problems.. the age gap... can u plzz plzzzz reduce it a bit... it seems lot more... make it like 4 or 3... but 6 is lot.. and can u plzz plzz write it in English cuz itzz hard to read the actual romance to gng on in hindi.. i felt weird plus i cant really read in hindi..:( if u cud do these plzz pplzzz do so if not.. then thtzz fine as wel.. but plzz abt age gapp. do smthg abt it..:)
but i seriously luved the idea of ur ff..:)
badly wanna read the next part..:)
thanxx for the pm and continue soon..:)
tc :)
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heyy this ff is really cool.. plz add me to your pm list thanx hun.. -misha <3
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love it yaar
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Originally posted by: jannat4ever

AWESOME 😛
loved it............😳
but d age dif. is huge
plzzzzzzzzzzzz make it 3-4 years yaar........😛
😛but loved dis diff. concept............😊
plz continue soonnnnnnnn
nd thnx 4 d pm

luv
jannat



lekin yaar thats the whole issue - the age gap! lol ekin its okay my parents are like 12 yrs apart ;) and they are happily married still :)

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