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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
awesome part
just love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Awesome update
Can't believe maan wants to
Live in the outhouse and geet in the mansion
Why?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
aww wowww awesummm loved geets ghar parvesh but wats this why maan is in the outhouse for bechari geet still lokkng for answers
aww and at the party shes feelin uncomfortable
awww i cnt wait 4 more
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
congrats 4 d new thread...
n it is a wonderful update...loved it...finally they r married....but wat is this???they r living separetely????i want geet to move to d outhouse....4 some private moments....😉n maan will sweep away her all securities,m sure about this....
n now its high time tat they realize tat they both love each other....
n this time i loved baby too...it was supporting geet so beautifully,wen she was nervous....
loved it,continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
kya yaar pehle tu they used to sleep 2gether ..ab license milne par they nt utilizing it ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
congrats for ur the 4th thread👏👏👏👏
poor geet so worried about the wedding everything happened so fast that she is gettting tensed
hope everything becomes normal soon n maan reveals his feelings soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
UPDATE
she feared if he repented marrying her
maan - have you eaten any thing from morning
geet noded no
baby~phir se mujhe bhooka raka😡
maan shouted - what do you keep doing
baby~giggling😛



baby~mama😳
geet~umm
baby~aap galat galat mat socho na😕
geet~mujhe bahut dar lagraha hain
Khata kar baithe hai hum, woh kahan gunhagar hai
kaise jane hum !! shayad unhe hamse bhi bepanah pyar hai
precap
tanhayee tanhayee!!!







waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

~madhoshi~
part 55

they went on to cut the cake... the red cake which they she had demanded
she blushed & moved close to him, maan stiffened with her closeness
they cut the cake & fed each other.. their eyes met. he noticed
her hair flowed around her shoulders and tumbled down her back in erotic disarray.
The rich red saree, the jewels,her sindoor, her mangalsutar, her tentative smile,
all made her look so pure, the air of innocence still clung to her.
He wondered if it always would. He stood behind her chair until she was seated.
he sat on her right. Her left hand lay on the table, the diamonds in her ring
gleaming in the sparking silver lights. he smiled thinking about her questioning eyes
when he slipped it in her finger & then how she accepted it. like always she accepted
their relation with out any expectations from him. he then noticed she looked stressed.
maan - tum itni pareshan kyun ho
geet - nahi woh shaadi ko lekar
maan shouted - maine kaha tha na, if u need any thing tell me
she suprised him by blushing, kuch yun hi keh deti ...phir
apne hoton ko kaat ti ghabrahat mein
maan - umm..lekin shayad samajh nahi paya ki kya baat use pareshan kar rahi thi
he wondered she was the one who did'nt want to tell any one about their wedding.

maan mumered it really didn't matter what she thought of him or the wedding.
The important thing was that they were married and their child was going to be with
his papa & mama. It was enough. it should have been.
lekin reh reh kar uske kaabil na hone ka khayaal use darra deta.
But he couldn't shake the feeling of inadequacy.
Maan Singh Khurana, most eligible bachelor, respected in the city, saari ladkiyan
uski dewaani ho maano, aur jise pe yeh dewaana tha..woh to isae se koi rishta hi rakhna nahi chahti thi shayad .
why did'nt she tell any one about their wedding. Why didn't she want anyone to come and witness the ceremony? Why had she refused a big gathering?
And why did he have to care so much? He should be happy. He didn't want her
getting too emotionally involved with him. She obviously wasn't.
Everything was going his way. In fact it couldn't be better for both of them.
phir bhi yeh kaisi bechaini thi uske mann mein

maan was quiet while having the dinner. geet wondered what was bothering him.
guests started to leave one after the other. Dev, Meera & Daadi were seeing them off
maan & geet walked pass the carpet of red & white rose petals to the main exit
to the car. He opened the car door for her. rano & raji kissed her good buy.
she looked at her mangalsutar held it in her palm. na jaane kaise uljhan se thi mann mein maano phoot phoot ke rone ka ji karta.

maan adjusted her seat belt - I have arranged some one to pick up ur luggage from
pinky's place, is there any thing else you need
geet kept quite & mumered as if he cares, if only he understand what I want
just a kiss may be as of now, lekin unhe yeh sab kaun samjhayee
baby~mujhe bhi kiss chahiya papa ka
geet~abhi nahi
maan looked at her - kya chahiya tumhe
baby~kiss kiss
geet looked down clutching her saree palloo

maan in a stirn voice - u need any thing u need to tell me
other wise I may not be able to help u.
geet was holding back her tears. she was not able to take his rudeness
it was unlike him to be so cold towards. he moved his hand away from the ignition
& turned to look at her - I am commited to this marriage, I will do any thing
to be a good husband & father, agar tum mujhe bataoghi ki tumhe kya chahiye
then I will do my best to fullfill ur wish
geet mumered how unromantic..babaji aise koi kehta hain kya
Maan Singh Khurana ...aur kya expect kar sakti hoon

maan - marriage registration is after a month, I have already applied for it.
u will be 51% stake holder of all my bussiness & tomorrow we can go to the bank
and sign few documents, I have made all my accounts joined accounts with you.
u can continue to work in the office but as the new owner now
geet - aap yeh sab kya bol rahe hain
maan looked at her deep mosit eyes. she tried to read his expressions..which
was pretty much the same since he had proposed her to marry him.
maan - we are married now
geet - so
maan - so it is my responsibilty to take care of u
geet - aap mujhe ek choti bachi ki tarah treat kar rahe ho
jaanti hoon main aap ki pasand nahi aur aap ne majboori main mujhse shaadi ki
hain, lekin..I like u & u said u like me too. then why are u talking about all this.
aap hamari ulajhi hui zindagi ko aur kyun uljha rahe ho?
hum baby ke baare main baat kar sakte hain, hum hamare saath ke baare main baat kar sakte hain, hum apni pasand, na pasand ke baare main baat kar sakte hain
aap mujhe keh sakte hain ke aap is shaadi se khush nahi
& tears started rolling down her eyes. Maan took a long deep breath & wipped
her tears cupping her face
maan - khabardar jo tum royi!!! tum yeh shaadi se khush nahi ho, tum pachta rahi ho mujhse shaadi karke
geet - main pachta rahi hoon?
maan - Don't pretend. I know what you have been thinking. you are embarrassed by this whole thing. actually I was suprised that u agreed to the wedding.
maan looked away & started the car. she grabbed his wrist.
geet - aap mujhe galat samajh rahe hain, suniye to, main nahi pachta rahi
aap ko aise kyun laga, maanti hoon aap mere raj jaise nahi ho lekin,
aap jo bhi ho, jaise bhi ho mujhe aache lagte ho. I was scared because I am not like your choice-high heels mini skirt wali. aap ne to sirf baby ke liye mujhse shaadi ki hain
actually u are embarrased about me
maan rubbed his head - phir tumne kisi ko shaadi ke baare main kehne se mana kyun kiya
geet mumered mujhe laga ki aap nahi aayoge toh
maan held her by her shoulders - kya kaha tumne
she looked at him & thought about all the arrangement he had done for their
wedding in less than 24hrs, she felt ashamed & felt horriable that she missjudged him.
he never asked her a single question about the baby, he just blindly believed her
babaji main yeh sab kya sochne lagi thi. she moved forward & hugged him tightly
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lxvmSCrhCFs[/YOUTUBE]

she closed her eyes & tears wet his chest. she felt better after few mins
she didn't pull back. she loved the feel of him. she rubbed her cheek sideways
maan - sab theek ho jayega...patting her back
geet - main bahut dar gayi thi
maan cupped face to meet her gaze - itni si baat thi
geet noded & closed her eyes expecting him to shout
uski nigahen jo agar meharban ho jai
woh jis zameen pe thi woh asman ho jai
aab bhi hain agar shak uski chahat per
to phir ik baar uska imtehan ho jai

maan smiled - tum aankhein khol sakti ho
geet - aap naraaz nahi ho
maan - nahi, main tum se naraaz nahi ho sakta
geet shied in relief. to theek hain no more misunderstandings
we won't assume wat we are thinking, any problem we can discuss it
geet extends her hand with a smile - deal
uski muskan maano Maan ki kamzori thi,
Keh na paana maano majboori thi
Kyun nahi samajhte the is khamoshi Ko,
Kya khamoshi ko bhi zubaan dena zaroori tha
maan leans forward & placed a small kiss on her lips it was simple brush of lips but geet could feel her whole body shiver

precap
still tanhayee tanhayee!!!
NEXT PART 56
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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
thx for updating.
so Mrs Khurana can speak. she cleared all his uncertainties in one dialog.
bravo !!!


Edited by ixray - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Muskan...
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Awesome Update dear...
Maan and Geet tried to clear their misunderstandings.. 😊😊😊😊😊😊
They r just so lovable...
Finally they got to be together...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
But y still tanhayeee???? 😲😲😲😲
I want them to sort out their problems and misunderstandings if any asap...
Loved the update
Update soon
Sakshi
Edited by zaqxsw - 14 years ago

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